中考英语一轮复习培优全攻略(上海专用)第14讲英语写作的8个闪光句型(原卷版+解析)

第14讲英语写作的8个闪光句型【知识梳理1】闪光句型之动词短语和介词短语1.….haveagreateffecton…(对……有很大的影响)例句：抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。Smokinghasagreateffectonourhealth。2.~~~enables+Object(受词)/makesitpossibleforsb+to+V(……使……能够……)例句：听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxed。旅行能丰富人们的生活。Travellingenablesourlifetobeenriched。3.By+Ving,xxcanxx(通过……，……能够……)例句：通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy。通过阅读，我们可以获得更多的知识。Byreading,wecangetmoreknowledge.

4.Thanksto/Dueto/Owingto…..(因为，由于……)例句：因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。Thankstohisencouragement,Ifinallyrealizedmydream。多亏秦老师的帮助，我通过了考试。ThankstoMissQin’shelp,Ipassedtheexamination。【例题精讲】翻译以下句子1.没有什么比与朋友分享更快乐。(nothingis比较级than....)2.没有什么比上寄宿学生更能锻炼人了。3.无论何时何地我们都可以利用微信同其他人联系。(...ever)4.不论结果是什么，至少你有努力过。5.不论它有多便利，我们都应该时刻警惕自己不要使用过度。6.为了美丽，很多韩国女性都去做整容手术。为了丰富我的暑假生活，我决定一个人去旅行。【巩固练习】翻译以下句子1.我的建议是我们应当理性的使用它，不要让自己成为它的努力。2.这个活动不但有趣，也能扩充我们的知识面.3.是时候让自己变得独立。4.是时候让这种情况日益恶化5.我赞同举办这个活动主要有三个理由。6.重要的是这个善意的谎言鼓舞了他，而不是我们失去了诚信。7.最吸引我的是节目的美食环节。8.第三，多种树，这不但可以美化城市也可以让空气清新。【知识梳理2】闪光句型之句型与从句5．主语+is+the+最高级+名词+(that)+Ihaveeverseen(known/heard/had/read)海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen。张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad。6．Nothingismoreimportant+than+todosth.没什么比做某事更重要的事。例句：没有比保持健康更重要的事。Nothingismoreimportantthantokeepfit。没有什么比环保更重要的事。Nothingismoreimportantthantoprotectourenvironment。7.The+比较级+S+V,

the+比较级+S+V(愈……愈……)例句：你愈努力，你愈进步。Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake。我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome。8.Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子(……的原因是……)例句：我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair。【例题精讲】Writing(作文)：(共20分)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“WhenIseeanoldpersonfalldowninthestreet,I….以《当我看到老人在街上摔倒，我......》为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Referencewords(Useatleasttwoofthem):atraditionalvirtue(美德)；infavorof/against;calm;getalongwith;carefor;(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

学生范文一：.Whetherornottohelpanoldpeoplewhenyouseehimfalldowninthestreethasledtoagreatargument.Asateenager,IthinkIwillcareforhimandhelphiminhissituationbecauseitisatraditionalvirtue.Butknowingthatsomewarm-heartedyoungpeoplehavesufferedagreatlossbecauseoftheirbehaviors.I’llsaysomeonetotakesomephotosformybehaviorsorasksomeonetoprovethatI’mreallyinnocent.Whilehelpingothersisabsolutelyworthpraising,protectingourselvesisalsoimportant.Allinall,I’llcarefullyandbravelygivetheoldpersonahand.学生范文二：Althoughitcanoftenbeheardthatanoldpersonfelldownhimselfandinsistedthatitwasinnocentpasser-bywhohelpedhimthatcausedtheaccident,Iwillhelptheoldpeoplewhofalldowninthestreetwithouthesitation.Itisatraditionalvirtueforteenagerstorespecttheoldandweshouldkeepcalmifwebecomethoseinnocentpassers-by.Weshouldalwaysbelievethatthereareonlyafewdishonestpeopleandourwarmheartswillbepaidoff.Inaword,I’minfavorofhelpingtheoldwhentheyfalldowninthestreet.【巩固练习】

