读后续写+房屋修复的故事 讲义 高三下学期开学英语试题

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。IwassittinginthelivingroomwithmypetdogToby,whentherewereurgentknocksonthefrontdoor.Whocouldthatbe?Iwondered.Itwaslate,andtherewasaheavydownpouroutside.Iopenedthedoor.Therestoodamaninauniform.“Youneedtoevacuate!”heinsisted.“Thewholeareaisflooding.”Iwasgiven20minutestopackbeforeTobyandIweredriventoanearbychurchbeingusedasarefuge,wherehundredsofotherlocalshadgathered.Mymindwenttomyson,Sunil.He’dmovedinwithmeafewyearsearlier.Tragically,hewasdiagnosedwithbonecancer.HewasinhospitalinLismoreatthatmoment,withonlyweekstolive.Andthebadnewsdidn’tstopthere...“Yourdoghastogotoarescuecentre,”avolunteersaid.“Petsweren’tallowedinthetemporaryaccommodation.”Tobyhadbeenmybestfriendfor13years,sosayinggoodbyetohimbrokemyheart.Afterfourdays,thewaterfellenoughformetoinspectmyhouse.Mudlinedthewallswherethewaterhadrisentotheceilinganddestroyedallmybelongings.Itseemedthatmyhousewasbeyondrepair.IfeltsosadasIstruggledthroughthemess.Fortunately,threedayslater,theroadsoutofourareawerereopened,andIcouldvisitSunil.IstayedbySunil’ssidethatwholeweekuntilhesadlybreathedhislastbreath.Ilostmyhouse,dog,andonlychildwithintwoweeks,leavingmyworldindarkness.Amonthlater,Iwassittingaloneatthecommunityhubwhenoneofthevolunteers,Lynne,approachedme,accompaniedbyayounggentleman.“ThisisMyles,”Lynnesaid.“Hemightbeabletohelpyourepairyourhouse.”Hearingthis,Iwasreallytooexcitedtosayanything.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Soonafter,Mylesbroughtmanytoolstomybackyard,wherehesettowork.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________InJulythisyear,aftersixmonths,Ifinallycamehome.____________________________________________________________________________________________房屋修复故事续写续写要点（两段）​第一段：​Myles工作细节：细致描述Myles带着工具来到后院时的情景，如工具种类繁多，摆放整齐，他熟练地挑选出当天所需工具，眼神专注，“Soonafter,Mylesarrivedatmybackyardwithalargetruckfilledwithanarrayoftools.Hammers,saws,anddrillswereneatlyarranged.Heskillfullyselectedthetoolsheneededfortheday,hiseyesfixedonthetaskahead.”。​专业专注体现：深入刻画他工作时的状态，每拆除一块损坏的木板，都仔细检查，不放过任何细节，遇到结构复杂的部分，会停下手中动作，认真思考，拿出图纸比划，“Everyday,heworkedwithgreatconcentration.Whenremovingadamagedwoodenplank,heexamineditclosely,ensuringnohiddenproblemswereoverlooked.Whenfacingacomplexstructuralpart,hewouldpause,takeouttheblueprints,andmakecarefulcomparisons,tryingtofigureoutthebestsolution.”。​与“我”互动情节：全面展现他与“我”交流的场景，耐心解答“我”对修复过程的疑问，分享一些修复技巧，还会根据“我”的回忆和想法，对房屋设计提出合理建议，“Hewouldpatientlyanswerallmyquestionsabouttherepairprocess,sharingsomeusefulrepairtips.Healsolistenedattentivelytomymemoriesandideasaboutthehouse,andthenofferedreasonablesuggestionsonthehousedesign,makingmefeelinvolvedintheprocess.”。​第二段：​回家初印象：生动描绘“我”回家时看到房屋崭新模样的第一反应，眼睛瞪大，嘴巴微微张开，脸上露出难以置信的表情，缓缓走进屋内，轻轻抚摸着新的墙壁，“InJulythisyear,aftersixmonths,whenIfinallycamehome,myeyeswidenedindisbelief.Thehouselookedcompletelynew,farbeyondmyexpectations.Iwalkedinslowly,myhandgentlycaressingthenewwalls,feelingasenseofunfamiliarityandexcitement.”。​回忆情感交织：具体描述“我”回忆过去时的内心活动，想起和Sunil、Toby在一起的快乐时光，泪水在眼眶中打转，又想到他们的离去，心中一阵刺痛，但看到修复好的房屋，又涌起一股温暖和力量，“Memoriesofthepast,boththehappytimeswithSunilandTobyandthepainfulmomentsoftheirloss,floodedmymind.TearswelledupinmyeyesasIrememberedthelaughterweshared.Thepainoftheirabsencestilllingered,butthesightoftherepairedhousegavemeawarmfeelingandanewsenseofstrength.”。​未来展望表达：深入阐述“我”对未来生活的期待，计划在院子里种上Sunil喜欢的花，重新布置房间，邀请朋友来家中聚会，开启新的生活篇章，“Ilookedforwardtothefuturewithanticipation.IplannedtoplantSunil'sfavoriteflowersintheyardandredecoratetherooms.Ialsointendedtoinvitefriendsoverforgatherings,readytostartanewchapterinthisrebuilthome.”。​情感线（150字）​Myles开始修复房屋前，“我”沉浸在失去房屋、儿子和宠物的巨大悲痛中，世界一片灰暗。Myles到来后，他的专业和耐心让“我”逐渐感受到温暖，燃起一丝希望，在修复过程中，希望不断增长。房屋修复完成回家时，“我”被房屋的崭新模样震撼，回忆往昔，痛苦与喜悦交织，最终在对未来的期待中，“我”获得了重新面对生活的勇气，情感从绝望逐渐走向积极乐观。​故事线（6条）​暴雨来袭，洪水泛滥，“我”被要求撤离，宠物狗Toby被送往救援中心，“我”前往临时避难所。​“我”的房屋被洪水严重破坏，所有物品被毁，几乎无法修复。​儿子Sunil因骨癌在医院治疗，最终离世，“我”在短时间内遭受多重打击。志愿者Lynne带着Myles出现，Myles表示能帮助修复房屋。​Myles带着工具来到后院，开始认真专业地修复房屋，过程中与“我”积极交流。​六个月后，房屋修复完成，“我”回到家中，回忆过去，展望未来，决定以积极态度开启新生活。​主旨升华句5句英文​Thisheart-rendingstoryvividlydemonstratesthateveninthefaceofthemostdevastatinglosses,thekindnessandhelpfromotherscanbeaglimmerofhope,guidingusoutofthedarknessandtowardsanewbeginning.​这个令人心碎的故事生动地表明，即使面对最具毁灭性的损失，他人的善良和帮助也能成为一丝希望，引领我们走出黑暗，迈向新的开始。​Throughtheprocessofthehousebeingrepairedandtheprotagonist'semotionaltransformation,weareremindedthatlifeisfullofunexpectedchallenges,butwithresilienceandthesupportofthecommunity,wecanovercomehardshipsandfindthestrengthtomoveforward.​通过房屋修复的过程和主人公的情感转变，我们被提醒，生活充满了意想不到的挑战，但凭借韧性和社区的支持，我们可以克服困难，找到前进的力量。​Thejourneyfromthedespairoflosingeverythingtothehopeofarebuilthomeshowcasesthepowerofhumanconnectionandtheabilitytobouncebackfromadversity,teachingusthatthereisalwayslightattheendofthetunnel.​从失去一切的绝望到重建家园的希望之旅，展示了人际关系的力量和从逆境中恢复的能力，教导我们在隧道的尽头总有光明。​Thisnarrativeservesasapoignantreminderthateverysetbackisanopportunityforgrowth,andthekindnessshownbyMylesnotonlyrebuiltahousebutalsomendedabrokenheart,highlightingtheprofoundimpactofcompassionindifficulttimes.​这个故事有力地提醒我们，每一次挫折都是成长的机会，Myles所展现的善良不仅重建了一所房子，还修复了一颗破碎的心，凸显了在困难时期同情的深远影响。​Fromthedepthsofgrieftotheembraceofanewbeginning,weseethatlifeisacycleoflossesandgains,anditisourabilitytoadaptandfindmeaninginthemidstofchaosthattrulydefinesus.​从悲痛的深处到新开始的拥抱，我们看到生活是一个得失循环，正是我们在混乱中适应并找到意义的能力真正定义了我们。​写作示范一​Soonafter,Mylesbroughtmanytoolstomybackyard,wherehesettowork.Hewaslikeaskilledartist,carefullycraftingthenewstructure.Everyday,hearrivedwithadeterminedlookonhisface.Hewouldspendhoursremovingthemud-cakeddebris,hishandsdirtybuthisspiritunwavering.Whenheencounteredatrickypart,hewouldfrowninconcentration,thenbreakintoasmileashefoundasolution.Healwaystookthetimetoexplaintomethestepsoftherepair,makingmefeellikeIwaspartoftheprocess.Hishardworkandpatiencewerearayofsunshineinmyotherwisegloomydays.​InJulythisyear,aftersixmonths,Ifinallycamehome.AsIopenedthefrontdoor,Iwasgreetedbyabeautiful,new-lookinghouse.Thesmelloffreshpaintfilledtheair.MemoriesofSunilandTobyfloodedmymind,butthistime,therewasasenseofpeace.Iwalkedaroundthehouse,touchingthenewwallsandfurniture.Iknewtheyweregone,butthehousewasasymbolofhope.Idecidedtoplantasmallgardeninthebackyard,dedicatedtoSunil.Iwasreadytomoveforward,toembracelifeagain,andtocherishthenewbeginningthishouserepresented.​写作示范二​Soonafter,Mylesbroughtmanytoolstomybackyard,wherehesettowork.Hewasextremelyprofessional,measuringandcuttingthewoodwithprecision.Everymorning,hewouldshowupearly,histoolboxinhand.Hewouldstartbycarefullyinspectingthedamagedareas,makingamentalnoteofwhatneededtobefixed.Whenhefacedadifficultrepair,hewouldconsulthiscolleaguesandthencomeupwithaplan.Hewouldalsoaskmeformyopinionsonthedesign,makingthehousenotjustarebuiltstructurebutaplacefilledwithmymemories.Hiseffortsmademebelievethattherewasalightattheendofthetunnel.​InJulythisyear,aftersixmonths,Ifinallycamehome.AsIsteppedinside,Iwasamazedathowbeautifulthehouselooked.ItwasbetterthanIhadimagined.IrememberedthedayswhenSunilandTobywerewithme,andthoughtherewasatwingeofsadness,therewasalsoafeelingofstrength.Iwalkedthrougheachroom,imaginingthefuture.Iplannedtoinvitemyfriendsoverforahousewarmingparty.Iknewthatlifewouldneverbethesame,butIwasreadytocre