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浙江1月：人与自我（与队友互助完成任务）浙江6月：人与社会（参加社区服务）新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料通常具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、逆境脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友爱类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类等等。主要考查动作描写，环境描写，语言描写和情绪描写。读后续写是高中英语一个重要的组成部分,其中情绪描写是所有描写手法中占比例最大的一项。考查要点与应对策略‌高考英语读后续写是一种综合性较强的题型，‌既考查了考生的语言基础知识，‌又考查了其综合运用语言的能力、‌创造力和想象力。‌因此，‌考生需要在备考过程中注重多方面能力的提升和训练。‌高考英语读后续写作为一种新题型，‌其考查特点主要体现在以下几个方面：‌1.综合语言运用能力：‌读后续写要求考生在阅读理解的基础上，‌将所获取的信息进行整合，‌并通过写作表达出来。‌这既考查了考生的阅读理解能力，‌也考查了其语言表达能力，‌包括词汇、‌语法和句式的运用。‌2.创造性与想象力：‌读后续写通常提供一篇不完整的故事，‌要求考生根据已有情节进行合理想象，‌续写故事的高潮或结局。‌这要求考生具备一定的创造性和想象力，‌能够构思出既符合逻辑又新颖有趣的故事情节。‌3.逻辑性与连贯性：‌续写的内容需要与原文情境融洽，‌保持人物性格、‌故事情节的一致性，‌同时上下文之间要衔接自然、‌连贯。‌这要求考生具备较强的逻辑思维能力，‌能够准确把握原文的脉络和走向。‌4.文化意识与价值观：‌读后续写所提供的语篇材料一般是具有正能量且故事性较强的文章，‌主题往往涉及人与自我、‌人与社会、‌人与自然等。‌考生在续写过程中需要体现积极的世界观和价值观取向，‌这有助于培养其文化意识和正确的价值取向。‌5.评分标准与要求：‌读后续写的评分标准通常从内容、‌词汇、‌语法和语篇结构三个方面进行考虑，‌具体包括续写内容的质量、‌完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度；‌所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、‌恰当性和多样性；‌上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性等。‌同时，‌还会关注词数、‌拼写和标点符号等细节问题。‌‌为了做好读后续写题，‌考生需要在平时注重积累语料库，‌增强语篇分析能力，‌加强思维训练和自主创造能力的培养。‌同时，‌还需要多读范文，‌积累有效的语言素材，‌提升语言表达的质量。读后续写三原则：原文一致原则内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，语言表达风格一致。2.曲折性原则故事情节应跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。3.正能量原则故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法等等。‌读后续写语言描写常用的表达语言描写常见词汇轻声说whisper耳语/低语mumble嘟哝murmur低语moan呻吟mutter轻声说/嘀咕sigh叹息大声说yell大喊shout大叫howl高声嚷exclaim惊叫cry叫喊scream尖叫roar怒吼/咆哮call喊叫高兴地说smile笑着说beam笑容满面的说laugh大笑道cheer喝彩/欢呼roar/howlwithlaughter狂笑道screamwithlaughter放声大笑utteracryofjoy发出快乐的叫声joke开玩笑grin咧嘴笑giggle咯咯笑有目的的说nod点头repeat重说warn警告add补充说continue继续说persuade劝说praise赞扬beg乞求plain抱怨admit承认demand强烈要求promise承诺道swear发誓apologize道歉fort安慰reply回复declare宣称announce宣布explain解释respond回应道ask问到suggest建议道advise建议apologize道歉agree同意道refuse拒绝expressthankstosb.感谢其他说utter说出stammer结结巴巴地说gasp喘气说remark/ment评论道saytooneself自言自语thinktooneself暗自思忖blurtout脱口而出letout发出(声音)话题句式：“你在这次活动之前做了充分的准备，这是你来这里的最重要的原因。”我温柔地补充道。(2022年6月越野跑)“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithagentletone.“加油!你能做到的!我们为你感到骄傲!”同学们都热情地喊道。(2022年6月越野跑)“eon!Youcanmakeit!Weareproudofyou!”allclassmatesshoutedenthusiastically.“你在这次活动之前做了充分的准备，这是你来这里的最大原因。”我用真诚的语气补充道。(2022年6月越野跑)“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostreasonwhyyoushowuphere,”Iaddedwithasinceretone.“我们还需要花多少钱买一辆新卡车?”妈妈问。(2021年6月浙江如何用钱)“Howmuchdowestillneedtopayforanewtruck?”askedmymother.“我们只剩下200块了。”父亲叹了口气。 (2021年6月浙江如何用钱)“Wejusthadtwohundredleft,”sighedmyfather.“母亲节快乐!亲爱的妈妈!”双胞胎激动地叫道。(2021年6月母亲节惊喜)“HappyMother’sDay!Dearmummy!”thetwinscriedinanexcitedvoice.他们兴奋地喊道:“母亲节快乐，亲爱的妈妈!”(2021年6月母亲节惊喜)Theyyelledexcitedly,“HappyMother’sDay,darlingMummy!”