考点15 英语作文中词汇的升级-新高考英语一轮总复习（上海专用）（解析版）

PAGE1考点15英语作文中词汇的升级课前热身练（2023春·上海·复旦附中校考）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelow.假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，学校学生会近日打算策划一次促进学生心理健康的活动，并向全校同学征集活动方案。请向学生会投稿，给出你的活动创意和如此设计的原因。注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,IamgladtohearthattheStudentUnionisplanninganactivitytopromotestudents’mentalhealthrecently.Iamwritingtomakesomesuggestionsofmyown.Wecanorganizealectureonmentalhealthcounseling.Wecaninvitementalhealtheducationexpertstogivethemelecturestohelpstudentslearntoexpressthemselvesinanappropriateway,enhancetheirsenseofgratitude,andunderstandhowtocommunicate.Ithinkthatinthisway,wewillfaceotherswithoptimism,humorandpositiveattitude,improveinterpersonalcommunicationabilityandestablishapositiveandharmonious“sunshineattitude”.Besides,wecanconducton-sitepsychologicalcounselingactivities.Provideon-siteanswerstostudents’psychologicalproblemsandconfusionencounteredindailylifethroughface-to-faceconsultation.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.

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LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生向学生会投稿，提出你对促进学生心理健康的活动的创意并介绍原因。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→happy建议：suggestion→advice此外：besides→what’smore有帮助的：helpful→useful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides,wecanconducton-sitepsychologicalcounselingactivities.拓展句：Besides,wecanconducton-sitepsychologicalcounselingactivities,whichcanhelpstudentssolveexistingproblems.【点睛】【高分句型1】IamgladtohearthattheStudentUnionisplanninganactivitytopromotestudents’mentalhealthrecently.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Ithinkthatinthisway,wewillfaceotherswithoptimism,humorandpositiveattitude,improveinterpersonalcommunicationabilityandestablishapositiveandharmonious“sunshineattitude”.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）核心考点梳理（一）使用万能单词万能单词不用并不影响句子，但用上确能给句子增添一点色彩。故每篇文章都可以用一两个，可放句首或be动词、助动词、情态动词之后，实义动词之前。词义万能单词例句毫无疑问undoubtedly；unquestionablyUndoubtedly/Apparently/Undeniably/surely,extracurricularactivities

