专题07 书面表达-学易金卷：5年（2019-2023）中考1年模拟英语真题分项汇编（安徽专用）（解析版）

专题07书面表达（2023年中考真题）61.假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。注意：1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：poster（n.海报）；design（v.&n.设计）MyExperienceofMakingaPosterLastweek,Imadeaposterofthegreatchangesinmyhometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyExperienceofMakingaPosterLastweek,Imadeaposterofthegreatchangesinmyhometown.Thepurposeofmakingitistoshowtherapiddevelopmentofmyhometowninrecentyears.Firstly,Iaskedmygrandparentsabouttheirpastlivingconditions.Then,Ifoundsomeoldphotosonlinetocomparethepastandpresentofmyhometown.Finally,IsortedtheinformationthatIhadlearnedanddesignedaposterwithrelevantpicturesattached.Thisexperiencehelpsmeknowbetteraboutmyhometown.Withitsdevelopment,peoplehaveledbetterlivesandtheenvironmenthasbeenimproved.Iamveryhappytoseethesechanges.Asamemberofthistown,Iwillcontributemyowneffortstoitsdevelopment.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接所给开头，介绍制作海报的目的；第二步，具体阐述制作海报的过程；第三步，表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟。[亮点词汇]①rapiddevelopment快速发展②livingconditions生活条件③sortedtheinformation把信息分类④leadabetterlife过上更好的生活[高分句型]①Finally,IsortedtheinformationthatIhadlearnedanddesignedaposterwithrelevantpicturesattached.（that引导的定语从句）②Withitsdevelopment,peoplehaveledbetterlivesandtheenvironmenthasbeenimproved.（现在完成时的被动语态）（2022年中考真题）61．假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下：1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱；2.团队合作，历险克难；3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。注意：1.词数80～100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）DearMike,SinceyouwanttoreadChineseclassicworks,I’dliketorecommendJourneytotheWesttoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHui【答案】例文DearMike,SinceyouwanttoreadChineseclassicworks,I’dliketorecommendJourneytotheWesttoyou.ThebookJourneytotheWestwaswrittenbyWuCheng’enduringtheMingdynasty.IttellsastoryabouttheTangmonkXuanzangandhisthreedisciples.Thebookishumorousandwellreceived.Inthebook,thefourmaincharactersshowteamworkastheyovercamenumerousdifficulties.Finally,theyattainedthetrueBuddhistscriptures.Thisstorytellsustochaseourdreamsandnevergiveup.Youareboundtoenjoyyourselfwhilereadingthenovelandyoucansharewithmeyouropinionswheneveryoulike.Yours,LiHui【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，向Mike介绍《西游记》这本书。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍这本书的内容以及想表达的哲理；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（2021·安徽中考真题）假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：1.事情经过；2.个人感悟。注意：1.词数80~100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：pocketmoney(n.零花钱);meaningful(adj.有意义的)OnceIWasPraised____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnepossibleversionOnceIWasPraisedOnceIwaspraisedbecauseIdidsomethingmeaningfulwithmypocketmoney.Oneday,Ihappenedtoknowsomestudentsinaschoolwerehungryforknowledgebuttheydidn’thaveenoughbooks.Idecidedtooffermyhelp.WithallthepocketmoneyIsaved,Iboughtsomebooksonline,andgavethemawaytotheschool.Myparentswereveryhappyandpraisedmewhentheyheardaboutit.TheysaidIdidameaningfulthing.Ibelievethateverylittlebithelps.IwillcontinuetodowhatIcantohelpothers.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“OnceIWasPraised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（2020·安徽中考真题）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：1.经常做户外活动；2.很少用电子产品；3.坚持做眼保健操；4.......注意:1.词数80-100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearMikeI'msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua例文：I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesightinmydailylife.Atschool,Ioftengooutoftheclassroomtoplaywithmyclassmatesordophysicalexerciseduringthebreaks.Inmyfreetime,Ialsotryhardtoavoidusingthemobilephoneorcomputer.Youknow,thelighttheygiveoffisharmfultooureyes.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingmytiredeyes.Lastly,Iusuallyhavemyeyesexaminedeverytermtomakesuremyeyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，给自己的英国笔友Mike写信，给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称来叙述，内容应包括：首先讲述题目中Mike的视力减退问题，并引出文章的主题；然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法，这一部分是文章的主体，可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍，并对第四条进行补充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意：短文按内容表达的需要，分成三段，每一段一个主题；内容应包括题目中的所有要点，不能遗漏；课根据表达需要，增加细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，句式应符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使行文连贯，表达流畅。（2019·安徽中考真题）假定你是李华。某英文报“MyHometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者，请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下：1.熟悉家乡；2.乐于交流；3.擅长英语。注意：1.词数80-100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：journalist(n.记者)；column(n.专栏)DearSir/Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua例文：DearSir/Madam,IhearyournewspaperneedsjournalistsforthecolumnMyHometown.Ihopetobeamemberoftheteam.First,Iknowalotaboutmyhometown,suchasitshistoryandculture.Besides,IusedtoworkasajournalistformyschoolnewspaperandIdidaverygoodjob.I'measy-goingandalwaysreadytocommunicatewithothers.Moreover,IhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish,andI'mskillfulatexpressingmyselfclearlyinEnglish.I'msuretobetherightpersonyouarelookingfor.I'dbethankfulifIcouldgetthischance.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本题属于书信作文，信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

