高考英语读后续写提分宝典讲义

目录一、读后续写题型概述.......................................................................................................................P1二、读后续写真题统计......................................................................................................................P2三、读后续写写作原则......................................................................................................................P2四、读后续写评分标准......................................................................................................................P3五、读后续写人物塑造策略..............................................................................................................P4六、读后续写语言优化方法............................................................................................................P14七、读后续写高考真题示例与解析................................................................................................P20一、读后续写题型概述定义：读后续写是一种高考英语题型，分值通常为25分，在新高考地区的英语作文中占比较大。它要求考生先阅读一篇350词左右的短文，然后根据所给的两个段首句续写文章。续写部分一般150词左右，与原文在情节、结构和语言风格等方面要连贯。主要考查考生的阅读理解能力，能把握原文的关键信息、情节发展脉络、人物特点等。同时也考察创造性思维，因为考生要合理构思情节延续故事。另外，语言表达能力也很重要，续写内容的语法准确性、词汇丰富度和句子结构合理性都是考查要点。考察目的：阅读理解能力：考生需要透彻理解原文的主题、情节、人物关系和情感等诸多要素，这能反映出他们是否能够把握文本的关键内容。逻辑思维能力：要设计出与原文连贯的情节发展，包括事件的先后顺序、因果关系等。创造性写作能力：鼓励考生发挥想象，在遵循原文风格的基础上，创造出有意思的情节和细节，让故事生动丰富。语言运用能力：考察考生对词汇、语法、句型等的掌握程度，要求能够准确、流畅、多样地使用语言来表达想法，使续写部分和原文的语言风格相匹配。命题专家谈读后续写1.高考读后续写以学科素养为导向,突出综合性和创新性,倡导读写融合。2.语篇文体为记叙文,文章结构简单,时间、地点明确,语言生动,但难度不大。3.段落的开头语提供了明确的信息。段落的开头语规划了写作思路和框架,写作内容基本明确。4.话题积极向上,传播正能量,倡导人与自然的和谐共处。5.方向和努力一样重要。研透题型特点,明确考查的各项能力,加强针对性训练。6.变的是语篇,不变的是思路。高考中的文本材料通常为记叙文,要根据记叙文的要素来理清文本的主要内容和故事情节的发展脉络,从而进行合理的续写。7.千里之行,始于足下。要想快速提炼出故事梗概,弄清人物特点,理清故事情节的发展脉络,就要加大日常词汇背诵,大量阅读记叙文材料,总结归纳其写作特点。8.整体布局,科学规划。读后续写是一个写作大工程,除了要有厚实的阅读基础外,还要对读后续写的思路进行整体布局,并对整个写作训练的过程进行科学规划。除了加大词汇量外,还要系统地梳理各种情景描写、人物刻画、情节发展、故事结局与启示的高级语句与段落,并在写作中尝试使用。只有从大局出发,整篇布局并进行相应的训练,才能写出高分佳作。9.走出一条属于自己的路,享受读写的快乐。二轮复习时间短,一篇完整的读后续写用时多,因此在课堂上练习的时间比较有限。但是,读后续写分值较高,这就要求我们有自己的复习计划和节奏,合理安排阅读和写作的练习。小段的时间可以进行小语段、小情节的微写作;大段的时间就可以进行整篇的续写,养成提笔能写、见情景能表达的写作习惯,走出一条属于自己的路,享受读写的快乐。二、读后续写真题统计20212024年高考读后续写考情统计表（一）年份卷别主题话题类型2024新高考I&II卷人与社会车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机助人为乐类浙江1月卷人与自我利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼个人成长类九省联考卷人与自然志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密人与动物类2023新高考I&II卷人与自我老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖个人成长类浙江1月卷人与自然作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟人与动物类2022新高考I&II卷人与自我鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛个人成长类浙江6月卷人与社会为社区无家可归的人们发放食物助人为乐类浙江1月卷人与社会与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友生活故事类2021新高考I&II卷人与社会孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜亲情关爱类浙江6月卷人与自我作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历个人成长类浙江1月卷人与社会少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络生活故事类20212024年高考读后续写考情统计表（二）项目内容选材特点1.选材以情节曲折、线索明晰的记叙文为主。2.主题有一定的背景，材料有趣味性，内容能延伸，话题正向且为考生所熟悉，能激发考生的想象力和续写动力。3.材料贴近考生生活，且有助于引导其关注生活,关注自然。命题形式1.阅读材料篇幅在320词左右，难度适当，易于理解和模仿。2.试题兼顾引导和限制,所给的段落提示句均是故事情节发展的过渡句,对续写故事的发展有提示、衔接、引导和一定程度的限制作用。