高考英语复习读后续写练习：安娜的烘焙挑战：打破偏见收获成长+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习安娜的烘焙挑战：打破偏见收获成长1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Mom,please,”Annabeggedeagerly.“Please,letmedoitbymyself!”Shehadnevermadecookiesbyherselfbefore,butattheageofnine,shefeltcapableofhandlingmanythings.Herfriendshadbeenbakingcupcakesforayear.Yet,itseemedherparentshadlittlefaithinher.“Annaisgoingtomakecookies?Alone?”herbrother,Carl,askedwithalaugh.“Thatisgoingtobedisaster!”CarlusedbigwordstoactsmarterthanAnna.Havingabigbrothercouldbeannoying.Admittedly,Annaalwaysappearedclumsy.Butthatwasbeforesheturnednine.Shethoughtherparentsshouldrealizeshewoulddobetternow.4续写原文Atherwords,aflashofuncertaintycrossedherparents’faces.Wouldtheyagree?Holdingherbreath,shehadwaitedforwhatseemedlikeages.Surprisingly,Momnodded,saying,“Okay,butpleasebecareful,andremembertotakealookatthecookbookfirst.”Fueledbydetermination,Annaracedtothekitchen.Witheachstep,therewasasenseofpurposeandconfidencegrowingwithinher.ShehadalreadydoneitwithMomamilliontimesbefore.Puttingthecookbookaside,shegotdowntobakingcookiesfrommemory,breakingeggs,droppingacoldstickofbutter,addingsaltandthen…um…yes,mixingitwell!Usingamixerwaseasy.Sheturnedonthemixeratthemediumspeed—andwhoa.Whoa.Whoa!Buttersplattered(飞溅)everywhere,makingthekitcheninamess.Collectingherself,sheturnedbacktothemixingbowlandstartedagain.Thistimewithsofterbutter.5续写原文Annaplacedroundedspoonfulsofmixtureontothecookiepanandputitintotheoven(烤炉).Withinafewminutes,afantasticsmellfilledthekitchen-thesmellofcookiesuccess!Shewasgoingtosilenceallthosedoubts.Nomoreeye-rollingfromherbigbrother.Nomore“You’retooyoung,Anna”fromherparents.Shebelievedshewasgrownupandmatureenoughtobereliedon.6段首句Paragraph1:ThemomentAnnapulledthepanoutoftheoven,Carlsteppedintothekitchen.Paragraph2:Nowshedecidedtohaveanothertry,carefullyfollowingthecookbook.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9九岁的安娜急切地请求妈妈让自己独自做饼干，她觉得自己已经有能力处理很多事情，然而父母和哥哥对她缺乏信心。哥哥卡尔嘲笑她独自做饼干会是一场“灾难”，父母听到安娜的请求后也面露犹豫之色。不过，妈妈最终点头同意了，同时叮嘱安娜要小心，还让她先看看食谱。安娜满怀决心冲进厨房，她自认为此前和妈妈一起做过很多次，便没看食谱，凭借记忆开始制作。在操作过程中，黄油溅得到处都是，把厨房弄得一团糟，但她没有气馁，重新尝试。安娜把调好的面糊放入烤箱，不一会儿，厨房里就飘出了饼干的香气，她满心期待着能借此让家人对她刮目相看，不再质疑她的能力。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1:ThemomentAnnapulledthepanoutoftheoven,Carlsteppedintothekitchen.安娜刚把烤盘从烤箱里拿出来，卡尔就走进了厨房。他一眼就看到了安娜手中的饼干，先是愣了一下，随即脸上浮现出一抹讥笑。“哈哈，这就是你折腾了半天的成果？”卡尔边说边凑近，仔细打量着烤盘上的饼干，“瞧瞧这颜色，深一块浅一块的，这能吃吗？我就知道你肯定做不好。”安娜的脸瞬间涨得通红，眼眶里也泛起了泪花。她原本满心欢喜，以为自己成功做出了美味的饼干，可卡尔的话像一盆冷水，浇灭了她所有的热情。她低头看着手中的饼干，心里充满了失落和委屈。这时，爸爸妈妈也走进了厨房。