2.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，先表达写信目的，然后根据要点提示介绍自己，最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。

3.高分亮点：

单词和短语：hopetodosth.；amemberof；suchas；besides；usedtodosth.；workas；doaverygoodjob；bereadytodosth.；communicatewith；moreover；haveagoodknowledgeof；beskillfulat；inEnglish；lookfor。

句型：and连接并列句；省略that的定语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。1．（2023·安徽合肥·合肥市第四十二中学校考一模）学校英语校报正在征集关于学生个人成长经历的优秀文章。请你根据自身经历，谈谈你第一次尝试做某件事的经历和感受，按照下面的要点和要求写一篇英语短文。要点：1.你尝试的是什么事；2.这件事给你的感想或留下的宝贵经验。要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2.词数80~100，首句已经给出，但不计入总词数。Everyonehassomespecialexperiencesthatcan’tbeforgotten.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Everyonehassomespecialexperiencesthatcan’tbeforgotten.Forme,IstillrememberthefirsttimeItriedcooking.ItwasasunnySundaylastyear.Anditwasalsomymother’sbirthday.Idecidedtogiveheraspecialpresent.Soearlyinthemorning,Igotupandbegantocook.Itriedtomakeabirthdaycake.SinceIneverdidthatbefore,IsurfedtheInternetandfollowedtheinstructions.Finally,Ididit.Whenmymomwokeup,Ibroughtthecaketoher,saying“Happybirthday,Mom”.Shegotveryexcitedandmoved.Itwasmyfirsttimetryingtocook,andalsomyfirsttimedoingsomethingformymother.Thesweetmemorywillbewithmeforever.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步：先承接短文开头。第二步：直入主题，介绍自己尝试的是什么事。第三步：具体谈论这件事给自己的感想或留下的宝贵经验。[亮点词汇]①decidedtodosth.决定做某事②wakeup醒来③gotup起床[高分句型]①SinceIneverdidthatbefore,IsurfedtheInternetandfollowedtheinstructions.（since引导的原因状语从句）②Whenmymomwokeup,Ibroughtthecaketoher,saying“Happybirthday,Mom”.（when引导的时间状语从句）2．（2023·安徽六安·统考一模）假定你是李华。你的外国笔友Alice发来电子邮件，询问你最喜欢的运动。请你根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件，介绍你最喜欢的运动。内容包括：1.你是怎么喜欢上这项运动的；2.你开展这项运动的情况；3.你从事这项运动的体会。注意：1.词数80-100；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAlice,Iamsodelightedtoreceiveyoure-mail._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearAlice,Iamsodelightedtoreceiveyoure-mail.I’dliketosharewithyoumyfavoritesporttabletennis,oneofthemostpopularsportsinChina.Attheageoffive,Ibegantolearnhowtoplaytabletennisfrommyparents,whohaveahabitofplayingitintheirsparetime.Sincethen,I’vebeenfondofitandalwaysplayitwithmyfriendsatweekends.Undertheguidanceofmycoach,Iimprovemyskillsgradually.Iwonfirstplaceinmyschoollastyear,whichpromotedmyconfidencegreatly.Yousee,playingtabletennisnotonlybuildsupmybodybutalsohelpsmemakealotoffriends.Therefore,itmakesmylifemoreenjoyable.Whataboutyourfavoritesports?Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，一封电子邮件；②时态：本文时态有一般过去时，一般现在时；③提示：注意描述怎样喜欢这项运动时，用一般过去时。要注意给出的要点内容应具体阐述。[写作步骤]第一步，向笔友介绍自己最爱的运动是乒乓球；第二步，具体阐述怎样爱上这项运动，现在怎样训练这项运动；第三步，介绍乒乓球带给自己的感受，并询问笔友最爱的运动。[亮点词汇]①intheirsparetime在他们的空闲时间②Sincethen自那时起③Undertheguidanceof在……的指导下④Therefore因此[高分句型]①Yousee,playingtabletennisnotonlybuildsupmybodybutalsohelpsmemakealotoffriends.（动名词作主语）②Attheageoffive,Ibegantolearnhowtoplaytabletennisfrommyparents,whohaveahabitofplayingitintheirsparetime.（定语从句）3．