读后续写-逃课之悔：一场电影引发的心灵触动+讲义 高三上学期12月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AnawkwardexperienceIwaswalkingalongtheroadtoschoolonedayandImetmyfriendRaine.Hesuggestedthatweskipschoolandgotothemovies.IrefusedbecausemydadwasverystrictandIknewhewouldbemad.RaineofferedvariousreasonsbutIstillrefused.Finally,hesaidtherewasaWillSmithmovieatthelocalcinemaandthatIcouldn'taffordtomissit.FinallycuriositygotthebetterofmeandIagreedtogo.Sowesetofftothemoviestogether,boughtourtickets,popcornanddrinksandsettleddowncomfortably.Themoviewasduetostartinfifteenminutesandthelightswerestillon.Wewatchedpeoplecomingingroups,familiesandtherewerecouplestoo.Someofthemlookedlikeschoolstudentscuttingclasseslikeus.AsIturnedaround,IsuddenlycaughtsightofmyuncleAndyandauntJanewalkingin.Isankintomyseatquicklytoavoidbeingspotted.IsignaledtoRainethattherewassomeoneIdidn'twanttosee.ButRainemadeitmoreobviousbyturningaroundandasking“Who?Andwhere?”loudly,whichmademesitevenlowerinmyseat.Tomakethingsworse,theycameandsatjustintherowbehindus.Icouldn'thelpbutoverhear(偷听)theirconversation.TheywerediscussinghowmuchIwouldhavelovedtocometothismovie,knowingmyadmirationforWillSmith.Theywereevencommentingaboutthestudentscuttingclasses.Theyspokeinalowvoice,buttheirwordswereloudenoughformetocatch.Theydiscussedthebadinfluenceofcuttingclassesandtheimportanceofstudyinghardatschool.Myheartsankwiththesewords.Itwasasiftheywereunknowinglylecturingme,remindingmewhyIshouldn'thavegivenintoRaine'ssuggestion.注意：1.续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Soonthelightswereturnedoffandthemoviebegan._________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Tomysurprise,myuncleandauntwerestandingattheexitsmiling.

______________________________________________文章大意：文章讲述了“我”在上学路上遇到朋友Raine，经不住他劝说，在好奇心的驱使下，同意逃课去看威尔・史密斯的电影。在电影院等待电影开场时，“我”意外看到叔叔阿姨进来，为避免被发现，“我”迅速躲起来，然而Raine的举动差点暴露“我”。叔叔阿姨坐在“我”后面，他们的谈话让“我”意识到逃课的错误，内心十分愧疚，为后续故事发展埋下伏笔，主要围绕“我”看电影过程中的心理状态以及被叔叔阿姨发现后的情节展开。伏笔及续写回应：爸爸很严格：这是“我”起初拒绝逃课的原因，为后面“我”因逃课而产生的恐惧和不安做铺垫。续写中“我”一直担心被爸爸发现，以及叔叔阿姨提到逃课的坏处时“我”的内心反应，都体现了对爸爸的惧怕，回应了这一伏笔。威尔・史密斯的电影：是“我”最终被说服逃课的关键因素，也暗示了“我”对看电影的期待。续写中电影开场后“我”却因内心的愧疚而无法尽情享受，形成对比，回应了此处伏笔，突出“我”内心的矛盾。看到叔叔阿姨进来：引发“我”的紧张情绪，推动情节发展，使“我”陷入更尴尬的境地，担心被他们发现并告知爸爸。续写中“我”在电影过程中的小心翼翼以及出电影院时的忐忑，都是对这一伏笔的回应，表现出“我”害怕被发现的心理。叔叔阿姨的谈话内容：他们讨论“我”对电影的喜爱以及逃课的不良影响，像是在无意中对“我”进行教育，进一步加深“我”的愧疚感，为“我”之后的转变做铺垫。续写中“我”从他们的话语中深刻认识到错误，决心改正，回应了该伏笔，体现了“我”的成长。Raine对“我”行为的不知情：Raine在整个过程中没有意识到“我”的尴尬和内心的纠结，与“我”的反应形成反差，增加故事的戏剧性。续写中Raine依旧沉浸在电影中，而“我”却在内心挣扎，强化了这种对比，回应了这一伏笔，也从侧面反映出“我”的自我反思。续写要点：情感线：从电影开场时的紧张、愧疚，到叔叔阿姨在出口等待时的害怕、窘迫，再到最后得知叔叔阿姨不告诉爸爸时的如释重负和感恩，情感变化丰富且真实，生动地展现了“我”在整个事件中的内心起伏，体现了“我”对自己逃课行为的深刻反思和成长。故事线：第一段续写电影开场后“我”无法专注观看，内心一直被叔叔阿姨的话困扰，同时Raine却沉浸其中，两人形成对比，进一步渲染“我”的不安情绪；第二段续写走出电影院时叔叔阿姨的反应，以及他们与“我”的对话，“我”从他们的宽容中获得教训，决定不再逃课，完整地叙述了事件的结局，使故事有一个合理且有教育意义的收尾。主旨升华句：Onewrongchoicecanleadtoaseaofguilt,butitalsooffersachanceforredemptionandgrowth.（一个错误的选择可能会导致满心的愧疚，但它也为救赎和成长提供了机会。）Thefearofbeingcaughtisnotjustaboutpunishment;it'sareminderofthevaluesweshoulduphold.