2025人教版高考英语复习讲义：进阶写作（含答案精析）

2025人教版高考英语一轮复习讲义

进阶写作答案

第一章应用文写作

一、实战演练

DearGlen,

IamLiHua,monitorofClass1,Senior3.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinustoclimba

mountainnextFriday,whichistheDoubleNinthFestival.Mountainclimbingservesasatraditional

activityonthatday.Standingonthetopofthemountain,wecanenjoybroaderhorizons.

Wewillgatherattheschoolgateat4：00p.m.onthatday.Theschoolbuswilltakeustothe

QingyunMountain.Bottledwaterandsnackswillbeoffered.Andtherearestonestepsuptothe

mountaintop,soitwon'tbesochallengingandtiring.

Wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldjoinus.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

二、实战演练

DearSirorMadam,

Ihavereadyouradvertisementforajuniorreporteratthe“CampusVoicesectioninthe

EnglishschoolnewspaperandIshowgreatinterestinit.IfeelquitequalifiedforthepositionsoI

amwritingtoapplyforit.

IhavebeenlearningEnglishformorethan10yearswithagoodcommandoforalandwritten

English,whichenablesmetocommunicatewithothersfluently.Moreover,notonlyamIgoodat

researchingandpresentinginformationinacompellingandinformativewaybutIamalso

experiencedininterviewingandphotographing.Lastbutnotleast,I'moutgoingaswellas

warm-hearted,whichmakesmegetalongwellwithothers.

Ifgiventhechance，Iplantofullyutilizemyskillsandworkdiligentlytocontributetothe

“CampusVoice“section!amlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

三、实战演练

DearMrSmith,

rmgladtoprovideyouwithsomesuggestionsonyourupcomingtriptoBeijingduringthe

Mid-AutumnFestival.

Beijing,asthecapitalofChina，offersarichculturalexperience.ThePalaceMuseum

showcasesChinesehistory.TheTian'anmenSquareisasymbolofChina.TheGreatWalloffers

breathtakingviews.Youcanalsoexplorehutongs(traditionalalleyways)toexperiencetraditional

Chineseculture.

Asforfinefood,youcantryBeijingRoastDuck,ZhajiangmianandBingtanghulu.Bythe

way,usethesubways,busesortaxistogetaround.Rentingabikeorusingsharedbicyclesisalso

convenient.

Ihopethesesuggestionswillbehelpful.EnjoyyourtriptoBeijingduringtheMid-Autumn

Festival!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

四、实战演练

DearAnne,

rmwritingtoconveymysincereappreciationforyourkindhelpandcareduringmystayin

London,withoutwhichIwouldn'thaveenjoyeditsomuch.

Duringtheweek,thecomfortableroom,deliciousmealsandespeciallyyourfriendlyfamily

membersallmademefeelathome,leavingmelastingmemories.Moreover,guidedbyyou,Iwas

honoredtohaveachancetovisitthosetouristattractionsinLondonandbeexposedtosuchan

amazingcultureaswellasbeautifulscenery.ltwasyourgeneroushelpthatenabledmetohavea

betterunderstandingofyourcountryandculture.

ThanksagainforyourkindhelpandIwillbemorethanpleasedifIhavetheopportunityto

repayyourkindnessbyshowingyouaroundBeijing.

Yours,

LiHua

五、实战演练

DearWilson,

How'severythingwithyou?VmexcessivelysorrytotellyouthatIcan'tattendyour

lectureconcerningInternetPlus.rmwritingyouthisletterofapologytoshowmydeepregret.

Thereasonformybeingabsentisthatmymotherisseriouslyill,soIwilltakehertohospital

tomorrowsincemyfatherisonabusinesstripforanurgentmatter.Iwillcareformymother.Tobe

frank,IamextremelyinterestedinthetopicofInternetPlus.Therefore,itisreallyapitythatIwill

missit.Iwonderifthereareanyrelevantmaterialsofthelecture.Ifso,Icanlearnitbymyselfwhen

it，sconvenient.

Iwanttoextendmyapologytoyouonceagain.Ihopeitwon'tcauseyoumuchtrouble.I

sincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation/thinkinmypositionandacceptmyapology.

Yours,

LiHua

六、实战演练

DearMrGreen,

Howiseverythinggoing?Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplaywe

adaptedfortheupcomingEnglishEvening.

TheplayisbasedonthestoryofHuaMulanwho,afterdisguisingherselfasaman,joinedthe

armyinsteadofherfatherintheNorthernWeiDynasty.Tous,however,theadaptionofsuchan

epicisquitechallengingandwedon'twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyou

pleasesparesometimetorevisethedraftscriptattachedtothisemail?Ifpossible,mayIpayyoua

visitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?

Anyofyourprofessionaladvicewouldbehighlyappreciated.Bestwishes.

Yourstruly,

LiHua

七、实战演练

DearMichael,

Learningthatastudytripwillbeheld，I'dliketorecommendawonderfuldestination：

Nanjing.Herearethereasons.

Asanancientcapitalofsixdynastiesandamodemcitywithhigh-qualitydevelopment,

Nanjinghasmuchtoprovideforastudytrip.Forexample,thegrandmuseumsandsolemn

monumentswillundoubtedlyeducateusstudentsnottoforgethistoryandmotivateustocherish

thepresent.Meanwhile,efficientandconvenienttransportationaddsattractionandvitalitytothis

charmingcity.

AstudytriptoNanjingpromisestobefruitful!

Yours,

LiHua

八、实战演练

DearLiJin,

rmgoingtostudyChineseinTianjinthissummervacation.1mwritingtoseeifitis

possibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregardingrelevantcoursesinyourschool.

Firstofall,Iwanttoknowhowmanystudentstherewillbeineachclassandifthecourses

focusonlisteningandspeakingpractice.Besides,IwonderwhetherI'11havetheopportunityto

communicatewithChinesestudents，whichwillsurelybeagoodchanceformetolearnmoreabout

China.Atlast,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldtellmewhetheraccommodationsareincluded.

rmlookingforwardtoyourearlyresponse.

Yoursfaithfully,

Chris

九、实战演练

DearTerry,

rmgladtoknowyoudesiretobeavolunteeroftheSunshineVolunteerClub.Asamember,

Idothinkitisworthwhiletobeengagedinvoluntarywork.Imwritingtosharewithyouthe

detailsconcerningit.

Awidevarietyofregularactivitiesarescheduledonaweeklybasis，suchasvisitingthe

nursinghomeandorganizingeventstoraisepeople?sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Last

weekendwecollectedbooksforthechildreninremoteareaswhohavelittleaccesstothem.We

makegreateffortstospreadwarmthandcare,anditdoespayoff.Onceyoudecide,pleasefillinthe

attachedapplicationformandsendittome.

Eagerlylookingforwardtoyourparticipation.

Yours,

LiHua

十、实战演练

DearAustralianfriends,

Onbehalfofourschool，Ifeelgreatlyprivilegedtoconveywarmwelcometoyou.Weare

delightedtohaveyouwithus.

Tomakeyourstayherememorable,variousactivitieswillbearrangedtoenhanceourmutual

understandingandexperiencedifferentculture.Asplanned，wewillholdatalentshowwhere

everyonecanshowtheiroutstandingperformances.ClassesontraditionalChineseculturearealso

scheduled,suchaspaper-cutting,Chineseopera,calligraphy,etc.,followedbyagift-exchanging

activity.Additionally,you'reinvitedtopayavisittosurroundingtouristattractions.

Isincerelyhopethatyoucanenjoyyourselvesandwishyouapleasantjourney.Thankyou!

Yours,

LiHua

十一、实战演练

NOTICE

TopromoteourtraditionalChineseculture,“TangSuitDesignContest”willbeheldinthe

schoolhallnextFriday.

Everyparticipantisallowedtohandinonlyoneentry，whichmustbedesignedonyour

own.Besides,eachpieceisrequiredtobedisplayedwithabriefintroductionofyourdesign

philosophy.AllentrieswillbesubmittedtotheStudents'CouncilbeforenextTuesday.Thosethat

standoutasthetoptenwillbeawarded.Picturesofthewinners?workswillbepostedonour

schoolwebsite.

EverystudentstudyingintheInternationalDepartmentiswelcometotakepartinthe

competition.

TheStudents'Council

十二、实战演练

WorldEnvironmentDayonCampus

June5th,2023markedthe50thanniversaryofWorldEnvironmentDay,withtheslogan

uBeatPlasticPollution.Inhonorofthisoccasion,ourschoolorganizedvariousactivitiesto

sensitizestudentsabouttheurgentneedtocombatplasticpollutionandpromotesustainable

practices.

Theeventstartedwithanengagingpresentationbyenvironmentalexperts,whohighlighted

thedetrimentalimpactofplasticandemphasizedtheimportanceofreducing，reusing,and

recyclingplastic.Thenaplasticcollectiondrivewasheldsoastoencourageeveryonetobringin

theirplasticwasteforproperdisposal.Additionally,studentsparticipatedinaposter-making

competition,creatingthought-provokingartworksthatshowcasedtheimportanceofsustainable

alternatives.

Theresponsetotheseactivitieswasoverwhelming.ltisthroughsuchcollectiveeffortsthatwe

canhopeto“BeatPlasticPollution“andcreateacleaner,healthierenvironmentforfuture

generations.

EnglishClub

十三、实战演练

Lastweek,Iparticipatedinourschoolsportsmeeting,competinginthe400-meterrace一a

thrillingandunforgettableexperience.

Onhearingthesharpwhistle,Idashedout,thewindrushingagainstmyfaceandthecrowd,s

cheersechoingaroundme.Myattemptstomatchthepaceoffellowrunnersprovedchallenging,but

Ididnotgiveup.Ipushedmyselftothelimitandcrossedthefinishinglinewithallmystrength.

IwasgladthatItookpartinthesportsmeeting，whichnotonlypushedmylimitsbutalso

mademerealizetheimportanceofpersistence.

十四、实战演练

Dearschoolmates,

Volunteeringisplayingacrucialrolainstudents'overalldevelopment.Withtheapproachof

wintervacation,it'shightimethatwetookupvolunteering.

Awillinghearttovolunteerprovidesuswithmassivebenefits.Volunteeringnotonlymakesus

feelconnectedwiththecommunitybutalsoisbeneficialtoourwell-being.Blessedwithasenseof

purposeinlife,weareofferedanamazingopportunitytolearnvaluableskills.Therearedifferent

waysofservingpeople,rangingfromvolunteeringatchildren'shomeorlibrariestovirtual

volunteering,suchashelpingpupilswithschoolworkonline.

Whynotthrowourselvesintovolunteering?Itmakesusabetterpersonandcreatesabetter

world.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

十五、实战演练

ThePersonIAdmireMost

WhenitcomestothepersonIadmiremost,Ican'thelpthinkingofFanJinshiwhoisan

archaeologistandaguardofDunhuang.

AftergraduatingfromPekingUniversity,FanJinshichosetoworkinMogaoCaves,

Dunhuang.Althoughthelivingenvironmentwasterrible,shewasdeeplyattractedbytheworksof

artanddesiredtoprotectthemforthefuturegenerations.Sheandherteamovercamedifficulties,

exploredscientificconceptsandbuilta“digitalDunhuang"，whichhasbalancedtherelationship

betweenculturalrelicsprotectionandtourism.

FanJinshiiscalledthedaughterofDunhuang.Shedeservestherespectofallathomeand

abroad.

第二章读后续写

第2节技法指导

技法三

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Toeveryoneys

surprise,I,animmigrant,wonfirstplaceinthewritingcontest.Hearingthegoodnews,Ifelta

senseofjoysurgingthroughme.Ileaptintotheairandshoutedoutloud,“Imadeit!”Duringthe

awardpresentationceremony,Iwasinvitedtodeliveraspeech.Patientlyandconfidently,Itoldthe

audiencehowIoncedidn'tlovewritingandnowenjoyedwritingandhowIrealizedthevalueof

perseverancewiththehelpofmyteacher.

Iwenttomyteacher?sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Withthetrophyinhand,Ientered

theoffice.Myteacherrosefromtheseatandcameuptome.uCongratulations!”hesaid,slapping

meontheback.HegrinnedfromeartoearasIshowedhimthetrophy."Iowemysuccessto

you,“Isaidsincerely.uWithoutyourencouragementandbelief,Iwouldn,thavesucceeded.

Helaughed,hiseyesshiningwithexcitement."Iknewyouhaditinyou.rmproudofyoufornot

givingup."Wheneverlookingbackonthisincident,Ifeelextremelygratefultohim.ltwasmy

socialstudiesteacherwhoencouragedmetorealizemypotentialandthuschangedthecourseof

mylife.

技法四实战演练

I.1.Relieved,Jennytoldthetruthtoeveryone.

2.Feelingscaredandhelpless,Janesatbesideatreeandheldhershouldersinherarmstomake

herselfwarm.

3.Theyhuggedandkissedwithtearsrolling/pouring/streamingdowntheircheeks.

4."L..Idon'tknow,“hestammered,hisvoicetremblingwithfear.

5.IfshehadnotquarreledwithTom,theywouldhaveenjoyedagreattimenearthelake.

6.Motherhuggedthetwinstightly,whosefaceswereglowingwithexcitement.

7.Sincehecontinuedspeakingaboutwantingtosharehispaintingswiththeworld,Iknewwhat

hadtobedone.

8.Ithankedhim,sayingthatnotonlydidhemendmyshirtwithhiscraftsmanshipbuthealso

repairedmydreamwithsportsmanship.

9.ItwasatthatmomentthatIwasoverwhelmedwithgratitudetomyteacher.

10.Acoldfeelingcreptoverhisheartandmadehimshiver.

11.Drownedinhappiness,Jimmydashedoutoftheschoolgatelikeafreebird.

12.Seeingsuchextraordinarybeauty,Ithinkeverycellinmybodywokeup.

II.ButMollyinsistedthattheyshouldwaitandkeepthebook.Shedidn'tplacetheillustrated

bookonthebookshelf,hopingRickwouldshowupsoon.Akidmightmakeallkindsofpromises

andfailtokeepthem.ButRickwassosincereandeagerthatMollybelievedhewouldnJtbreak

hispromise.Akid'spromiseismorevaluablethanthecostofthebook.Thebookwouldrestinthe

drawerstilluntilRickshowedup.Thenononesunnymorning,Mollyfoundalittleboyrunningall

thewaytowardsherbookstoreholdingsomething.ThelittleboywasexactlyRick.

Rickpushedthedooropenandrushedtothecounterholdinghismoneybox.Mollyexcitedly

pulledthedraweropen,tookouttheillustratedbookandwalkedoutfromthecounter

immediately.ShekneltwithonelegandsmiledatRick,handingthebooktoRick.Rick?seyes

wereshininglookingatthebook,andheputtheboxonthefloorandheldthebook."Ithinkyou

guyshadbettermakeyourdealhereatthecoffeetable,“saidRex.Mollywinkedathim

delightedly.Thesunlightcamethroughtheglasswindowandcastonthelittlecustomerandthenice

lady.

第3节语料素材

一、实战演练

1.Herfacelitupwithhappinessasshereceivedthepresentspreparedbythechildren.

2.Theyjumpedtotheirfeetatthenews,withtheireyesfilledwithjoy.

Hearingthenews,theyjumpedtotheirfeetwithjoyintheireyes.

3.Overwhelmedwithgratitude,Icouldn,tsayaword.

4.Iwassodeeplymovedthattearswelledupinmyeyes.

5.Hearingthenewsthathisfatherpassedaway,hiseyeswelledupwithtears.

6.Shegotlostanditbegantorain,adeepsenseofdespairoverwhelmingher.

7.Herfaceturningpale,shestoodthere,tongue-tied.

8.MyheartwasinmymouthwhenIwalkedintoheroffice.

9.Atthethoughtofthefrighteningbear,asenseoffearwelledupinhim.

10.Hewashalfdeadwithfearwhenhefoundhewassurroundedbywolves.

实战演练

1.Havingknownothers'attitude,heshook/trembledwithanger,holdinghisclothesfirmly.

2.Filledwithanger,Mikewasunabletospeakaword.

3.Iwasabouttoexplodeandwavedmyfistathim.

4.Iwasashamedofmybadperformanceinthecontest.

5.Istaredathiminshock,withasmallsoundofdisappointmentescapingmythroat.

6.Whatsurprisedmewasthattherewasapathhere.

7.Alookofsurprisecrossedherfacebutshesooncalmeddown.

8.Uncontrollably,awaveofregretwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.

9.IfonlyIhadnotleftthefarmalone!

10.IfIhadfollowedhisadvice,wewouldbehavingfuntogether.

二、实战演练

I.l.Shejumpedup，dashedforwardandhuggedtheboytightly.

2.Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeace.

3.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janesatonthegrass,staringatthevastsky,frightenedand

hungry.

4.Withabunchofflowersinherhands，Mindystoodbesidetheseaandlookeddownatthe

flowerswithasmile，wonderingwhattodotomorrow.

5.Shecreptalongthepath,bentoverswiftlyandcuppedherhandsaroundthebutterflygently.

6.Withherheartbeatingwildly,theinnocentgirl,heldbyhermomandscreamingwith

excitement,unwrappedherdelicategiftboxwhichshehadbeenlookingforwardtowithoutany

hesitation.

7.Everyoneofusonthebuslookedonandlaughedcrazily.Ryanstruggledtohisfeet,dustedthe

jacketandmadehiswaytoanemptyseat.

8.Lookingstraightintomyeyes,Mikestrokedmyhair,whispering,“Youarethemostbeautiful

girlveevermet.”

II.1.thetwinsgotupearly,tiptoedtothekitchenandscoopedsomeflouroutofthebagtheir

fatherslidintothekitchen,pattingthetwins'shouldersandcomfortingtheminasoftvoicethey

carriedthebreakfast,advancedupstairsandwokeuptheirmother

2.1signaledtohimwithathumbs-up,feelingproudofhimHesmiled,tookadeepbreathandgot

readyfortherace,eyesbrimmingwithdeterminationeveryrunnershotlikeanarrow

三、实战演练

1.Thegentlebreezestrokedhishead,asifcomfortingallhistiredness.

2.Iclosedmyeyesanddaydreamedinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deep

alleysandsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.

3.Thesunlookedatherwithaglowingsmileandtheflowersnoddedmerrilytowardsher.

4.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainst

thebranchesoflinedtrees.

5.Onthedaybacktoschool,darkcloudshunglowinthesky.Therainpoureddown,withcold

dropsandangrywindsslappingmyface.Iwasdrownedinfloodsofwarmtearsandfreezingrain.

四、实战演练

1.Festivalsletusenjoylife,beproudofourcustomsandforgetourworkforalittlewhile.

2.Theprecioustricyclenotonlyhelpedmethroughthattoughperiod,butalsocarriedFather's

loveforwardintothefar,farfuture.

3.Seeingthepaperbag,IfeltasifithadbeenremindingmethatIshouldpassonthekindnessthat

theMexicanfamilyofferedmeeverytimeImeetsomeoneinneed.

4.Nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourrespect.

5.Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.

6.Itdawnedonmethatweshouldalwaysbeanhonestpersonwhateversituationswearein.

7.Iamfirmlyconvincedthattheslightpowerofeverypersoncanmakeourcountrymore

prosperous.

8.Allthestudentscametorealizethateveryonewantsanddeservestobetreatedwithrespect,

dignityandwarmth.

9.Itisnothowmuchwedobuthowmuchloveweputintowhatwedothatbenefitsourwork

most.

10.Thegiftyougiveisnotsomethingyourlovedonekeeps，butavoluntarycontributiontowards

thepeoplewhoreallyneeditintheirlives.

第4节分类集训

一、WhenmyMondaycame，IagaintookthebustoKMTValoneandwaited.Everythingwas

familiarthistime.Buthearingthemusicalsoundsandapplausefromtimetotime,Ifeltmyheart

waspoundingwithexcitementandnervousness.Eventually,itwasmyturn.Takingadeepbreath,

Icalmeddown.Confident,Iwenttothepianoandbegantoplay.Easy,soeasy!Funalmost...right

uptothecodaattheend.IsuddenlyrealizedIshouldnotbeattheend!Myheartjumpedtomy

mouth.Ihadskippedapart.Ahugepart.Howdidthathappen?

SomehowmybrainwenttoworkandIcontinuedplaying.Itriedtosmileatthecameraand

playedtherestsmoothlyasifnoskippinghadhappened.Afterwhatseemedaneternity,Istopped

playing.However,itturnedoutthatmyperformancehadprobablylastedbarelyaminute.Surelythe

resultwasasexpected-Iwasn,tthewinner.Onmywayhome,Isurprisedmyselfbyfeelingmore

relievedthandisappointed.!couldnotpretendthatmyperformancewasbest.Intruth,theother

threewerefarsuperior.WhenIcamebackhometotalkabout“TheBigSkip"，Daddysmiled,

“Itmaynothavebeennoticedbysomeonewhodoesn'tknowSchubert?s'Ave

Maria'.Yourmovementwassmooth.Youdidn,tfallapart.Allinalbaworthwhileexperience.v

二、NosoonerhadIpickedupmyphonethanLisacalledme."Belle,howisitgoing?Doyou

stillneedmyhelp?”Lisaasked.^Thanks,Lisa.EverythingisOK.AndTdliketotellyouabout

it,“Isaid.Itoldherexactlywhathadhappened,andspecificallydescribedhowIhadsolvedthe

problem.Lisapraisedmeformyquickwit.ThenIaskedhertoteachmeGermanincaseIneededit

later.Shepromised.Bytheendoftheholiday,Icouldhavealreadycommunicatedwithherinsome

simpleGermanwords.SoIwasreadyfbrthenewtermwithconfidence.

WhentheGermanteacherenteredtheclassroominthenewterm,IfeltVdseenher

somewherebefbre.Whatamazedmewasthatshecameovertome,saying,uGladtoseeyou

again!VmFlorence.,,IwassurprisedtofindthatshewasthedaughteroftheladythatIhad

helpedduringtheholiday.Whatafantasticfate!Asournewforeignteacher,Florencewaspatient

andconsiderate.Weallrespectedherandtookeverylessonseriously.!evenmadefriendswithher

mother,soIhadmoreopportunitiestopractisespeakingGerman.IwasresolvedtovisitGermany

thenextsummerholiday.

三、Givingorkeeping?Istruggledwithmyself.Givingit?HardlycouldIimaginelifewithoutthe

modelcar!Afterall,itwasmymostprecioustreasure,whichIhadbeenproudof.Myheartkept

achingattheprospectofgivingitaway.Nope!Ishookmyheaddeterminedly.Glancingatmy

mother?sexpectanteyes,Icouldn'thelpsobbing.Keepingit?Definitely,itwouldotherwise

upsetAlex.Tombetweenthetwotoughchoices,Iwastotallyataloss.Nevertheless,deepdown,

IcouldfeelmyaffectionforAlex.Yep!Iresolvedtodotherightthing.

Inthemomentofparting,mymodelcarwentwithAlex.ThoughIwascrushedtoseeitgo,

myheartsangwhenIsawhisbeamingfaceashetightlyclutchedit.Seeingthethumbs-upfrommy

motherandsister,Ididswellwithrelief,prideandjoy,forIknewitwasnotagift；tosomeextent,

itwasourconcernandloveforhim.Plus,sharingthemodelcaralsostrengthenedourbond,which,

Iwasfullyconvinced,wouldalwaysuplifthim.Aneffortmadeforthehappinessofothersliftedus

aboveourselvesaswell.

四、Thencamethefinaltestingday.Thewholeclassgatheredinthescienceclassroom,watching

breathlesslyasJeffcarefullyloadedtheirself-maderobotichandontoSergio?srightarm.Itfitted

quitewell!SoexcitedwasSergiothathisarmtrembledslightly.Havingputabaseballonthedesk,

JeffsignedtoSergiotop