Unit2Illhelptocleanupthecityparks.-2023-2024学年八年级英语下册单元写作深度指导（人教版）（学生版）

Unit2I’llhelptocleanupthecityparks.单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度“提供帮助和做志愿者”志愿者活动本单元以＂志愿服务＂为话题，应用文体裁居多，该话题属于中考常考话题之一。描述了发生在我们身边的相关事情，目的在于教育学生团结互助，关心社会和谐发展。此类作文为英语中的常考话题作文，写作时应尽量用倡议或号召性的语句或者用自己或他人亲身经历的事件鼓励、教育他人。写作目标1.掌握并熟练使用表达出活动的要点；1.掌握并熟练使用表达出活动的要点；2.会写一些简单的应聘信；3.清晰表达自己的能力。写作步骤◆1.总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分：总第一部分：开篇点题，引出话题。分第二部分：活动内容以及提供的帮助。总——第三部分：活动的感受。◆2.人称：第一人称。◆3.时态：一般将来时、一般过去时。申请目的Ihavereadabout....申请目的Iwanttobeavolunteerof...in....I’mgoodat.../goodwith...个人优势Wecanraisemoneyfor....个人优势Ontheonehand,一方面Ontheotherhand,另一方面Ontheonehand,一方面Ontheotherhand,另一方面I’mableto...个人感受Iwilltrymybesttomaketheworldmorebeautiful.个人感受Tobevolunteerswillbeagreatexperienceforme.IhopeIcangetthechance.真题感知（2023·湖南湘潭·统考中考真题）湘潭市博物馆正在为“讲好湘潭故事，传播本土文化”的大型宣传活动招募英语讲解员。假设你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据以下提示用英语向活动负责人写一封自荐信。要点提示：（1）个人基本情况（姓名、年龄等）；（2）自荐的原因（性格、特长等）；（3）对活动的认知（感想或意义等）。注意：（1）字数在80词左右，可适当发挥（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，个人姓名等）。DearSir/Madam,I’dliketobeavolunteerinthis“TellingXiangtanStories,SpreadingLocalCulture”activity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearSir/Madam,I’dliketobeavolunteerinthis“TellingXiangtanStories,SpreadingLocalCulture”activity.

MynameisLiHua.Iam14yearsold.I’msuchanoutgoingboythatit’seasyformetomunicatewithothers.Inaddition,I’vegotvariedhobbies,suchasreadingbooks,doingsportsandperformingthecrosstalk.IaminterestedinChinesetraditionalculture.Ioftenreadbooksaboutthem.AndIalsotakepartinmanyactivitieslikethis.Ithinkthisactivityisverymeaningful.Itcanmakemorepeoplelearnaboutourlocalculture.Itcanhelptopromoteculturalexchangesanddevelopment.IfIamchosentobeamemberofthisactivity,Iwilltrymybesttodoit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，表达想成为一名志愿者的意愿；第二步，介绍自己的个人情况，自荐原因以及对活动的认知；第三步，期待对方的回信。[亮点词汇]①inaddition另外②beinterestedin对……感兴趣③takepartin参加[高分句型]①I’msuchanoutgoingboythatit’seasyformetomunicatewithothers.（such…that引导结果状语从句）②IfIamchosentobeamemberofthisactivity,Iwilltrymybesttodoit.（if引导条件状语从句）【词汇积累】1.helptodo...帮助做..... 2.cleanup打扫3.cheerup使高兴起来 4.giveoutfood分发食物5.teachkids教学生 6.volunteer志愿者7.givesomeadvice给出建议 8.makeaplan制定计划9eupwith想出......10.workinanoldpeople’shome在敬老院上班11.helpoutwith想办法解决lonely孤独的 carefor照顾decideto决定做 giveup放弃attheageof在.....岁时 tryout参加.....选拔trieddoing尝试做 etrue实现learnsomethingimportant学到了重要的东西beinterestedin对......感兴趣 atthesametime同时volunteertodo自愿去做..... putup张贴repair修理 giveaway捐赠thankyoufor...因......而感谢changemylife改变我的生活句型积累：I’dliketohelptocleanupthecityparks.我想去帮忙打扫市里的公园。IcanteachkidstolearnEnglish.我会教孩子们学英语。Let’smakesomenotices.咱们做些通知吧。Iwanttobeavolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.我想在敬老院做志愿者。Ilikereadingnewspapertothem.我喜欢读报给他们听。Weshouldlistentothemandcareforthem.我们应该倾听他们并且照顾他们。Iloveanimalsandwanttobeananimaldoctor.我喜欢小动物想成为一名兽医。8.IgetsuchastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenIseetheanimalsgetbetterandthelookofjoyontheirowners’faces.我得到强烈的满足感当我看见他们主人脸上的喜悦感。9.Volunteeringhereisadreametrue.能在这做志愿者，我的梦想实现了。10.IcandowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.我可以做我喜欢做得去帮助别人。11.Helpingotherscanbringushappiness.帮助别人能给我们带来快乐。12.Ithinkwe’dbetter....我觉得我们最好....13.InmyfreetimeIliketo...soIthinkI’dbegoodatthisjob.在业余时间我喜欢做所以我觉得我擅长这项工作。14.I’mstrongin....我强烈想加入....15.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinyourgroup.我想在你们的团队里做一名志愿者。例题分析：某儿童医院正在招募一批能在周末来医院帮忙的志愿者。假如你是Susan，你想成为其中的一员，请你给该儿童医院写一封自荐信。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：应用文(自荐信)；信的主体部分为说明文时态：一般现在时人称：第一人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接本文要求写一封自荐信。在写个人优势时，我们可用I’m...和Ican...的平行结构作为一种衔接手段，这样能使文章节奏匀称、紧致。4.成篇章DearSirorMadam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtoyouaboutvolunteeringatyourchildren’shospital.Iwouldliketostaywithkids.