我对他表达了感谢:“是你让我爱上了写作。没有您的鼓励和指导，我不可能获奖。”(2023写作比赛)Iexpressedmythankstohim,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting.Withoutyourencouragementandguidance,Icouldn’thavewontheprize.”“这个可爱的、充满人性的生物会再次被困在网里吗?”我心想。(2023年1月浙江蜂鸟)“Willthislovelyandhumanisticcreaturebetrappedinthewebagain?”Ithoughttomyself.“谢天谢地，我们得救了!”埃莉叫道。(2020年7月浙江熊口脱险)“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.“救命!”我紧张地扯着嗓子大叫道。 (2021年1月浙江南瓜卡头)“Help!”Iyellednervouslyatthetopofmyvoice.“你做到了!”妈妈哈哈大笑。 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ed,andshottowardthefarcornerofthegoal.Still,theyfailed.Astheotherteamsetupforagoalkick,OliviasawMakaylastillstandinginsidethe18yardbox.Thejudgesignaledhertomove.TheOrangeTeamwasn’tallowedthere.WhenMakaylarantowardOlivia,shetrippedandfell.“AreyouOK?”Oliviaasked.Makaylauppedandrubbed(揉)herknees.“Yep,IknowI’mstilllearning,butIlovesoccer.”“Metoo,”Oliviasaid.TheGreenTeamrocketedakick.Oliviasteppedinfrontofherdefenderandtrappedtheball.Jordancalledforapass,butshewasn’topen.Oliviaheldontotheball.Shecutright,thenleft,leavingadefenderinthedust.Withtheballatherfeet,shelookedupandtherewasMakayla,wideopeninfrontofthenet.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withanotherdefendercloselybehindtoattack,Oliviahadnochoice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thecrowdbrokeintothunderousapplauseandcheers.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2022新高考真题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthedayofthebigcrosscountryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplainedunfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecrosscountryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iyawned(打哈欠)asIgotoffthelaststepofthebus.Ihadwokenearlythatmorning,andhadnotbeenabletosleeponthelongridefromRiversideHigh,thinkingaboutthatday’srace,theEyeOpener.Ihadneverracedinastatewideracebefore.Overthirtyhighschoolteamsran,alongwithquiteafewcolleges.TherestofmyteamandIunloadedthebus,andwerelaxedandwaitedforourracepatiently.“Startwarmingup,”ourcoachtoldus,roughlyfortyfiveminutesafterwearrived.Afterfinishingourstretches,weheadedovertothestartingline,eagerfortheracetobegin.Thestarterwalkedtothemiddleofthefield.“Therewillbetwomands,”hisvoiceboomed,‘‘Runnersset,thenthegun.Ifyouhearanothershot,returntothestartinglinetostartagain.”MyheartracedasIgotmylegsreadytorace.“Runnersset!”thestartershoutedBam!Thegunfired,andherushedoutofourway.Adrenaline(肾上腺素)rushedthroughmybodyasIracedthroughthemassofrunners.AsIroundedthefirstturn,myschoolmatesgreetedmewithhearteningshouts.Then,inwhatfeltlikeonlyoneminute,Iarrivedattheonemilemark.“6’10”,amandeclaredasIranby.Itriedtoignorehim,butmylegsbegantobumasIrealizedIhadrunamileandstillhadtwotogo.Isloweddownmypace,forIknewthesecondmilewastheworstofallthree.M