新教材适用2024-2025学年高中英语Unit1TeenageLifeSectionⅣ写作指导学案新人教版必修第一册

SectionⅣ写作指导写一封有关学校生活的建议信写作储备阅读教材P18建议信，提炼建议信的写作特点：Ⅰ.常用写作格式1．齐头式，即日期、正文和署名全在左边顶格写。教材中就接受了这种格式。2．空格式：日期、署名在右边，正文每段开头空两格。Ⅱ.黄金写作模板Ⅲ.写作语言特点1．建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和劝服力。2．提出的理由要入情入理，语气肯定要礼貌当先。Ⅳ.写作常用词汇1．havetroublein...在……有些麻烦2．communicatewith...与……沟通3．feellonely感到孤独4．askforadviceon...就……征求建议5．suggestionn．建议6．overcomev．克服7．getalongwellwith...和……相处很好8．makeit做到9．makefriends交挚友10．asfarasIamconcerned/inmyopinion就我而言/在我看来Ⅴ.写作常用句型1．建议信开头常用句式：(1)Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你现在在与人沟通方面有些麻烦，你也可能常常感到孤独。(2)I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...我很兴奋收到你就……征求建议的来信。(3)Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.这里有帮助你的一些建议。(4)Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.假如你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。2．表达建议常用句式：(1)First(ly),whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis,youcanmakefriends.首先，为什么不参与一个俱乐部？假如你这样做的话，就会交到挚友。(2)Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway,youwillfeelbetter.其次，你应当尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。(3)Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis,youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，假如你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的办法。通过这样做，你会使自己安静下来。3．建议信结尾常用句式：(1)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你会发觉这些方法有用。(2)Astimegoeson,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheadviceabove.假如你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，会情愿和你交挚友的。(3)Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice,you'llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我信任，假如你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。典例剖析假如你是李华，你的好挚友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请依据下面的提示给她写一封信。1．要交挚友首先要做一个挚友；2．要和挚友同甘共苦；患难之中的挚友才是真正的挚友；3．友情须要时间和投入(effort)。留意：词数80左右。审题谋篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的起先，胜利的一半体裁建议信人称其次人称为主时态主要运用一般现在时框架第一段：点出写信的目的：交挚友存在困难其次段：正文列出所提的建议：做一个挚友；和挚友同甘共苦；须要时间和投入最终一段：写信人的希望Ⅱ.定要点、关键词及动词时态→打造一篇要点全面、用词精确得体、时态多样的极优作文要点一：知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很愧疚。(宾语从句)Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.要点二：假如你接受我的建议，变更这种境况是很简单的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.要点三：要交挚友首先要做一个挚友。(主谓结构)Ifyouwanttomakefriends,youshouldbeafriendfirst.要点四：你要和挚友同甘共苦。Youshouldsharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriends.要点五：患难之中的挚友才是真正的挚友。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.要点六：友情须要时间和投入。(主谓宾结构)Friendshipcallsfor/needstimeandeffort.Ⅲ.词汇、句式升级→创建极优作文的倩词靓句升级句式一：用whynot改写要点三Ifyouwanttomakefriends,whynotbeafriendfirst？升级句式二：用wouldn'titbeagoodideaif...改写要点四Wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriends？升级句式三：用justasasayinggoes来丰富要点五Justasasayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Ⅳ.组建极优作文→水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉参考范文：DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith,whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends?Inaddition,wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriends?Justasasayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Lastbutnotleast,youaresupposedtoputyourheartintomakingfriends.Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours，LiHuaJ即学即练假如你是李华，你的英国挚友Tony来信告知你最近他沉迷于电子嬉戏，影响了学习和健康，希望你能就如何戒掉电子嬉戏给他提出建议。要点包括：①写信的目的；②可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯；③你的祝福。留意：①词数80左右；②内容可适当发挥，留意行文连贯。参考范文：DearTony，Hearingthatyou'readdictedtovideogames，whichdoesharmtoyourhealthandstudy,I'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtogetridofit.Aboveall,itwouldbeagoodideatofocusonsomeotheractivities.Forexample，signupforsomevolunteerorganisationsorjoininsomemeaningfulorrelaxingextracurricularactivitieswhenyoufeelbored,likereadingordoingsports.What'smore，Ifeelitsignificanttolimitthetimeyouspendplayingvideogamesandfocusmoreonstudysothatyoucankeepabalancebetweenschoolworkandgames.Additionally,Irecommendthatyoushouldtrytogetintoagoodroutineandmakeaschedule，whichisbeneficialtoyourhealt