2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：少年守信传递善意与温暖+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习少年守信，传递善意与温暖1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ten-year-oldSamEvanswasadie-hardfootballfan,andhe’dbeensavingformonthstobuyhisfavoritefootballkit.However,whenhereachedthestore,hediscoveredthatthekit’spricehadrisen,andthecostwasnowafewmoredollarsthanwhathe’dmanagedtosave.Disappointed,Samalmostburstintotears,butjustthen,heheardavoicefrombehind,HeturnedandsawMr,Barney,hisneighbor,holdingashoppingbag.“Well,youdon'tseemokay,youngman.Tellmeifthere’sanythinglcabdotohelpyou.”Mr.Barneyasked.Samwipedhistearsandapproachedhim,explainingthathehadsavedmoneyforafootballkit,“ButwhenIcametoday,lsawitwasafewdollarsmorethanwhatIhave.”Samcried.4续写原文Mr,Barney,withawarmsmile,pattedSamontheheadandgenerouslyofferedtocovertheextracost.However,Samquicklyrefusedtheoffer.Heexplainedthathismotherwasalwaysconcernedabouthimspendingtoomuchtimeplayingfootballandhadrefusedtobuyhimanewkit.Shehadalsotoldhimnevertoborrowmoneyfromanyone,stressingtheimportanceofdependingonhimself.Mr.BarneywasamusedbySam'shonesty.“Well,thenhowaboutpayingmebackrightnow?”Mr.Barneysuggested.“Now?”Samwaspuzzled.Mr.Barneyexplained,“Yes,promisemethatyou'llpayforwardthiskindness.Thatmeansifyouseesomeoneinneed,andyouhavethemoney,you’llhelpthemwithouthesitation,Deal?”“Done,Mr.Barney,”Samansweredjoyfullyandtheywenttopayforhisfootballkit.5段首句Paragraph1：Afterthatday,Samtrieddifferentwaystoearnmoney.Paragraph2：Atthestore,henoticedanoldlady.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8十岁的山姆是个足球迷，攒钱想买心仪的足球装备，却发现钱不够。邻居巴尼先生提出帮忙补齐差价，山姆因妈妈的教导拒绝。巴尼先生提议让山姆承诺日后将善意传递出去来“偿还”，山姆欣然答应。之后，山姆努力赚钱，不仅想还钱，还想攒钱买新足球。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Afterthatday,Samtrieddifferentwaystoearnmoney.自那天之后，山姆想尽各种办法去挣钱。他先是挨家挨户询问邻居是否需要帮忙做些杂活。很快，他就接到了不少活儿，像修剪花草、清扫落叶。每到周末，他还会早早起床，在社区门口摆起旧物售卖摊，将自己不再使用的玩具、书籍整理出来出售。经过长时间的辛苦积攒，他终于凑齐了还给巴尼先生的钱，还额外存了一笔能买新足球的钱。怀着满心的期待，在一个阳光明媚的周末，山姆兴高采烈地前往商店。10续写思路分析Para2：Atthestore,henoticedanoldlady.走进商店，山姆径直朝着足球区走去。就在他挑选足球时，注意到不远处有一位老奶奶。老奶奶站在玩具区前，手中拿着一个玩具，眉头紧皱，嘴里还小声嘀咕着什么。山姆心生好奇，便走上前去询问。老奶奶无奈地说，她想给孙子买这个玩具当生日礼物，可带的钱不够。山姆听后，脑海中立刻浮现出巴尼先生对他的嘱托。他毫不犹豫地从口袋里掏出钱，递给老奶奶，说道：“奶奶，您用这些钱买吧，希望您孙子能喜欢。”老奶奶感动得热泪盈眶，对山姆连连道谢。山姆看着老奶奶离去的背影，心中充满了成就感，他知道，自己做到了将善意传递下去。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Afterthatday,Samtrieddifferentwaystoearnmoney.Hebeganbyvisitinghisneighbors,askingiftheyneededanyhelpwithtasksliketrimminghedgesorcleaninggutters.Everyweekend,hesetupasecond-handgoodssaleinhisdriveway,sellingtoysandbookshenolongerneeded.Withpersistentefforts,hefinallymanagedtosaveenoughmoneytopaybackMr.Barneyandevenhadsomeextraforanewfootball.Onasunnyweekend,filledwithexcitement,Sammadehiswaytothestore.13范文呈现Atthestore,henoticedanoldlady.Shewasstandinginthetoysection,lookingatatoycarwithatroubledexpression.Samwalkeduptoherandasked,"Iseverythingokay,ma'am?"Theoldladysighedandsaid,"Iwanttobuythistoyformygrandson'sbirthday,butI'mshortonmoney."RememberinghispromisetoMr.Barney,Samdidn'thesitate.Hetookouthiswalletandhandedsomemoneytotheoldlady,saying,"Pleasetakethis.Ihopeyourgrandsonloveshisgift."TheoldladywasdeeplytouchedandthankedSamrepeatedly.Watchingtheoldladyleave,Samfeltagreatsenseofaccomplishment,knowingthathehadfulfilledhispromisetopayforwardthekindness.14升级版范文呈现Afterthatday,Samresortedtodiversemeanstoearnmoney.Startingwithapproachinghisneighbors,heofferedhisassistanceintaskssuchashedge-trimmingandgutter-cleaning.Onweekends,hetransformedhisdrivewayintoasecond-handgoodssalevenue,wherehesoldtoysandbooksthathadoutlivedtheiruseforhim.ItwasthroughhisunwaveringeffortsthathefinallymanagedtoamasssufficientfundstoreimburseMr.Barneyandevenhadasurplusforanewfootball.Onaradiantweekend,brimmingwithexcitement,Sammadehiswaytothestore.15升级版范文呈现Atthestore,anoldladycaughthisattention.Standinginthetoysection,shewaseyeingatoycarwithafurrowedbrow.Samsteppedforwardandinquired,"Iseverythingallright,ma'am?"Withasigh,theoldladyreplied,"I'meagertopurchasethistoyformygrandson'sbirthday,yetI'mshortoncash."ItwasatthismomentthatSam,mindfulofhispromisetoMr.Barney,didn'thesitateforasecond.Takingouthiswallet,heprofferedsomemoneytotheoldlady,stating,"Pleaseacceptthis.Ihopeyourgrandsonadoreshisgift."Deeplymoved,theoldladyexpressedhergratitudeprofusely.AsSamwatchedtheoldladydepart,a