妈妈看到安娜难过的样子，连忙走过来安慰她：“宝贝，别难过，第一次做做成这样已经很不错了，下次肯定能做得更好。”爸爸也在一旁点头表示赞同。但安娜还是觉得自己失败了，她没有达到自己的预期，也没能让家人对她刮目相看。她暗暗下定决心，一定要再做一次，做出让所有人都满意的饼干。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Nowshedecidedtohaveanothertry,carefullyfollowingthecookbook.现在她决定再试一次，这次她小心翼翼地按照食谱来做。她把食谱摊开放在厨房的台面上，每一个步骤都看得格外仔细。在准备材料的时候，她严格按照食谱上的要求称量各种食材，不再像上次那样随意。她提前把黄油从冰箱里拿出来，让它充分软化，这样在搅拌的时候就不会飞溅得到处都是。搅拌面糊的时候，她按照食谱上的建议，慢慢地、均匀地搅拌，确保每一种食材都充分混合。把面糊放进烤盘后，她又认真地调整了烤箱的温度和时间，然后静静地坐在一旁等待。这一次，厨房里再次弥漫起了饼干的香气，而且比上次更加浓郁。当烤箱的提示音响起，安娜紧张地打开烤箱门，拿出烤盘。她看到烤盘上的饼干色泽金黄，形状均匀，大小一致，每一块都散发着诱人的香气。这时，卡尔和爸爸妈妈也被这香气吸引到了厨房。卡尔看到安娜做的饼干，惊讶得张大了嘴巴，脸上露出了钦佩的神情。“安娜，你这次做得太棒了！我之前不该嘲笑你，你真的很厉害。”卡尔不好意思地说。爸爸妈妈也对安娜竖起了大拇指，妈妈高兴地说：“宝贝，你做得太出色了！我们就知道你一定可以的。”安娜听了，脸上露出了灿烂的笑容，她终于通过自己的努力证明了自己的能力，也赢得了家人的认可和赞扬。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现ThemomentAnnapulledthepanoutoftheoven,Carlsteppedintothekitchen.HiseyesimmediatelyfellonthecookiesinAnna'shands.First,hefrozeforasecond,andthenasneerappearedonhisface."Haha,isthistheresultofyourhardworkforsolong?"Carlsaidasheleanedclosertocarefullyexaminethecookiesonthepan."Lookatthecolor,it'suneven.Cantheseevenbeeaten?Iknewyoucouldn'tdoitwell."Anna'sfaceturnedredinstantly,andtearswelledupinhereyes.Shehadbeenfullofjoy,thinkingthatshehadsuccessfullymadedeliciouscookies,butCarl'swordswerelikeabucketofcoldwater,extinguishingallherenthusiasm.Shelookeddownatthecookiesinherhands,filledwithdisappointmentandgrievance.Atthistime,MomandDadalsowalkedintothekitchen.SeeingAnna'ssadlook,Momquicklycameovertocomforther."Honey,don'tbesad.You'vedoneagreatjobforthefirsttime.You'lldefinitelydobetternexttime."Dadnoddedinagreementbesideher.ButAnnastillfeltlikeafailure.Shehadn'tmetherownexpectationsandhadn'timpressedherfamily.Shesecretlymadeuphermindtotryagainandmakecookiesthatwouldsatisfyeveryone.14范文呈现Nowshedecidedtohaveanothertry,carefullyfollowingthecookbook.Shespreadthecookbookoutonthekitchencounterandreadeverystepverycarefully.Whenpreparingtheingredients,sheweighedeachingredientstrictlyaccordingtotherequirementsinthecookbook,nolongerbeingcasuallikelasttime.Shetookthebutteroutoftherefrigeratorinadvancetoletitsoftencompletelysothatitwouldn'tsplasheverywherewhenstirring.Whenstirringthebatter,shefollowedthesuggestionsinthecookbookandstirredslowlyandevenlytoensurethateveryingredientwaswell-mixed.Afterputtingthebatterintothebakingpan,shecarefullyadjustedthetemperatureandtimeoftheovenandthensatquietlyasidewaiting.Thistime,thearomaofcookiesfilledthekitchenagain,anditwasevenstrongerthanlasttime.Whentheoven'salarmrang,Annanervouslyopenedtheovendoorandtookoutthebakingpan.Shesawthatthecookiesonthepanweregoldenincolor,evenlyshaped,andofthesamesize.Eachoneexudedanattractivearoma.Atthistime,Carl,Mom,andDadwerealsoattractedtothekitchenbythearoma.CarlwassosurprisedwhenhesawAnna'scookiesthatheopenedhismouthwide,andanexpressionofadmirationappearedonhisface."Anna,you'vedoneanamazingjobthistime!Ishouldn'thavelaughedatyoubefore.You'rereallygreat."Carlsaidsheepishly.MomandDadalsogaveAnnaathumbs-up.Momsaidhappily,"Honey,you'vedoneanexcellentjob!Weknewyoucoulddoit."Annasmiledbrightly,finallyprovingherabilitythroughherowneffortsandwinningtherecognitionandpraiseofherfamily.15升级版范文呈现ThemomentAnnapulledthepanoutoftheoven,Carlsteppedintothekitchen.HisgazeimmediatelyfixedonthecookiesinAnna'shands.Forasplitsecond,hestoodtheremotionless,andthenasmirkspreadacrosshisface."Haha,isthiswhatyou'vebeenslavingawayfor?"Carlremarkedasheleanedintoscrutinizethecookiesonthepan."Justlookatthecolor!It'sallpatchy.Aretheseevenfittoeat?Iknewyouwouldn'tbeabletopullitoff."Anna'sfaceflushedbeet-redinaninstant,andhereyeswelledupwithtears.Shehadbeenbrimmingwithjoy,believingthatshehadsuccessfullycrafteddeliciouscookies,butCarl'swordswerelikeadelugeofcoldwater,dousingallherexcitement.Shecasthereyesdownatthecookiesinherhands,herheartheavywithdisappointmentandasenseofinjustice.Justthen,MomandDadenteredthekitchen.NoticingAnna'sforlornexpression,Momswiftlyapproachedtooffercomfort."Sweetheart,don'tbedisheartened.Forafirstattempt,you'vedoneremarkablywell.You'reboundtodoevenbetternexttime."Dadnoddedinagreementbesideher.However,Annastillfeltlikeacompletefailure.Shehadn'tliveduptoherownhighstandardsandhadfailedtoimpressherfamily.Shesecretlyresolvedtogiveitanothershotandcreatecookiesthatwouldleaveeveryoneinawe.16升级版范文呈现Nowshedecidedtohaveanothertry,meticulouslyfollowingthecookbook.Shespreadthecookbookoutonthekitchencounter,poringovereverysinglestepwithgreatcare.Whenitcametopreparingtheingredients,shemeasuredeachonepreciselyaccordingtothecookbook'sinstructions,nolongerbeinghaphazardasshehadbeenbefore.Shetookthebutteroutoftherefrigeratorwellinadvance,allowingittosoftenthoroughlysothatitwouldn'tsplatterallovertheplacewhenshestartedstirring.Asshestirredthebatter,sheadheredstrictlytothecookbook'srecommendations,stirringslowlyandsteadilytoensurethatalltheingredientswereperfectlycombined.Afterpouringthebatterintothebakingpan,shemeticulouslyadjustedtheoven'stemperatureandtimingandthensatpatiently,waitingfortheresults.Thistime,thearomaoffreshly-bakedcookieswaftedthroughthekitchen,evenmoreenticingthanbefore.Whentheove