Module5+Loo k+after+yourself+作文讲义 外研版英语九年级下册+

初中作文外研社九下M5Lookafteryourself外研社九下M4Lookafteryourself本模块的话题是“健康生活”。学生在具体的写作中应做到以下几点:1.能够介绍自己健康的生活习惯,制定健康生活计划;2.能够从饮食健康、生活作息、乐观心态等方面提出有关健康生活的建议。作文1：为了宣传6月6日“全国爱眼日”,你校英语报《校园周报》正在组织征文活动。请你根据提示,结合实际生活写一篇题目为“Howtoprotectoureyes”的英语短文投稿。词数80~100。提示:1.眼睛的重要性;2.保护眼睛的措施。基础版本：Asisknown(众所周知),eyesarethewindowofourmind（心灵的窗户）.Withoureyes,wecanseethebeauties=beautifulviews

aroundus.Therefore,itisveryimportanttoprotectoureyes.Therearesomethingsweshoulddotoprotectoureyes(引入我们要给出的建议).

Firstly,weshouldhaveagoodhabit.Trynottoreadinbedorinabus,which

canbeveryharmfultooureyes.Secondly,

agoodrestalsoplaysanimportantpartin（起着重要的作用）

protectingoureyes.So

wearesupposedto（应该）

getenoughsleepandavoidworkingforalongtime.Lastly,

eatingtherightfoodhelps.Itisadvisable/agoodidea

toeatvegetables,suchastomatoesandcarrots.Hopefully,everyonecanfollowmyadvice

andhaveagoodeyesight(视力).分析：这篇文章结构清晰，用词还不错，适合同学们好好学习，因为这样的文章好模仿，同学们也能够达到这样的水平。进阶版本：Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat(普遍承认的是)

eyesserveas（作为）

themostimportantpartforustosensethebeautyoftheworld（感知世界的美丽）.However,nowadayspeopleareso

busyusingtheireyesforworkandfunthat

theyforgettotakegoodcareofthem.Itishightimethat（是时候...）

weprotectedoureyes.Herearesometipsforagoodpairofeyes.Firstofall,

formingagoodhabit(养成良好的习惯)

benefits（有助于）

oureyes.Thus,

wearenotsupposedtoreadinbedorinabus.

Besides，

itisofsignificantimportance

togetsufficient/enough

restforoureyes.Don’tuseyoureyesforalongtimeandlookatgreenstuffs(物品)

whenfeelingtired.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisabletohaveabalanceddiet,whichcancontributeto(有助于)

agoodeyesightbyeatinglotsofvegetables.Hopefully,myadvicehelpsandeveryonecanalwayshaveagoodeyesighttofeelthebeautyoftheworld.作文2：[2021·江苏宿迁改编]公众健康日(7月7日)旨在倡导“全民健康,快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高,健康越来越受到重视。你校准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动,请你根据以下要点提示,准备一篇题为“Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife”的演讲稿参加活动。要点:1.身体健康:健康饮食、适当锻炼、充足睡眠;2.心理健康:积极乐观、与人为善、善于沟通;3.希望:……注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。分析：因为要点给得很多，按照要点写，就很简单，同时开头和结尾已经给出，只用关注内容就够了。进阶版本：HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreattentiontobothourphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?（该部分为给出的开头，直接引入我们的建议）Firstly,ahealthybodyisthebasisofeverything(健康的身体是一切的基础).Notonlyshould

weeathealthily,butalsoworkproperlyeveryday.Besides,enough/adequate(充足的)sleepisgreatlyneededforustohaveaclear/sharpmind(清醒的/敏锐的头脑)

andhealthygrowth(健康成长).Moreover,mentalhealthisequally(同等地)/asimportantasphysicalhealth.Asaresult,

weshouldstay/keeppositiveandactive(乐观和活跃)

inourlives.Meanwhile(同时),relationshipiscrucial(重要的)

inourschoollifeandweneedtogetalongwellwithothers.

Itisnaturalto

feeldown/upset/sad/frustrated/beatdown(上述的都是沮丧的意思)

sometimes,justcommunicatewithothers,whichhelpsyougetbetter/releaseyourpressure(释放压力).Hopefully,everyonecanhaveahealthybodyandmindsothattheycanbetterenjoytheirlives.That’sall,thankyou.作文3：据报道，我国青少年的健康状况令人担忧。最近的调查结果发现许多问题：一分钟跳绳坚持不到50秒，跑步到终点直接累倒在地，看不清视力表……作为一名中学生，你将如何提高自身的身体素质？请根据图片提示，谈谈自己的打算，必须包括文中图片所给信息，并适当发挥。注意：1．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2．书写规范，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚；3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。进阶版本：MyplantobehealthierItisreportedthatmanyyoungpeopleinChinaarebecomingunfit.Withoutregularexercise,studentsarebecomingweaker.Inordertobehealthier,Iwill正文：takefollowingsteps.(采取以下措施)Firstly,

itisofgreatimportance/crucial/essential(重要的)

tohaveenough/adequate/sufficient(充足的)

sleep.That’sbecause

agoodsleepcanmakeusenergetic（精力充沛的）

alldaylong（一整天）.Besides,Iwilltrytohaveahealthydiet.So

Iamgoingtoeatmorefruitandvegetableswhileavoid(避免)

eatingjunkfood.Moreover,Idecidetospendmoretimeexercisingwithfriendsinsteadof(而不是)

playingcomputergames.Inthisway（通过这种方式）,

Icannotonlybecomefit,butalsobuildbetterrelationshipwithothers.Lastbutnotleast,agoodattitudeisbeneficialfor（对...有好处的）physicalhealth,soIwillstaypositiveandhappy.(有关这种计划，安排的写法，可以参考这篇文章，每次一个计划可以解释自己的计划，或者进一步拓展说明计划的具体内容，或者阐述通过这种方式，能带来的好处，这篇文章模仿起来并不难，可以好好参考以下)Hopefully,Icanfollowmyplanandbecomehealthier.作文4：“民以食为天”，饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Saynotojunkfood”为题，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。写作要点：1．垃圾食品尽管美味，但对健康无益，而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾；2．远离垃圾食品，还应选择正确的生活方式，如：(1)三餐要有规律，少吃零食、快餐；(2)多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物，以提供身体必需营养；(3)多参加户外活动……写作要求：1．100词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．内容必须包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥。参考词汇：过多包装overpackaging；有规律地regularly；营养nutritionSaynotojunkfood：Nowadays(现如今),greatattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealthydiet（视频健康）.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldsaynotojunkfood.Admittedly(众所周知的),junkfoodismadedelicious/palatable(可口的)andattractive,whichmakesitenjoygreatpopularity(受欢迎).Besides,

overpackagingaddspressure(增加压力)/causesmorewastes（造成浪费）

totheenvironment.However,

overeating（过度食用）

junkfoodisharmful/dangerous/detrimental(有害的)

toourhealth.Tostayawayfromjunkfood,thetipsareasfollows(技巧如下).Firstly,

itisofgreathelptoeatthreemealsregularly.Asaresult,youaremorelikelyto（更可能）

avoid/resist(避免/抵制)eatingsnacksandjunkfood.Secondly,

eatmorevegetables