高考英语复习读后续写练习：友谊的考验与升华：毕业季的才艺秀+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习友谊的考验与升华：毕业季的才艺秀1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IslaandIwerestudyinginthesameschool.Wehadbeenfriendssinceweweresixyearsold.ItookIslaasasmart,funnyfriend,butnotallstudentsatourschooldid,especiallythegirlstudents.Girlsinourschoolworefashionablebrandedclothes,butIslasewedhersandhercurlyhairandthickglassesmadeherlooklikeafish,whichmadeherstandoutlikeasorethumb（招眼）.Forme,sometimesIfeltembarrassedtobearoundIsla,particularlywhenstudentssaidrudewordsaboutherhair,clothes,glasses-evenaboutthefactthatshegotreallygoodgrades.Islaalwaysseemedtobeabletoignorewhatotherstudentsthought,butIcouldn't.Ibegantodistancemyselffromher.Ourschoolhadatradition-therewasatalentshoweveryspring.Studentswouldsing,dance,playmusicalinstruments,anddowhatevertheycouldtoshowtheirtalents.Beingourgraduationseasoninthisseniorschool,thisyear'stalentshowwouldbeobviouslydifferent.Itwouldbeahugenight.4续写原文Ava,whowasanoutgoinggirl,invitedmetobeonherdanceteam."Wewinthetalentshoweveryyear,andweexpectasatisfactorygraduationthisyear,"Avasaidtomeexcitedly."Weneedanewdancer.Butonlyyou,nother!"Avapointedtosomeonebehindme.Ididn'tneedtoturnaroundtoseewhoshemeant."Oh,Isee,"Isaidquietly.Avahadhardlyheadedoutwhensomeonetappedonmyshoulder.ItwasIsla.WhenIsawherconfusedface,itwaslikewakingupfromadream.Islaaskedmeeagerly,"Emily,areyougoingtotakepartinthetalentshow?"Ihesitatedwithoutresponse."That'sgreat,Emily!"Islatoldmewithoutwaitingformyanswerthatshewasalsogoingtoparticipatethisyear.Icouldn'tbelievewhatIhadheard.IstartedtoworryaboutherwhenIimaginedthatshewasinfrontofahugecrowd,andthateverybodywouldlaughather.Timepassedquickly,andIhadbarelyseenIslasincethen.Forme,IhadtopracticehardeverydaywithAvaandtheteamtokeepupsincetheotherdancershadalreadyknownthesteps.5段首句Paragraph1:Ultimately,itwasmyturntoperform,andIfeltextremelynervous.Paragraph2:IsteppedoffthestageandexpressedmythankstoIsla,whowasreadytosing.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8伊斯拉和“我”在同一所学校上学，从六岁起就是朋友。“我”觉得伊斯拉聪明又有趣，但学校里并非所有同学都这么认为，尤其是女生。学校里的女生都穿时尚的品牌服装，而伊斯拉的衣服是自己缝制的，她的卷发和厚眼镜让她显得格格不入。对“我”来说，有时和伊斯拉在一起会感到尴尬，特别是当其他同学对她的头发、衣服、眼镜甚至她成绩好的事情说些无礼的话时。伊斯拉似乎总能无视其他同学的看法，但“我”做不到，于是开始疏远她。学校每年春天都有才艺表演的传统，今年是高中毕业季，这场才艺秀意义非凡。外向的艾娃邀请“我”加入她的舞蹈队，还明确表示只要“我”，不要伊斯拉。艾娃刚走，伊斯拉就拍了拍“我”的肩膀，兴奋地告诉“我”她也要参加今年的才艺秀，“我”听后很担心她在众人面前出丑。之后“我”和艾娃的舞蹈队每天刻苦训练，几乎没再见过伊斯拉。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:Aweeklater,IwassurprisedtofindaletterinourmailboxfromMisterRogers.终于，轮到我表演了，我感到极度紧张。站在舞台的幕布后，我能听到台下观众的嘈杂声，心跳不由自主地加快，双手也微微颤抖。音乐响起，我深吸一口气，和队友们一起走上舞台。起初，我的动作有些僵硬，脑海里不断浮现出可能出错的画面。但当我看到台下伊斯拉那充满鼓励的眼神时，心中涌起一股力量。她微笑着，眼神中没有丝毫的怀疑和担忧，仿佛在告诉我“你可以的”。在她的鼓励下，我逐渐放松下来，动作也越来越流畅。随着音乐的推进，我完全沉浸在舞蹈中，和队友们配合默契，顺利完成了表演。台下响起了热烈的掌声，我松了一口气，心中满是喜悦和感激。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:IsteppedoffthestageandexpressedmythankstoIsla,whowasreadytosing.我走下舞台，向准备唱歌的伊斯拉表达了感谢。她穿着自己精心缝制的表演服装，虽然不是名牌，但却别具一格，充满了她的个人风格。她微笑着回应我，眼神中透露出自信和坚定。我坐在观众席上，目不转睛地看着她。音乐响起，伊斯拉开口唱歌，她的声音清脆悦耳，宛如天籁之音。她的歌声充满了感染力，每一个音符都仿佛带着情感，深深地打动了在场的每一个人。台下的观众们都沉浸在她的歌声中，原本那些对她充满偏见的同学，此刻也被她的才华所折服。表演结束后，全场爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。伊斯拉成功了！她用自己的实力证明了自己。从那以后，我彻底明白了，真正的友谊不应该被外界的看法所左右，伊斯拉是我最珍贵的朋友，我为有她这样的朋友而感到骄傲。