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Susan一、词汇积累(一)动词短语1.打扫干净___________________2.(使)变得更高兴；振奋起来___________________3.分发；散发___________________4.放弃___________________5.张贴___________________6.推迟___________________7.打给(某人)___________________8.修理；解决___________________9.赠送；捐赠___________________10.建立；设立___________________11.帮助解决困难___________________12.用完___________________13.想出；提出___________________(二)其他短语1.城市公园_____________________ 2.食物银行_____________________ 3.开心的表情_____________________ 4.一个课后计划_____________________ 5.由于_____________________ 6.从现在起_____________________ 7.清洁日_____________________ 8.残疾人_____________________ 二、句子积累1.Thegirlcouldvisitthesickkidsinthehospitaltocheerthemup.【不定式tocheerthemup表目的】我可以去敬老院逗老人开心。___________________________________________________________________________________2.IcandowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.【whatIlovetodo是作do的宾语，意为＂做我喜欢的事情＂】我想做我喜欢的事情。___________________________________________________________________________________3.Volunteeringourtimetohelpthesepeopleisagoodideatospendourfreetime.【volunteeringourtimetohelpthesepeople在此句中是动名词短语作主语，volunteertimetodosth.意为＂自愿花时间做某事＂】我认为自愿每周花时间去帮助残疾人是很有意义的。___________________________________________________________________________________4.I’dliketohelphomelesspeople.Iwanttotravelalone.【wouldliketodosth.与wanttodosth.是指＂想要做某事＂】大学毕业后，我想成为一名志愿者。___________________________________________________________________________________（一）1．为了更好地举办冬奥会，市冬奥办现在面向全社会招聘身体健康、热爱体育运动、乐于助人，并能熟练运用英语和外国友人交流的志愿者。假如你叫李华，请根据以下提示和要求，写一封应征冬奥会志愿者的自荐信。提示:1.Whydoyouwanttobeavolunteer?2.Whatcanyoudo?要求:1.自荐信须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；2.信中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.I’dliketobeavolunteerforWinterOlympicGames.Because____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（二）2．根据以下提示，以“I’mHappytoHelpOthers”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容:1.过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上；2.老师告诉我们有很多儿童缺少衣服和食物，更不能上学；3.从那以后，我将零花钱捐给一个帮助儿童的组织；4.我为能帮助别人而自豪。要求:1.语句通顺，语意连贯；2.必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；3.80词左右（不含所给词）。I’mHappytoHelpOthersEveryoneneedshelp.Iusedto________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）3．假如你是Helen，你在某个图书馆的网站上看到了招收志愿者的公告，想申请成为其中一员。请你根据下面的要点提示并结合自己的实际情况，写一封申请邮件。提示：1.Whatkindofvolunteerworkdoyouwanttodo?2.Canyoudotheworkwell?3.Whydoyouwanttodothevolunteerwork?4.Whenareyoufreetodothework?要求：1.短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文通顺、连贯；2.词数：80左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearSirorMadam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Helen（四）4．第十九届亚运会即将在杭州市举办。亚组委正向全社会招聘志愿者。假如你叫李华，你对此很感兴趣，写一封电子邮件应聘。要求：1.乐于为国际友人服务；2.掌握丰富的文化知识，既是服务人员，也是文化的使者；3.具有流利的英语表达能力，能做好沟通工作。参考词汇：第19届亚运会the19thAsianGames；使者carrier；要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名；2.语言通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.词数在100左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Astheingofthe19thAsianGames,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua（五）5．假如你是李欣，一名英国交换生Judy向你咨询你校关于志愿活动的事情，请根据以下内容提示给Judy写一封邮件，介绍你校的志愿活动。内容提示：Whatvolunteeringactivitiesdoyouhaveinyourschool?Whendoyouusuallydovolunteeringwork?Howtojointhevolunteeringactivities?Somethingmoreaboutthevolunteering.注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60—80；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hi,Judy!I’mlookingforwardtoyourexchangevisit._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopethishelpsandseeyousoon!Love,LiXin（六）6．假如你是李华，你参加了学校团委上周六组织的“用行动温暖世界”(Actsmaketheworldwarm)的志愿者活动。