高考英语复习读后续写练习：汉娜的丛林书屋发现与分享之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习汉娜的丛林书屋发现与分享之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Onceuponatime,inalandfaraway,therewasasmallvillageintheheartofabigjungle.Surroundedbythemountainsandintheshadeofgreentrees,thevillagerslivedahappylife.Allofthemwereusedtotheirroboticdailytasksandnoneofthemhadtheimaginationorthewilltotrysomethingnew,exceptforonegirlnamedHannah.Veryfewpeopleinthevillagecouldread,letalonewrite,andHannahwasoneofthem.Butherparentsalwaysbelievedthattheironlychildcouldgeteverythingpossible.4续写原文Hannahwasanadventurousspiritwithanimaginationfarbeyondhertime.Shelovedtoexploreandwouldspendhoursinthewoodslookingfornewthings.Shelovedtocreatestoriesinherheadandusedtoimagineherselfasoneofhercharacters.Oneafternoon,whenHannahwasononeofheradventures,shecameuponanabandonedwoodenhouse,whichlookedveryoldinitscondition.EventhoughHannah’smotherhadstrictlywarnedhernottogowanderinginabandonedplaces,hercuriositygotthebestofher.Shetip-toedslowlytothedoorandslowlyopeneditandshewasleftstunned.InfrontofHannahwasaroomfullofbooks!Booksshoneinthedust,basking(取暖)inthewarmsunlightjustwaitingtobeexplored.Hannah’sexcitementwasvisibleonherfaceasshejumpedupanddownwithjoy!5续写原文Hannahtookadeepbreathassherealizedthatshehadfoundahiddentreasure—agoldmineofbooks.Sheknewinherheartthatshehadtoreadallofthemsoshequicklygottowork.Shedustedthebooks,theshelves,andwhatwasleftofthefurniture.Hannahcleanedthehousealldaylonguntilsherealizedthatitwasdarkandshehadtogobackhome.Butthebooks,ohshecouldn’tgetherselftoleavewithoutatleastreadingone.SoHannahpickedtwobooksanddecidedtoreadthemathome.6段首句Paragraph1：Onthewayhome,shemetherfriends.Paragraph2：Shewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone,thoughitwouldbedifficult.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9在丛林深处的小村庄，村民们生活单调，汉娜却充满冒险精神。一次探险中，她不顾母亲警告，进入一座废弃木屋，发现满室书籍。汉娜视其为珍宝，打扫房间后带两本书准备回家。在回家路上，她遇见朋友，迫不及待分享这一发现。之后，她决定要把这份“宝藏”分享给大家，尽管知道会困难重重。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Onthewayhome,shemetherfriends.在回家的路上，她遇见了朋友们。他们正围在一起玩耍，看到汉娜抱着两本书，都好奇地围了过来。“汉娜，你从哪儿弄来的书呀？”一个小伙伴问道。汉娜眼睛亮晶晶的，兴奋地说：“我在丛林里发现了一座废弃的木屋，里面全是书！好多好多，就像一个宝藏库！”朋友们听了，都露出惊讶的表情。有的朋友羡慕地说：“哇，太厉害了，你可以给我们讲讲书里的故事吗？”但也有朋友不屑地说：“书有什么用，还不如玩游戏呢。”汉娜并不在意这些质疑，她只想快点回家，沉浸在书的世界里。11续写思路分析Para2：Shewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone,thoughitwouldbedifficult.她想要把这份“宝藏”分享给大家，尽管知道这会很困难。汉娜明白，村子里的人大多不识字，对读书也没什么兴趣。但她没有放弃，她决定先从孩子们入手。第二天，她在村子的广场上摆了几张小桌子，把书整齐地放好。然后，她邀请村里的孩子们过来，给他们讲书里有趣的故事。孩子们被精彩的情节吸引，听得入了迷。慢慢地，越来越多的孩子加入进来，甚至一些大人也被吸引，开始对书产生了好奇。汉娜知道，改变不会一蹴而就，但她会坚持下去，让更多的人感受到书的魅力。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Onthewayhome,shemetherfriends.TheywereengagedintheirusualplaytimewhentheyspottedHannahcarryingtwobooks.Curiositygotthebetterofthem,andtheyrushedtowardsher.“Hannah,wheredidyougetthosebooks?”oneoftheminquired.Hannah'seyessparkledwithexcitementasshereplied,“Idiscoveredanabandonedwoodenhouseinthejungle.Itwasfilledwithbooks!Thereweresomany,likeahiddentreasuretrove.”Herfriendsweretakenaback.Someofthemsaidenviously,“Wow,that'samazing.Canyoutellusstoriesfromthebooks?”However,othersscoffed,“What'stheuseofbooks?It'sbettertoplaygames.”Hannahpaidnoheedtothedoubters.Allshecouldthinkaboutwasgettinghomequicklytostartreading.14范文呈现Shewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone,thoughitwouldbedifficult.Hannahwasawarethatmostpeopleinthevillagewereilliterateandhadlittleinterestinreading.Butshewasdetermined.Shedecidedtostartwiththechildren.Thenextday,shesetupafewsmalltablesinthevillagesquareandplacedthebooksneatlyonthem.Then,sheinvitedthevillagechildrenoverandbegantotellthemfascinatingstoriesfromthebooks.Thechildrenwerecaptivatedbythewonderfulplots.Gradually,moreandmorechildrenjoinedin,andevensomeadultsweredrawninandstartedtoshowcuriosityaboutthebooks.Hannahknewthatchangewouldn'thappenovernight,butshewasresolvedtokeepgoing,toletmorepeopleexperiencethecharmofbooks.15升级版范文呈现Onthewayhome,shemetherfriends.Engrossedintheirplay,theyimmediatelynoticedHannahclutchingtwobooks.Drawnbycuriosity,theyswarmedaroundher.“Hannah,whereonearthdidyoufindthose?”oneofthemexclaimed.Witheyesablazewithexcitement,Hannahgushed,“Istumbleduponanabandonedwoodenhouseinthejungle.Itwasbrimmingwithbooks,averitablegoldmine!”Herfriendswereastounded.Some,filledwithenvy,pleaded,“Wow,that'sincredible.Please,dotellusstoriesfromthem.”Others,however,sneered,“Books?Useless.Gamesarefarmorefun.”Unfazedbythenaysayers,Hannah'smindwassolelyonreachinghometodelveintothebooks.16升级版范文呈现Shewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone,thoughitwouldbedifficult.Well-awarethatilliteracyanddisinterestinreadingprevailedinthevillage,Hannahwasundeterred.Herplanwastobeginwiththechildren.Thefollowingday,shearrangedseveral