Writing(作文)：(共20分)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Alittlemorefreshair,please.”.以“多一点新鲜空气”为题完成不少于60字作文。标点符号不占格。Referencewords(Useatleasttwoofthem):Planttrees,drivecars,walkmore,pollute,haze(霾)(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)写作小Tip：中考议论文写作罗列观点时最好不过三，用逻辑词连接，观点层层递进，详略得当；加上语言流畅，词汇稍作变化，就是言简意赅的好文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________80______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________100__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（120）

【知识梳理3】议论文写作之三要素和基本题型一、议论文三要素论点，论据和论证是议论文的三要素，论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段应有主题句（topicsentence）来确定论点。文章结尾往往重申自己的看法、意见或建议。论证有立论和驳论两种，作者证明自己的论点正确，是立论；反之，证明别人的论点错误，是驳论。1.开头：背景+观点(2句)背景句：Thereisnodenyingthat….Thereisnodoubtthat…..Itiswidelyacceptedthat…..…playsanincreasinglyimportantroleinourdailylifeRecently,theproblemof….hasarousedpeople’sconcern.最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。With

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当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。(4)Wearesupposedtodosth.我们应该做…替换should(5)被动、定语从句3.结尾：重申观点+相信Allinall,Tosumup,Generallyspeaking,Wecandrawaconclusionthat…Istrongly/firmlyholdthebeliefthat…我坚信Iamlookingforwardtosth.Onlyinthiswaycanwe…（倒装句）例如：Onlyinthiswaycanwerealizeourdream.只有这样我们才能实现我们的梦想。强调句：Itis+强调部分+that+句子剩余部分【例题精讲】例1.94.Writeatleast60wordswiththetopic“HeavyHaze”.（以“茫茫雾霾”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：去年12月上旬，申城笼罩在茫茫的雾霾（wasshroudedinheavyhaze）中，陷于重度污染（severepollution）。人们戴口罩（wearmasks）出行，雾霾天给人们的健康带来危害，给生活和工作带来不便（inconvenience）。请你谈谈雾霾的成因及可行的解决方法。HeavyHazeThewinterin2013impressedpeoplenotforitsextremecoldnessbuttheheavyhazehangingover25provinces.Itcausedgreatdisturbancetoourdailylife.Obviously,hazecomesfrompollution.Manyfactoriesletthesmokeintotheairwithoutanyfilteringprocess.Daybyday,itisnowonderthatsmoke,dirt,anddustaccumulateintheairandfinallyturnintodensehaze.Howcanwecurbhazethen?Levyingheavypenaltyonthoseirresponsiblefactoriesisdefinitelyamust-do.Beforetheairisonceagainpurified,weshouldalsotakesomeactionstoprotectourselvessuchaswearingamaskandreducingexposureoutdoors.Weshouldalltryourbesttocontributetoacleanerenvironmentformutualsurvivalandeasierlife.(126words)【巩固练习】Howtoprotectmyself(怎样保护自己)Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Howtoprotectmyself”．(以“如何保护自己”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)提示： 自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护(可结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例,如：面对灾难如何自救,如何预防受骗或侵害,如何避免生活中的意外,等等)。Phrasesforreference(以下短语仅供参考)： ask…forhelp calmdown indanger prevent．．．from(注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。)写作提高Sentencestructure:…sothat……so…that…Itissaidthat…（据说）Itisafactthat…Itis+adj.+(forsb.)+todosth.Thereisnodoubtthat…(毫无疑问)Ifyoudon’t…,youwill…Theharder+主语+谓语,thebetter+主语+谓语Whata/an+adj.+n.+itis! How+adj./adv.+主语+谓语！Itisobvious（明显的）/truethat…,but…Oneofmyfavourite+n(复数).is…Sb.finds/thinksit+adj.+todoBeginning:Asweallknow,thereismuchdangeraroundus.It’snecessaryforustoknowhowtoprotectourselves.Protectingoneselfisanimportantskillthateveryteenagershouldhave.Ending:Thatistheusefulwaytoprotectyourself.Asyoucansee,tokeepussafe,weshouldlearnhowtoprotectourselves,orwe’llbeindanger.一、话题作文1．当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时不知该怎么办。因此对孩子们来说，学会自立相当重要。请以“LearntoBeIndependent”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，首先指出这种不良的社会现象，然后给出你的观点和建议。参考词汇：makedecisions;dependon;lookafter;ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...注意：1.请先在答题卡上填写表中空格；2.须全面反映图表信息，但不能完全照抄；3.文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名；4.词数：100左右。LearntoBeIndependentNowadays,manychildrenaretreatedas“littleemperors”athome._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、材料作文2．许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次“LessPressure,Betterlife”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享。要点：(1)同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么：(2)我的压力是什么：(3)我是如何缓解压力的。要求：1.词数100左右；2.短文必须包括所有要点，行文连贯通顺；3.短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。LessPressure,BetterlifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.That’sall.Thankyou!3．假如你是李华，上个月你在“中国航天日”参加了科技馆举行的航天俱乐部活动，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述这次活动，并表达你的想法。（1）我听了宇航员的故事，学习到了科学精神。（2）我做了物理实验，增长了科学知识。（3）我参观了展览，使我对太空旅行更感兴趣了。（4）我认为……参考词汇：科学精神

