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PAGEPAGE1专题16自然灾难与宇宙探究Ⅰ.应用文写作通知你校下周将实行主题为“太空”的讲座。请你代表学生会用英语写一则通知,内容包括:1.举办的目的、时间和地点;2.讲座内容;3.讲座意义。留意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细微环节,以使行文连贯。NOTICENOTICE①Toencouragestudentstotakeaninterestinspaceexploration,alecturewhosethemeis“space”istobeheldnextweek.②Asscheduled,thelecturewillbeheldinthelectureroomatthreeo'clocknextFridayafternoon.③Thelectureismainlyaboutwhetherlifecanexistonotherplanets.Thestudentswillhaveabetterunderstandingofspacethroughthelecture.Everyoneiswelcometoattendit.Besuretocomeontime.Youwillbenefitfromthelecture.TheStudents'Union1.词汇美:文章运用了许多高级词汇,如encourage,takeaninterestin,spaceexploration,schedule,haveabetterunderstandingof,attend,besureto,ontime,benefitfrom等。2.句式美:①句中含有whose引导的定语从句。②Asscheduled为As引导的非限制性定语从句,As指代后面主句的内容。③about后接whether引导的宾语从句,用得贴切自然。你校学生会确定本周五在教学楼实行一次应对地震的紧急疏散演练(emergencyevacuationdrill),请你代表学生会用英语写一则书面通知,内容包括:1.演练目的;2.详细支配;3.留意事项。留意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细微环节,以使行文连贯。NOTICE【参考范文】NOTICEInordertogetbetterpreparedinthefaceofdanger,theStudents'Unionintendstoorganiseanemergencyevacuationdrillat3p.m.thisFridayinourteachingbuilding.Wewillarrangemanypracticalactivitiesfortheparticipants.Notonlycanyoulearnaboutsomeknowledgeincaseofearthquakes,butalsoyoucangettrainedinfirstaid.Positiveattitude,clearmindandsurvivalskillswillsaveyourlifeandwepromiseyouwillnotfeeldisappointed.Pleasejoinus.Don'tmissthechanceandbesuretobepunctualforourdrill.TheStudents'UnionⅡ.读后续写阅读下面材料,依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。OneSunday,Nicholas,ateenager,wentskiingatSugarloafMountaininMaine.Intheearlyafternoon,whenhewasplanningtogohome,afiercesnowstormsweptintothearea.Unabletoseefar,heaccidentallyturnedoffthepath.Beforeheknewit,Nicholaswaslost,allalone![悬念1]Hedidn'thavefood,water,aphone,orothersupplies.Hewasgettingcolderbytheminute.Nicholashadnoideawherehewas.Hetriednottopanic.HethoughtaboutallthesurvivalshowshehadwatchedonTV.Itwastimetoputthetipshehadlearnedtouse.Hedecidedtostopskiing.Therewasabetterchanceofsomeonefindinghimifhestayedput.Thefirstthinghedidwastofindshelterfromthefreezingwindandsnow.Ifhedidn't,hisbodytemperaturewouldgetverylow,whichcouldquicklykillhim.[悬念2]Usinghisskis,Nicholasbuiltasnowcave.Hegatheredahugemassofsnowanddugoutaholeinthemiddle.Thenhepiledbranchesontopofhimself,likeablanket,tostayaswarmashecould.Bythatevening,Nicholaswasreallyhungry.Heatesnowanddrankwaterfromanearbystreamsothathisbodywouldn'tlosetoomuchwater.Notknowinghowmuchlongerhecouldlast,Nicholasdidtheonlythinghecould—hehuddled(蜷缩)inhiscaveandslept.[悬念3]留意:续写词数应为150左右。Thenextday,Nicholaswentouttolookforhelp.Nicholasmightnothavesurvivedthesnowstormifhehadn'twatchedGrylls'survivalshowManvs.Wild.一、理清文章大意关键:Who:NicholasWhere:atSugarloafMountaininMaineWhen:oneSundayWhat:Nicholaswasskiingandafiercesnowstormcame.How:Nicholastriedtosurvivethesnowstorm.大意:Nicholas在滑雪时遇到了暴风雪,被困在了雪地里,他努力保持冷静,通过在电视节目中学到的求生技巧努力让自己保暖,维持生存。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思索:Nicholas一个人在暴风雪中迷路,这意味着什么?悬念2思索:他能找到躲避风雪的地方吗?假如找不到他应当怎么办?悬念3思索:他究竟能坚持多久,会有人发觉他吗?三、分析段落开头语段首句1思索:①Nicholas是否能找到人?②他是否会返回避难处?③他是第几天被发觉的?段首句2思索:①Grylls的生存秀是什么节目?②Grylls身处逆境时会怎样?③Grylls听到Nicholas的故事时会有何感想?通过以上思路,预设续写情节如下:Paragraph1:找寻帮助→原路返回雪洞→再次找寻帮助→最终获救Paragraph2:Grylls求生节目→Grylls是如何求生的→Grylls听说Nicholas的故事之后的反应Thenextday,Nicholaswentouttolookforhelp.Withgreatefforts,hefoughthiswayinthesnowforhoursbutcouldn'tfindanyoneinsight.Hehadnochoicebuttofollowhistracksandreturntohissnowcave,becausewithoutshelter,hecouldbefrozentodeaththatnight.Onthethirdday,Nicholasagainwentoutinsearchofhelp.Hehadwalkedforabouttwomileswhenavolunteersearcherspottedhim.Aftertwodaysstuckinthesnow,Nicholaswassaved.Nicholasmightnothavesurvivedthesnowstormifhehadn'twatchedGrylls'survivalshowManvs.Wild.IneachprogrammeofManvs.Wild,Gryllsisabandonedinawildareaandhastofindhiswayout.Whateverthesituationis,Gryllswillremaincalmandthencomeupwithsomegoodideas.That'swhereNicholaslearnedthetipsthatsavedhislife.WhenGryllshimselfheardaboutNicholas'amazingdeeds,hewassuperimpressedthatNicholashadmadeitsinceheknewbetterthananyoneelsehowhardNicholashadtoworktostayalive.1.运用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①第一段中副词again作状语凸显了Nicholas当时境况的艰难。②其次段中amazing一词表现出了Nicholas求生胜利令人惊异。2.词汇与语法结构丰富、精确。①withgreatefforts,fightone'sway,insight,havenochoicebut,insearchof,spot,abandon,comeupwith等这些高级词汇为续写增色不少。②Aftertwodaysstuckinthesnow在此处是过去分词短语作状语。③Whatever引导让步状语从句。④That'swhereNicholaslearnedthetipsthatsavedhislife.一句中where引导表语从句,that引导定语从句。阅读下面材料,依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Whenatornado(龙卷风)toucheddowninasmalltownnearby,manyfamilieswereleftcompletelyruined.Afterwardsallthelocalnewspaperscarriedmanyhumanintereststoriesfeaturingsomeofthefamilieswhosufferedthehardest.OneSunday,aparticularpictureespeciallytouchedme.Ayoungwomanstoodinfrontofanentirelyshattered(破裂的)mobilehome,adepressedexpressiononherface.Ayoungboy,sevenoreightyearsold,stoodatherside,eyesdownward.Clutching(紧握)atherskirtwasatinygirlwhostaredintothecamera,eyeswidewithconfusionandfear.Thearticlethatwentwiththepicturegavetheclothingsizesofeachfamilymember.Withgrowinginterest,Inoticedthattheirsizescloselymatchedours.Thiswouldbeagoodopportunitytoteachmychildrentohelpthoselessfortunatethanthemselves.Istuckthepictureoftheyoungfamilyonourrefrigerator,explainingtheirdifficultytomysevenyearoldtwins,BradandBrett,andtothreeyearoldMeghan.“Wehavesomuch.Andthesepoorpeoplenowhavenothing,”Isaid.“We'llsharewhatwehavewiththem.”Ibroughtthreelargeboxesdownfromtheroomupstairsandplacedthemonthelivingroomfloor.Meghanwatchedseriously,astheboysandIfilledoneoftheboxeswithcannedgoodsandfoods.WhileIsortedthroughourclothes,Iencouragedtheboystogothroughtheirtoysanddonatesomeoftheirlessfavouritethings.Meghanwatchedquietlyastheboyspiledupoldtoysandgames.MeghanwalkedupwithLucy,herworn,muchlovedragdollhuggedtightlytoherchest.Shecametotheboxthatheldthetoys,pressedherroundlittlefaceintoLucy'sflat,paintedonface,gaveherafinalkiss,thenlaidhergentlyontopoftheothertoys.“Oh,Honey,”Isaid.“Youdon'thavetogiveLucy.Youlovehersomuch.”Meghannoddedseriously,eyesfilledwithheldbacktears.“Lucymakesmehappy,Mommy.Maybeshe'llmakethatotherlittlegirlhappy,too.”留意:续写词数应为150左右。Theboyshadwatched,openmouthed,astheirbabysisterplacedherfavouritedollinthebox.Ilookedatmychildrenforalongmoment.
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