请你根据以下表格信息，给你的笔友John写一封电子邮件活动地点街道、社区……至少补充两项)活动内容清洁街道；分发环保广告……(至少补充两项)活动的感受劳累但……参考词汇：street,neighborhood,clean,tiredbuthappy,……要求：1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯；3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)DearJohn,Longtimenosee!Letmetellyousomethingmeaningfulrecentlyinmylife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua（七）7．假如你是李华，你和学校的志愿者最近开展了一次志愿活动，你的英国笔友Mike来信问及此事，请你根据以下要点用英文给他写封电子邮件。要点如下：1.时间和地点：5月22日，敬老院；2.参与人员：学校的志愿者；3.活动：送鲜花水果，打扫卫生等；4.收获：懂得关爱老人，团队合作。注意：1.词数80～100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：OldPeople’sHome敬老院DearMike,Thankyouforyourlastemail.Nowletmetellyouwhatwedidinourlastschoolactivity.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveanyvolunteerwork?I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua（八）8．假如你是李华，长春市图书馆英文图书室正招募志愿者。你想申请做志愿者，请根据以下要点和要求，用英语给负责人格林先生写一封不少于40词的申请书。要点：1.本人15岁，来自第一中学；2.擅长说英语，沟通能力强；3.可以帮助读者介绍英文书籍、打扫卫生等。要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。DearMr.Green,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（九）9．学校学生会正在招募“手拉手”活动的志愿者，为外国来访学生展示传统手工制作（例如剪纸、风筝、灯笼等），以弘扬中华传统文化。假如你是李欣，请你用英文给学校学生会写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你会做什么。内容提示：（1）Whywouldyouliketobeavolunteer?（2）WhatdoyouthinkoftraditionalChineseculture?（3）Whatcanyoudoasavolunteer?（4）Somethingyou’velearnedfromvolunteerexperience.注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60﹣80；文中已给出内容不计入总数。DearSir/Madam,Learningthatthestudentunionislookingforvolunteers,I’mwritingtoapplytobeeavolunteer._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiXin（十）10．成都将于今年夏天举行世界大学生运动会，随着时间的日益临近，大动会主办方于近日开启了志愿者招募工作。你是一名即将毕业的初三学生，很想成为一名大运会志愿者。请你根据所给提示，用英语给大运会组委会相关负责人Jordan先生写一封申请信。注意：1.须全面反映表格中信息；2.文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名；3.词数：100左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·广东广州·统考中考真题）你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。ThemeHealthyYouandMeTime8:30a.m.—11:30a.m.PlaceSportsCenterActivities…Purpose…注意：1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearSam,ThankyouforjoiningusinourvoluntaryworknextSaturday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（2022·辽宁盘锦·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校将组织一次主题为“用行动温暖世界”的志愿者活动，活动地点在养老院。你打算邀请你校的交换生Peter参加，请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点、内容以及需要做什么准备。写作要求：（1）内容包含以上信息，词数80—100；（2）文中已给出内容，不计入总词数；（3）语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（4）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。DearPeter,How’sitgoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusforthevolunteeractivity“Actsmaketheworldwarm”.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．（2022·四川眉山·统考中考真题）本周日上午，一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观，现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华，请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括：1.自荐目的：成为志愿者；2.个人信息：身份，年龄，性格（外向、善于与人相处），本周日上午有空；3.个人优势：擅长英语，……；4.表达期望：获得机会并能做好，请本周五前回复。注意：1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。参考词汇：三苏祠SansuTempleDearSir/Madam,IamgladtoseeyournoticeVolunteersWanted.Someforeignstudents…______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,4．（2023·福建·统考中考真题）某地“美丽乡村（BeautifulVillage）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。Whatkindofpersonyouarefriendly,active…WhatyouaregoodatspeakEnglish,tellstories…Whatyoucandointroducelocalculture,helpforeigners…注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。DearMr.Wang,IamLiHua.Iamgladtoknowthatyouareinneedofsometourguides.

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