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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Calliewasahighschoolstudent,becauseofherparents’business,herfamilymovedfromLondontoLosAngeleswhereshegrewup.Livinginaquietandwarmcommunitywithherparents,Calliewasveryinterestedinvariousvolunteeractivitiesinthecommunity,andalmostnooneinthecommunitydidn’tknowher.Onasunnyafternoon,Calliewasreadingapoemwhensheheardasoftknock.Shestoodupatonceandopenedthedoor.HerFavoriteneighbor,Mrs.Baker,stoodoutsidethedoor.“Ineedyourhelp,Callie,”Mrs.Bakersaid,“anddoyouknowtheemptylot(场地)downthestreet?”Callienodded,smiling.“Theplaceisamess,coveredwithtrash.Thecityislettingususethelotasacommunitygarden,”sheexplained.“WeneedhelptocleanupthelotonSaturday.”“Sure,Mrs.Baker!”Calliesaidcheerfully.“IjusthavenothingtodothisSaturday.Iwillbehappytohelpyou!”Mrs.Bakerlookedpleasedandsaid,“Thanks,Callie.Wewanttogetthegardenplantedbeforesummer.Bythen,adultsandchildreninourcommunitywillhavehadagoodplacetogo.”Atschoolthenextmorning,Callie’sclosefriendTamarawaswaitingforherbytheirclassroom,whohadasurpriseforher.Tamarasaid,“MymomboughtticketstoFunWorldthisSaturday.Shehasanextraoneforyou!”Thegirlshadbeenwaitingformonthsfortheamusementparktoreopen.Calliesighedandworriedoverhowtochoosefortherestoftheday.Hermothernoticedhermoodwhenshearrivedhome.“Didsomethinggowrongatschool?”hermotherasked.Callieexplainedherproblem.“WhatshouldIdo,Mom?”Callieasked.“IknowyouwanttogowithTamaraandalsowanttohelpMrs.Baker.Thinkcarefullyaboutyourchoice,andyouneedtomakeyourowndecision.ButIknowyouwilldowhatisbest.”hermotheranswered.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Calliespenttherestoftheeveningthinkingaboutherdecision.OnSaturday,CalliemetMrs.Bakerattheemptylot.文章大意:高中生凯莉随父母从伦敦搬到洛杉矶,在温暖安静的社区长大,热心参与各类志愿活动,社区里几乎没人不认识她。一个阳光明媚的下午,邻居贝克夫人上门求助,说街边的空地将被用作社区花园,但目前垃圾遍布,希望凯莉周六帮忙清理,凯莉欣然答应。然而第二天在学校,好友塔玛拉带来惊喜,她妈妈买了周六欢乐世界的门票,还多一张给凯莉,这让凯莉陷入两难,不知如何抉择,回家后向妈妈倾诉,妈妈让她自己做决定。伏笔及续写中的回应:伏笔:凯莉热衷于社区志愿活动,在社区知名度高。回应:为她毫不犹豫答应贝克夫人帮忙清理空地做铺垫,体现她乐于助人的性格,续写中即便面临游乐诱惑,仍坚守承诺参与志愿活动,深化其形象。伏笔:空地垃圾遍布,状况糟糕。回应:突出清理工作的艰巨,侧面反映社区需要像凯莉这样的热心人,续写中大家齐心协力清理,展现集体力量改造荒地的过程。伏笔:社区想赶在夏天前建好花园,供居民休闲。回应:点明清理空地的紧迫性与意义,让凯莉的选择更显重要,续写中花园逐步成型,实现美好愿景,肯定凯莉的付出。伏笔:女孩们苦等数月盼欢乐世界重新开园。回应:凸显游乐园对她们的吸引力,加大凯莉抉择的难度,续写中提及好友游玩,与凯莉的选择形成对比,突出她重诺轻乐。伏笔:妈妈让凯莉自己做决定。回应:给予凯莉成长空间,促使其内心思考权衡,续写中展现她成熟一面,依内心抉择行动,彰显责任担当。续写要点:第一段情感线:凯莉从纠结、焦虑,内心反复权衡游乐园的欢乐与对社区的责任,到逐渐坚定,做出抉择;故事线:凯莉躺在床上辗转反侧,脑海中交替浮现游乐园的刺激项目和社区花园未来美景,最终决定遵守对贝克夫人的承诺。第二段情感线:凯莉带着坚定、自豪,全身心投入清理工作,看到成果时内心满是成就感;故事线:凯莉按时到达空地,与贝克夫人及陆续加入的邻居们一起清理垃圾、整地,忙碌一天后,望着焕然一新的空地,无悔于自己的选择。主旨升华句:Truehappinessdoesn'tlieinmomentarypleasuresbutinmakingadifferenceinthelivesofothers.(真正的幸福不在于一时的欢愉,而在于为他人的生活带来改变。)Sometimes,thetoughestchoicesleadustothemostrewardingpaths,wherewediscoverthebestversionofourselves.(有时候,最艰难的抉择引领我们走向最有回报的道路,在那里我们发现最好的自己。)Apromisemadeisajourneyembarkedupon,andstayingtruetoitrevealsthestrengthofourcharacter.