命题热点1.阅读材料以育人、成长、历险、趣事和自然为主。2.注重考查考生构思文章内容及衔接故事情节的创造性思维。三、读后续写写作原则与原文协同：主题一致风格统一情节连贯写作要点：一个中心：传递正能量弘扬价值观五大法宝：独立主格结构简两条主线：故事发展情节线简并复交替运用人物动作心理线倒装句倒出精彩三个不要：不要盲目增加人物无灵主语出奇兵不要突破所给行数动作链烘托气氛不要忽略段首衔接六大主题：生活故事类四个环节：研读材料画词汇个人成长类研读首句画导图助人为乐类细思斟酌慢成文遇困脱险类研读答案背靓点亲情关爱类人与动物类四、读后续写评分标准一、评卷要求1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分，每个档次5分。评分时先根据作答的具体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。2、评分时，从故事内容，词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：（1）创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。（2）使用词汇和语法结构的准确性，恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。阅卷应整体评分，从主题是否明确、内容是否完整、内容和原文衔接度高不高、语言是否符合原文风格、语言使用是否正确等方面综合考虑档次。先确定档次，再具体给分。3、续写内容必须符合故事主线。不符合的一律不及格（15分以下）。抄袭原文或不相干的内容达到1/3的（连着抄，间隔着抄都算）、充满负能量或不道德的内容，均判零分。4、阅读材料的语言：主要以第一人称叙事为主，因此续写部分的语言也应是叙事风格，否则分数降低一个档次或扣5分。5、语法：文章时态为一般过去时。使用时态错误，扣3分。词汇、语法错误：一般大错扣1分，如出现1个小错，从总分中减去半分。相同的错误不重复扣分。如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。注意事项：续写部分应该以第一人称讲述故事，主要用过去时（如果人称或者时态用错，降一档）；与原材料的语言风格保持一致，否则分数降低一个档次。二、评分标准第五档（21~25分）1.创造了丰富合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整与原文情境融洽度高。2.使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解。3.有效地使用了语句间的衔接手段。全文结构清晰，意义连贯。第四档（16~20分）1.创造了比较丰富合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度高。2.使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构。可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。3.比较有效地使用了语句间的衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第三档（11~15分）1.创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关。2.使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解。3.基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第二档（6~10分）1.内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文情境有一定程度脱节。2.所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。3.未能有效地使用语句间的衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。第一档（1~5分）1.内容或逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节。2.所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。3.几乎没有使用语句间的衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意不连贯。零分：未作答，所写内容太少或无法看清，以致无法评判。所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。五、读后续写人物塑造策略一、语言描写必备单词各种各样的说第1类：轻声说Whisper低声说出（常指耳语、窃窃私语）Murmur/Mutter喃喃自语（多指别人不易听到的低语）Gossip八卦Moan/plain/grumble抱怨着说Mumble/grunt咕哝fort安慰说第2类：大声说Cry叫喊Shout呼喊Scream惊吓地尖叫Yell喊叫着说Roar咆哮Exclaim惊叫第3类：建议说Advise/propose/suggest/offer/remend建议Argue认为Caution/Warn警告第4类：权威说Announce/declare宣布Claim/state声称Order命令第5类：问与答Ask/inquire/enquire询问Reply/answer/respond回答第6类：结巴地说Stammer/stumble结结巴巴地说其他“说”add补充说道=continue继续说道retort反驳道explain解释道state陈述道protest抗议道sob哭诉道agree同意地说promise承诺道assure保证道insist坚持说repeat重复地说gasp气喘吁吁地说groan呻吟着说高级词块withasmile笑着withgreatseriousness特别严肃地insurprise惊奇地withsuddenresolution突然坚决地speakwithpassion充满激情地说inalowtone/voice低声地inasoft/gentle/mildtone用温柔的语气说inasoftvoice以温柔的口吻inanexcited/angryvoice以兴奋/生气的口吻inawhisper低声说letoutascreamofhorror发出恐惧的尖叫withabsolutecertainty斩钉截铁地utteracryofjoy/grief发出快乐/悲痛的叫声句子赏析1.Hearingthis,thetreesmiledwithrelief,adding:“Mydyingtrunkistherightoneforyou.Pleaseehereandhaveaseat.”2.Omar

