高考英语复习读后续写练习+少年弗兰克的心灵蜕变之旅

高考英语读后续写语篇练习少年弗兰克的心灵蜕变之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文FrankDailystareddownatthefrozenground.HekickedchunksofsnowwithhisnewNikeshoes.Heonlypretendedtolistentothechatofhisfriends,NormandEd,astheyallgotonthenumber10busafterschool.Frankandhisfriendssatdownatthebackofthebusalongwithseveralotherhighschoolboys,somefromotherschools.ThebusheadedwestonBlueMoundRoad.Hestillrememberedanothercold,graydayjustamonthagoinNovemberwhenhisworldcrasheddownaroundhim,ashereadtheteamlist,searchingdesperatelyforhisname.Itwasn’tthere.4续写原文Thebusbrakedsuddenly,andFranknaturallypressedhisNikesagainstthefloor.“Itmusthavebeenmysize,”hethought,“Five-feet-four.SinceI’mnewatMarquetteHigh,thecoachmusthavetakenonelookatmeandmyshoesanddecidedIwastoosmalltojointhebasketballteam.”Hehadbeenastarathleteinallthesportsinprimaryschool.Now,itseemedhewasanothing.ThebusstoppedattheCountyInstitutionsgrounds.Frankglancedupatthedriver,whohadanickname“Kojak”becauseofhisbaldhead.Anelderlywomanhungontothehandrailandslowlypulledherselfontothebus.Asshesankintotheseatbehindthebusdriver,herfeetkickedup,andFranksawthatshewasbarefoot.5续写原文AsKojakgotthebusbackintotraffic,heyelledoverhisshoulder,“Whereareyourshoes,lady?Itwasbelow10degreesoutthere.”“Ican’taffordshoes,”thewomananswered.Shepulledherworn-outcoatcollararoundherneck.Someoftheboysatthebackexchangedglancesandlaughed.“Igotonthebusjusttogetmyfeetwarm,”thewomancontinued.“Ifyoudon’tmind,I’lljustridearoundwithyouforabit.”Kojakscratchedhisbaldheadandshouted,“Nowjusttellmehowcomeyoucan’taffordshoes?”“Myhusbandisbadlyillinthehospital,soweonlyhavemoneyforfoodandnecessities,”thewomansaidinalowvoice.6段首句Paragraph1：FranklookeddownathisnewNikebasketballshoes.Paragraph2：ThenFrankhurriedtothedoorandwasabouttostepdown.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了放学后，弗兰克和朋友乘10路公交。他因身材矮小未入选校篮球队，内心失落。公交上，一位老年妇女上车，她因丈夫病重没钱买鞋，只能光脚乘车取暖。其他男孩对她嘲笑，而弗兰克看着自己崭新的耐克鞋，内心产生触动。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：FranklookeddownathisnewNikebasketballshoes.弗兰克低头盯着自己崭新的耐克篮球鞋，内心如翻江倒海般纠结。这双鞋是他的宝贝，承载着他对篮球的热爱与梦想。可眼前老人光脚的模样，让他心中涌起一阵酸涩。他不禁想到自己没能入选篮球队的失落，和老人面临的困境相比，显得如此微不足道。他在心里不断权衡，一方面是心爱的鞋子，另一方面是老人的困境。终于，善良战胜了不舍，他深吸一口气，双手缓缓伸向鞋带，手指微微颤抖着解开鞋带，眼神中透露出坚定。11续写思路分析Para2：ThenFrankhurriedtothedoorandwasabouttostepdown.接着，弗兰克迅速起身，拿着鞋子快步走向车门。他来到老人面前，微微弯腰，将鞋子轻轻放在老人脚边。老人先是一愣，随即眼中满是惊讶与感动。弗兰克轻声说：“奶奶，您穿上吧，别冻着脚。”车上的其他男孩先是惊愕，随后有的露出羞愧之色。弗兰克转身下车，虽然双脚踩在冰冷的地面上，但他的内心却无比温暖。他迈着坚定的步伐，朝着家的方向走去，此刻他明白，真正的价值并非体现在篮球场上，而是藏在这小小的善举之中。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现FranklookeddownathisnewNikebasketballshoes.Afiercestruggleragedwithinhim.Theseshoeswerenotjustfootwear;theyweresymbolsofhisdreamsforthebasketballcourt.However,thesightoftheelderlywoman'sbarefeet,redandshivering,madehisheartache.Comparinghisdisappointmentofnotmakingtheteamtoherdesperatesituation,hefeltasenseofshame.Afteralongmomentofhesitation,hedecidedtotakeaction.Heknewitwasadifficultdecision,buthecouldn'tstandbyandwatchhersuffer.Withadeterminedlook,hebegantountiethelacesofhispreciousshoes.Hishandstrembledslightly,showinghisinnerconflict,buthisresolveremainedunshaken.14范文呈现ThenFrankhurriedtothedoorandwasabouttostepdown.Holdingtheshoestightlyinhishands,hewalkeduptotheelderlywoman.Hebentdownslightlyandplacedtheshoesgentlyinfrontofher.Thewomanlookedupathim,hereyeswidewithsurpriseandgratitude."Here,ma'am.Pleaseputtheseon.Youshouldn'tbewalkingaroundwithoutshoesinthiscoldweather,"Franksaidsoftly.Someoftheboysonthebuswhohadlaughedatthewomanearliernowlookedashamed.Withoutanotherword,Franksteppedoffthebus.Thecoldgroundstunghisfeet,buthisheartwasfilledwithawarmfeelingofsatisfaction.Hewalkedawaywithhisheadheldhigh,knowingthathehaddonetherightthing.15升级版范文呈现FranklookeddownathisnewNikebasketballshoes.Astormofconflictingemotionssweptthroughhim.Theseshoes,whichsymbolizedhispassionforbasketball,nowpaledincomparisontotheplightoftheelderlywomanwithbarefeet.Itwasthenthatherealizedhowtrivialhisowndisappointmentwas.Afteramomentofsoul-searching,hemadeuphismind.Withhisheartpounding,hestarteduntyingthelaces,hishandsbetrayinghisinnerstruggle.16升级版范文呈现ThenFrankhurriedtothedoorandwasabouttostepdown.Shoesinhand,heapproachedthewoman,wholookedathimwithamixofsurpriseanddisbelief."Please,takethese,"hesaid,hisvoicefilledwithkindness.Asheplacedtheshoesatherfeet,thebusfellsilent.Someoftheboyswhohadmockedthewomanearliernowhungtheirheadsinshame.Steppingoffthebus,Frankfeltacoldbreezeonhisbarefeet,buthisheartwasablazewithwarmth.Hewalkedaw