(许下的诺言就是踏上的征程,坚守诺言彰显我们的品格力量。)Inthepursuitofpersonalenjoyment,wemustneverlosesightofourresponsibilitytothecommunitythatnurturesus.(在追求个人享乐时,我们绝不能忽视对滋养我们的社区的责任。)Thebeautyofgivingbackliesnotonlyinthevisibleresultsbutalsointhegrowthandfulfillmentitbringstoourownhearts.(回馈的美好不仅在于可见的成果,还在于它给我们内心带来的成长与满足。)写作示范一:Calliespenttherestoftheeveningthinkingaboutherdecision.Shesatonherbed,staringblanklyatthewall,thetwoenticingoptionstuggingatherheartstrings.ThethoughtofscreamingwithexcitementontherollercoastersatFunWorldwasalmostirresistible.Butthen,theimageofMrs.Baker’shopefulfaceandthepotentialofabloomingcommunitygardenflashedbeforehereyes.Sherememberedallthetimesthecommunityhadcometogetherforherandherfamilywhentheyfirstmoved.Afterhoursofinnerturmoil,shepickedupherphoneanddialedTamara’snumber.“Tamara,I’msosorry.IpromisedMrs.BakerI’dhelpwiththegarden.Ican’tgotoFunWorldthistime.”OnSaturday,CalliemetMrs.Bakerattheemptylot.Mrs.Baker’seyeslitupwhenshesawCallie.“IknewIcouldcountonyou!”sheexclaimed.Callierolleduphersleevesandgottowork.Asshebentdowntopickupapieceoftrash,moreneighborsshowedup,inspiredbyCallie’sdedication.Theyspentthewholedaysweatingandlaughing,transformingthelotfromadumpintoacleancanvas.Bytheendoftheday,asthesunset,castingagoldenglowoverthenow-pristinearea,Calliefeltaprofoundsenseofsatisfaction.Sheknewshehadchosenthepaththatwouldmakealastingimpact,andthatwasworthmorethananyamusementparkride.写作示范二:Calliespenttherestoftheeveningthinkingaboutherdecision.Shepacedbackandforthinherroom,hermindabattlefieldofdesires.TheallureofFunWorldwaslikeasirensong,promisingadayofcarefreefun.Yet,thecallofthecommunity,whichhadbecomehersecondhome,wasequallystrong.Shethoughtaboutthechildrenwhowouldplayinthefuturegardenandthesmilesitwouldbringtotheelderly.Withaheavysigh,shefinallymadeherchoice.Shejotteddownanoteforherparents,explainingherdecision,andthensetheralarmforanearlystart.OnSaturday,CalliemetMrs.Bakerattheemptylot.Shegreetedeveryonewithenthusiasm,herhesitationofthepreviousnightreplacedbydetermination.Astheybegantoclearthedebris,shesharedstoriesandjokes,makingthelaborioustaskseemlikeajoyousgathering.Moreandmoreneighborsjoinedin,drawnbythespiritofcamaraderie.Bymid-afternoon,thelotwasunrecognizable.WhenTamarasentherpicturesoftheamusementpark,Calliesmiled.Shehadnoregrets.Shehadchosentoplantseedsofkindnessandcommunity,andinthatchoice,shehadfoundherowngrowthandhappiness.读后续写Calliespenttherestoftheeveningthinkingaboutherdecision.Theamusementpark!Itwaslikeamagicalplaceshehaddreamedofforsuchalongtime.Justthinkingaboutthoseamazingrollercoastersthatmakeyourheartpoundlikecrazy.Itwasasifeverypartofherwasshouting,“Goandhaveanawesometime!”However,thepromisetoherneighborwasbotheringheralot.Itwaslikeaheavyburdenonher.Howcouldshejustbreakherword?Hermindwasamess!Intheend,shedecidedthatherpromisetoher

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