groanedwithpain

andopenedhiseyes,

“What’sthematter,son?”3.Omarmoistenedhislipsand

shoutedinacrackedvoice,

“Help!Help!I’mdownhere.”4.Shetiptoedintotheroomandwhisperedtome,“IlookedateveryplantandIknowIgotthebestone!”5.“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.6.ShegreetedJamesand

inquired,

“Areyoureadyforourfieldtrip?”

Jamesdidn’t

respond.7.Next,heturnedtoMikeand

yelled,“Givemearock!”8.Ayoungmancametothepolicestation,surroundedbyagroupofjournalists,

declaring

thathehadspottedthemurderer.9.

“Hi,Landy.I’msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,herfacereddening.对话标签＋语气（tone）①ina/an+形容词+tone②inatoneof+名词1）“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.“NoIdidn't.”hesaidinalowtone.33）“Idon'twantto.”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.4）“Iwouldloveto.”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.对话标签＋嗓音（voice）ina/an+形容词+voice“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.2）Hecalledoutinaloudvoice.“Idon'tknowwhatyoumean,”saidFraninaquaveringvoice.对话标签＋介词短语/副词介词短语in:insurprise/shock/sorrow/horror/angerwith:withdelight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/patience/certainty副词firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully“We’renotintrouble!”Ishoutedwithjoy.2）“Ihateyou!”shescreamedinanger.3）“Isittrue?”hewhisperedwithastonishment.4）“I'vebeenwaitingforyou,”shesaidwithasmile.5）“Itisn’tfair!”heexclaimedangrily.对话标签＋伴随动作1）Thewomaninthecarjumpedout,screaming,“Youidiot!Whydidn'tyoulookwhereyouweregoing?”2）Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It’syoursnow.”3）Withherheaddown/Withtearsinhereyes,shesaid,“Sorry.”4）“Wanttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.5）“Look!”Rosepointedoutthewindowandcriedingreatexcitement.在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。二、动作描写动作描写之“动作链”：在描写动作时，要学会细化动作，把动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作（23个动作）形成动作链，写出动作的连贯性，使描写具有画面感，使人物更立体。动作的逻辑主语一致时：（动作由同一个人发出）1）动作三连结构：主语+谓语A,谓语Band谓语C2）非谓语结构：主要动作作谓语，次要动作作非谓语“and”连接多个并列谓语动词Shewalkedtothecashregisterandpaidthemoney.她走到收银机前，付了钱。2）Irushedhome,searchedthroughmycollectionofhats,andgrabbedthecottonone.我匆匆赶回家，翻遍了我收藏的帽子，抓起了那顶棉帽。3）Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”他叫停了出租车，拿着行李箱跳上车，对司机说：“请去警察局。”多个动作同时且主动发生：主+谓,doingsth.或Doingsth，主＋谓The

old

man

sat

under

the

sunset,

reading

the

newspaper

and

listening

to

the

radio.老人坐在夕阳下，读报纸，听收音机。2）Hedoveintothewater,kickinghislegsandstretchinghisarmsasfarashecould.他跳入水中，用脚踢水，尽可能地伸展双臂。3）Walkingtothedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.走到门口，珍妮深吸了一口气。多个动作有先后关系：先发生的动作非谓语用完成时态：Havingdonesth,主+谓Having

queued

for

3hours,he

was

told

that

the

ticket

had

been

sold

out.Havingdonehishomework,Tomwentouttoplayfootball.Havingdonetheexperimentsuccessfully,thescientistswereveryexcited.次要动作与主语为被动关系：Donesth,主+谓Deeply

