新高考英语一轮复习讲练测第33讲 应用文写作之新闻报道（讲义）（解析版）

►第33讲新闻报道（讲义）【复习目标】精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。提升语言质量。强化高效训练。 【考情分析】近年高考真题应用文写作考点细目表年份卷别体裁主题词数2023新高考I卷建议信给外教写信提出分组意见80词左右2022新高考I卷邀请邮件邀请外教做一次访谈80词左右2021新高考I卷投稿短文庆祝校报创刊十周年80词左右2020新高考I卷活动报道学校五公里越野赛跑80词左右【网络构建】报道概述+写作步骤命题规律：新闻报道或活动报道，就是对近来发生的事件的如实介绍。报道的特点就是用事实来说话。考查形式：新闻报道或活动报道，时态常以过去式为主。写作步骤:报道写作精华高分策略之词汇：一单词新闻标题headline旨在aimat一次性的disposable保护protection组织organize发动launch抵制resist共同的joint促进promote背景background偶然地occasionally同时meanwhile二短语目标是……withtheaim/intention/purposeof. 打算……，意图是beaimed/intendedtodo. 被邀请去……beinvitedto. 被要求做……berequiredtodo. 将被举行willbeheld/betobeheld 由……组织beorganizedby.被期待做某事；有望做某事beexpectedtodo.． 采取措施takemeasures/steps/action按照accordingto吸引某人的注意力drawone’sattention对......评价很高speakhighlyof高分策略之句式：一高分开头：Nowadays,withtheimprovementoflivingstandards,moreandmorepeopleareabletotaketripsduringtheholidays.现如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人能够在假期里去旅行。Inordertohelpteenagerslearnmoreandappreciatepoetry，apoetrycontestwasheldinthehallofourschoollastSunday.为了帮助青少年更多地学习和欣赏诗歌，上周日在我们学校的大厅举行了一场诗歌比赛。Aimingtoenrich/encourage/enhance...,ourschoolheld/organizedarunningraceontheschoolplaygroundfrom9amto12amonOctober3.旨在丰富/鼓励/提高……10月23日上午9点到12点，我们学校在学校操场上举行/组织了一场跑步比赛。Ourschoolwitnesseda“CampusLaborWeek”activityfromMay18thto22th.5月18日至22日，我们学校举办了“校园劳动周”活动。Aimedatenhancingstudents’physicalquality,thisactivitywaswellreceivedinthewholeschool.为了提高学生的身体素质，这项活动受到了全学校的欢迎。ThestudentunionheldagraduationpartyforthemintheschoolhallonFridayevening,thepurposeofwhichwastoleavetheexchangestudentsadeepimpressiononthevividschoollifeinourcampus.周五晚上，学生会在学校礼堂为他们举办了一场毕业派对，目的是让交换生对我们校园生动的学校生活留下深刻的印象。Theresearcherscometoaconclusionfromthesurveythat...专家从调查中得出结论说......。Inordertocelebrate...,theyheldaparty.为了庆祝......，他们举行了聚会。二高分中间段：Itcanbeseenthatthestudentsinourschoolarecooperativeandfulloflove,solet’scarryforwardthegoodmerits!可以看出我们学校的同学善于合作，充满爱心，因此让我们把这种美德发扬下去！Asscheduled,theactivitystartedat8amonSaturdaymorninganditlastedforthreehours.该活动如期于周六上午8点开始，并持续了3个小时。Thehighlightmomentof...cameupwhenwe...最精彩的时刻…当我们。Sopopularwastheactivitywiththestudentsandteachersthatitattractedhundredsofthem.这项活动在学生和教师中非常受欢迎，因此吸引了数百人。Allthestudentsaswellasourteachersparticipatedinit.Asscheduled,weassembledoutsidetheschoolgateat8:00a.m.andheadedforthedestinationinhighspirits.所有的学生和我们的老师都参与了进来。按照计划，我们于上午8点在学校大门外集合，兴高采烈地前往目的地。Tiredaswewere，wefounditinterestingtoparticipatein...虽然我们很累，但我们发现参与其中很有趣。OnlythroughthisexperiencedidIrealizethat...只有通过这次经历，我才意识到这一点。Notonlydoestheactivitybroadenourhorizonbutitalsoinspiresusto...这项活动不仅拓宽了我们的视野，而且还激励着我们。Wehadabetterunderstandingof...throughtheactivity.我们对……有了更好的理解。通过这次活动。Itwasnotuntilhalfpastsixintheeveningthattheactivitycametoanend.直到晚上六点半，这个活动才结束。三高分结尾段：Itisthisactivitythatfurtherraisesourawarenessof/enrichesourknowledgeabout...正是这项活动进一步提高了我们的意识/丰富了我们的知识。Undoubtedly,thisactivityisofgreatimportance，whichprovidesuswithanopportunityto/turnsouttobeahugesuccess.毫无疑问，这项活动是非常重要的，它为我们提供了一个取得巨大成功的机会。