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Ultimately,itwasmyturntoperform,andIfeltextremelynervous.Standingbehindthestagecurtain,Icouldhearthenoisychatteroftheaudience.Myheartwaspoundingrapidly,andmyhandsweretremblingslightly.Asthemusicstarted,Itookadeepbreathandwalkedontothestagewithmyteammates.Atfirst,mymovementswereabitstiff,andallsortsofpossiblemistakeskeptflashingthroughmymind.ButwhenIsawIsla'sencouragingeyesintheaudience,asurgeofstrengthwelledupinmyheart.Shesmiledatme,hereyesfreeofanydoubtorworry,asifshewastellingme,"Youcandoit."Withhersupport,Igraduallyrelaxed,andmymovementsbecamemoreandmorefluid.Asthemusicprogressed,Iwascompletelyimmersedinthedance,andIcooperatedperfectlywithmyteammates,successfullycompletingtheperformance.Theaudienceburstintowarmapplause,andIletoutasighofrelief,filledwithjoyandgratitude.13范文呈现IsteppedoffthestageandexpressedmythankstoIsla,whowasreadytosing.Shewaswearingtheperformancecostumeshehadsewncarefullybyherself.Althoughitwasn'tabrand-nameone,itwasuniqueandfullofherpersonalstyle.Shesmiledbackatme,hereyesrevealingconfidenceanddetermination.Isatintheaudienceandwatchedherintently.Whenthemusicstarted,Islabegantosing.Hervoicewasclearandsweet,likethesoundofnature.Hersingingwasfullof感染力，andeverynoteseemedtocarryemotions,deeplytouchingeveryonepresent.Theaudiencewascompletelyimmersedinhersinging.Thoseclassmateswhohadbeenprejudicedagainstherwerenowalsoimpressedbyhertalent.Aftertheperformance,thewholeplaceeruptedintothunderousapplause.Islahadsucceeded!Shehadprovenherselfwithherstrength.Fromthenon,Icompletelyunderstoodthattruefriendshipshouldnotbeinfluencedbyothers'opinions.Islawasmymostpreciousfriend,andIwasproudtohaveherasmyfriend.14升级版范文呈现Ultimately,itwasmyturntoperform,andIwasovercomewithanoverwhelmingsenseofnervousness.Standingbackstage,justbehindtheheavycurtain,Icouldhearthemuffledchatteroftheaudience,theirvoicesalow,indistincthumthatseemedtoechoinmyears.MyheartwaspoundingsofiercelythatIcouldfeelitthumpinginmychest,andmyhandstrembleduncontrollably.Asthemusicbegantoplay,fillingtheairwithitsrhythmicbeats,Itookadeep,steadyingbreathandsteppedontothestage,flankedbymyteammates.Atfirst,mymovementswerestiffandawkward,mymindcloudedwithaconstantstreamofthoughtsaboutallthethingsthatcouldgowrong.Butthen,asmyeyesscannedtheaudience,IcaughtsightofIsla.Hereyesmetmine,andinthatinstant,Isawnothingbutencouragementandbelief.Shewassmilingatme,herexpressionfilledwithwarmthandconfidence,asifshewassilentlytellingmethatIhadthis.ThatsimplelookfromhergavemetheboostIneeded.Slowlybutsurely,Ibegantorelax.Mymusclesloosened,andmymovementsbecamemorefluidandnatural.Asthemusiccontinuedtoplay,Ilostmyselfinthedance,movinginperfectharmonywithmyteammates.BeforeIknewit,theperformancewasover,andtheaudienceeruptedintothunderousapplause.Iletoutalongsighofrelief,awaveofjoyandgratitudewashingoverme.15升级版范文呈现IsteppedoffthestageandmademywayovertoIsla,whowaswaitinginthewings,readytotakeherturn.Shewasdressedinabeautifulcostumethatshehadsewnherself,acreationthatwasuniquelyherown.Itwasn'tadesignerlabel,butitwasfilledwithhercreativityandpersonality.ShesmiledatmeasIapproached,hereyesshiningwithexcitementanddetermination.Itookamomenttothankherforthesupportshehadgivenme,andshenodded,hersmilewidening.Ithenfoundmyseatintheaudienceandwatchedintentlyasshetookthestage.Whenthemusicstarted,andsheopenedhermouthtosing,Iwasimmediatelystruck