moved

by

the

story,

the

children

began

to

cry.Surprisedbythebeautifulscenery,westoppedtotakepictures.Inspiredbythelocalculture，shedecidedtostaylongerandlearnmoreaboutit.独立主格结构（动作由不同主语发出时）：主语1+非谓语(次要动作），主语2+谓语(主要动作)动作描写之“动动头”高级词块1.shakeone'shead摇头2.nodone'shead点头3.drop/lower/bend/bow/hangone'shead低头4.headfor/towards朝……走去5.lift/raiseone'shead抬头6.turn/twistone'shead转头7.buryone'sheadinone'shands手捂着脸8.stickone'sheadout探头9.restone'sheadonhands以手托头10.clutchone'shead（痛苦地)以手抓头11.clearone'shead清醒头脑12.patone'shead拍一拍头13.scratchone'shead挠了挠头句子赏析1.Shehungherhead,notsurehowtoreply.她垂下头，不知该如何回答。2.Theynoddedtheirheadsinagreement.他们点头同意。3."That'sincredible!"hesaid,shakinghisheadindisbelief.“简直难以置信！”他一边说，一边不相信地摇着头。4.Hescratchedhishead,notunderstandingaword.他挠了挠头，一个字也不懂。5.Sheburiedherheadinthepillow.她用枕头捂住脑袋。6.Hepattedmyheadaffectionately.他慈爱地拍了拍我的头。7.Idecidedtogoforawalktoclearmyhead.我决定出去走走，清醒下头脑。8.Sheliftedherheadtogazeathim.她抬头注视着他。9.Heheldhisheadinhishands,greatlyannoyed.他双手抱头，苦恼不已。高级词块1.gazeat凝视2.stareat凝视3.watch/observe/spot/notice看到4.glareatsb怒视着…5.peekatsb偷看…6.glance/glimpseatsb看了…一眼7.catch/losesightof看见/看不见8.atthesightof一看见9.fix/focusone'seyeson盯着10.lower/dropone'seyes垂下眼睛11.raise/liftone'seyes抬起眼睛12.keepaneyeon注视13.looksb.straightintheeye直视某人的眼睛14.eyesfallon目光落在15.exchangeaglance交换眼色16.shutone'seyes闭上眼睛17.castalookatsb朝…看了一眼18.castarapidglancearound迅速一瞥四周19.stareatsbupanddown上下打量某人句子赏析1.Shestaredathimindisbelief,shakingherhead.她摇着头，狐疑地看着他。2.Whenhefinished,heraised/liftedhiseyesandlookedoutthewindow.说罢，他抬起眼睛并望向窗外。3.Weallgatheredinfrontofthetelevision,hopingtocatchaglance/glimpseofhisface.我们都聚在电视机前，希望能看一眼他的脸。4.Myfatherlookedatmestraightintheeyeandholdfasttomyhands.我父亲直勾勾地盯着我的眼睛并且牢牢抓住我的双手。5.Welostsightoftheboatinthefog.由于大雾我们看不见那条船了。6.Thestudentwhohadjustbeenreprimandedbytheteacherglaredathisteacher.那位刚刚被老师训斥的学生狠狠瞪着他的老师。7.Abigleafytreecameintoviewatsomedistance.远处有一棵枝繁叶茂的大树映入眼帘。8.Withhereyesgluedtothephone,itwasnotuntiltheteacherpattedonhershoulderthatsherealizedteacherstoodinfrontofher.她一直盯着，直到老师拍了拍他的肩膀她才意识到老师正站在他面前。9.Whenthestudentssteppedoffthebus,James’seyeswidenedinsurprise.当学生们走下公共汽车时，詹姆斯惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。10.Hereyesfellonthephotosofherandmeatmyfourthbirthdayparty.她的目光落在我和她四岁生日聚会上的照片上。动作描写之“动动手”动作描写之“动动眼”动作描写之“动动手”动作描写之“动动眼”必背单词carry提,拿fetch拿来,取回hold握着catch接hug/embrace抱wave挥throw