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spacetravel要求：（1）词数：80～100个。（2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。TheactivitiesonSpaceDayofChinaLastmonth,I_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．请你根据以下内容提示，以“MyTeachersAreVolunteers”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍你的老师们做交通志愿者的事情。（1）每天放学后，老师们都会在学校旁边的路口做交通志愿者。（2）老师们穿着红色的马甲，拿着旗子，保证学生安全。（3）尽管夏天很热，冬天很冷，但老师们始终坚持值班。（4）多年来，学生从未发生过交通事故。（5）你觉得……参考词汇：马甲vest要求：（1）词数：80～100个。（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。MyTeachersAreVolunteersWhenschoolisovereveryday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、讲稿5．近日，教育部正式印发《义务教育课程方案》，将劳动从原来的综合实践活动课程中完全独立出来，并发布《义务教育劳动课程标准（2022年版）》。今秋开学，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程，每个孩子都要学习日常生活劳动，生产劳动及服务性劳动。作为一名热爱劳动的学生，你被老师邀请在本周的班会课上来为同学们做一次讲座，请结合你目前的劳动情况，谈谈参与劳动的动机及好处，并倡议同学们一起参与劳动。请参考下图提示，写一篇发言稿。Whatdoyoudo:athome:cooking...inthecommunity:volunteering…Whyyouwork:DeveloplifeskillsMakeothershappy…Howyoufeel:ProudSenseofachievement……注意事项：1.发言稿内容须根据提示自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.图中所给为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3.词数100左右，发言稿首尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hi,everyone.Recently,theMinistryofEducationhasenlistedlaboreducationasacompulsorycourseforschoolstudentsatalllevels.TodayI’dliketosharesomethingwithyouaboutlaboreducation._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!第14讲英语写作的8个闪光句型【知识梳理1】闪光句型之动词短语和介词短语1.….haveagreateffecton…(对……有很大的影响)例句：抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。Smokinghasagreateffectonourhealth。2.~~~enables+Object(受词)/makesitpossibleforsb+to+V(……使……能够……)例句：听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxed。旅行能丰富人们的生活。Travellingenablesourlifetobeenriched。3.By+Ving,xxcanxx(通过……，……能够……)例句：通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy。通过阅读，我们可以获得更多的知识。Byreading,wecangetmoreknowledge.