（害怕被发现不仅仅是因为害怕惩罚；它是对我们应该坚守的价值观的一种提醒。）Sometimes,thekindnessandunderstandingofotherscanturnourmistakesintosteppingstonestowardsabetterself.（有时，他人的善良和理解可以将我们的错误变成走向更好自我的垫脚石。）Inthefaceoftemptation,ourconscienceisthecompassthatguidesusbacktotherightpath.（在诱惑面前，我们的良知是指引我们回到正确道路的指南针。）Everymisstepisalessonindisguise,teachingustheimportanceofresponsibilityandtheconsequencesofouractions.（每一个失误都是伪装的教训，教导我们责任的重要性以及我们行为的后果。）写作示范一：第一段：Soonthelightswereturnedoffandthemoviebegan.Ishifteduncomfortablyinmyseat,myeyesfixedonthescreenbutmymindelsewhere.ThelaughterandcheersfromtheaudienceseemeddistantasIreplayedmyuncleandaunt'swordsinmyhead.Raine,besideme,wascompletelyabsorbedinthemovie,laughingheartilyatthecomedicscenes.Ienviedhiscarefreeattitudeforamoment,butthentheguiltwashedovermeagain.Icouldn'tshakethefeelingthatIwasdoingsomethingwrong,andeveryglanceatthebackofmyuncleandaunt'sseatsmademyheartracefaster.Themoviethathadonceheldsomuchallurenowfeltlikeaburden.第二段：Tomysurprise,myuncleandauntwerestandingattheexitsmiling.AsIwalkedtowardsthem,mystepswerehesitant,andmyfacewasflushedwithshame.ButinsteadofthescoldingIexpected,myauntgentlyplacedherhandonmyshoulderandsaid,"Wesawyou,andweknowyouunderstandthemistakeyoumade.Thisisyourchancetomakeitright."Myunclenoddedinagreement.Relieffloodedthroughme,andIpromisedthemIwouldneverskipschoolagain.Fromthatdayon,Iwasmoredeterminedthanevertofocusonmystudiesandmakebetterchoices.Theexperiencetaughtmethateveninthefaceoftemptation,it'snevertoolatetocorrectourcourseandlearnfromourerrors.写作示范二：第一段：Soonthelightswereturnedoffandthemoviebegan.Itriedtolosemyselfinthestoryunfoldingonthescreen,butmyconsciencenaggedatme.Theimagesflashedby,butallIcouldthinkofwashowdisappointedmydadwouldbeifheknew.Rainewasoblivioustomyinnerturmoil,munchingonpopcornandchucklingatthemovie'sjokes.Ifidgetedinmyseat,stealingglancesattherowbehindus.Thesoundofmyuncleandaunt'shushedvoicesseemedtoechoinmyears,evenoverthemovie'ssoundtrack.Ifelttrappedbetweenmydesiretoenjoythemovieandtheguiltofskippingschool.第二段：Tomysurprise,myuncleandauntwerestandingattheexitsmiling.Whentheycalledmyname,myheartskippedabeat.AsIapproachedthem,Ibracedmyselffortheworst.Butmyunclesimplysaid,"Weallmakemistakes,kid.Whatmattersisthatyoulearnfromthisone."Myauntadded,"Wewon'ttellyourfather,butyouhavetopromisetotakeyoureducationseriously."TearswelledupinmyeyesasInoddedgratefully.Thisincidentbecameaturningpointforme.Irealizedthatthechoiceswemakehaveconsequences,andit'suptoustomaketherightones.Ivowedtobemoreresponsibleandcherishtheopportunitytolearn,knowingthatitwasthepathtoabetterfuture.读后续写参考答案：Paragraph1:Soonthelightswereturnedoffandthemoviebegan.However,Ididn’tenjoythemovieatallforfearofbeingspotted.Isankmybodyfurtherintomyseat,prayingthattheywouldn’tnoticeme.EverynowandthenIwouldstealglancesatthem.Everytimetheychattedinawhisper,myheartwaspoundingviolently.Thankfully,afterwhatseemedyears,themoviecametoanendandthelightscameon.Iwaitedanxiouslyuntilmyauntanduncleleftthecinema.Iletoutasighofreli