/

cast扔hand递给point（at）指，指向dig挖，挖掘drag/pull拖，拉，拽push推，挤fold包，裹，折叠hit/beat击，打knock敲clap/applaud/applause鼓掌lift/raise举press按，压scratch擦b梳，梳理slap拍，打；掌掴touch碰，触摸wipe擦，拭tear撕open打开rub擦；揉搓pat拍reachout/for/into伸出/向/进grasp/seize/grip/grab抓住，抓紧高级词块holdone'shand抓住某人的手shakehandswith与…握手handinhand手拉手raise/putupone'shand举手holdoutone'shand伸出手takeone'shand牵某人的手rubone'shands搓着手waveone'sarms挥动双臂foldone'sarms某人双臂交叉catch/grabone'sarm抓住某人的胳膊gathersb.inone'sarms把某人抱在怀中withcrossedarms双臂交叉arminarm臂挽臂lift/holdawarningfinger伸出一根手指警告pointanaccusingfingeratsb指责某人,怪罪某人句子赏析Thestudentraisedhishandhigh,eagertoanswertheteacher'squestion.学生高高地举起手，急于回答老师的问题。Heshookhandsfirmlywithhisopponentafterthegame,showingrespect.赛后，他与对手坚定地握手，表示敬意。3.Shesmiledandheldout/reachedoutahandinwele.她微笑着伸出手来。4.Heslidhishandsintohispocketsandpulloutsomechange.他把手伸进口袋，掏出一些零钱。5.WhenIgottothecafe,IwasseeingBobwavinghisarmstowardsme.当我到咖啡馆时，正看到鲍勃在向我打招呼6.Speechless,shesmiledradiantlyandgatheredhersonintoherarms.说不出话来，她灿烂地笑着，把儿子抱在怀里。7.Jackstoodsilentlywithhisarmsfolded/crossed.杰克双手交叉，一声不吭地站着。8.Hefoldedhishandsbehindhisback,strollingleisurelyinthepark.他双手交叉放在背后，在公园里悠闲地散步。9.Shegraspedtheropetightlyandstartedtoclimbupthetreehouse.她紧紧地抓住绳子，开始爬上树屋。必备单词walk走run跑crawl爬行creep匍匐爬行scramble攀登climb攀登march行走，快步走sneak偷偷地走jump跳tread踩,踏stagger/stumble蹒跚limp跛行tiptoe用脚尖走pace来回踱步wander漫步；闲逛leap/skip/spring跳跃slip溜走,滑倒hop单脚跳dash猛冲；急奔chase追逐race快速奔跑rush急速行进gallop飞奔charge猛冲thunder轰隆隆地快速移动step迈步；踩，踏kick踢flee逃走高级词块makeone'swayto前往=headtofeelone'sway摸索着前进windone'sway蜿蜒前行rise/gettoone'sfeet站起来jump/leaptoone'sfeet跳起来dragone'sfeet拖着脚步tap/stampone'sfeet跺脚shaky/tremblinglegs颤抖的双腿crossone'slegs盘腿dragone'sheavylegs拖着沉重的双腿句子赏析1.Hesprangtohisfeetandrushedtogivemeabearhug.他突然跳起来，冲过来给了我一个熊抱。2.Hewaiteduntilhisdaughterwasasleep,thentiptoedquietlyoutoftheroom.他等女儿睡着后才蹑手蹑脚地悄悄走出房间。3.Theburglarsneakedintothekitchenandstoleadozeneggs.窃贼潜入厨房并偷走了一打鸡蛋。4.Hestruggledtoruntowardsthefinishingline,withhismouthdryandhislegstrembling.他继续努力向终点跑去,他嘴巴干涩,双腿颤抖。5.ThenhereyeswidenedinsurpriseasshesawHelenrisetohisfeet.当她看到海伦站起来时，惊讶地睁大了眼睛。6.Wewerestumblingaroundinthedarklookingforacandle.我在黑暗中跌跌撞撞，四处寻找蜡烛。7.Shejumpedtoherfeetwhensheheardthisamazingnews.当她听到这个惊人的消息，她突然跳起来。8.Whenthemotherchattinghappilywithhercustomer,herdaughterisstamping/tappingherfeetimpatientlytoimplyit’stimetogo.当母亲高兴地和顾客聊天时，她的女儿不耐烦地跺脚，暗示该走了。9.Shedraggedherfeetasshereluctantlyfollowedherparents.她缓慢地移动着她的脚步，因为她不情愿地跟着她父母。动作描写之“动动脚”动作描写之“动动脚”必备单词adj.happy,glad,pleased,delighted,cheerful,overjoyed,lighthearted,enjoyable,pleasantadv.happily,merrily,gladly,joyfully,cheerfullyn.pleasure,delight,enjoyment,joy,happiness高级词块toone'sdelight/joy/entertainment令某人开心的是beseizedbyjoy/beoverewithhappiness非常高兴bewildwithjoy/delight欣喜若狂inagoodmood心情很好incheerful/highspirits心情愉快bedelightedat对...很高兴bejoyfulover/about因...而高兴onthetopoftheworld心满意足brightenone'sheart使某人心情愉快beassweetashoney像蜜一样甜grinfromeartoear满面笑容inseventhheaven极为高兴beamwithpleasure喜不自胜句子赏析Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵激动声穿过他们。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。Awidegrinspreadacrosshisfacelikesunshinebreakingthroughclouds,eyestwinklingwithdelightashereadtheacceptanceletter.他脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容，就像阳光穿透云层一样，当他读到录取通知书时，眼睛里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。Hestoodbythedoor,withjoybeamingfromhiseyes.他站在门边，眼睛里放出喜悦的光彩。7.Hereyessparkledlikediamonds,abroadsmilestretchingfromeartoearwhenshesawherlonglostpetagain.8.Sheshedtearsofjoy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。9.Theteammembershuggedtightly,jumpingupanddown,theirfaceslitupwithunbridledjoyafterthevictory.队员们紧紧地拥抱在一起，跳上跳下，脸上洋溢着胜利的喜悦。情绪情绪描写之“喜乐”情绪描写之“激动”必备情绪描写之“激动”单词形容词：excited,thrilled,exciting,thrilling副词：excitedly名词：excitement,thrill动词：excite，thrill高级词块toone'sexcitement/thrill令某人激动的是with/inexcitement激动地flushwithexcitement激动得满脸通红containone'sexcitement抑制内心的激动conceal/hideone'sexcitement难掩激动aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一阵兴奋ascreamofthrill/excitement激动的尖叫声cheerup振奋起来句子赏析☆Theboystopped,hisheartthumpingwithexcitementandanticipation.男孩停住了脚步,他的心怦怦直跳,充满了兴奋和期待。☆Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。☆Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。☆Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.听到这个消息,一阵激动的战栗传到她的胃里。☆Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。☆Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.爸爸说下星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。☆Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。☆Unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement，hethrewhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,dearmum.”不能抑制住他的高兴和激动，他一下子扑到我的怀里，喃喃道：妈妈，辛苦了。☆Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,他感到一阵兴奋。☆Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自已。情绪描写之“悲伤”情绪描写之“悲伤”必备单词sadadj.难过的sadlyadv.悲痛地sadnessn.悲哀sadden

