专题12难点题型（4）书面表达-2023年中考英语一轮复习

专题12难点题型（4）书面表达考点题型特点注意点书面表达该题型分值有15分/20分/25分这三个分数段，要求考生写出符合题目要求的一篇文章。做书面表达的题时要注意审题，审清楚文章的题材、时态和人称以及要求写的字数范围。写完后需要认真检查单词的拼写，标点符号以及内容是否完整，有没有遗漏要点。一、书面表达“换词法”二、书面表达“换句法”考向一：书面表达“换词法”变化原则1：make

更有feel

原句：After

doing

sports,

I

feel

relaxed.

改写：It

makes

me

feel

relaxed

to

do

sports.

I

made

a

progress

in

English.

I

feel

proud.

It

makes

me

feel

proud

to

make

a

progress

in

English.

变化原则2：连词不再用and

增补

not

only…but

also…,

as

well

as…

进阶

what’s

more/worse

,

furthermore

转折

while,

however

变化原则3：喜欢不再like改成用be

fond

of,

enjoy,

be

crazy

about

I

am

fond

of

reading

books.

变化原则4：凡是提出措施尽量不用should用“besupposedtodo”

、“had

better”、“have

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our

duty

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2022年镇江市中考英语书面表达真题七、书面表达(共1题;满分15分)66.假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织的劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.Thelivingskillstrainingwillbeonafarm.There,Icanlivewithlocalpeoplewhowillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.Inthesummercamp,Icantakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.Ialsohavesomeadviceforyou.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikegrowingplantsandvegetables.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Yours,LiHua【解析】本文属于书信作文写作，要求根据提示要点内容给报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你会选择的夏令营活动项目及选择的理由，并对活动提出建议。本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅。写作时承接短文开头，即直接说明选择的活动项目以及总体原因，作为信件的第一段；第二段根据提示要点依次说明选择此项目的具体原因；第三段对此项目提出一两个建议并结尾。具体原因的阐述为本文重点，写作时应巧妙运用衔接语言，使列举原因更有条理，更清晰易懂。2022年常州市中考英语书面表达真题七、书面表达(共1题;满分15分)57.某中学生英文报YourVoice栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。It’snotveryeasyforteenagerstomaketruefriends.Someofthemmakefriendsbyfollowingsuit(随大流).Thatmeanstheydothesameastheirfriends,suchasplayingonlinegamesorsayingbadwordsbehindothers,althoughthey’renotwillingto.Shareyourideasaboutthetopic.1.Isitwisetofollowsuitinordertomakefriends?2.Howcanteenagersmaketruefriends?Don’tforgettosupportyourideaswithyourexperienceasanexample.注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。Iwanttosharemyideasaboutthetopic._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iwanttosharemyideasaboutthetopic.Inmyopinion,makingfriendsbyfollowingsuitisnotwise.Becauseeveryoneisanindividual,withhisowninterestsandpersonality.Sodon’tfollowthecrowdandjustdowhatotherpeopleliketodo.Weshouldmakefriendswiththosewhocangiveushelpandshareourhappinessandsadness.Tomaketruefriends,youmustbefriendlytoothers.Smileatothersandyouwillgetasmileinreturn.Youcanmakefriendswiththosewhosharethesameinterestwithyouorthosewhoaretotallydifferentfromyou.Trytohelpyourfriendswhentheyareintroublebecauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“交友”为话题，结合提示内容进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一、第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己认为为了交朋友而跟风是否是明智的；第三段介绍青少年怎样才能交到真正的朋友。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。考向二：书面表达“换句法”原则1：表达观点要“自我”

In

my

opinion,

we

should

pay

much

more

attention

on

the

weak

subjects!

原则2：两句之间要过渡

I

left

my

pen

at

home.

What

was

worse,

the

drugstore

was

closed

that

day.

原则3：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型！！

普通级句型The

environment

is

bad.

比较级句型

The

environment

is

getting

much

worse

than

before.

The

environment

is

getting

worse

and

worse

最高级句型

I

have

never

seen

the

worse

environment

.

原则4：表达作用多用it句式

…is

a

…way

to…

阅读能帮助我放松自己。Reading

is

a

good

way

to

relax

myself.

看电影能帮助我们学习英语。Watching

movies

is

a

wonderful

way

to

learn

English.

原则5：增强情感转感叹

阅读对我们很有益.

How

beneficial

it

is

for

us

to

read！

作运动对学生很重要.

