读后续写-赛场跌倒处兄妹情深处Ali的坚持与爱的续航讲义-山东省淄博市淄博十一中淄博一中联考2024-2025学年高一上学期期中考试英语试卷

阅读短文，根据所给情节续写一个段落，使之构成一个完整的故事、Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks(盯着他们).Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasn’tuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAli’srunningshoes.Zahra’sschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.Aliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.Thedayofracearrived.Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoretiredhethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrengthandhestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird.Suddenly,asthefinishlinedrewnear,anotherrunnercollided(碰撞)withAlifrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.注意：1.续写词数为100左右；2.续写部分分一段，开头语己为你写好：请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五要素分析：主题：家庭困境下兄妹间的相互关爱与为希望努力拼搏，通过Ali为给妹妹赢鞋参加比赛的经历，展现亲情的力量和在艰难处境中坚守承诺、勇往直前的精神。情节：家庭贫困，母亲生病，父亲失业，房租未付。Ali弄丢妹妹鞋子后两人共穿一双，Ali为赢鞋参赛，比赛中虽遇困难仍坚持，却被撞摔倒，续写部分为摔倒后的情节发展。人物：主要人物有Ali、Zahra兄妹以及他们的父母。Ali有责任感、疼爱妹妹，努力弥补自己的过错；Zahra理解哥哥，与哥哥相互扶持；父母虽未直接参与主要情节，但家庭的困境是故事背景的重要部分，侧面反映出兄妹行为的动机。背景：贫困的街区，家庭经济极度困难，面临房租压力和生活物资匮乏，这种背景推动了故事中Ali弄丢鞋子后的一系列情节发展，也凸显了一双鞋对于兄妹的重要性。情感：开始有Ali弄丢鞋子后的害怕、担忧，与妹妹相互体谅的温暖；接着是Ali决定参赛为妹妹赢鞋的坚定；比赛中是疲惫与为妹妹坚持的信念交织；续写部分则是摔倒后的失落、不甘以及后续可能产生的复杂情感变化。文章大意：Ali和Zahra生活在贫困家庭，母亲重病，父亲失业。Ali弄丢了Zahra拿去修的鞋，两人只能共穿Ali的跑鞋。Ali得知长跑比赛三等奖是双新鞋后决定参赛，比赛中他虽疲惫但为了对妹妹的承诺坚持，临近终点却被撞倒在地。伏笔及续写回应：伏笔：家庭贫困，一双鞋对他们意义重大。续写回应：摔倒后的Ali极度渴望站起来完成比赛赢得鞋子，凸显鞋子在贫困家庭中的珍贵。伏笔：Ali承诺要为妹妹赢得新鞋。续写回应：即使摔倒，他也会克服困难重新站起，体现他对承诺的重视和对妹妹的爱。伏笔：Ali比赛中虽累但因对妹妹的思念和承诺而坚持。续写回应：摔倒后这份信念会支撑他继续努力，回应他之前的坚持和决心。伏笔：另一个选手从后面碰撞Ali导致他摔倒。续写回应：可能会引发后续与该选手的互动或对比赛结果判定的影响，增加故事波折。伏笔：Ali经常因共穿鞋子上学迟到被学校警告。续写回应：这次比赛的结果不管如何，都可能改变他之后的上学状态，比如若赢得鞋子就不再迟到，若未赢得可能会有其他转机。续写要点：描述Ali摔倒后的心理活动，如对赢得鞋子的渴望、对妹妹的愧疚等。讲述他如何克服困难重新站起来继续比赛，以及最终比赛的结果和他的感受。情感线：从最初弄丢鞋子的害怕，到参赛时的坚定，摔倒后的失落与不甘，再到重新站起时的顽强，最后无论比赛结果如何都有对妹妹深深的爱与愧疚交织，情感丰富且有起伏变化，始终围绕着兄妹情展开。故事线：Ali摔倒后，望着前面的选手，内心挣扎后重新站起，忍着伤痛继续比赛，最终完成比赛，虽未得到第三名，但他的坚持赢得了大家的尊重，也让他更加深刻地体会到兄妹间的情谊和在困境中坚守的意义。主旨升华句：Inthefaceofadversity,thepowerofloveandmitmentcanbethedrivingforcethatpushesusbeyondourlimits.（在逆境面前，爱与承诺的力量可以成为推动我们超越极限的动力。）Trueheroesarenotthosewhoneverfall,butthosewhoriseeverytimetheystumble,drivenbythelovefortheirdearones.（真正的英雄不是那些从不跌倒的人，而是那些每次跌倒都因对亲人的爱而重新站起的人。）Thebondbetweensiblingsisathreadthatweavesthroughthetoughestoftimes,strongerthananyobstacle.（兄妹之间的情谊是一根线，在最艰难的时刻穿梭，比任何障碍都强大。）Whenhopeseemsdistantandtheroadisrough,thelovewithinafamilycanlightthewayandgiveusthecouragetopersevere.（当希望似乎遥远且道路崎岖时，家庭中的爱可以照亮道路并给予我们坚持的勇气。）Inthepursuitofapromise,wediscoverthedepthsofourcharacterandtheunwaveringstrengthofourhearts.（在追求一个承诺的过程中，我们发现自己品格的深度和内心坚定不移的力量。）写作示范一：Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Disappointmentandguiltwashedoverhim.ButthethoughtofZahra'sdisappointedfacespurredhimon.Withapainfulgrunt,hepushedhimselfup,ignoringthestabbingpaininhisknee.Helimpedforward,determinedtofinishtherace.Ashecrossedthefinishline,farbehindtheothers,thecrowdcheeredforhisperseverance.Aliknewhehadn'twontheshoes,buthehadkepthispromisetoZahrainhisownway.Hereturnedhome,readytofacehissisterwithaheartfullofloveanddeterminationtofindanotherwaytogethernewshoes.写作示范二：Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Hisheartsank,butthenherememberedZahra'strustingeyes.Hecouldn'tletherdown.Summoningallhisstrength,hestaggeredtohisfeet.Hisanklethrobbed,buthegrittedhisteethandresumedrunning.Thelastfewmeterswereablurofpainanddetermination.Finally,hecrossedthefinishline.Althoughhedidn'twinthethirdprize,hisspiritofnevergivingupearnedhimtherespectoftheonlookers.Alirealizedthatthejourneywasasimportantasthedestination.HewouldsharethisexperiencewithZahraandtogethertheywouldfacethechallengesof