v.悲痛heartbrokenadj.极其伤心的brokenheartedadj.心碎的；伤心的sorrowfuladj.悲伤的sorrow

n.悲伤；伤心事distressingadj.使痛苦的；悲伤的blueadj.忧郁的，悲观的miserableadj.悲惨的；痛苦的gloomy

adj.阴郁的;忧郁的gloomn.忧郁painn.痛苦painfuladj.痛苦的painfullyadv.痛苦地griefn.悲伤，悲痛grievev.悲伤，悲痛高级词块be/feelsad很难过feelblue情绪低落agloomyfeeling一种悲伤的情绪breakone'sheart伤心绝望inpain处于痛苦之中havetearsinone'seyes眼里含着泪水beclosetotears/beonthevergeoftears快要哭了havealumpinone'sthroat(因感动、悲伤而)哽咽，喉咙哽住tearsroll/rundownone'scheeks泪水顺着脸颊淌下来asense/waveofloneliness/sadness一阵孤独/悲伤benumbwithsorrow/sadness难过得麻木beintears含泪，泪流满面burstintotears放声大哭，突然哭起来sob/weepwithone'sfacehiddeninone'shands掩面啜泣cryone'sheart/eyesout悲痛欲绝bedown/lowinspirits情绪低落inasorrowfultone/voice伤心地说beoverewithsorrow悲伤不已withaheavy/sinking/sorrowful/brokenheart怀着沉重/沮丧/难过的心withasinkingheart心情沉重sadnessesinwaves悲伤如潮涌anoceanofsadness悲伤的海洋句子赏析1.Iwasseizedwithsadness.我伤心欲绝。2.Aflashofgriefcameuponme.一阵悲伤袭身而来。3.Tearsrolleddownhercheeks.泪水从他的脸颊滑落。4.Charleswasoverewithgrief.Charles悲痛欲绝。5.Helookedmournful,evenneartotears.他看起来很悲伤，几乎要流泪了。6.IfeltlikeIwerefloatinginanoceanofsadness,andwordscouldnotexpressmysorrow.我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。言语无法表达我的哀伤。7.Janeturnedtomewithtearsinhereyes,andbeggedmetohelpher.Jane眼里含着泪水打转，恳求我帮帮他。8.Herheartached.Shewasseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcrying/sobbingbitterly.她心好痛,她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。9.Henaggedandplained,andreducedLouisetotears.他唠唠叨叨，不停地抱怨，使Louise不禁流泪。10.Heshookhisheadmiserably/sadly,tearspouring/running/streaming/rollingdownhischeeks/face他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。必备单词动词:fear害怕frighten害怕frown皱眉shake/tremble颤抖scare惊吓、害怕horrify使感到恐怖名词:panic惊恐dread恐惧fright害怕terror/horror恐怖concern担心fear恐惧、担心形容词:pale苍白的terrible可怕的；糟糕的horrifying令人恐惧的scared害怕的scary使人惊慌的horrible使人恐惧的panicked惊恐的afraid害怕的；担心的alarmed惊恐的；忧虑的alarming使人惊恐的frightened害怕的；受惊的frightening令人恐惧的fearful恐惧的terrified害怕的terrifying令人害怕的panicstriken被惊恐袭击的terrorstriken被恐惧袭击的openmouthed张大嘴的frozen僵住的sweaty出汗的speechless无语的高级词块bestruckwithfear被恐惧击中shake/tremblewithfear/terror吓得发抖scare/frighten...todeath把……吓死freeze/befrozenwithfear吓呆/吓傻standrootedtothespotwithfear吓得呆若木鸡beseizedwithpanic惊慌失措inpanic/terror害怕地、恐惧地fearcreepsoversb.感到害怕afloodoffearwellsupinsb.从心底感到害怕tremblefromheadtotoe全身颤抖faceturnspale脸色变白heartbeatviolently心跳得厉害句子赏析Afloodoffearwelledupinhim.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。2）Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中充满恐惧。3）Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。4）Hewassofrightenedthathiskneesknockedtogether.他吓得两膝直哆嗦。5）Herhandswereshakingwithfear.她吓得双手颤抖。6）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.当看到那只凶恶的狼时,我吓呆了,不敢动弹。7）Iwasseized/overwhelmedbyasenseofhorror.Itrembledalloverandmypalmsweresweating.我害怕极了，浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。8）Mylegswereshakingandmyheartwaspoundingrapidly.我的腿在颤抖，心在砰砰跳。9）Aburstofhorrorheldmetotallyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.恐惧喷薄而出，将我紧紧包围，我已经寸步难行了。10）Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodycooled/frozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.看到这可怕的景象,我感觉我的血液都凝固起来。