（2023·安徽合肥·统考一模）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack听说“美丽中国”建设给你的周边环境带来了巨大的变化，请用英文给他回一封邮件介绍你和家人参与“美丽中国”建设的情况。要点：1.学习环保知识；2.实现绿色生活；3.参与志愿服务；4.……注意:1.词数80~100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。DearJack,I’mhappytohearthatyou’reinterestedinthe“BeautifulChina”projectanditsinfluenceontheenvironment._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards,LiHua【答案】例文：DearJack,I’mhappytohearthatyou’reinterestedinthe“BeautifulChina”projectanditsinfluenceontheenvironment.MyfamilyandIhavealsotakenpartinthiseffort.First,we’velearnedaboutprotectingtheenvironmentthroughreadingorvideos.We’vealsotakenstepsinourdailylives.Werecycle,reduceplasticuse,andtrytosavewaterandelectricity.Also,wehavevolunteeredtocleanuppublicareas,planttrees,andteachothershowtoprotecttheenvironment.Thereareotherwaystojoininthe“BeautifulChina”project,suchasbuyinggreenproductsandsharinginformationaboutlivingagreenlife.It’sourdutytoprotecttheplanet,andwe’rehappytobepartofthisimportantproject.Bestregards,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时和现在完成时；③提示：根据所给提示内容介绍参与“美丽中国”建设的情况。注意不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]第一步，说明自己和家人参与了“美丽中国”建设。第二步，介绍自己和家人都做了哪些工作。第三步，呼吁大家都参加到这个项目中去。[亮点词汇]①throughreadingorvideos通过阅读或视频②trytodosth.尽力做某事③joinin参加活动[高分句型]①It’sourdutytoprotecttheplanet(it作形式主语)②teachothershowtoprotecttheenvironment(疑问词+todo)4．（2023·安徽·校联考一模）2023年安徽省中考体育考试取消了男子1000米、女子800米长跑必选项目，同学们可以在给定选项中选择自己擅长的2项。那么要想在即将到来的体育考试中取得理想的成绩，如何进行科学有效训练呢?请以“Howtodosportstraining”为题写一篇作文，在下一周的班会上与大家分享。要求：1.语句通顺流畅，语法正确，书写规范；2.不少于80词。提示：可以从考试项目选择、训练方法、安全防护、刻苦训练和测试等方面进行叙述。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,choosetherightproject,payattentiontopropermethods,trainhard.Thenwecanachieveidealresultsinthephysicaleducationexamination.【答案】例文：HowtodosportstrainingThePEexamiscomingandweallwanttogetthebestgrades.Sohowcanwedosportstrainingtomakeit?Firstofall,weshouldchoosethesportswe’regoodatcarefully.Ifwearen’tinterestedinacertainsportordon’tdowellinit,weshouldchooseanother.It’sthemostimportanttogetthehighestscore.Secondly,weshouldpayattentiontoourtrainingmethods.WeneedscientificandreasonabletrainingundertheguidanceofourPEteachers.Atthesametime,weshouldalsoprotectourselvesfrominjury.Thirdly,weshouldtraingraduallyandincreasethedifficultyslowly.Besides,it’snecessarytotestthetraininginordertoimprovethetrainingeffectassoonaspossible.Inaword,choosetherightproject,payattentiontopropermethods,trainhard.Thenwecanachieveidealresultsinthephysicaleducationexamination.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：这是一篇话题作文，为说明文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：写作主题已经给出，结合写作提示和已给出的作文最后一段可知，从“选择正确的项目”、“注意正确的方法”和“努力训练”三方面展开写作。[写作步骤]第一步，简单描写中考体育考试即将到来，引出话题；第二步，建议选择正确的项目；第三步，建议注意正确的方法；第四步，建议努力训练。[亮点词汇]①payattentionto重视②scientificandreasonabletraining科学合理的训练③undertheguidanceof在……的指导下④assoonaspossible尽快[高分句型]①It’sthemostimportanttogetthehighestscore.（it的特殊句型）②Besides,it’snecessarytotestthetraininginordertoimprovethetrainingeffectassoonaspossible.（inorderto引导目的状语）5．（2023·安徽合肥·九年级统考一模）