How

important

it

is

for

students

to

do

sports.

原则6：事情到感情句型It

makes

sb.

feel

…

that

…

I

was

very

happy

that

I

got

an

A

in

English

last

term.

It

makes

me

feel

happy

that

I

got

an

A

in

English

last

term.

原则7：形容词句型升级：it

is

one

of

the

most

…

It

was

an

unusual

experience

in

my

life.

It

was

one

of

the

most

unusual

experience

in

my

life.

原则8：活用there

be结合定从Many

reasons

made

me

like

reading.

There

are

many

reasons

why

I

enjoy

reading原则9：列举式结构First

of

all,

secondly,

besides,

what's

more,

last

but

not

leastFor

one

thing,

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............Oneonehand,........Ontheotherhand,...........2022年泰州市中考英语书面表达真题八、书面表达（满分20分）78.我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。要点如下：1.变化是什么？2.变化过程是什么？3.你从中得到了什么启发？要求：1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；3.词数100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wegrowupinchange.Growthmakesourlifefullofmeaning.Lookingbackonthethreeyearsofjuniorhighschool,Ihaveexperiencedmanychangesinmystudy,thoughts,personality,lifeandsoon.ThebiggestpersonalchangeI’veevermadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.WhenIwasachild,Ididn’tenjoybooksatall.Later,mymotheralwaysreadstoriesformeandboughtmebooks.Gradually,Ibegantolovereading.Whilereading,Ifeelliketalkingwithawiseman.Readingisalsoafantasticwaytoenjoymyfreetime.Booksaremyfriends.Andtheywillbenefitmealot.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。2022年徐州市中考英语书面表达真题六、书面表达（满分20分）71.你校在课后服务活动中，根据学生的需求开设了丰富多彩的课程（见下表）。你选修了其中的一门，收获颇丰。你校英文报正在组织题为“Meandmyafterclasscourse”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你选修的课程；2.你学习该课程的经历；3.你的收获及感受。①运动（Sports）②阅读（Reading）③手工（DIY）④绘画（Painting）⑤声乐（Singing）⑥……（自拟）注意：1.词数90左右；2.短文中不得泄露个人信息；3.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MeandmyafterclasscourseInmyschool,therearemanykindsofafterclasscourses.Ichoose____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MeandmyafterclasscourseInmyschool,therearemanykindsofafterclasscourses.IchoosethecourseofDIY.DIYliterallymeansmakingthingsbyhand.Myfirstassignmentwastousethecoloredbubblemudmonlyusedbyprimaryschoolstudentsnow,pasteacoloredblessingonthesmallboard,andthenmakeaframewithcoloredwool.BecauseIthinkeveryonehasadifferentunderstandingofhappiness.ImadeawordFuintocolor.It’squiteatestofaperson’spatiencetodosomesimplehandicrafts,suchascrossstitch,foldingthousandpapercrane...Throughthisstudy,Ilearnedthatwecanmakehandmadeinmanyways.Wastebeveragebottles,wool,icecreamsticksandsooncanbeerawmaterialsforhandmade.Wecancreateourownsatisfactoryworksthroughourownimagination.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。以“Meandmyafterclasscourse”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。本文时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时先从表格里选择一个课外课程，之后再根据三个要点展开叙述。文章要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。第一篇：书面表达（满分15分）71.4月23日是第26个世界读书日。读书使我快乐，读书使我明智，读书使我……请根据以下提示信息，以“ReadingMakesMe________”为题，写一篇英文小短文谈谈你的做法和感受。Whatdoyouusuallyread?Whatgoodreadinghabitsdoyouhave?Howdoyoufeelaboutreading?Howhaveyouchangedafterreading?1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺、意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息；(姓名、校名和地名等)4.词数不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)ReadingMakesMe________Readingisalifelongjourneyandplaysanimportantroleinourlife._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ReadingMakesMeLiveaMeaningfulLifeReadingisalifelongjourneyandplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Itcannotonlyopenourminds,butalsomakeusgetmoreusefulknowledgethatwecan’tlearnfromschoolbooks.Ioftenreadbooksabouthistoryandsomeinterestingnovelsinmyfreetime.ThemoreIread,themorethoughtfulIwillbe.Ididn’tusetoreadbefore.Ispentmuchtimeinlisteningtomusic,watchingTVorplayinggames.FinallyIrealizeditwasbadforme,soItookupreading.Readinghasmademylifecolorfulandmeaningful.Ireadbooksatleastthreetimesaweeknow.Let’sstartreadingnow.Andletitbeeapartofourlife!【解析】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇记叙文，讲述自己在阅读中的做法和感受，要求要参考提示内容，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上用一般现在时。