2024秋高中英语Module3MyFirstRideonaTrainSectionⅣWriting-游记学案含解析外研版必修1

PAGE1-Module3MyFirstRideonaTraiSectionⅣWriting——游记本单元的写作要求是写一篇游记，记述旅途中所见所闻，并通过对当地的风土人情、山川地貌、人文景致、名胜古迹等方面的描写来表达作者的思想感情。一、基本结构游记一般分为三部分：开头部分：引出话题，简要介绍巡游的状况；主体部分：具体记述巡游过程；结尾部分：要抒发自己的体验与感受。二、增分佳句常用的开头语：1．Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganized...2．Today,ourschoolorganizedaninterestingoutingforus.3．Lastweekend,myparentsandIwentto...foraholiday.4．Now,I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutanewattraction...环境描述语：1．Standingonthetopofthemountain,thetemplehasexperiencedmanychangesinthisarea.2．Surroundedbymountainsonthreesides,thesmallvillagefacesaclearriverontheeast.3．Westofthecitystandsatallbuilding.4．SydneyisthebiggestcityinAustralia,whichhasmanyplacesofinterest,amongwhichistheOperaHouse.5．TheWest6．OnthewaytoMoscowIsawsomefarmhouseswhichwereabandoned.常用的结束语：1．I'llneverforget...2．Thisisanunusual/unforgettablejourneytoLondon3．Thiswasareallife­changingexperiencethatIwouldneverforget.4．Wehadagoodtime/enjoyedourselvesthere.5．Wewereverytired,butwereallyhadawonderfulday.假设你是李华，你的挚友Tom来信询问你今年暑假的旅行状况，请你依据以下提示给他写一封回信。巡游地青岛人物和父母交通方式火车活动海边拍照、漫步；海中游泳；爬崂山DearTom，Howareyoudoing?Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutmytravelduringthesummerholiday.Nowletmeintroduceittoyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua分析体裁应用文主题介绍旅行状况时态一般过去时人称第一人称为主结构第一段：写信目的其次段：具体介绍巡游过程第三段：抒发自己的感受1.用词(1)sceneryn.风景，景色(2)seasiden.海滨(3)exhaustedadj.乏累不堪的(4)get_on_the_train上火车(5)at_midnight在半夜(6)refer_to参考，查阅2．造句(1)今年暑假，我和父母去青岛观赏漂亮的风景。Thissummerholiday,myparentsandIwenttoQingdaotoenjoythebeautifulscenery.(2)我们半夜时分登上火车。Wegotonthetrainatmidnight.(3)六个小时后我们到达青岛火车站。我们在那儿买了一张地图以备查阅。Sixhourslater,wegottotheQingdaotrainstation.Weboughtamapthereincasewemightrefertoit.(4)首先我们去了迷人的海边，在那儿，我们拍了一些照片，尽情地在沙滩上漫步，在海中游泳。Wefirstwenttotheattractiveseaside.Wetooksomephotos,walkedonthesandsandswamintheseaasmuchaswelikedthere.(5)尽管到达山顶时我们力倦神疲，但我们很兴奋。Thoughwewereexhaustedwhenwegottothetopofit,wefeltveryglad.(6)这是一次完备的旅行。Itisaperfectjourney.(7)将句(3)升级为含有定语从句的句子Six_hours_later,_we_got_to_the_Qingdao_train_station,_where_we_bought_a_map_in_case_we_might_refer_to_it.(8)将句(4)升级为含有定语从句的句子We_first_went_to_the_attractive_seaside,_where_we_took_some_photos,_walked_on_the_sands_and_swam_in_the_sea_as_much_as_we_liked.(9)将句(5)升级为倒装句Exhausted_though_we_were_when_we_got_to_the_top_of_it,_we_felt_very_glad.(10)将句(6)升级为感叹句What_a_perfect_journey!3．成篇DearTom，Howareyoudoing?Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutmytravelduringthesummerholiday.Nowletmeintroduceittoyou.Thissummerholiday,myparentsandIwenttoQingdaotoenjoythebeautifulscenery.Thiswasourfirstlong­distancetrainride.Wegotonthetrainatmidnight.Sixhourslater,wegottotheQingdaotrainstationwhereweboughtamapincasewemightrefertoit.Wefirstwenttotheattractiveseaside,wherewetooksomephotos,walkedonthesandsandswamintheseaasmu