高考英语复习读后续写练习+五岁萌娃巧用急救知识救患病母亲+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习五岁萌娃巧用急救知识救患病母亲1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IntheheartofDaventry,five-year-oldOliveralwayscherishestendermomentswithhismother,CodiPow,whowasadedicatedstudentnurseinthehospitalinthetown.Codihassufferedfromhighbloodpressuresinceayoungage,andgrappleswithpersistenthealthissues,whichcouldeasilytriggerpotentialstrokeorheartproblems.Shestillremembersinthewinterwhenhersonwasthreeyearsold,shegotanunexpectedtoothinfection,whichworseneddramatically,leavingherinhospitalforaweek.Thattoothinfectionalmostbroughtanendtoherlife.4续写原文Asastudentnurse,Codinavigatesherdailyroutinewithenormouscare.Sheknowsclearlythatsheshouldattendtoherselfwell,takingpillsontime,curbingheremotions,reducingthe-sodiuminput,andsoon.Herdoctor’srepeatedwarningsechoinhermind,emphasizingtheneedtoavoidinfectionthatcouldleadtoseverecomplications(并发症).Oliverlivesalifenodifferentfromotherkidsintheneighborhood,filledwithplayfulactivities,joyoussinging,andtheroutinetripstokindergarten.Whatsetshimapartisthathestandsoutforhisuniquepassion:healthandsafety.Duringplaytime,heeagerlyabsorbshimselfinatoyfirstaidkitandaskshismumaboutmedicalthings.Oliverhascollectedasurprisingamountofknowledgeonhealthandsafety,despitebeingjustfive.5续写原文OnequietSundaymorning,whilepreparingbreakfastforOliver,Codifeltitabitdifficulttobreathe.Shewenttothehospitalwithchestpain,swellingtoherneckandalumpinthesamearea.Shehadabloodtest,chestX-RayandECGbeforebeingsenthomeandadvisedtoseeherdoctorlateraftershegotthetestreports.By1:30intheafternoon,CodiwasdoingwashinginthekitchenwhilechattingwithOliverwhenherconditiondrasticallyworsened.Shefeltahighfever,thesignofapossibleinfection.Allofasudden,shehadablackout,andherlegsgaveout.Shefellontothekitchenfloorlikeasackofsand.6段首句Paragraph1：Witnessinghismothercollapseinthekitchen,Oliverwashorrified.Paragraph2：TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了五岁的奥利弗和身为学生护士且患有高血压等疾病的母亲科迪生活在达文特里。科迪深知自己健康状况不佳，需格外注意。奥利弗虽年幼却对健康安全知识充满热情。一日，科迪身体不适去医院检查后回家，下午在厨房与奥利弗聊天时病情突然恶化晕倒。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Witnessinghismothercollapseinthekitchen,Oliverwashorrified.目睹母亲在厨房倒下，奥利弗惊恐万分。但他立刻想起妈妈之前教过的急救知识，强忍着泪水，迅速行动起来。他先跑到客厅拿来一个小毯子，小心翼翼地盖在妈妈身上，防止妈妈着凉。然后，他又从妈妈的包里找出手机，解锁后准确地拨打了急救电话。在等待救护车的过程中，他一直守在妈妈身边，学着妈妈的样子轻轻按压妈妈的人中，并不停地呼唤妈妈，声音中带着一丝颤抖却又无比坚定。11续写思路分析Para2：TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.科迪很快得到了医护人员的救治。医生们对奥利弗的冷静和机智赞叹不已，纷纷夸赞他是个勇敢的小英雄。原来，正是因为奥利弗平时对健康安全知识的浓厚兴趣以及科迪有意无意的教导，让他在关键时刻能够学以致用。科迪经过抢救脱离了危险，她醒来后紧紧抱住奥利弗，眼中满是欣慰和自豪的泪水，为自己有这样一个懂事聪明的儿子而感到无比幸福。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Witnessinghismothercollapseinthekitchen,Oliverwashorrified.Butimmediately,herecalledthefirstaidknowledgehismotherhadtaughthimbefore.Withtearswellingupinhiseyes,hequicklysprangintoaction.Hefirstrushedtothelivingroomandfetchedasmallblanket,carefullycoveringhismothertopreventherfromgettingcold.Then,hefoundhismother'smobilephonefromherbag,unlockeditandaccuratelydialedtheemergencynumber.Whilewaitingfortheambulance,hestayedbyhismother'ssideallthetime,pressingherphiltrumgentlylikehismotherdidandconstantlycallingher,hisvoicetremblingyetextremelyfirm.14范文呈现Codiwasswiftlyattendedtobythemedicalprofessionals.ThedoctorswerefullofpraiseforOliver'scalmnessandquick-wittedness,allacclaimingthathewasabravelittlehero.ItturnedoutthatitwaspreciselybecauseofOliver'sstronginterestinhealthandsafetyknowledgeatordinarytimesandCodi'sintentionalorunintentionalteachingsthatenabledhimtoputwhathehadlearnedintopracticeatthecriticalmoment.Codiwasoutofdangeraftertherescue.Whenshewokeup,shehuggedOlivertightly,withtearsofgratificationandprideinhereyes,feelingextremelyhappyforhavingsuchasensibleandintelligentson.15升级版范文呈现Witnessinghismothercollapseinthekitchen,Oliverwashorrified.However,inasplitsecond,thefirstaidknowledgethathismotherhadimpartedtohimpreviouslysprangtohismind.Despitethetearsbrimminginhiseyes,heswiftlytookaction.Dartingintothelivingroom,heretrievedasmallblanketandgingerlydrapeditoverhismother,lestsheshouldcatchachill.Subsequently,hemanagedtolocatehismother'smobilephoneinherbag,unlockeditwithdexterity,anddialedtheemergencynumberwithunerringprecision.Whileawaitingtheambulance,heremainedsteadfastlybyhismother'sside,mimickinghismother'sactionsbygentlypressingherphiltrumandceaselesslycallingouttoher,hisvoicequiveringyetresolute.16升级版范文呈现Codiwasswiftlyattendedtobythemedicalprofessionals.ThedoctorswereeffusiveintheirpraiseforOliver'scomposureandacumen,unanimouslyhailinghimasavalia