初中英语课件PPeriod 5 Writing

Unit2We’reFamily！Period5Writing03写作训练02美文鉴赏学习01学习目标1.阅读有关文章并将目标语言、短语及语法运用到写作中。2.学会使用所学的知识写介绍自己的家庭的文章。DearCarla，Thankyouforthephotoofyourfamily.Thisismyfamilyphoto.Themanontherightismyfather，DavidSmith.IknowyourmotherisanEnglishteacherataschool.MyfatherisanEnglishteachertoo！He’satmyschool.Mygrandparentsareinfrontofhim.Theyaresixtyyearsold.Ontheirleftismymother，LilySmith.She’sashopworker.Who’stheboyinfrontofmygrandmother？He’smybrother，Paul.He’sfifteenyearsoldandhelikesplayingfootball.HeandIareatthesameschool.He’sinGrade9andI’minClass3，Grade7.Thegirlisme.Andyoucanseeourdog，Toby.Wealllikehim.Pleasewritetomesoon.Sarah1.HowmanypeoplearethereinSarah’sfamilyphoto？

2.WhatisSarah’smother？

3.HowoldareSarah’sgrandparents？

4.WhoistheboyinfrontofSarah’sgrandmother？

5.WhatclassisSarahin？

SheisinClass3，Grade7./InClass3，Grade7.

HeisPaul/Sarah’sbrother./Sarah’sbrother./Paul.

Theyare60/sixty(yearsold)./60./Sixty(yearsold).

Sheisashoporker./Ashopworker.

Therearesix/6peopleinSarah’sfamilyphoto./Six./6.

假如你是Heather，

请你根据以下表格内容，

以“MyFamily”为题写一篇短文，

介绍你的家庭。AlexisHeather’sgrandfather.GinaisJenny’sfirstdaughter.JennyisDanny’swife.IanisGina’sandHeather’sbrother.EdmundisGina’s，Heather’sandIan’suncle.

写作要求：1.不要求提到每个成员；2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；3.语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。第一步：审题。文体：记叙文

人称

时态__________

一般现在时

第一人称，第三人称第二步：列提纲。

第三步：列出主要的短语。1.来自

_2.一个大家庭

_3.向某人介绍某事物

_4.努力工作

_5.一个名叫……的姐姐

_6.和某人分享某物

_7.照顾

_8.对某人友好

_

befriendly/kindtosb.

lookafter

sharesth.withsb.

asistercalled…

workhard

introducesth.tosb.

abigfamily

be/comefrom

3.Thereare…people…有……人……我家有9口人。

Thereare9peopleinmyfamily.我有一个大家庭。

1.Ihavea…family.我有一个……的家庭。第四步：重点句子仿写。

2.Letmeintroduce…toyou.让我向你介绍……

让我给你介绍一下我的家人。

Letmeintroducemyfamilytoyou.

Ihaveabigfamily.

第五步：用and、or、so、because、but等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。MyFamilyMynameisHeatherandIamfromEngland.________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I

have

a

big

family.Let

me

introduce

it

to

you.(介绍家庭)

There

are

nine

people

in

my

family.Danny

is

my

father

and

Jenny

is

my

mother.They

work

hard

and

look

after

their

children

very

well.I

have

a

sister

called

Gina

and

a

brother

called

Ian.We

always

go

to

school

together

and

help

each

other.At

home，

we

share

food

and

happiness

with

each

other.Edmund，

our

mother’s

brother，

is

our

uncle

and

he

is

very

kind

t