专题06：书信作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

专题06：书信作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号一、书信作文1．进入初三后，我们的学习生活发生了很大的变化，就目前的情况，请你给你的好友Eric写一封信，告诉他你最近的一些情况。要点：1、初三生活的变化，至少谈论4点。（学科变化，日常锻炼变化，休息时间变化……）Whatdiditusetobelike?Now?2、向你的好友寻求一些建议。要求：1、文章结构完整，句式多样；2、词数：120词左右。3、不得出现真实的人名、地名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．你即将成为一名高一的新生，你所在的高中为了新生的多元发展，想开设一些学生社团，喜欢发展兴趣爱好的你向校长写了一封信件，申请创建一个俱乐部，内容包括。要求及注意事项：1.文段的开头已经给出，请你补出标题、续写剩余部分（主体和结尾）；2.参考提示内容，可适当取舍并发挥；3.书写工整，语言正确，语句通顺，语篇前后连贯且合乎逻辑；4.文中不得出现与你身份相关的真实个人信息；5.词数：不少于70词。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是来我校的交换生Jack，在中国生活2年以来，你对中国有了更多的了解。在新年到来之际，你打算给远在美国的朋友Tom写信。请根据下图，完成书信的内容。AboutChinesestudybeforeafterIfindagoodwaytoimprove…AboutChineseInventionWho?How?WhatdoIthinkofit?AboutChinesefamily(inmyclass)allowedtomakeowndecisiononfuturejob?Myopinion...reason...要求：1.要点齐全，每个部分要有主题句。2.书写工整，卷面整洁，字数100词左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．《西游记》是中国初中生必读书目之一。假如你是小明，请根据下图提示，向你远在美国的笔友Eric写封英文信，简要介绍该书和你的读后感，并向他推荐这本书，并请他推荐一本美国作家的书。注意：1.须全面反映图文提示信息；2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；3.词数100左右。参考词汇:monstern.妖怪DearEric,How’severythinggoing?IhavereadagoodbooknamedJourneytotheWest._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________XiaoMing5．假如你是李华，上周收到来自意大利笔友Linda的一封信，在信中她告诉你她对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣，希望能了解中国瓷器（Porcelain）。请根据下列表格所给关键词和图片信息，给她写一封回信。注意：1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。ChinesePorcelainMaterialkaolin,aspecialkindofclayFunctionmakeplates;giveasagiftProcess(shape)

(fire)

(polishandpaint)MeaningwealthandhigherclassDearLinda,Igotyourletterlastweek.Inyourletter,youtoldmethat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua6．年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭，传统的年夜饭是除夕祭祖后才能食用。假如你是李华，请给你以FamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve为题，向你的外国笔友Jack介绍你家的年夜饭—包括菜式(至少三种)、寓意以及相关的文化习俗，描述吃年夜饭的场景以及家人的感受等，并邀请他明年除夕来你家共聚。要求：1.文章应涵盖所有要点。内容简洁明了，衔接过渡自然。

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

3.词数：100词左右。参考词汇：团圆饭reuniondinner

祭祖worshiptheancestor__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如你是李华，你三年没见的美国笔友Tony，打算春节到成都旅游，他将于2023年1月15日上午10点到达成都双流国际机场。你到时会穿着红色外套在1号出口处等他。在你给他的回信中还会包括以下内容，同时为了提升你的英语，请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法。注意：1.词数：100左右；2.开头已经给出，不计入总词汇之中。3.参考词汇：成都双流国际机场(ChengduShuangliuInternationalAirport)，1号出口处(Exit1)DearTony,I’mgladtohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．假设你是李华，你的笔友Mike对中国传统文化十分感兴趣，他尤其喜欢中国传统工艺品木雕。他将在明年到中国学习，为了让他更好地解中国，请结合下图给他写一封信介绍中国近年来的发展变化并目简单介绍木雕。同时，为了提升你自己的英语，请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法。要求：1.短文涵盖图表所有内容

2.110词左右，格式已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：雕刻carve

v.微信WeChatDearMike,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua9．假如你是李华，你校外教Mr.Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒贴的，感到很好奇，写信向你询问此事。请给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的传统的寓意，同时邀请他在中考前来你家过端午节，一起放松心情。注意：1.注意书写格式；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。3.词数100左右；颠倒upsidedown参考词汇：福字thecharacterFu

中考theSeniorHighEntranceExam

颠倒upsidedown______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．新学期带来了新变化。“双减”新规(Thenewrule)的提出让学生们的学习、生活发生了很大的变化。“双减”后，你的生活与之前发生了什么变化？请给学校的校长(Headmaster)写一封信。1.要点：1）从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈你是否满意现在的变化；2）你还有哪些烦恼；3）请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2）词数100左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：1．例文DearEric,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmychanges.Ifoundthatmylifehaschangedalot.Weusedtohavesomesparetimetodosomethingweenjoyed,suchaswatchingTV,surfingtheInternetandlisteningtothemusicandsoon.Butnow,wearesobusydoinglotsofhomework.Sowecan’tdothethingswelikeanymore.Also,weusedtohaveenoughtimetodosports,butnowwegetusedtostayingupsolatetostudyandgettingupsoearlythatInearlyhavenotimetodoexerciseorrelaxandIfeeltired.Thirdly,myfriendsandIcanhardlyfindtimetotalk,orplaytogetherasusual.Asaresult,itexactlymakesabadinfluenceonourfriendship.Atlast,withthestudytaskbecomingheavierandheavier,IoftenfeelmoreandmorepressureandIcan’tconcentrateoneverythingIdo.Ithinkthelifenowisbusy,tiringbutimportant.ButIamworriedabouttheproblemsabove.Couldyoupleasegivemesomesuggestions?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；②时态：本文以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍进入初三之后自己的学习生活变化，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，表示自己的生活发生了很大的变化；第二步，详细介绍在学科，日常锻炼，休息时间等方面的具体变化；第三步，讲述自己现在存在的一些问题，并向对方寻求一些建议。[亮点词汇]①bebusydoingsth.忙于做某事②getusedtodoingsth.习惯做某事③stayuplate熬夜[高分句型]①Weusedtohavesomesparetimetodosomethingweenjoyed.（省略that的定语从句）②butnowwegetusedtostayingupsolatetostudyandgettingupsoearlythatInearlyhavenotimetodoexerciseorrelaxandIfeeltired.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）2．参考例文Dearheadmaster,ThisisDanny.Iwanttoapplytotheschoolforanewclub—Englishclub,becausewedon’thavemuchtimetouseEnglishinourdailylife.IwanttoincreasetheopportunitiesforstudentstouseEnglishthroughtheactivitiesinthisclub.AnyonewholovesEnglishorwantstoimprovehisorherEnglishcanjoinus,nomatterwhichgradeheorsheisin.WeplantoholdsomeactivitiesrelatedtoEnglishlearninginthesmallmeetingroomintheschoollibraryfrom7:30to9:30everyFridaynight.Wewillorganizethisclubinmanyways,withagroupofleadingstudentsorganizeeveryactivityproperly.IreallyhopeourEnglishclubcanbestartedwiththesupportoftheschool.Thankyou!Yours,Danny【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封申请信，属于书信作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点明写信意图，说明申请什么社团；第二步，根据要点提示，分别阐述开办社团的原因、谁可加入、何时何地举办何种活动以及如何运营社团等，可列举具体的事例；第三步，表达希望学校支持的希望并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①relatedto与……有关的②organizeeveryactivityproperly尽善尽美地组织每次活动③withthesupportof在……的支持下[高分句型]①Iwanttoapplytotheschoolforanewclub—Englishclub,becausewedon’thavemuchtimetouseEnglishinourdailylife.（because引导原因状语从句）②AnyonewholovesEnglishorwantstoimprovehisorherEnglishcanjoinus,nomatterwhichgradeheorsheisin.（who引导限制性定语从句；nomatterwhich引导让步状语从句）3．例文DearTom,

AfterstudyinginChinafortwoyears,Iknowalotaboutthiscountry.LetmetellyouaboutthethingsIlearned.

First,IfoundagoodwaytoimprovemyChinese.WhenIfirstgothere,IwassadbecauseIcan’timproveonmyChinese.Butafterafewweeks,Ifoundit’shelpfulformetostudymyChineseintheeveningeveryday.Second,IlearnedthatteaisoneofChina’sinventions.Shennongdiscoveredteawhiletastinghundredsofherbs.Ithinkteaisverydelicious,anditcanhelpusrefreshourselves.Third,Ilearnedaboutthefamiliesinmyclass.Morethanhalfofmyclassmate’sparentsdidn’tallowtheirchildrentomaketheirowndecisionsonfuturejobs.Idon'tthinkthisiscorrectbecauseweneedfreedomonourlivesandchoices.

Whatdoyouthink?Pleasewritebacktome.

Yours,

Jack【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏提示句式和“提示信息”中“中文学习来中国前和来后的不同，找到的提高中文的好方法；谁发现的茶，如何发现的，你的对它的看法；班里大多数同学的父母不让他们自己选择未来的职业，你的看法及原因”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“在中国学习两年后，我对这个国家了解了很多。”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“提高中文的方法；茶的发现与我的看法；班里同学的父母对于未来孩子的职业选择的做法以及我的看法和原因”重点介绍我在中国的具体情况；第三步，书写结语。表达“请给我回信。”的强烈愿望。[亮点词汇]①gothrough通过②helpsbdosth帮助某人做某事[高分句型]①LetmetellyouaboutthethingsIlearned.（let引导的祈使句）②Ithinkteaisverydelicious,anditcanhelpusrefreshourselves.（think引导的省略that的宾语从句）4．例文：DearEric,How’severythinggoing?IhavereadagoodbooknamedJourneytotheWest.ItisoneoftheFourGreatClassicalNovelsinChina.IhavewatchedthecartoonMonkeyKingmanytimessinceIwasyoung.ItwaswrittenbyWuCheng’en,agreatwriterinancientChina.Thestorytellsusaboutfourmaincharacters.TheyareTangMonk,theMonkeyKing,PiggieandMonkSha.TheygetovermanydifficultiesonthewaytotheWest.Finally,theymakeit.TheMonkeyKingismyfavoritecharacter.Heissosmartandbravethathecanprotecthismasterandbrotherswell.Henevergivesupwhenhefacesdifficultiesandchallenges.ThebookissointerestingthatIlosemyselfinit.Butit’sdifficulttounderstandtheancientChinesewell.IbelieveI’llhaveabetterunderstandingofitifIreaditmoretimes.Ithinkit’sworthreading.CouldyoupleaseshareonenovelwrittenbyanAmericanwriterwithme?Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.XiaoMing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：主要时态是“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，重点内容是图片上的所有提示信息，另外，还需要向他推荐该书，并请Eric推荐一本美国作家的书，此点不能遗漏。[写作步骤]第一步，表明《西游记》的重要性，以及如何了解书中故事的。第二步，表明关于该书的作者和主要内容，主要内容要体现教育意义。第三步，描写书中最喜欢的人物和对于该书的看法，重点突出它值得读，即向Eric推荐此书。第四步，表明请求Eric推荐书，并表达期待。[亮点词汇]①getoverdifficulties克服困难②lookforwardto期待③hearfrom收到来信④facedifficultiesandchallenges面对困难和挑战⑤beworthreading值得一读[高分句型]①ThebookissointerestingthatIlosemyselfinit.（so...that...如此……以至于……）②Butit’sdifficulttounderstandtheancientChinesewell.（“it’s+形容词+todosth”句型）5．例文DearLinda,Igotyourletterlastweek.Inyourletter,youtoldmethatyouareveryinterestedinChinesetraditionalartandwanttoknowaboutChineseporcelain.OK,letmetellyou.ChinesePorcelainismadefromkaolin,aspecialkindofclay.It’susedtomakeplatesinourdailylifeandisalsogivenasagift.TomakeChineseporcelain,itusuallyhastoexperiencesomeprocesses.First,kaolinisshapedbyhandandthenallowedtoair-dry.Afterdrying,they’refiredataveryhighheat.Finallyitispolishedandpaintedwithnaturedesigns.Ittakesseveralweekstocompleteeverything.NowChineseporcelainhassomespecialmeanings.It’sseenasasymbolofwealthandhigherclass.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为信件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，表明写信目的；第二步，从材料、作用、过程和意义等方面介绍中国瓷器。[亮点词汇]①beinterestedin对……感兴趣②bemadefrom由……制成（看不出原材料）③asymbolof……的象征[高分句型]①It’susedtomakeplatesinourdailylifeandisalsogivenasagift.（含and的并列复合句）②Ittakesseveralweekstocompleteeverything.（It固定句型）6．例文DearJack,

IamgladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinthefamilydinnerontheSpringFestivalEve.

ItisthemostimportantreuniondinnerinChinesetraditionalculture.OnSpringFestivalEve,familymembersgettogethertoenjoythedinnerafterworshippingtheancestors.Thereareallkindsofdeliciousfoodanddrinks.Manyofthemusuallyhavegreatmeanings.Forexample,NewYearcakeisoftenthefirstdish,whichmeans“havinggoodluckandbecomingbetter”inChinesepronunciation.Anotherdishisfish,whichmeans“everyyearhasenoughthingtospend”.Oneofthemostimportantfoodisdumpling,whichmeans“attractingwealth”.Tome,thefamilydinnerontheSpringFestivalEvemeanshappiness.Becauseatthattime,allmyfamiliesgettogetherandIcangetalotofluckymoney.

IhopeyoucancometoChinanextyearandcelebratetheSpringFestivalwithmyfamily.

Yours

LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏参考词汇和“提示信息”中年夜饭的重要性，（至少）三种重要菜式以及它们的寓意，相关文化习俗，自己及家人的感受，以及邀请对方明年来共聚除夕，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“亲爱的杰克，我很高兴知道你对春节前夕的家庭晚餐感兴趣。”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“年夜饭的重要性；年夜饭中的代表菜式及它们的寓意；我和家人对年夜饭的感受及一些文化习俗”几方面重点介绍年夜饭的具体情况；第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望你明年能来中国，和我的家人一起庆祝春节。”的强烈愿望。[亮点词汇]①ontheSpringFestivalEve在除夕夜②allkindsof各种各样的[高分句型]①

Thereareallkindsofdeliciousfoodanddrinks.（Therebe句型）②

Oneofthemostimportantfoodisdumpling,whichmeans“attractingwealth”.（which引导的定语从句；oneofthe+最高级+名词复数表示“其中最……之一”）7．例文：DearTony,

I’mgladtohearfromyou.Wehaven’tseeneachotherforthreeyears.Howisitgoing?Ihavechangedalotsincethreeyearsago.YouknowIusedtobeshortandheavy,butIamtallandthinnow.IammoreoutgoingthanIwasthreeyearsago.IalsostudyharderandIgetbettergradesnow.Whataboutyou?Doyouhaveanychanges?

IamgladthatyouaregoingtotakeatriptoChengduduringtheSpringFestival.YouwillgettoChengduShuangliuInternationalAirportat10a.m.onJanuary15th,2023,IwillmeetyouthenatExit1andIwillweararedcoat.

Duringyourvisit,youwillvisitplacesofinterestinChengduwithmeandtastedifferentSichuangfood.Itisreallydelicious.Ofcourse,wewilleatdumplingsontheSpringFestival,themostimportantfestivalinChina.Familywillgettogetherhappilyandenjoyabigmealduringit.

Ibelieveyouwillhaveagoodtime.Bytheway,canyouteachmetwowaystoimprovemyEnglish?Ilookforwardtoyourletter.

Yours,

LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍两人三年没见，自己的变化；第二步，阐明对方将要来很开心，将会去机场接他，并制定了旅行计划，也向对方简单介绍春节；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝福，并顺便请教学好英语的方法。[亮点词汇]①usedto曾经②gettogether团聚③haveagoodtime玩得开心④bytheway顺便问一下[高分句型]①IammoreoutgoingthanIwasthreeyearsago.(运用形容词比较级)②Wehaven’tseeneachotherforthreeyears.(运用现在完成时)8．例文DearMike,Nicetohearfromyou.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinChinainrecentdecades.Ourlivingstandardshavegreatlyimproved.Forexample,weusedtopaypapermoneyforthings.NowwehaveWeChatandAlipay.Youcanpaywithyourmobilephone.Inthepast,weusedtocommunicateface-to-face.NowwecancommunicatewithwechatandQQ.ChineseWoodcarvinghasahistoryofmorethan4000years.Itneedstobecarved,polishedandcolored.Infact,itispeople’sgoodexpectationandwishforlife.ItalsorepresentsChina’snationalculture.Inaddition,I’mnotverygoodatEnglishlisteningandwriting.Canyougivemesomegoodwaystolearnthem?Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作