专题13-2021年天津卷英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析

专题13-2021年天津卷英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析【试题再现第一次笔试】假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：（1）该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）：（2）该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）（3）你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。【试题解读】第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时结构：总分法第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求：1.说明四川省有很多著名的景点①四川的地理位置：中国西南部②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程2.介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程①九寨沟是自然保护区②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用3.你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹第二步:列提纲（重点词组）belocatedin；world-famous；placesofinterest；anaturereserve；impressive；multi-levelwaterfalls；haveachancetodo…；rareanimals；scenicspot；datefrom；playanimportantpartin；beamazedby第三步：连词成句(1)SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.(2)Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.(3)JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.(4)Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.(5)Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.(6)Therearemanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.(7)AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.(8)Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.(9)Itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.(10)I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbyitsconstruction.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。【满分范文欣赏1】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinOnepossibleversionABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinTianjin,abeautifulcityontheHaiheRiver,islocatedinthenorthofChinanexttothecapitalcityofBeijing.Withalonghistoryandrichculturaltraditions,Tianjinattractstouristsfrombothhomeandabroad.Therearealotofplacesofinterest.TheAncientCultureStreetiswellknownforthebeautifulartsandcraftsthatreflectthewisdomandcreativityofthelocalpeople.TheTianjinEye,whichstandsovertheHaiheRivergivesanamazingviewofthecity.OtherplacesworthvisitingincludetheWaterParkinthecitycenterandtheHuangyaguanGreatWallinJizhouDistrict.Whatimpressesmemostisthefriendlyandoptimisticpeoplelivinghere.Theyareworkinghardtomakethecityamorebeautifulplace.【满分范文欣赏2】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationProject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiuzhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.【试题再现第二次考试】假定你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：（1）表示感谢并问候；（2）计划与家人一起做的事情；（3）你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。【试题解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。【详解】1.词汇积累照顾：takecareof→lookafter另外，此外：inaddition→besides→what’smore雇佣：employ→hire既然：nowthat→since2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.拓展句：AstheInternetindustrydevelopsrapidly，thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.【满分范文欣赏1】DearNancy,Thanksforyourletter.It’sbeenalongtimesinceIleftLondon.How’severythinggoing?AsI’vecompletedstudyinhighschoolthereisgoingtobealongvacationthissummer.AndIhavegotquiteanumberofthingsonmyto-dolist.ThetoppriorityistravellingacrossChinawithmyparents.Therearesomanygreatplaceswe’dliketovisit.It’sprettyhardforustomakethechoice.Anyway,we’regoingtofigureoutourtravelplaninafewdays.Inaddition,I’mgoingtogetpreparedformycollegelife.I’vedecidedtochoosebiochemistryasmymajor.SoIwilldosomeresearchandtrytofindapart-timejobinabiochemistrylab.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvicesinceyou’vebeenworkingasauniversityteacherfor30years.Thanksagainforyourletter.Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiJin【满分范文欣赏2】DearNancy,IamverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.IamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourintheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.I'mgoingtoTian'anmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGreatWall.Inaddition,IwanttogotoQinghuaGardentoenjoytheelegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.Ihavedecidedtoregisterforthecomputermajor.WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentin