2024-2025学年新教材高中英语Unit2Onwardsandupwards表达作文巧升格学案外研版选择性必修第一册

PAGEUnit2Onwardsandupwards经验感受类写作该类写作描述个人经验，常以短文或日记等文体呈现；以一般过去式为主，根据事务发展的依次来记叙。可以用一些与时间相关的副词如then，later，next连接句子。至于感受部分，同学们平常可以多积累相关的单词或短语。[基本框架]1．开头(beginning)——引出主题2．主体(body)——介绍事务3．结尾(ending)——发表感受[常用词块]1．anunforgettableexperience一次难忘的经验2．tomyjoy/delight令我兴奋的是3．seesb.off为某人送行4．afive­daytour为期五天的旅行5．livea．..life过着……样的生活6．winthefirstprize获得一等奖7．thinkhighlyof高度赞扬8．setagoodexampleforsb.给某人树立好的榜样[常用语句]精彩开头1．LastweekIwenttoMountEmeiinSichuanProvincewithmyfamily.上周，我和家人去了四川省的峨眉山。2．IwillneverforgettheexperiencewhenIwenttoBeijinglastyear.我恒久不会遗忘去年去北京的经验。3．LastnightIwasbusypreparingformytestwhenIheardaloudnoise.昨天晚上我正忙于打算考试，突然我听到一个很大的声音。正文佳句1．OnthehotafternoonoflastSaturday，LiYuwentdowntownandwalkedfromonestoretoanother.上周六燥热的下午，李玉去了市中心，从一家商店逛到另一家商店。2．Ilookedinthedirectionofthecallandsawaboyfallingintotheriver.我朝呼喊的方向看去，望见一个男孩掉进河里。3．Throwingthefishingpole，Idashedoverlikeanarrow，jumpedintotheriverandswamveryquicklytowardstheboy.我扔下钓竿，像箭一样冲了过去，跳进河里，飞速地向男孩游去。余味结尾1．However，maybeallofmyeffortsarenotmadeinvain.然而，或许我全部的努力都没有白费。2．HowIwishIcouldgobacktoenjoymiddleschoollifeoncemore!我多么希望我能再次回到中学生活中去！3．Buttheywillremainahappymemoryallmylife.但它们会成为我一生的欢乐回忆。人人都在渴望华蜜，人人都在感受华蜜。请用英语写一篇短文，描述你体验华蜜的一次经验，并谈谈你对华蜜的理解。留意：1.词数80左右；2．可适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。Istillremember_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[学生习作]Istillrememberthelateafternoonwhenitwascoldandshowering.Ididn'thaveanumbrellatosheltermefromtheheavyrain.Ihadtostandstillandwaitformyfather.Myfatherfinallyarrived.Iwasabouttorushhome.IfoundthatmyEnglishteacher，MissWangwasalsowaitingfortheraintostop.Iwenttoherandgavemyumbrellatoher.Sheacceptedit.Ismiledwithhappiness.点评：1．要点不完整，只是叙述了一次经验，缺少对华蜜的理解。2．文章松散，缺少有效的连接。3．句式单一，没有困难句式。[升格作文]Istillrememberthelateafternoonwhenitwascold，anditwasshowering.Withoutanumbrella，Ihadtowaitformyfather.Afterseeminglylonghours'waiting，hearrived.IwasabouttorushhomewhenIfoundmyEnglishteacher，MissWangwasalsowaitingfortheraintostop.Withoutanyhesitation，Igavemyumbrellatoher.Surprisedbuthappy，sheacceptedit.SeeingMissWangwalkingintherainwithmyumbrella，Ismiledwithhappiness.Infactaslongaswearewillingtoshare，we'llfindhappinesseverywhere.你校英文报正在举办主题为“Amovingexperience”的征文活动，你有意参与。请你用英语写一篇短文，讲解并描述一次让你感动的经验，并谈谈你的感悟。留意：词数80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LastSunday，whileeatinginarestaurant，Inoticedabowlfullofdumplingsonthetablenexttoours.Theymusthavebeenleftbysomeone.Justthen，anoldmanentered.Judgingfromhisclothes，Ibelievedhewaspoor.Hesawthedumplingsleftonthetable.Lookingshy，hesatdownandstartedeating.Theothersaroundlookedathim，puzzled，andsomeevenlaughed.However，afterfinishingthedumplings，hewentuptothedonationboxonthecounter，putoneh