中考复习书面表达(修改).ppt

1、书面表达技巧方法,Writing (15 分),书面表达,一、考试题型,命题作文 提示作文 限制性写作, 给出情景和提示，让学生设想自己处在这样的情景中该怎么办 英语和汉语同时出现,一.学会审题。确定短文的体裁（一般为 记叙文） 二.根据所给的提示内容，确定所用到的 主要时态（多为一般现在时态，一般过 去时态，一般将来时态）,2000-2005年书面表达题分析,表达愿望 记叙文 作文/对话 If I have a lot of money, I will 一般现在时 一般将来时 2004记难忘的事 记叙文 作文/对话 Highs and lows in my life 一般过去时 2005表达

2、感情 记叙文 命题作文 Love for my parents 一般现在时 一般过去时,四、中考答题要求 1、 学生能在所学词汇、句型和语法 的范围内写正确的句子，不得少 于60个词。 2、要表达真实感情 3、对卷面整洁有一定要求,三.学会转换作文题目，将新面临的题目转换 为自己写过的熟悉的题目，学会发散思维 列：本次月考题目-My first My first dream- My dream My first journey-A trip to My first teacher-My favorite teacher I hope- My dream,四.写出条理清楚的文章，遵循一定的模式

3、1.用总分- 总 的模式 1）先有引入语，将话题转到题目上 2）定出主体内容 ，分层次清晰的写出文章 可以用：First 第一 second 第二 third 第三 或 At first(首先） Next其次 finally 最后 来分清文章体系，方便阅卷人批改 3）结束文章时一定要再次点到体 2.丰富文章体裁，学会使用下列句型：,基本句型模块,、主语be动词+名词、形容词、数词（表语） 表示人或事物的身份、特征、形状等。 I am a teacher. You are students. My brother is tall。 Our classroom is big and bright.

4、 Mr. Brown is sixty .,I am happy/angry/friendly/ sad/sure/sorry/glad/afraid/,2、主语+动词+宾语,We study English hard. Mary likes dancing. Tom has been to Beijing twice. Some foreigners came to our city yesterday.,There is a blackboard on the wall. There isnt any bread on the plate. There are many visitors

5、in the park. There is something wrong with my bike. There is nothing serious with you. 4.Its +adj+to do sth. Its + adj.+for sb.+to do sth.,3、There +be,常用动词模块,Be,.have,do, go, come ,visit, play, work,study,learn, Run,jump,climb,walk, talk ,hear ,listen, say,speak,tell watch ,read ,look,see write, sit

6、,stand, like ,enjoy,finish, think, want ,hope, wish ,decide, forget, remember，believe，,遇到不难写词语时，用简单 的同义词替换 近义词模块：Beautiful-nice, good, Wonderful- exciting Delicious-nice,good Difficult - hard Different - not same Interestingfunny,动词时态模块 1、描写人或事物常用一般现在时 My friend/Our school/ I love my hometown. 2、记叙发

7、生的事情常用一般过去时 A happy day/ A diary / A visit to 3、表达想法和愿望常用一般将来时 I hope /I want to be ,一些需要注意的细节： 1.标点符号的使用一定要规范，句号是黑点 2.标题，句首字母大写 3.在无格子的情况下，为了使书写更美观， 可轻轻用铅笔画横线,七、书面表达评分标准,一挡（13-15分）内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言错误。 二挡（10-12）内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少。 三挡（6-9）内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达较多错误。 四挡（1-5）有一定内容、但语言表达错误较多。 注意

8、:作文语法错误扣分不得超过2分；单词拼写错误扣分不得超过2分；抄袭卷中阅读材料的抄袭部分不给分。,八、答题思路与技巧,认真审题,常用句子,要求提示,书写规范,英语思维,列出要点,常用词语,九、优秀范文点评,根据提示写一封约80个词的信。 1、提示：收信人姓名：Susan 写信人姓名：Li Ping 2、要求： 请把你的爱好- 打篮球、玩电脑游戏、交朋友、 看电视、读书等及家庭情况向她做一个介绍。,Dear Susan: How do you do ! My name is Li Ping. Im a Chinese boy. Im fourteen. Im from Kunming, Chin

9、a.Kunming is called “Spring City”,because its neither cold in winter and nor hot in summer. Its a beautiful city. I like playing basketball computer game, making friends,watching TV and reading books. There are three people in my family.,They are my father, my mother and I. My father works in a fact

10、ory. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital.I want to make friends with you . Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Ping (95-20=75),A diary It was blowing hard outside. I went to bed after I finished my homework. Suddenly I remembered that the windows of my classroom were open. Quickly I got up

11、 and put onmy clothes.I ran against the wind to theclassroom in hurry. On the way to school I had many falls.,When I arrived there ,I was too tired to go any farther. I did my best to closed all the windows. Till then there was a smile on my face . After a short rest, I left the classroom happily. (

12、92-26=66).,2005年书面表达解析,提示：爸爸妈妈给了你无限的爱，你肯定把这 份深情牢记在心。但你是否曾用适当的方式表达过你对爸爸妈妈的爱呢？ 要求： 1、根据所给题目。用英语写一篇短文，记叙你为爸爸妈妈做过的一件事，以表达你对他们的情感。词数不少于60个。 2、语言流畅，书写规范。卷面整洁。文中不得使用真实人名、校名，否则以零分计。,实战训练,An E-mail to Li Hua 提示：Tomorrow is Sunday .Your friend Li Hua invite you to have a pinic with her .But you cant go . 要求：根

13、据提示，用英语发电子邮件告诉她你的想法或打算。,认真审题,常用句子,要求提示,书写规范,英语思维,列出要点,常用词语,列出要点、词组、句子。,表示感谢和心情 表示遗憾 说明原因 thank you for want to go with sbhave a lot of things to do do my homework wash my clotheswatch TVlisten to the musicgo shopping Be sorry to say be afraidwhat a pity Butbecausefirst secondthird,组句成文、书写规范,Dear Li Hua Thank you for inviting me. I really want to go with you .But I am afraid I cant.Because I have a lot of things to do . First I must finish my homework in the morning.Second I have to wash my c