Theactivitywashighlyspokenofbecausenotonlydiditenrichourschoollifebutalsoitimprovedourinterest.这项活动被高度评价，因为它不仅丰富了我们的学校生活，而且提高了我们的兴趣。Theactivityprovidedaplatformforusto...,fromwhichwebenefitedalot.该活动为我们提供了一个平台……我们从中获益很多。Furtherdetailswillbereportedwhenitbecomesavailable.进一步的细节将在它可用时报告。WhatimpressedusmostwasLiHua’sdeed,who...最让我们印象深刻的是李华的行为，他...Theactivitywasindeedextremelysuccessful,andthestudentsinvolvedrealizedthatevensmallactscouldmakeadifferencetotheearth.这个活动确实非常成功，参与的学生意识到，即使是小的行为也能对地球产生影响。8.ThecompetitionofferedawonderfulopportunityforustohaveabetterunderstandingofEnglishclassics,evokingourloveforEnglishculture.这次比赛为我们提供了一个绝佳的机会，让我们更好地理解英国经典，唤起了我们对英国文化的热爱。【高分模板1】Inorderto_____________________(活动目的),_____________________(活动名称)hasbeenlaunched______________________(地点)。At8:00o’clock,wegatheredat___________________(地点)andsetoutfor______________________(目的地).Allthewaywe_____________________(所作事情)，enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.What’smore,___________________(具体事项或印象或感受).Notonlydiditgetus______________________(好处一)andgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,butalso______________________(好处二).Whatawonderfultimewehad!Ihope_____________________(期待下次)。（2023年江苏南通模拟试题）假如你是李华，上周五你校举办了一次远足研学活动。请给你校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AnEducationalOuting________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AnEducationalOutingLastweek,ourschoolorganizedaneducationaloutingwiththepurposeofbroadeningstudents’perspectives,cultivatingtheirabilitiesandincreasingtheirculturalliteracy.Duringtheactivity,wehikedthroughcountryside,visitedsomevillages,andadmiredthebreathtakingscenery.Wealsoparticipatedinoutdoorgamesandteam-buildingactivities,whichhelpeduslearntoworktogetherandimproveourcommunicationskills.Overall,theoutingwasavaluableexperience,wherewegainedabetterunderstandingoftheworldaroundus.What’smore,wewereabletodevelopasenseofresponsibilitytowardstheenvironment.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道学校上周五举办的远足研学活动。【详解】1.词汇积累目的：purpose→aim令人惊叹的：breathtaking→marvelous/magnificent提高：improve→enhance此外：what’smore→inaddition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lastweek,ourschoolorganizedaneducationaloutingwiththepurposeofbroadeningstudents’perspectives,cultivatingtheirabilitiesandincreasingtheirculturalliteracy.拓展句：Lastweek,ourschoolorganizedaneducationaloutingwhichisaimedatbroadeningstudents’perspectives,cultivatingtheirabilitiesandincreasingtheirculturalliteracy.【高分句型1】Wealsoparticipatedinoutdoorgamesandteam-buildingactivities,whichhelpeduslearntoworktogetherandimproveourcommunicationskills.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Overall,theoutingwasavaluableexperience,wherewegainedabetterunderstandingoftheworldaroundus.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）（2023年浙江卷1月）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.收获与感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union.

Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferentplants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofou