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读后续写独居老人遭遇诈骗后的觉醒讲义高二上学期期末商师大联考英语试题(B版)原题阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mrs.Wang,whois72yearsold,livesinaquietneighborhood.Shehasbeensingleforthepastfiveyearsandisknownforherwarmsmileandthewayshetakescareofhergarden.Thedayendedaspeacefullyasithasformanyyears,butshedidn’tknowthatherpeacewasabouttobebrokenbyaphonecallthatwouldchangeherlifealot.Thephonerang,andMrs.Wangansweredwithhercustomarywarmth,“Hello,dear,howcanIassistyou?”Ontheotherendofthelinewasaman,hisvoicefullofauthorityandurgency.Introducinghimselfas“OfficerLi”fromthePublicSecurityBureau(局),heclaimedthatMs.Wang’sbankaccounthadbeenstolenandthatherimmediatecooperationwasessentialtopreventmajorlosses.Mrs.Wang’sheartraceduncontrollablyasthecallerdetailedhowherpersonalinformationwasusedtotakehersavings.Hedirectedhertotransfer(转移)50,000yuanfromheraccounttoa“secure”accountnumberheprovided.Hisvoicewasurgent,hardtoignore.Worriedabouthersavings,Mrs.Wangagreedafteramoment’shesitation.Shewenttothebank,herhandsshakingasshetookoutthemoney.Thebanktellersawshewasupsetandaskedifshewasokay.Nervousandembarrassed,Mrs.Wangmadeanexcuseaboutafamilyemergencyandleftinahurry.Thatday,shetransferredthemoneyasshewastold,feelinglostandscared.Itwasn’tuntilthefollowingmorning,overacupofteawithherneighbor,thatMrs.Wang’sexperiencebegantosoundveryfamiliar.Herneighbor,withaconcernedexpression,informedherabouttherecentscams(欺诈)targetingtheelderlyintheircommunity.WhenMrs.Wangrealizedthatthisunfortunateeventhadhappenedtoher,herfaceturnedpale.注意:1.

续写词数应为150个左右;2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Heartbroken,Mrs.Wangmadeherwaytothelocalpolicestationtoreportthescam.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mrs.Wangwasverysad,butshedecidedtodosomething.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________故事分析开端72岁的独居老人Mrs.Wang接到自称公安局“OfficerLi”的电话,对方称其银行账户被盗,要求她转账到“安全账户”以避免损失。发展Mrs.Wang因担心储蓄,在犹豫后前往银行转账,面对银行柜员的询问,她借口离开。第二天,她在与邻居交谈时意识到自己遭遇了诈骗,脸色变得苍白。高潮(待续写)Mrs.Wang前往警局报案,警局的处理和反馈,以及她后续决定采取行动的具体过程,将是故事的高潮部分。结局(待续写)Mrs.Wang成功帮助社区其他人提高防骗意识,自身也从悲伤中走出,实现自我价值,社区在她的努力下,防骗氛围得到改善。续写要点(两段)第一段着重描写Mrs.Wang到警局报案时的情绪和状态,警察接待她的场景,以及警察告知她案件情况和追回款项的可能性。可以适当描述警局的环境,如警局里忙碌的人群、嘈杂的声音等,衬托Mrs.Wang的无助。接着写Mrs.Wang在得知追回款项困难后的反应,如伤心、懊悔等。第二段描述Mrs.Wang决定在社区开展防骗宣传活动的具体行动,如制作宣传海报、组织讲座等。可以描写她在制作海报时的认真态度,以及组织讲座时面对大家的紧张心情。最后写社区居民的反应,以及Mrs.Wang看到大家积极学习防骗知识后的感受,体现她从悲伤中走出,收获成就感。情感线起初,Mrs.Wang因接到诈骗电话而紧张、害怕,转账后感到迷茫。得知被骗时,她伤心、自责。在警局报案时,她无助又充满期待。决定采取行动后,她带着使命感努力去做,看到居民积极响应时,她感到欣慰、满足,完成了从悲伤到振作的情感转变。故事线Mrs.Wang带着破碎的心情前往警局报案。在警局,警察接待了她并告知案件相关情况。Mrs.Wang意识到追回款项困难,心情低落。但她决定在社区开展防骗宣传活动。她制作宣传海报、组织讲座。社区居民积极参与,认真学习防骗知识。Mrs.Wang看到居民的反应,内心得到安慰,走出悲伤。主旨升华句ThisexperiencenotonlymadeMrs.Wangstrongerbutalsoallowedhertouseherstorytosafeguardthewell-beingoftheentirecommunity,provingthatmisfortunecanbetransformedintoaforceforgood.(这次经历不仅让王太太变得更坚强,还让她能用自己的故事守护整个社区的安宁,证明了不幸可以转化为一种向善的力量。)Throughherefforts,Mrs.Wangshowedthateveninthefaceoffraud,onecanriseabovethepainandmakeapositivedifference,spreadingawarenessandhopewithinthecommunity.(通过努力,王太太展现出,即便遭遇诈骗,人们也能战胜痛苦,带来积极改变,在社区中传播防范意识和希望。)Mrs.Wang'sstoryservesasareminderthateverysetbackisanopportunityforgrowth,andwithdetermination,wecanturnourownmisfortunesintoasourceofstrengthforourselvesandthosearoundus.(王太太的故事提醒我们,每一次挫折都是成长的契机,只要有决心,我们就能将自身的不幸转化为自己和身边人的力量源泉。)写作示范一Heartbroken,Mrs.Wangmadeherwaytothelocalpolicestationtoreportthescam.Thestationwasbustlingwithpeople,andthenoisemadeherfeelevenmoreanxious.Whenshefinallygottothefrontdesk,shetoldtheofficerwhathadhappened,hervoicetrembling.Theofficerlistenedcarefully,hisexpressionserious.Afterhearingherstory,hegentlytoldherthatitwasdifficulttorecoverthemoneybecausethescammerswereverycunning.Mrs.Wang'seyesfilledwithtears.Shefeltsostupidforfallingforthescam.Mrs.Wangwasverysad,butshedecidedtodosomething.Shestartedmakingpostersaboutpreventingscams,usingbrightcolorsandsimplewordstoattractpeople'sattention.Then,sheorganizedasmalllectureinthecommunitycenter.Atfirst,shewasnervous,butwhenshesawtheneighborslisteningcarefully,shebecamemoreconfident.Shesharedherownexperience,hopingotherswouldn'tmakethesamemistake.Theneighborswereverygrateful,andMrs.Wangfeltasenseofaccomplishment,slowlycomingoutofhersadness.写作示范二Heartbroken,Mrs.Wangmadeherwaytothelocalpolicestationtoreportthescam.Assheenteredthestation,thecold,hardbenchesandthestern-lookingofficersmadeherfeelevenmoredefeated.Sheapproachedanofficer,herheadbowed,andrecountedthewholeincident.Theofficercomfortedher,sayingtheywoulddotheirbest,butthechancesofgettinghermoneybackwereslim.Mrs.Wangfeltalumpinherthroat.Shecouldn'tbelieveshehadbeensoeasilydeceived.Mrs.Wangwasverysad,butshedecidedtodosomething.Shevisitedeveryneighborsheknew,tellingthemaboutthescamindetail.Shealsocollectedinformationaboutcommonscamsandmadebrochurestodistributeinthecommunity.Whenshesawtheshockedexpressionsonherneighbors'facesastheylearnedaboutthetricks,sheknewhereffortswereworthit.Throughthis,shefoundanewpurposeandgraduallyovercameherowngrief.参考答案Heartbroken,Mrs.Wangmadeherwaytothelocalpolicestationtoreportthescam.Assheentered,thesmellofstalecoffeeandthesoundoftypewritersfilledtheair.Akind-lookingpoliceofficergreetedherandlistenedintentlyasshetearfullyrecountedtheevents.Afteralong

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