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kidsarenearsighted,whichshouldarouseourattention.【点睛】【高分句型1】Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted.（运用了that引导宾语从句）【高分句型2】What’smore,weshouldattachimportancetoourvisualhealthandcontrolthetimespentonelectronicdevices.（运用了“spentonelectronicdevices”过去分词作后置定语，修饰名词“thetime”）2．你校在学生中开展调查，想了解学生对艺术鉴赏ArtAppreciation这门课程是否感兴趣。请写一篇短文，给你校英文网站投稿，内容包括：1．描述图表(chart);2．试分析产生该结果的原因;3．你的看法。注意：词数100左右。AsurveyonArtAppreciation___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:AsurveyonArtAppreciationAccordingtothechart,moststudentsareveryinterestedinArtAppreciationandthepercentageis67.24percentofthestudentsfairlylikeit,whileonly9percentdislikeit.Thereareavarietyofreasonsfortheresult.Forinstance,themulti-mediaapproachtoteachinghasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinteresting,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.What’smore,studentsarenowencouragedtolearnit.Inmyopinion,theresultofthesurveyisagoodbeginning.Sinceartappreciationhasplayedavitalroleinourlife,theimportanceofartappreciationcanneverbeover-emphasized.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图表了解学生对艺术鉴赏ArtAppreciation这门课程是否感兴趣，内容包括：描述图表、分析产生该结果的原因及你的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累各种各样的：avarietyof→various此外：what’smore→besides结果：result→consequence重要：importance→significance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Forinstance,themulti-mediaapproachtoteachinghasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinteresting,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.拓展句：Forinstance,whathasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinterestingisthemulti-mediaapproachtoteaching,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.【点睛】【高分句型1】Forinstance,themulti-mediaapproachtoteachinghasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinteresting,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.（运用了notonly…butalso…连接的并列句）【高分句型2】Sinceartappreciationhasplayedavitalroleinourlife,theimportanceofartappreciationcanneverbeover-emphasized.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）3．假定你是李华，学校英文报正在开展以TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPads为题的讨论，你在校园展开了调查。现请你给学校英文报写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.学生对使用iPad的态度及原因;2.你的看法及建议。对使用iPad的态度原因你的看法与建议40%的人表示支持1.用iPad进行学习;2.用iPad娱乐;听音乐，放松心情。……60%的人表示反对1.滥用iPad会影响他人;2.沉迷于iPad会影响学习。注意：1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPadsItiswellknownthatthereareadvantagesanddisadvantagesofusingiPads.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPadsItiswellknownthatthereareadvantagesanddisadvantagesofusingiPads.Inarecentinvestigationofstudentsoncampus,40%ofrespondentsexpressedsupportforusingiPadsforlearningandforentertainmentpurposes,suchaslisteningtomusictorelax.Theother60%wereopposedtousingiPadsduetoconcernsaboutthenegativeimpactonothersandthepotentialforiPadstobecomeasourceofdistractionfromstudying.Despitethisdivisionofopinion,itisclearthatiPadscanbeusefultoolsforlearningandentertainment.However,itisimportanttousethemresponsiblyandnotattheexpenseofothersorone'sowneducation.Therefore,mysuggestionistoencourageabalanceintheuseofiPads,bysettingguidelinesforwhenandhowtheycanbeused.Forexample,iPads,whichcouldbeusedforalimitedamountoftimeeachdayandonlyforcertainactivitiesthatsupportlearning,suchastakingnotesoraccessingeducationalapps.Inconclusion,whilethereareadvantagesanddisadvantagestousingiPads,responsibleusecanleadtoapositiveandproductivelearningexperience.Itisuptousasindividualstomakewisechoicesandstrikeabalancebetweenusingtechnologyforourbenefitandavoidingnegativeimpactsonourselvesandothers.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPads为题给学校英文报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累调查：survey→investigation影响：impact→effect尽管：Despite→Although鼓励：encourage→inspire2.句式拓展同义句替换原句：Itisuptousasindividualstomakewisechoicesandstrikeabalancebetweenusingtechnologyforourbenefitandavoidingnegativeimpactsonourselvesandothers.同义句：Asindividuals,wehavetheresponsibilitytomakesmartdecisionsandmaintainabalancebetweenutilizingtechnologyforourbenefitandavoidinganydetrimentaleffectsitmayhaveonusorothers.【点睛】【高分句型1】Despitethisdivisionofopinion,itisclearthatiPadscanbeusefultoolsforlearningandentertainment.(运用了Despite引导的让步状语从句，that引导主语从句，it做形式主语)【高分句型2】Forexample,iPads,whichcouldbeusedforalimitedamountoftimeeachdayandonlyforcertainactivitiesthatsupportlearning,suchastakingnotesoraccessingeducationalapps.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)4．五一国际劳动节快要到了，为了增强学生的劳动意识和培养他们的实践技能，你校将开设劳动课，并对学生喜欢的劳动课内容及原因进行了调查，结果如下表，请你以“LaborCoursesinOurSchool”为题用英语写一篇短文，给你校的英语报投稿。内容要点：1.描述图中信息；2.介绍学生选择的原因。写作要求：1.不要逐条翻译；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数100左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文：LaborCoursesinOurSchoolMayDayiscoming.Aimingtostrengthenstudents’awarenessoflaboranddeveloptheirpracticalskills,ourschoolwilloffervariouslaborcourses.Accordingtothesurveythatourschoolmade,differentpeoplehavedifferentchoicesabouttheirfavoritelaborcourses.Asthechartshows,50%studentslikeplantingmost,becauseitoffersthemopportunitiestoendurehardshipsandgetclosetonature.Besides,theplantingprocesscanbringthemasenseofsatisfactionandachievement.35%studentslikecleaningmost,becausetheythinktheycanhelptheirparentsdosomehouseworkbycleaning.5%studentschoosecooking,whichtheythinkisagoodwaytorelax.Somestudentshaveotherchoicesandtheirownreasons.Inaword,allthecoursescanarousestudents’interestinlabor,andmakethemwell-roundedstudents.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图表信息，以“LaborCoursesinOurSchool”为题写一篇短文给英语报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累到来：come→drawnear忍受：endure→bear/stand此外：besides→inaddition总之：inaword→inshort全面发展的：well-rounded→well-developed2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Aimingtostrengthenstudents’awarenessoflaboranddeveloptheirpracticalskills,ourschoolwilloffervariouslaborcourses.拓展句：Ourschoolwilloffervariouslaborcoursessothatstudents’awarenessoflaborwillbestrengthenedandtheirpracticalskillswillbedeveloped.【点睛】【高分句型1】35%studentslikecleaningmost,becausetheythinktheycanhelptheirparentsdosomehouseworkbycleaning.(because引导原因状语从句和省略that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】5%studentschoosecooking,whichtheythinkisagoodwaytorelax.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)5．近日，你校英语报拟介绍学生课外体育锻炼的情况。请你结合图表信息，以“PhysicalExerciseAfterClass”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括：1.课外体育锻炼情况描述；2.简单评论；3.你的建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。PhysicalExerciseAfterClass_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:PhysicalExerciseAfterClassRecently,asurveyonstudents’after-classphysicalexercisehasbeenconductedamongstudentsinourschool.Theresultsareasfollows.Morethanhalfofthestudents,about65%,chooserunningastheirregularformofexercise,whileonly15%wouldplaybasketballafterclass.Meanwhile,badmintonispreferredby40%oftheparticipants,followedbybasketball,whichattracts20%ofthestudents.Asforthereasons,itislikelythatrunningrequireslessonequipmentandfield