情绪描写之“愤怒”情绪描写之“害怕”情绪描写之“愤怒”情绪描写之“害怕”必备单词常见名词:anger,rage,fury,annoyance,irritation,wrath,indignation常见形容词/副词:angry,furious,annoyed,mad,annoying,indignant,angrily 常见动词:glare怒目而视roar/storm怒吼rage发怒，怒斥annoy使恼怒irritate使发怒高级词块flyintoafury勃然大怒tremblewithanger气得发抖aburstofanger一股怒火flushwithanger气红了脸getmad/crossatsb.生某人的气toone'sannoyance令某人生气的是inanger愤怒地explodewithanger勃然大怒burstintoanger/annoyance勃然大怒resist/containone'sanger抑制怒火fuelone'sanger使某人更加愤怒stampone'sfeetinanger生气地跺脚loseone'stemper发脾气makesb’sbloodboil使某人愤怒betonguetiedwithanger气得说不出话来handstremblingwithanger气得手发抖beredcheekedwithanger气得脸通红stampone'sfootinanger某人气得直跺脚beseized/overe/swallowedbyanger非常生气beoverwhelmedbyanger/annoyance非常生气feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury)感到―阵愤怒句子赏析☆Andthenthefierce,buriedangersurgedupintohisthroat.然后,埋藏在心头的满腔怒火直冲到他的喉咙里来。☆Shecouldfeeltheangergrowing,bubblingupinsideher.她能感到她内心的愤怒就像气泡一样慢慢变大。☆Angerengulfedhimlikeawildbeast.怒火如同野兽一般将他吞没。☆Filledwithfury,Jimwasunabletoutterasingleword.Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。☆Helookedasifheweregoingtoburst.他看上去快要气炸了。☆AflushofangerspreadacrossMr.Murdstone'scheeks.一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。☆Hetrembledwithangerfromheadtofoot.他气得浑身发抖。☆Boilingwithrage,Jimshookhisfistatme.Jim怒火中烧，朝我挥舞着拳头。必备单词常见名词/动词 shock,astonishment,astonish,surprise,amazement,amaze常见形容词/副词:astonished,amazed,surprised,shocked,stunned,startled,astonishing,amazing,surprising,shocking,surprisingly,amazingly其他形容词：thunderstruck极其惊讶的astounding令人惊骇的staggering令人大吃一惊的speechless（因惊愕)一时语塞的incredible难以置信的dumbfounded目瞪口呆的高级词块toone'sshock/astonishment/surprise/amazement令某人震惊/吃惊/惊讶的是inastonishment/surprise/shock/amazement/disbelief吃惊地/震惊地/惊讶地besurprised/amazed/astonished/shockedat/by...对感到惊讶itamazes/astonishesmethat...令我惊讶的是……Whatamazes/astonishesmemostisthat...最让我吃惊的是…easashocktosb.…让某人很震惊beyondone'sexpectations出乎意料raisetheeyebrows/frowninsurprise惊讶的皱眉widentheeyes/eyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment吃惊地睁大了眼睛freeze/standstill/stopdead/benumbwithshock惊得当场呆住了beshockedbeyondwords惊讶地说不出话来speechlesswithshock惊得说不出话来句子赏析☆Alookofsurprisespreadoverherface.惊愕的表情在她的脸上蔓延开来。☆Speechlesswithshock,weapproachedandfoundthedriverofthecarwasasixyearoldboy.我们靠近，发现车主是一个六岁男孩，目瞪口呆。☆Hewastoosurprisedtospeakoreventothink.他惊讶得说不出话来，甚至脑子都不灵了"☆MyjawdroppedinastonishmentwhenIsawthesizeoftheaudience.当我看到这么多观众时，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。☆Hejustgluedhiseyestome,utterlydumbfounded.他只是两眼盯着我，完全傻掉了。☆Hearingtheunexpectednews,Marywasnumbwithshock,asifrootedtotheground.听到这个意外的消息，Mary呆住了，动弹不得。☆ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment.我一打开盒子，就惊奇地睁大眼睛。情绪描写之“紧张”情绪描写之“情绪描写之“紧张”情绪描写之“惊讶”必备单词形容词:nervous紧张的；uneasy不安的；tense紧张的；anxious焦虑的；restless不安的名词:nervousness,unease,tension,anxiety,restlessness高级词块takeadeepbreath深呼吸holdone'sbreath屏住呼吸pacebackandforth来回踱步heartsink心头一沉onpinsandneedles如坐针毡aflood/waveoftension一阵紧张tremblewithanxiety焦虑不安losesleepoversth.