4.Thanksto/Dueto/Owingto…..(因为，由于……)例句：因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。Thankstohisencouragement,Ifinallyrealizedmydream。多亏秦老师的帮助，我通过了考试。ThankstoMissQin’shelp,Ipassedtheexamination。【例题精讲】翻译以下句子1.没有什么比与朋友分享更快乐。(nothingis比较级than....)2.没有什么比上寄宿学生更能锻炼人了。3.无论何时何地我们都可以利用微信同其他人联系。(...ever)4.不论结果是什么，至少你有努力过。5.不论它有多便利，我们都应该时刻警惕自己不要使用过度。6.为了美丽，很多韩国女性都去做整容手术。为了丰富我的暑假生活，我决定一个人去旅行。Nothingishappierthantosharewithfriends.Nothingismoreeffectivethantogoaboardingschooltoexercisehimselforherself.Toexercisehimselforherself,nothingismoreeffectivethangoingaboardingschool.3.Wheneverandwhereverweare,wecankeepincontact/touchwithothersbywechatwecancommunicatewithothersbywechat.Whatevertheresultis,atleastyouhavedoneyourbest.Howeverconvenientitis,weshouldalwayswarnourselvesnottooveruseit.Tobecomebeautiful/Tohaveaprettyface,manyKoreanwomenhavecosmeticsurgeon.Toenrichmysummerholiday,Idecide/amdeterminedto/makeupmymindtotravelalone.【巩固练习】翻译以下句子1.我的建议是我们应当理性的使用它，不要让自己成为它的努力。2.这个活动不但有趣，也能扩充我们的知识面.3.是时候让自己变得独立。4.是时候让这种情况日益恶化5.我赞同举办这个活动主要有三个理由。6.重要的是这个善意的谎言鼓舞了他，而不是我们失去了诚信。7.最吸引我的是节目的美食环节。8.第三，多种树，这不但可以美化城市也可以让空气清新。Myadviceisthatweshoulduseinareasonable/properway.Don’tletyourselfbeitsslave.Notonlyisthisactivityamusing,butalsoitcanenlargeourknowledgebase/expandthebreadthofourknowledge.Notonlyisthisactivityfilledwithfun,butalsoitcanbroaden/widenourknowledge.Itishightimethatwemadeourselvesmoreindependent.Itishightimethatwestoppedthissituationfrombadtoworse/fromgettingworse.Iaminfavorofthisactivityforthreemainreasons:Whatmattersisthatthewhiteliescheershimupnotthatwelosthonesty.Whatattractsmemostinthisprogramisthefinefoodpart.Third,plantmoretrees,whichcannotonlybeautifythecitybutalsocanmakeairfresher.【知识梳理2】闪光句型之句型与从句5．主语+is+the+最高级+名词+(that)+Ihaveeverseen(known/heard/had/read)海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen。张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad。6．Nothingismoreimportant+than+todosth.没什么比做某事更重要的事。例句：没有比保持健康更重要的事。Nothingismoreimportantthantokeepfit。没有什么比环保更重要的事。Nothingismoreimportantthantoprotectourenvironment。7.The+比较级+S+V,

the+比较级+S+V(愈……愈……)例句：你愈努力，你愈进步。Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake。我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome。8.Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子(……的原因是……)例句：我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair。【例题精讲】Writing(作文)：(共20分)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“WhenIseeanoldpersonfalldowninthestreet,I….以《当我看到老人在街上摔倒，我......》为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Referencewords(Useatleasttwoofthem):atraditionalvirtue(美德)；infavorof/against;calm;getalongwith;carefor;(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

