高考英语复习读后续写练习+特别的暑假经历：从尴尬到自豪+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习特别的暑假经历：从尴尬到自豪1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IchewedonmypencilasIwalkedbackandforthacrossmybedroom.WhatwasIgoingtodo?ItwasbadenoughthatIwasthenewkid.ButnowIwassuretogetlaughedrightoutoffifthgrade.Howcouldmyfirsthomeworkbesuchadisaster?“MynameisAnna,andthissummerI——”Istopped.HowcouldIstandinfrontofmyclassandsaythatI’dspenttheentiresummerhandlingsomethingthatmostpeopledon’tevenliketotalkabout?Poop(粪便).I’dspentthreemonthsshoveling(铲),collecting,andanalyzingcowpooponmygrandparents’farm.ItriedtothinkofadifferentadventureIcouldshare.MaybeIcouldsayI’dspentthesummerontheWeatherControlTeampreventingfloods.4续写原文“Timefordinner,”mymomcalled.Iwalkedslowlydownthestairsandslidintomychair.“You’vebeeninyourroomsinceyoucamehomefromschool,”Momsaid.“Whatareyouworkingon?”Isighed.“IhavetotelltheclasswhatIdidthissummer.”Myyoungerbrother,Seymour,begantolaughuncontrollably.“Noonewillwanttositnexttoyouaftertheyhearyouwerecoveredincowpoopallsummer!”“OK,that’senough,Seymour,”Dadsaid.“Anna,”saidMom,puttinggreenbeansinabowl,“beproudoftheworkwedidthissummer.Ourplanetwouldbeinsadshapewithoutscientistslikeyourgrandfather.”5续写原文It’struethatmygrandfatherdoesimportantwork.Hedevelopedaneasywaytousepoopasasourceoffuel.Usingthepoopisnoweasy,economical,andenvironmentallysafe.“Iknow,Mom,”Isaid,staringatmymeatloaf.“Butit’snotexactlysomethingpeoplewanttohearaboutbeforelunch.”ThatnightIdreamedaboutmoresplendidadventures:cavedivinginMexico;hikingthroughtheAmazonrainforest.Atschoolthenextday,Ibentovermydesk,listeningtoeachkidspeak.Mypalmsweresweaty,andtheknot(结)inmystomachgrewtighter.“AndthatwasmyjourneytoMountEverest,”EmberAdamssaid,finishingherreport.Shebowedandtookherseat.6段首句Paragraph1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Paragraph2：TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了安娜作为转校生，面临首次作业分享暑假经历的难题，因暑假在农场处理牛粪而不知如何开口，试图编造其他经历。晚餐时与家人提及此事，妈妈提醒她应自豪，祖父的工作意义重大。第二天上学，安娜听着同学们分享精彩冒险经历愈发紧张，轮到她时，她鼓起勇气讲述农场工作及祖父将牛粪转化为燃料的成果。同学们听完后鼓掌欢呼，有的还投来钦佩目光。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.“轮到你了，安娜，”哈蒙德老师说道。安娜紧张地站起身，走向讲台，她看着同学们，深吸一口气，开始讲述。她先提到暑假在祖父母农场度过，起初她因处理牛粪而觉得难以启齿，但想到祖父的工作意义非凡，便鼓起勇气继续。她详细说明祖父研发出利用牛粪作为燃料的方法，既经济又环保，强调这看似平凡的工作实则对地球意义重大，她越说越自信，声音也越发洪亮。11续写思路分析Para2：TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.同学们欢呼着，安娜回到座位。她刚坐下，几个同学就围了过来，眼中满是钦佩。他们夸赞安娜的经历独特且有意义，一个同学说没想到牛粪还能有这么大作用，另一个同学则表示安娜的祖父很了不起。安娜开心地笑了，她意识到原本让自己尴尬的经历，现在却成为自豪的资本，也让她更加懂得平凡工作背后的伟大价值，她决定以后也要像祖父一样为环保贡献力量。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Annastoodupnervouslyandwalkedtothefrontoftheclass.Lookingatherclassmates,shetookadeepbreathandbegan.Shefirstmentionedthatshehadspentthesummeronhergrandparents’farm.Atfirst,shefeltembarrassedtotalkabouthandlingcowpoop,butthinkingofthegreatsignificanceofhergrandfather’swork,shesummonedupthecouragetocontinue.Sheelaboratedthathergrandfatherhaddevelopedamethodtousecowpoopasfuel,whichwasbotheconomicalandenvironmentallyfriendly,emphasizingthatthisseeminglyordinaryworkwasactuallyofgreatsignificancetotheearth.Themoreshespoke,themoreconfidentshebecameandhervoicebecamelouder.14范文呈现TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.AssoonasIsatdown,severalclassmatesgatheredaround.Theypraisedthatmyexperiencewasuniqueandmeaningful.Oneclassmatesaidthathedidn’texpectcowpoopcouldhavesuchagreateffect,andanotherclassmatesaidthatmygrandfatherwasamazing.Ismiledhappily.Irealizedthattheexperiencethathadembarrassedmebeforehadnowbecomeasourceofpride,anditalsomademeunderstandthegreatvaluebehindordinarywork.IdecidedthatIwouldalsocontributetoenvironmentalprotectionlikemygrandfatherinthefuture.15升级版范文呈现“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Tremblingslightly,Annarosetoherfeetandmadeherwaytothefrontoftheclass.Gazingatherclassmates,sheinhaleddeeplyandcommenced.Sheinitiallydisclosedthatshehadspentthesummeronhergrandparents’farm.Admittedly,shewasinitiallyhesitanttomentionhandlingcowpoop,yetuponreflectingontheprofoundsignificanceofhergrandfather’swork,shemusteredthecouragetoproceed.Itwashergrandfatherwhohaddevisedamethodtotransformcowpoopintofuel,whichwasnotonlyeconomicalbutalsoenvironmentallyfriendly.Emphasizingthatthisseeminglymundaneworkwas,infact,ofimmenseimportancetotheplanet,shefoundherselfgrowingmoreconfidentwitheachpassingword,hervoiceresonatingwithnewfoundassurance.16升级版范文呈现TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.HardlyhadItakenmyseatwhenseveralclassmatesflockedaround.Theylaudedthatmyexperiencewassingularlyuniqueandhighlymeaningful.Oneclassmateexclaimedthathehadne