2015年雾霾作文点评.ppt

1、,Welcome to our class,课堂目标,1.语法填空点评 2.复习现象类说明文的概括方法 3.复习三种主题句的写法 4.如何写拓展句 5.“知己知彼”,Its said that a giant rock was located in the North Sea but once many boats and ships 16 (strike) it and sank,About a century years ago，a kind and imaginative minister came up with an idea to have a buoy (浮标) 17 (fast

2、en) to the rockOn the top of the buoy 18 (place) a bell， 19 would ring whenever any ships got closerWhen hearing the bell ringing，sailors knew where the rock was and stayed safeOne day, a sea robber Rover happened to sail not far away from the rock,Seeing 20 buoy floating in the water，he decided to

3、play a trickSoon his crew broke the chain that held the buoy, let the bell go into the water and then sailed awayIn the following weeks，they robbed many 21 ships around the seas and filled the ship with a great 22 （vary) of treasuresUnfortunately, when returning，they themselves had no idea how to ge

4、t away from the terrible rock 23 the ringThe ship was moving swiftly in the dark 24 there was a great crash 25 was the very rock and the ship began to sink,A senior lawmaker on Thursday warned of increasing mortality of lung cancer caused by air pollution. Of all cancers, lung cancer mortality rate

5、has increased the fastest in recent years, said lawmaker Yang Wei, director of the National Natural Science Foundation of China and member of the National Peoples Congress (NPC) Standing Committee. Yang told a group discussion that recent studies show lung cancer is the top killer for males and the

6、second largest killer for females, partially caused by accumulation of air pollutants. We always talked about smoking less to keep healthy, but one of the primary reason is the polluted air, he told lawmakers discussing a report on the enforcement（实施） of the Law on the Prevention and Control of Atmo

7、spheric Pollution. China has vowed to strengthen air pollution control. Beijing will adopt a special air pollution control plan for the upcoming APEC meetings, featuring temporary closure of factories in the event of a pollution warning.,Read the passage again, and find some basic elements of the ar

8、ticle: Phenomenon: Reasons: Positive ideas: Negative ideas: Solution: Future/ development:,-,increasing mortality of lung cancer,the polluted air,-,-,China has vowed to strengthen air pollution control.,A senior lawmaker on Thursday warned of increasing mortality of lung cancer caused by air polluti

9、on. Of all cancers, lung cancer mortality rate has increased the fastest in recent years, said lawmaker Yang Wei, director of the National Natural Science Foundation of China and member of the National Peoples Congress (NPC) Standing Committee. Yang told a group discussion that recent studies show l

10、ung cancer is the top killer for males and the second largest killer for females, partially caused by accumulation of air pollutants. We always talked about smoking less to keep healthy, but one of the primary reason is the polluted air, he told lawmakers discussing a report on the enforcement（实施） o

11、f the Law on the Prevention and Control of Atmospheric Pollution. China has vowed to strengthen air pollution control. Beijing will adopt a special air pollution control plan for the upcoming APEC meetings, featuring temporary closure of factories in the event of a pollution warning.,The passage sta

12、tes that,1. increasing mortality of lung cancer caused by air pollution.,2.China has vowed to strengthen air pollution control.,air pollution , also called smog, is severe in china, which will cause lung cancer.,So the government has decided to take some measure to solve the problem.,以约120词就“十面霾伏”发表

13、看法，内容包括： 你身边有雾霾现象吗？ 请阐述雾霾的成因； 你认为如何才能有效地控制雾霾现象？,你身边有雾霾现象吗？ As a matter of fact, I can always see smog surrounding us. 请阐述雾霾的成因； As we can see, varieties of reasons can account for this phenomenon . 你认为如何才能有效地控制雾霾现象？ In order to solve the problem of, we should take some effective measures.,总述原因的句型有：

14、There are several reasons that contribute to (doing) sth. The reasons for this are as follows. My views are based on the following reasons. The reason for this is obvious. The reason why is that Reasons for this are varied.,引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等的句型有： It is suggested that sb. should do sth. In order to solve the problem of, we should take some effective measures. We should try our best/ spare no efforts to overco