学生范文一：.Whetherornottohelpanoldpeoplewhenyouseehimfalldowninthestreethasledtoagreatargument.Asateenager,IthinkIwillcareforhimandhelphiminhissituationbecauseitisatraditionalvirtue.Butknowingthatsomewarm-heartedyoungpeoplehavesufferedagreatlossbecauseoftheirbehaviors.I’llsaysomeonetotakesomephotosformybehaviorsorasksomeonetoprovethatI’mreallyinnocent.Whilehelpingothersisabsolutelyworthpraising,protectingourselvesisalsoimportant.Allinall,I’llcarefullyandbravelygivetheoldpersonahand.范文修改：Whetherornottohelpanoldpeoplewhenyouseehimfalldowninthestreethasledtoagreatargument.Asateenager,IthinkIwillcareforhimandhelphiminhissituationbecauseitisatraditionalvirtue.Butknowingthatsomewarm-heartedyoungpeoplehavesufferedagreatlossbecauseoftheirmisunderstood(加一个词进去意思表达会更明确）behaviors.(，)I’llsay(ask)someonetotakesomephotosformybehaviorsorasksomeonetoprovethatI’mreallyinnocent（thehelpernotthetrouble-maker).Whilehelpingothersisabsolutelyworthpraising,protectingourselvesisalsoimportant.Allinall,I’llcarefullyandbravelygivetheoldpersonahand.（7.5+7+2.5=17）整体评析：内容完整，语意连贯。语法功底比较功底比较不错，非谓语的用法、从句的用法都很熟练。词汇量也不错，个别词汇使用不是很得当。好词好句比较多。学生范文二：Althoughitcanoftenbeheardthatanoldpersonfelldownhimselfandinsistedthatitwasinnocentpasser-bywhohelpedhimthatcausedtheaccident,Iwillhelptheoldpeoplewhofalldowninthestreetwithouthesitation.Itisatraditionalvirtueforteenagerstorespecttheoldandweshouldkeepcalmifwebecomethoseinnocentpassers-by.Weshouldalwaysbelievethatthereareonlyafewdishonestpeopleandourwarmheartswillbepaidoff.Inaword,I’minfavorofhelpingtheoldwhentheyfalldowninthestreet.范文修改：Althoughitcanoftenbeheardthatanoldpersonfelldownhimselfandinsistedthatitwasinnocentpasser-bywhohelpedhimthatcausedtheaccident,Iwillhelptheoldpeoplewhofalldowninthestreetwithouthesitation.Itisatraditionalvirtueforteenagerstorespecttheoldandweshouldkeepcalmifwebecome(happentobe意思更准确)thoseinnocentpassers-by.Weshouldalwaysbelievethatthereareonlyafewdishonestpeopleandourwarmheartswillbepaidoff.Inaword,I’minfavorofhelpingtheoldwhentheyfalldowninthestreet.(8+7.5+4=19.5)整体评析：这是一篇可以为满分的作为。尤其是第一句很震撼的表达，让步状语从句，宾语从句，强调句型，定语从句，被动语态一并使用到了，另有较高级的词汇insist,passer-by,innocent.文采以下子就可以拉到一个很高的高度。作者也很聪明，将referenceword:infavorof这个不错的短语用上）文章内容完整，句意连贯。无语法错误，除了稍微更改一个become为happentobe,become其实也没错。【巩固练习】

Writing(作文)：(共20分)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Alittlemorefreshair,please.”.以“多一点新鲜空气”为题完成不少于60字作文。标点符号不占格。Referencewords(Useatleasttwoofthem):Planttrees,drivecars,walkmore,pollute,haze(霾)(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)写作小Tip：中考议论文写作罗列观点时最好不过三，用逻辑词连接，观点层层递进，详略得当；加上语言流畅，词汇稍作变化，就是言简意赅的好文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________80______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________100__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（120）Sample:SincelastDecember,Shanghaihasbeeninseverepollutionwithheavyhaze,

whichhascausedinconveniencesandhealththreattopeople’slife.

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airpollutingactivitiesandextendinggreenbelts④.

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inthecomingSpringFestival.

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Let’stakeactionsatonceandIsincerelyhopefreshairwillcomebacksoon.

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精彩亮点分析：亮点一：第一段用非限定性定从，一句话雾霾天气带来的危害，言简意赅，且用完成时时态可以更好强调对现在依然有影响。亮点二：first,besides,what’sthemostimportant

清晰的逻辑词层层递进道出针对雾霾的解决方案，政府，个人，和思想意识上可以采取的行动。亮点三：putdown

制止，makecontribution

做贡献，

befullyconsciousthat充分认识到。。。，

figureout等动词短语的穿插使用，使表达变化丰富，也更具体准备写出可以采取的行动。亮点四：，extendinggreenbelts增加城市绿化带，greencommuting绿色出行，notsettingofffireworks等建议也是近来环保斗士们提倡的做法，显得新，准，稳。

【知识梳理3】议论文写作之三要素和基本题型一、议论文三要素论点，论据和论证是议论文的三要素，论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段应有主题句（topicsentence）来确定论点。文章结尾往往重申自己的看法、意见或建议。论证有立论和驳论两种，作者证明自己的论点正确，是立论；反之，证明别人的论点错误，是驳论。1.开头：背景+观点(2句)背景句：Thereisnodenyingthat….Thereisnodoubtthat…..Itiswidelyacceptedthat…..…playsanincreasinglyimportantroleinourdailylifeRecently,theproblemof….hasarousedpeople’sconcern.最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。With

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当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。(4)Wearesupposedtodosth.我们应该做…替换should(5)被动、定语从句3.结尾：重申观点+相信Allinall,Tosumup,Generallyspeaking,Wecandrawaconclusionthat…Istrongly/firmlyholdthebeliefthat…我坚信Iamlookingforwardtosth.Onlyinthiswaycanwe…（倒装句）例如：Onlyinthiswaycanwerealizeourdream.只有这样我们才能实现我们的梦想。强调句：Itis+强调部分+that+句子剩余部分【例题精讲】例1.94.Writeatleast60wordswiththetopic“HeavyHaze”.（以“茫茫雾霾”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：去年12月上旬，申城笼罩在茫茫的雾霾（wasshroudedinheavyhaze）中，陷于重度污染（severepollution）。人们戴口罩（wearmasks）出行，雾霾天给人们的健康带来危害，给生活和工作带来不便（inconvenience）。请你谈谈雾霾的成因及可行的解决方法。HeavyHazeThewinterin2013impressedpeoplenotforitsextremecoldnessbuttheheavyhazehangingover25provinces.Itcausedgreatdisturbancetoourdailylife.Obviously,hazecomesfrompollution.Manyfactoriesletthesmokeintotheairwithoutanyfilteringprocess.Daybyday,itisnowonderthatsmoke,dirt,anddustaccumulateintheairandfinallyturnintodensehaze.Howcanwecurbhazethen?Levyingheavypenaltyonthoseirresponsiblefactoriesisdefinitelyamust-do.Beforetheairisonceagainpurified,weshouldalsotakesomeactionstoprotectourselvessuchaswearingamaskandreducingexposureoutdoors.Weshouldalltryourbesttocontributetoacleanerenvironmentformutualsurvivalandeasierlife.(126words)【巩固练习】Howtoprotectmyself(怎样保护自己)Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Howtoprotectmyself”．(以“如何保护自己”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)提示： 自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护(可结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例,如：面对灾难如何自救,如何预防受骗或侵害,如何避免生活中的意外,等等)。Phrasesforreference(以下短语仅供参考)： ask…forhelp calmdown indanger prevent．．．from(注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。)写作提高Sentencestructure:…sothat……so…that…Itissaidthat…（据说）Itisafactthat…Itis+adj.+(forsb.)+todosth.Thereisnodoubtthat…(毫无疑问)Ifyoudon’t…,youwill…Theharder+主语+谓语,thebetter+主语+谓语Whata/an+adj.+n.+itis! How+adj./adv.+主语+谓语！Itisobvious（明显的）/truethat…,but…Oneofmyfavourite+n(复数).is…Sb.finds/thinksit+adj.+todoBeginning:Asweallknow,thereismuchdangeraroundus.It’snecessaryforustoknowhowtoprotectourselves.Protectingoneselfisanimportantskillthateveryteenagershouldhave.Ending:Thatistheusefulwaytoprotectyourself.Asyoucansee,tokeepussafe,weshouldlearnhowtoprotectourselves,orwe’llbeindanger.一、话题作文1．当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时不知该怎么办。因此对孩子们来说，学会自立相当重要。请以“LearntoBeIndependent”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，首先指出这种不良的社会现象，然后给出你的观点和建议。参考词汇：makedecisions;dependon;lookafter;ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...注意：1.请先在答题卡上填写表中空格；2.须全面反映图表信息，但不能完全照抄；3.文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名；4.词数：100左右。LearntoBeIndependentNowadays,manychildrenaretreatedas“littleemperors”athome._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________