《课时把关练》英语必修第一册RJUNIT 4 Part V Writing 写作专练含答案

课时把关练PartVWriting妙笔生花读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。StevewasthemostamazingpersoninallofMinneapolis，andhewasmycousin.Bytheageof19，StevewasastarbaseballplayerattheUniversityofMinnesota.Iwantedtobeexactlylikehim.SowhenSteveaskedmetogowithhimonaspringfishingtripinnorthernMinnesota，Iwasexcited!Afterplanningthetrip，wegatheredclothesandsupplies，andbeganourgreatadventure.WereachedtheSuperiorNationalForestinnorthernMinnesotabyearlyevening.Onourwaytothecampsite，Stevepointedtoasmallhousefarawayinoneofthemountains，sayingthatitwastherangerstation（护林站）wheretheforesterworked.Finally，afteralongwalk，wereachedthecampsiteandsetupcampasthesunwassetting.Steveknewallthetricksofanexperiencedwildernesscamper.Afterwegatheredenoughwoodfromtheforest，hestartedthecampfireusingonlystoneandsteel—nomatches.Forsupperwefeastedonfreeze-driedbeef，wildriceandpeasoup.Iategreedilyafterallthatwork.Tiredenough，weclimbedintooursleepingbagsearlyandtalkedaboutourplansforfishingthenextday.Wewerestilltalkingquietlywhenasuddennorthwindpickedup；thetemperaturedroppedanditbegantosnow.Stevefoundawaytoincreasethetemperatureinsidethetent.Hedraggedalog（原木）fromtheforesttotheoppositesideofthecampfire.Thenhewrappedaluminumfoil（铝箔）aroundthelog.Theheatfromthefirereflectedoffthefoilandintothetent.Soonimagesoflakefishwerefillingmydreams.Thesnowhadstopped，butsometimelaterapowerfulwindmusthavekickeduptheflamesofourdyingfire.IwasabruptlyawakenedbySteve.Ourtentwasonfire.Frightened，Iranoutofthetentimmediately.Thetentcollapsed（倒塌）withSteveinside.Withoutanythoughtofendangeringmyself，Ireachedintotheburningtentandpulledhimtotheicylake.Fortunately，wewerenotseriouslyhurt.注意：续写词数应为150左右。Later，aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm，weconsideredourdifficultsituation. 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___________________________________________________________步骤一：品读语篇——抓住要点很关键前文概要第一段：我的堂兄史蒂夫是我的偶像。他让我和他一起去钓鱼旅行时，我很兴奋！第二段：傍晚，我们到达了一个国家森林。在去营地的路上，我们看到了护林员工作的护林站。第三段：我们在日落时搭起帐篷，生火吃饭。第四段：晚上气温下降，开始下雪。史蒂夫把铝箔包在原木上使帐篷更加暖和。第五段：大风把我们快要熄灭的火吹旺了，点燃了我们的帐篷。幸运的是，我们没有受重伤。步骤二：戴着镣铐跳舞——研读首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情节①续写第一段所给首句为“Later，aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm，weconsideredourdifficultsituation.”。本段紧密衔接原文内容，因为帐篷在大火中化为灰烬，包括衣服、手机以及其他所需物品，加之营地远离公路，面对这样的困境，即使史蒂夫也不知道该怎么办。②续写第二段所给首句为“Suddenly，weheardanoiseintheforest.”。本句提示有个关键词Suddenly，由此可推知在极大的困境中，事情有了新的转变……步骤三：斟酌打磨——丰富续写词汇，生动描述情节话题激活词汇情感：unsureanxiouslywereabletoafriendandequal动作：getoutofheardlistenedappearedhadspotteddroveustocontinues环境：inthedeepoftheforestfarawayfromthehighwayinthemiddleofnowhereinthecoldairthedarkness句式翻译1.我们的营地位于森林深处，远离公路。（主系表）______________________________________________________________________________________2.我们身处茫茫荒野中。（主系表）______________________________________________________________________________________3.我们只穿着内衣，我们的日用品和手机都化为了灰烬。（并列句和被动结构）______________________________________________________________________________________4.我们唯一能做的就是坐在寒冷的野外。（定语从句和不定式作表语）______________________________________________________________________________________5.我们想知道怎么才能走出森林。（主谓宾）______________________________________________________________________________________6.我们焦急地听着，凝视着黑暗处。（并列谓语）______________________________________________________________________________________7.一位护林员发现了火光，前来检查。（并列句）______________________________________________________________________________________8.护林员开车送我们到护林站。（主谓宾）______________________________________________________________________________________9.我们有了衣服，也可以给父母打电话了。（被动语态）______________________________________________________________________________________10.正是在这次旅行中，史蒂夫开始把我当作一个平等的朋友，而不是堂弟。（强调句）______________________________________________________________________________________步骤四：创造性表达——润色注重细节，句式再造升级1.把句2和句3合并为一个简单句______________________________________________________________________________________2.把句4和句5合并______________________________________________________________________________________3.把句7变为含有非谓语动词的简单句______________________________________________________________________________________4.把句8和句9变为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句______________________________________________________________________________________步骤五：高分在即——连句成篇，结构紧凑，逻辑衔接Later，aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm，weconsideredourdifficultsituation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly，weheardanoiseintheforest.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________课时把关练PartVWriting参考答案步骤三句式翻译1.Ourcampsitewasinthedeepoftheforest，reallyfarawayfromthehighway.2.Wewereinthemiddleofnowhere.3.Weworeonlyunderwear，andoursuppliesandcellphoneshadbeenburntintoashes.4.Theonlythingwecoulddowas（to）sitinthecoldair.5.Wewonderedhowtogetoutoftheforest.6.Anxiouslywelistenedandstaredintothedarkness.7.Aforesterhadspottedthelightfromthefireandhecametohaveacheck.8.Theforesterdroveustotherangerstation.9.Weweregivenclothesandwereabletocallourparents.10.ItwasonthistripthatStevebegantotreatmemorelikeafriendandequal，ratherthanayoungercousin.步骤四1.Wewereinthemiddleofnowhere，wearingonlyunderwear，withoursuppliesburntintoashesandourcellphonesincluded.2.Theonlythingwasjustforustositinthecoldairandwonderhowtogetoutoftheforest.3.Aforesterhadspottedthelightfromthefire，comingtohaveacheck.4.Theforesterdroveustotherangerstation，whereweweregivenclothesandwereabletocallourparents.步骤五Later，aswestoodbythebur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