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高考英语读后续写语篇练习沃德先生考场严抓作弊记1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Mr.Wardcouldn’tstandstudentscheatingthemost.Whenevertherewasanexam,hewatchedveryclosely,makingsurenoactofcheatingwasneglected,andanystudentwhocheatedwouldbeseriouslypunished.Iremembermanytimesaftertests,Mr.Wardfoundthatthestudentssittingaroundmehadbetterscoresthantheothersandthefurtherawayastudentwasfromme,theworsehisgrade.Mr.Wardsuspectedthatsomeofthejuniors“accidentally”gotsomeofmyanswers.SoheandIhadaveryinterestingtalkaboutcheating.4续写原文Mr.Wardoncetoldmeofsomeofthewaysstudentstriedtocheat.StudentAintentionally“dropped”hispencilanunusuallyfardistancefromhisdesk.Thenhestoodupandwalkedslowlyacrosstheroomtotakeitback.Ontheway,heglancedatthepapers.StudentBgotapieceofpaperandwrotedownalltheformulas(公式)onatinybitofpapertapedtotheinsideofthekid’spalm.Theseincidentsweren’tveryrare.Thelastdayoftheentireschoolyear,allIhadleftwasmymathexamandthereseemedtobesomedefinitetensionintheairbecausethiswasthebiggesttestoftheyear.Isawsomekidstryingtodosomelastminutestudying,sometryingtocalmthemselvesdownbybreathingslowlyandsomesayingasilentprayer.5续写原文Mr.Wardwenttothefrontandstartedhandingoutthetestsbyrows.Afterexplainingtherulesofthetest,hesaidveryclearly,“Ifyoucheat,Iwilltakeyourtestandtearitup.Youwillgeta0forthebiggestgradeoftheyear.”Mr.WardmovedveryeffortlesslyandefficientlyabouttheroomandduringeverytesthewentintoasortofRADARmode.Hesatatthefrontandwatchedtheroomforanythingthatmightlooklikecheating.DuringthisRADARmode,ifyouwerecheating,youwouldbecaught.Guaranteed.6段首句Paragraph1:Ourteststartedandweweresittingtherebusyworkingonourpapers.Paragraph2:ThenMr.Wardaskedthekidhewaswatchingtogotohisoffice.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9沃德先生极其反感学生作弊,考试时总会密切监督,对作弊学生严惩不贷。他曾发现坐在作者周围学生成绩异常,怀疑有人作弊。他还向作者讲述过一些学生的作弊手段,如故意掉铅笔借机偷看,在掌心贴写有公式的纸条等。学年最后一天的数学考试,气氛紧张,沃德先生发卷并强调作弊后果,考试中他如开启“雷达”般严密监考。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:Ourteststartedandweweresittingtherebusyworkingonourpapers.我们的考试开始了,大家都坐在座位上专注地答题。突然,沃德先生原本平稳的脚步声停了下来。我下意识地抬头看去,只见沃德先生正盯着教室后排的一个同学。那个同学先是假装在认真思考,手托着下巴,眼睛却时不时地往旁边瞟。过了一会儿,他趁沃德先生转身的间隙,迅速将手伸到桌洞里,似乎在摸索着什么。沃德先生立刻察觉到了异常,他悄悄地朝那个同学走去,一步一步,没有发出太大的声响,就像一只猎豹在悄悄靠近猎物。11续写思路分析Para2:ThenMr.Wardaskedthekidhewaswatchingtogotohisoffice.接着,沃德先生让他紧盯的那个同学去他的办公室。那个同学脸色瞬间变得煞白,低着头,极不情愿地站起身,拖着沉重的步伐朝门口走去。到了办公室,沃德先生坐在椅子上,严肃地看着他,说:“你为什么要作弊?你应该知道这是不对的。”那个同学低着头,嗫嚅着:“我……我只是太想考好,一时糊涂。”沃德先生语重心长地说:“考试的目的是检验知识,靠作弊得来的成绩毫无意义。希望你能吸取教训。”同学听后,羞愧地低下了头。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Ourteststartedandweweresittingtherebusyworkingonourpapers.Allofasudden,Mr.Ward,whohadbeenwalkingaroundtheclassroomsteadily,stopped.IlookedupinstinctivelyandsawthatMr.Wardwasstaringatastudentatthebackoftheclassroom.Thestudentfirstpretendedtobethinkinghard,withhishandonhischin,buthiseyesflickeredtothesidefromtimetotime.Afterawhile,whenMr.Wardturnedaround,hequicklyreachedhishandintothedeskdrawer,asifgropingforsomething.Mr.Wardimmediatelysensedtheabnormality.Hewalkedtowardsthestudentquietly,stepbystep,makinglittlenoise,justlikeacheetahapproachingitspreystealthily.14范文呈现ThenMr.Wardaskedthekidhewaswatchingtogotohisoffice.Thestudent'sfaceturneddeathlypaleinaninstant.Heloweredhishead,gotupreluctantly,anddraggedhisfeettowardsthedoor.Intheoffice,Mr.Wardsatonthechairandlookedathimseriously."Whydidyoucheat?Youshouldknowit'swrong,"hesaid.Thestudenthunghisheadandmurmured,"I...IjustwantedtogetagoodgradesomuchthatIlostmymind."Mr.Wardsaidearnestly,"Thepurposeofthetestistocheckyourknowledge.Gradesobtainedbycheatingaremeaningless.Ihopeyoucanlearnalesson."Hearingthis,thestudentloweredhisheadinshame.15升级版范文呈现Ourteststartedandweweresittingtherebusyworkingonourpapers.Allofasudden,thesteadyfootstepsofMr.Ward,whohadbeenpatrollingtheclassroom,cametoahalt.Instinctively,Ilookedup,onlytofindMr.Ward'seyesfixedintentlyonastudentattherearoftheclassroom.Pretendingtobedeepinthought,thestudentproppedhischinwithhishand,yethiseyesfurtivelydartedsidewaysfromtimetotime.Momentslater,takingadvantageofMr.Ward'sbriefturn-around,heswiftlythrusthishandintothedeskdrawer,asifrummagingforsomething.Instantlydetectingtheanomaly,Mr.Wardstoletowardsthestudent,stepbysilentstep,muchlikeastealthycheetahclosinginonitsprey.16升级版范文呈现ThenMr.Wardaskedthekidhewaswatchingtogotohisoffice.Inaninstant,thestudent'sfacedrainedofcolor,turningaspaleasasheet.Headbowed,herosereluctantlyandshuffledtowardsthedoor.Onceintheoffice,Mr.Wardseatedhimselfandregardedthestudentsternly."Whyonearthdidyoucheat?Surelyyou'reawarethatit'sunacceptable,"headmonished.Hanginghisheadinshame,thestudentstammered,"I...IwassodesperatetogetagoodgradethatImadeaterriblemistake."Mr.Ward'stonesoftenedabitashesaidearnestly,"Theessenceofatestliesinassessingyourkn
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