山东省泰安市2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题读后续写为爱剃发光头背后的家庭温情与勇气讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Allthespecialiststolduswhatwouldhappenduringmyfiveyearoldsister’streatment.Thedoctorstalkedaboutthepotentialsideeffectsofthedrugsthatmightoccuroverthenexttwoyearsoftreatment.Whenourparentstoldoursistershehadcancer,herbiggestconcernwaslosingherhair.“Willallmyhairreallyfallout?Willpeoplemakefunofme?”sheasked,hervoicefilledwithworry.“Don’tworry,”Ilatertoldherinsecret.“Whenyouloseyourhair,I’llshaveminewitharazor(剃刀)andwe’llbothbebald(秃头的).We’llwalkdownthestreetproudlywithourbaldheadsheldhigh.We’llswim,gotoparksandplayatthebeachwithourbaldheads.”“Promise?”sheasked.“Promise,”Ireplied,thinkingitwasasmallsacrifice(牺牲)aslongasitcouldcheerherandhelpherrecover.Thedaysandweeksoftreatmentbegantoaffectherlittlebody.Asthedoctorshadwarned,shebegantoloseherhair.Atfirst,Ifoundsomeonherclothesandtowels.Ashorttimelater,Ifoundherhaironthebacksofthesofasandchairsshe’dbeenon.Beforelong,thereweremassesofhaironherpilloweverymorningassheawokefromherrestlesssleep.Afewdayslater,shewasfinallypletelybald.HerheadwasverysmoothandsoftasIheldher.ItremindedmeofthatwonderfultimewhenIheldherinmyarmsandwasamazedathowluckyIwastohavesuchabeautifulandhealthybabysister.Herbaldheadwasbeautiful,butitalsoshowedthesignsofherbattlewithcancer.Oneafternoonathome,Ithoughtitwastimetoshavemyhead.HoweveritwasthenthatIbeganseriouslyworryingaboutsomething.HowuglywouldIbeewhenIwasbald?Wouldmyparents—whoalwaysencouragedustomaintainacertainimage—scold(责备)meforhavingmyheadshaved?Wouldpeople,especiallymyclassmates,makefunofme?注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iwaslookingatmyselfinthemirrorwhenmysisterapproached.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“It’sbeautiful.Pleasealsohelpshaveourheads,”ourparentssmiled.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：五岁的妹妹被诊断患有癌症，治疗药物会有副作用，妹妹最担心掉头发被人嘲笑。“我”承诺妹妹会陪她一起剃光头，治疗过程中妹妹头发逐渐脱落直至全秃。当“我”准备履行承诺剃光头时，却开始担心自己变丑、被父母责备以及被同学嘲笑等问题。

伏笔与回应：伏笔：妹妹担心掉头发被嘲笑，“我”承诺陪她剃光头。回应：妹妹看到“我”犹豫后鼓励“我”，最终“我”剃了光头。伏笔：医生提到治疗药物的副作用。回应：妹妹出现掉发等副作用。伏笔：“我”觉得陪妹妹剃光头是小牺牲。回应：真正面临剃发时“我”却有诸多顾虑。伏笔：“我”担心父母在意形象会责备自己。回应：父母支持并要求一起剃光头。伏笔：“我”担心同学嘲笑。回应：文章未明确续写中同学反应，但可推测家人的支持给予“我”面对外界眼光的勇气。续写要点：

情感线：从犹豫担忧到在妹妹鼓励下坚定决心，最后因父母的支持而感动。

故事线：妹妹看到“我”在镜子前犹豫，鼓励“我”，“我”鼓起勇气剃了光头，父母看到后表示支持并要求一起剃光头。主旨升华句：Trueloveisnotjustwords,butthecouragetoactinthefaceofdifficulties.（真爱不只是言语，更是在困难面前付诸行动的勇气。）Family'ssupportisthestrongestshieldagainstthearrowsoftheoutsideworld.（家庭的支持是抵御外界利箭的最坚固盾牌。）Thepowerofpromiseliesinitsunwaveringfulfillment,regardlessofthecost.（承诺的力量在于不计代价地坚定履行。）Inthejourneyoflife,family'slovelightsthewaythroughthedarkestvalleys.（在人生旅途中，家人的爱照亮穿越最黑暗山谷的道路。）Whenwefacefearsforthesakeoflovedones,wediscoverourtruestselves.（当我们为了所爱之人面对恐惧时，我们发现了最真实的自己。）写作示范一：

Iwaslookingatmyselfinthemirrorwhenmysisterapproached.Sheseemedtosensemyhesitation.“Don'tbeafraid.Youpromised,andIknowyou'llbethebravestsister.”Herwords,thoughsoft,werelikeaboltoflightningthatjoltedmebacktomysenses.Itookadeepbreath,pickeduptherazor,andwithadeterminedhand,startedshaving.Aslocksofmyhairfell,Ifeltastrangemixtureofnervousnessandliberation.Whenitwasdone,Ilookedatmybaldheadandsmiledather.

“It'sbeautiful.Pleasealsohelpshaveourheads,”ourparentssmiled.Tearswelledupinmyeyes.Theirunexpectedsupportmademerealizehowluckyweweretohavesuchalovingandunderstandingfamily.Wehuddledtogether,ourbaldheadsshininginthelight,asymbolofourunbreakablebondandthepowerofloveandsacrifice.Inthatmoment,Iknewthatnomatterwhatchallengeslayahead,aslongaswehadeachother,wecouldfacethemwithcourage.写作示范二：

Iwaslookingatmyselfinthemirrorwhenmysisterapproached.Shereachedoutandtouchedmyhand.“Youdon'thavetoifyou'rescared.ButI'llbewithyou.”HertouchandwordsgavemethestrengthIneeded.Iturnedtoherandsaid,“No,Imadeapromise.”Icarefullyshavedmyhead,strandbystrand.AsIfinished,shegrinnedandhuggedmetightly.Ifeltanewfoundconfidenceandadeepsenseofloveforher.

“It'sbeautiful.Pleasealsohelpshaveourheads,”ourparentssmiled.Iwasstunned.Myparents'acceptanceandwillingnesstojoinuswasoverwhelming.Wespentthenexthourshavingtheirheadstoo.Ourbaldfamilystoodinacircle,auniqueandheartwarmingsight.ItwasthenthatIunderstoodthatfamilylovewasnotaboutappearancebutaboutstandingbyeachotherthroughthickandthin.Thisactofunitywouldbeamemorythatwouldcarryusthroughthetoughtimesofmysister'scancertreatmentandbeyond,atestamenttothepowerofloveandfamily.参考答案Iwaslookingatmyselfinthemirrorwhenmysisterapproached.Shestaredatmewithherbig,innocenteyesandsaid,“Sister,don'tbesad.Youaretheprettiestinmyheartevenwithouthair.”Herwordsmademyheartache.IhuggedhergentlyandtoldherIwasjustthinkingabouthowtomakeourbaldheadslookevencooler.Then,Itooktherazorandstartedshavingmyhairslowlyandcarefully.Mysisterwatchedmeintently,herlittlehandholdi