为某事担忧putsomebodyonedge让某人感到紧张不安have/withbutterfliesinone'sstomach/one'sstomachbefullofbutterflies心里发慌hide/conceal/holdbackone'snervousness/anxiety掩饰紧张／焦虑withone'sheartinone'smouth提心吊胆地withuneasiness不安地=restlessanduneasy（形容词做状语）beburdened/beconsumed/seizedwithanxiety焦虑不安pound/beat/race/thump/hammerwildly/violently/loudly/hard/心怦怦直跳得厉害shiver/quiver/tremble/shakewithnervousness紧张得发抖murmurinatremblingvoice用颤抖的声音小声喃喃stammer/stutterunderone'sbreath结结巴巴地小声说句子赏析Mylipsquivered,bigtearsrollingdowncheeks.我的嘴唇颤抖着，眼泪顺着脸颊滚落。Hewaspacingnervouslyupanddowntheroom.他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。Fullofanxiety，Ifeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.我焦虑不安，坐立不安。Shecouldn’tfallasleep,tossingandturninginbedforawholenight.她在床上辗转反侧了一整夜无法入睡。SoanxiousdidIfeelthatmyheartalmostjumpedoutofmythroat.我太着急了，以至于我的心都快跳出来了。Whilewaiting,hisheartbeatwildlyandhispalmsweresweaty.等待的时候，他的心跳得很厉害，手心出汗。Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我的心跳加速，头脑一片空白。Herheartbeatwildlyandherlegstrembled.她的心剧烈跳动，腿打着颤。Hisfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretonguetied.他的脸色苍白，站在那里说不出话。WhenIfinallywentonthestage,myheartwasinmymouth.当我终于走上舞台时，我的心都提到嗓子眼儿了。情绪描写之“羞愧”情绪描写之“羞愧”情绪描写之“羞愧”必备情绪描写之“羞愧”情绪描写之“羞愧”情绪描写之“羞愧”单词形容词 embarrassed,awkward,ashamed,embarrassing,shameful名词/动词embarrassment,awkwardness,shame,embarrass高级词块in/withembarrassment尴尬地with/inshame羞愧地hideone'sembarrassment掩饰某人的尴尬blushwithembarrassment难为情得脸红beincreasinglyembarrassed/awkwardabout...感到越来越尴尬one'sfaceflushed/burned/blushedwithembarrassment/shame因尴尬而满脸通红feelbloodrush/rushingtoone'sface感到脸阵阵发烫feellikesittingonpinsandneedles如坐针毡droopdown/duckdown/lowerdownone'sheadwithembarrassment/shame尴尬/羞愧地低下了头Sbbeoverwhelmed/overe/seized/burdened/consumed/wildwithshame羞愧极了句子赏析Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到非常羞愧，都能觉得血液涌上脸颊。Anexpressionofshamecrossedhisface.他脸上掠过一阵羞赧的神情。“Pleasedon'ttellmydadaboutthis”hesaid,blushingwithshame.“这件事请不要告诉我爸爸”，他不好意思地红着脸说道。Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。Soashameddidshefeelthatshewasclosetotears/shewasonthevergeoftears.她羞愧到快哭了。Standingintheclassroom,Ibecameincreasinglyembarrassedandcouldfeelmyheartthumpingwildly,myfaceburningbadly.站在教室，我越来越尴尬，能听见自己心跳加速的声音，脸烧厉害。Hisfaceflushed/burnedwithembarrassment/shame.他因尴尬而满脸通红。/他窘得脸都红了。Hehung/dropped/loweredhisheadinshame.他羞愧地低下了头。Tomyshame,Ineverdidhelpthem.我感到惭愧的是,我从来没有帮助过他们Withmyfaceburning,Idon’tknowwheretostart.脸火辣辣地发烧，我不知道该从何说起。Soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereclumsily,feelingthebloodrushingtoherface.她到很尴尬，笨拙地站在那里，感到血涌到了脸上。情绪描写之“感动”情绪描写之“感动”必背单词名词/动词：gratitude感激appreciation感激warmth温暖thank感激appreciate感激move感动touch感动形容词/副词：grateful/gratefully感激的/感激地thankful;thankfully;感谢的/感谢地moving;moved令人感动的/被感动的touching;touched令人感动的/被感动的deeply深深地profoundly深远地高级词块shedtearsofgratitude流下感激的泪水bemovedtotears感动得落泪haveadeepgratitudetowards对……深怀感激withgratitude/appreciation感激地bedeeplymoved/touchedby...被…深深感动betouchedbeyondwords被感动得说不出话来meltone'sheart融化某人的心appreciatesbforsth因某事感激某人thanksbfromthebottomofone'sheart从心底感谢某人can’tthanksbmore/enoughfordoingsth对某人做了某事感激不尽beoverwhelmedwithexcitementandgratitude感激万分awarmcurrentriseinone'sheart一股暖流涌上心头expressone'sthanks/gratitude/appreciationto表达......的感激句子赏析Touchedimmensely,wefailedtoutterasingleword,tearsblurringoureyes.感动无比，我们一句话也说不出来，泪水模糊了双眼。Albertwastouchedbythewarmthoftheirwele.阿尔伯特被他们的热烈欢迎而感动。Deeplymoved,Ithankedhimagai