《高中备考指南-英语必修1》课件-4.5Unit 3 Sports and Fitness-Period Ⅴ Writing - Writing a Story

Unit

3

Sports

and

FitnessPeriod

Ⅴ

Writing

—

Writing

a

Story写作指导【话题技巧总析】

本单元的写作任务是读后续写中的“健康故事”主题。读后续写是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。读后续写考查的是学生在阅读文章的基础上，通过分析文章的逻辑，运用准确丰富的语言，展现创造力和想象力。一、解题步骤

读后续写一般遵循以下四个解题步骤：1.准确理解材料，理清人物事件。2.根据段落开头语，确定续写方向。3.根据关键词语，确定续写细节。4.调整写作语言，完成读后续写。二、注意事项1.仔细揣摩原材料作者所表达的意图和主题。注意前后照应，注意隐含的情感因素。2.一定要注意与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接。千万不可忽略所提供的段落首句的限制而肆意创作。3.切忌大篇幅对白；应尽可能巧妙地设置情节，多关注动作描写和心理描述。4.在完成续写后，务必用关键词语；不要因此而失分。【关键句型举例】一、常用开头语1.

People

are

beginning

to

attach

much

more

importance

to

their

health

these

days

than

ever

before.现在人们开始比以往任何时候都更加重视自己的健康。2.

In

current

society,

people

have

known

the

importance

of

keeping

healthy

and

good

life

habit.在当今社会，人们已经意识到健康和良好生活习惯的重要性。3.

When

it

comes

to

health,

everybody

has

his

own

way

to

keep

healthy,

doing

exercise,

keeping

a

balanced

diet,

etc.说到健康，每个人都有自己的方式来保持健康，锻炼身体，保持均衡的饮食等。二、正文部分1.

To

begin

with,

exercise

is

the

most

important

factor.

Doing

exercise

can

not

only

build

people’s

body

but

also

relax

themselves.首先，锻炼是最重要的因素。锻炼不仅可以保持身体健康也可以放松自己。2.

Regular

exercise

strengthens

our

hearts

and

lungs.

In

addition,

it

prevents

us

from

putting

on

weight.有规律的运动能强壮我们的心脏和肺。此外,还能防止我们增加体重。3.

It

is

also

necessary

to

keep

a

good

diet.

There

is

a

saying,

“An

apple

a

day

keeps

the

doctor

away.”还必须保持一个良好的饮食习惯。俗话说，“一天一苹果，医生远离我”。4.

Avoid

foods

with

lots

of

sugar

and

fat.

Eat

plenty

of

high

protein

foods,

vegetables

and

fruits.避免高糖高脂肪的食物。多吃高蛋白食物、蔬菜和水果。5.

We

should

get

proper

amount

of

sleep,

because

without

enough

sleep,

we

will

often

feel

tired

and

irritable.

我们应该保持适量的睡眠，因为没有足够的睡眠，我们会经常感到疲倦和易怒。三、结尾部分1.

So

if

you

keep

those

ways

you

will

be

more

and

more

healthy.因此如果你能保持那些方式，你会越来越健康。2.

I

think

a

strong

will

is

necessary

if

we

want

to

keep

healthy.我认为如果想要健康，强大的意愿是必需的。3.

We

have

to

get

rid

of

those

bad

habits

that

damage

our

health,

such

as

drinking

and

smoking.我们必须戒掉那些损害我们健康的坏习惯，比如喝酒和抽烟。4.

Last

but

not

least,

always

keeping

a

good

mood

can

make

half

the

work

with

double

results.

最后但并非不重要的是，要经常保持一个好心情，这样做起事来才可以事半功倍。5.

If

you

really

love

life,

follow

these

suggestions

and

start

a

healthy

lifestyle.如果你真的热爱生活，那就遵循这些建议，开始健康的生活方式吧。写作演练

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。续写词数应为150左右。

Michelle

was

8

years

old

when

she

heard

her

mom

and

dad

talking

about

her

little

brother

Jack,

now,

only

an

infant

（婴儿）.

He

was

very

sick

and

they

were

completely

out

of

money.

Only

a

very

costly

operation

could

save

Jack

now,

but

there

was

no

one

to

whom

they

could

turn

for

the

money

needed.

She

heard

her

daddy

say

to

her

tearful

mom,

“Only

a

miracle

can

save

him

now.”

Hearing

the

words,

Michelle

went

to

her

bedroom

and

took

all

the

coins

from

her

little

money

box.

After

counting

the

coins

three

times,

she

slipped

out

of

the

back

door

and

made

her

way

to

the

drug

store

6

blocks

away…

She

waited

for

a

long

time

before

the

pharmacist

（药剂师）

turned

around

and

asked

her,

“And

what

do

you

want?”

“Well,

it’s

about

my

brother,”

Michelle

answered,

“he’s

really

really

sick.

And

I

want

to

buy

a

miracle.”

“I

beg

your

pardon?”

said

the

pharmacist.

“His

name

is

Jack.

And

he

has

something

very

bad

growing

inside

his

body.

And

my

daddy

says

only

a

miracle

can

save

him

now.

So

how

much

does

a

miracle

cost?”

“We

don’t

sell

miracles

here,

little

girl.

I

am

sorry.

But

I

can’t

help

you，”

the

pharmacist

said.

“Listen,

I

have

the

money

to

pay

for

it.”

With

these

words,

Michelle

poured

out

all

the

coins

from

her

pocket.

At

this

time,

a

well-dressed

man

behind

Michelle

stooped

down

and

asked

the

little

girl,

“I

am

selling

the

miracle

you

want.

Tell

me

how

much

money

you

have.”

“One

dollar

and

eleven

cents,”

Michelle

answered

in

a

low

voice,

“That’s

all

the

money

I

have.

But

I

can

get

some

more

if

I

need

to.”

“Well,”

smiled

the

man,

“a

dollar

and

eleven

cents.

The

exact

price

of

a

miracle

for

your

little

brother.

Show

me

the

place

where

your

brother

lives.”Paragraph

1:

Holding

the

man’s

hand

firmly,

Michelle

took

him

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1:

Holding

the

man’s

hand

firmly,

Michelle

took

him

home.

The

little

girl

walked

in

such

a

hurry

that

she

even

forgot

to

introduce

herself

to

the

man.

Her

parents

were

too

surprised

to

believe

their

eyes.

That

well-dressed

man

turned

out

to

be

a

surgeon,

specializing

in

neural

surgery.

Later,

the

little

brother

was

taken

away.

The

operation

was

completed

with

payment

of

one

dollar

and

eleven

cents.

And

it

wasn’t

long

before

Jack

was

home

again

and

doing

well.

Michelle

was

more

than

happy.

Now

she

knew

the

exact

price

of

a

miracle:one

dollar

and

eleven

cents,

plus

the

faith

of

a

little

child.Paragraph

2:

When

asked

why

he

chose

to

help

the

family,

the

man

detailed,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________