专题07 语言学习-备战2022年上海中考英语书面表达满分攻略（解析版）

（一）（2020年长宁金山一模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mynewway(s)to”（请以“我的新方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在你的日常的学习生活中，你习惯于老方法做某事。有一天你尝试使用新方法，结果发现效果更好。请你举例简单叙述使用什么新方法、做了什么事、介绍新方法的优点以及谈谈给你的感想。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Mynewway(s)tolearnChineseChineseisourmothertongue,butwhenIstartedmiddleschool,myChinesewasverypoor.Atthattime,whenIwaslearningChinese,Ijustmemorizedtheknowledgefromtextbooks.LatermyChineseteacherencouragedmeandgavemesomeadvice.ThenIoftentookpartinsomeactivitiesaboutChineseandhadagoodtime.Inotonlylistenedmorecarefullyinclassbutalsoreadalotofbooksinmysparetime.Besides,Ioftenwrotearticlesandsharedthemwithmyteachersandclassmates.ThechangeoflearningmethodsmadememoreinterestedinChineseandmygradesimproved.IamverysatisfiedwithmyprogressandthankmyChineseteachersandstudents.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“Mynewway(s)to”为题，写一篇短文。简单叙述使用什么新方法、做了什么事、介绍新方法的优点以及谈谈给自己的感想。首先要把题目补充完整，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。2.例文点评：本文时态为一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。3.高分亮点：短语：be

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in，takepartin，haveagoodtime，notonly…butalso…，

alotof，sharesthwithsb。句型：when

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Chinese.当我上中学的时候，我的语文很薄弱．这是由when引导的时间状语从句，意思是"当…的时候"，be

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time.我不仅上课认真听讲，而且业余时间也读了很多书。notonly…butalso…固定句型，不但…而且…。（二）（2021年普陀区一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Icanbeawinner”(以“我可以成为赢家”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)提示：马拉松爱好者Allen的人生经历告诉我们：每个人都能够在某方面取得成功。请结合具体自己的经历谈谈你对这一观点的认识。(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IcanbeawinnerThelifeexperienceofmarathonenthusiastAllentellsusthateveryonecansucceedinsomeway.Icouldn'tagreemorewiththat.AtthebeginningoflearningEnglish,Ifeltitwasverydifficult.IdarednotspeakEnglishbecausemypronunciationwasnotstandard.Ialsothoughtmyclassmateswouldlaughatme.Itwasn'tuntilIlearnedAllen'slifestorythatIrealizedIcouldworktochangethat.IbegantogetupearlyeverydaytoreadEnglish.ItriedmybesttoimitatethepronunciationbylisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmovies.Finally,IgotanAinthefinalspeakingtest.IbelievethataslongasIpersist,myspokenEnglishwillbebetterandbetter.Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，本文要求以“我可以成为赢家”为题写一篇记叙文。根据提示可知写作内容包括结合自己的经历和经验谈谈关于“每个人都能够在某方面取得成功”。写作要思路清晰，层次分明，逻辑清楚，语言的表达符合语法结构。2.写作指导：例文采取三段式的写作手法，时态为一般过去时和第一人称为主，第一段写根据马拉松爱好者Allen的人生经历告诉我们：每个人都能够在某方面取得成功；第二段联系身边小事和经验来说明；第三段写个人观点和感受。（2020年松江一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Warmthinwinter”.（冬日往往会令人联想到寒冷和不适。当你遇到“冬天”的时候，何人或何事让你感到温暖，像冬日的暖阳照耀在你身上？请以“冬日里的温暖”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Thefollowingwordsarejustforreference:difficultyunluckilybravetroubleunfortunatelyconfident注意：短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：WarmthinwinterIamajuniorthreestudent.IampoorinmyEnglish.Unfortunately,IhadabaddiseasethiswinterandIstayedinhospitalforoveronemonth.IhadtroubleinlearningEnglish.Havingheardofit,myEnglishteachercametomyhousetohelpmeafterschool.Unluckily,becauseitsnowedalot,theroadwascoveredwithiceandsnow.Theroadwassowetthathenearlyfelldownontheway.Withthehelpofhim,IwasbravetofacemydifficultyinEnglish.Afteramonth,Imadegreatprogressinit.NowIamconfidenttostudymyEnglishandIfeelwarminthiscoldwinter.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头介绍我的英语很差；接下来介绍我生病后，老师帮助我学习英语；最后我的英语提高了，让我在寒冷的冬天感到温暖。2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，介绍英语老师帮助我学习英语的过程，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。3.高分亮点：短语：bepoorin；havetroubleindoingsth；becoveredwith；withthehelpof；makegreatprogress。句型：原因状语从句becauseitsnowedalot；结果状语从句sowetthathenearlyfelldownontheway。（四）（2020年徐汇区二模）请写一封不少于60个词的电子邮件来回复你的笔友Danny。假如你是Jo,刚收到笔友Danny的一封电子邮件，想了解最近有关你在家学习的情况。请结合具体事例谈谈你的学习体会与感受。邮件格式已给。DearJo,Howareyouthesedays?IknowthatinthewaroffightingCOVID-19(冠状病毒),youarenowstudyingathome,havingschoollessonsonline.It'sreallyanewandspecialwayoflearnning.Pleasetellmeyourexperienceofonlinelearningthesedays.Takecare,Danny（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）范文：DearDanny,Iamgladtohearfromyou.Duetothissuddenoutbreak,wehadtoimplementpreventionworkathomeandtrytoavoidgoingouttocontactpeople,sothatwecouldnotreturntoschoolnormally.Onlineclassisjustanewformtocontinuelearningnewknowledge.Aftertheclass,unlikethetraditionalclassroomteaching,everyonesitstogetherandhasastronglearningatmosphere.Atthistime,intheprocessofonlineclass,itismoretestingeveryone'sconsciousness.Whetheryoucanconsciouslylistentolessonsathome,takenotesconsciously,followtheteacher’sthoughtswithoutdistractions,andactivelyinteractwiththeteacher,accordingtotheteacher’srequirements,dothepre-classpreparation,after-classreview,andcompletethecorrespondingexercisesafterclassarealltotestus.Tomydelight,myclassmatesdidnotliveuptotheteacher'sexpectations.Theywereabletostudyhardathome,attendclassesontime,andobeytheteacher'sarrangement.Thismademeveryhappy.Infact,onlyaftertakingtheonlineclassdidIrealizehowhappyitwastositintheclassroomwitheveryone.Yours,Jo.（五）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic"ThefirsttimeI.…”.(以“我第一次……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）要求：补全作文标题。短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文：

IalwaysrememberedthefirsttimeItookpartinanEnglishcompositioncompetition.WhenIwas14yearsold,IwaschosentotakepartinanEnglishcomposition.Atfirst,Iworriedabouttheresultandcoulddonothingasusual.SoItrainedmyselfveryhardforthecompetition,whichwouldtakeplaceamonthlater.Imemorizedalotofvocabulary,sentencestructuresandreadmanygoodorrenownedarticles.Whenthedaycame,Ipreparedprettywell.Theresultcameouttwoweekslater,andIgotthefirstprize!Thiswasmyfirsttimetotakepartinancomposition,andIcouldstillsenseprideandhappinessspreadingaroundme.

（六）请你以“HowtolearnEnglish”为题写一篇英语短文，把你四年来的英语学习经验介绍给下一届的初一同学，说说英语学习的重要性、谈谈你是如何学习英语的、以及你对他们学习英语的建议。参考词语：important,asmuchaspossible,writedown提示问题：●WhydoyoulearnEnglish?●HowdoyoulearnEnglish?●Whatisyouradvicetothem?要求：1、卷面整洁（无污迹），书写工整（有美感）。2、条理清楚，句式规范。全文词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。3、内容尽量包括提示信息，可适当发挥；文中不得出现个人真实信息。HowtolearnEnglishDearyoungersistersandbrothers,asweallknow,Englishisusedverywidelyintheworld.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtolearnEnglishDearyoungersistersandbrothers,asweallknow,Englishisusedverywidelyintheworld.Howcanwelearnitwell?Herearemysuggestions.First,weshouldoftenlistentothetapes,Englishsongsandprograms.WatchingEnglishmoviesisalsohelpfultous.Second,weshouldspeakEnglishinclassasmuchaspossible.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Themoreyouspeak,thefewermistakesyou’llmake.We’dbetterjointheEnglishclubandpracticewithothers.Third,wecanreadmoreEnglishnewspapersandmagazines.It’sgoodforus.Atlast,weshouldrecitesomegoodpassagesandkeepdiaries.Inaword,aslongaswedomorelistening,speaking,readingandwriting,wewilllearnEnglishwell.【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己学习英语的方法以及建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.

写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，提出建议可以多用情态动词，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。（七）教育部近日印发通知，要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量，合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。要求：1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.做过的最有创意的英语作业（内容、收获……）；2.更多有创意的英语作业建议（形式、理由……）；3.……MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.DoingcreativehomeworkmakesusmoreinterestedinEnglish.Onceourteacheraskedustowritealettertoaforeigner.WeweretoldtointroducetheSpringFestivalintheletter.ItnotonlyhelpedmeimprovemywrittenskillsbutalsoprovidedagoodchancetospreadChinesetraditionalculture.Inmyopinion,it’salsoagoodchoicetodrawmindmaps.Ithelpsustohaveabetterunderstandingofthelessons.Besides,wecanlearntosingEnglishsongs,sincemostofuslovesinging.Inthisway,ourEnglishaswellashobbiesdevelop.Ihopewe’llhavemorecreativeEnglishhomeworkinthefuture.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所给的参考信息以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”为题写一篇征文，从自身经历来谈谈自己的有创意的英语作业，并提出合理的建议。注意要点齐全。2.写作指导：审题可知，本文写自身经历时用一般过去时，提建议时可采用一般现在时，人称主要以第一、三人称交替使用。文章开头已给出，第一段点题；第二段写自身经历，第三段提出建议；第四段总结。写作中可使用亮点词汇和句型为文章增添色彩，如：notonly...butalso...，It固定句型等。注意保证上下文语句通顺，条理清晰，文中无单词和语法上的错误。（八）在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面，一定有让你引以为豪的事情。请以“OneThingI’mProudof”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。要求：1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分；2.不少于60词。提示：1.Whatisthethingyou’reproudof?2.

Whyareyouproudofit?OneThingI’mProudof_________________