写作时要适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。第二篇:书面表达（本大题共20分）65.2022年立春，北京冬奥会如约而至。在这个世界共襄的冰雪盛会，有人成功了也有人失败了。胜败乃兵家常事，体育竞技场亦是如此。那么，对于你来说，成长过程中是成功更能鼓舞士气还是失败更能激励斗志？请你选择一方面，写一篇发言稿，陈述你的观点并给出你的理由。以下信息为非限定性内容，仅供参考。注意事项：1.发言稿须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.词数在100个左右，发言稿的首尾已在答卷纸上给出，不计入总词数；3.发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；4.发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Everyonewonderswhat’sbestforusteenagers,butnooneknowswhatthatis.Itmightbesucceeding,butitmightbefailing.Ithinkfailureteachesmore.Firstofall,failuremakespeoplepatient.IttookYuanLongpingandhisteamnearlytenyearstodevelopanewtypeofhybridrice.Secondly,we’llbeemodesttoothersbecauseofseeingourselvesclearly.J.K.Rowlingissuchanexample.SpudWebb’sstoryalsoshowswecandoalmostanythingifwenevergiveupworkingharder.Finally,failuregivesusadeepviewofthings.Thoughfailingtowinthethirdgold,YuzuruHanyuprovedthatoneofthegreatchallengesinlifeiswellbeingourselvesratherthanparingwithothers.Actually,bothsuccessandfailureareonlytwoleavesofthetree.Theprocessismoreimportantthantheresult.Justrememberwhatitisthatwehavelovedaboutthethinginthefirstplace.【解析】1.题干解读：本文主要是讨论成长过程中是成功更能鼓舞士气还是失败更能激励斗志，要表达自己的观点，可根据题干中的提示进行写作，也可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段表明自己的观点；第二段描述理由和举例说明；最后一段进行总结。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。2022年苏州市中考英语书面表达真题第七部分书面表达（共1题；满分25分）57.《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practicemakesperfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你对该谚语的理解；2.你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）；3.你的感悟，注意：1.词数100，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；2.内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imean__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imeanthatweshouldpracticeunfamiliarthingsagainandagain.We’llbeabletoperformitperfectly.ThepracticeoflearningEnglishisagoodexample.WearenotlivinginanEnglishspeakingcountry.So,inordertolearnitwell,weneedextrapractice,suchasreadingEnglishbooks,goingtoEnglishcorners,ormunicatingwithforeigners.Youcan’tmasterEnglishjustbysittingatyourdesk.Asanotherexample,ifwewanttobeskilledinusingtheputer,wealsoneedtopracticeusingit.Somechildrenbeelittleexpertsinputer,justbecausetheyplaywithiteveryday.Onthecontrary,ifwejuststicktobooks,wewillstillfeelconfusedwhenusingputers.Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemightsafelydrawtheconclusionthatpracticemakesperfect.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。2022年扬州市中考英语书面表达真题B.写作（计20分）76.最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。Whyyoumadeithelpenjoyreadingyourfavouritebook（name,typeofbook,whatyoulikemost）HowyoumadeitMaterials&Tools●card●scissors,glue…Steps●cutthecardinto…●drawapictureof…●write（yourfavouritesentencefromthebookorafamoussayingor…）●…Howyoufelt…要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmarkmakingactivity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmarkmakingactivity.Itspurposewastohelpusenjoyreadingourfavouritebook.MyfavoritebookistheclassicnovelJourneytotheWest,oneoftheFourGreatClassicalNovels.IlikeMonkeyKingbestbecausehehelpstheweakandnevergivesup.Inordertomakeabookmark,Ipreparedacard,scissors,glueandsoon.First,Icutthecardintolongstrips.AndthenIdrewapictureofamonkeyontheleftandwroteafamoussaying“Nothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.”ontherighttoencouragemenottogiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.Atlast,Igluedittoathinpieceofwood.AlthoughImetsomedifficultiesinthisprocess,InevergaveupandIamproudofmyself.【解析】本文以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”为题，并结合表格中的内容，描述制作书签的目的和过程，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的，以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方；第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程；第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。2022年宿迁市中考英语书面表达真题六、书面表达（满分15分）71.实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业”，我们同学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完成一篇题为“Enjoystudy,enjoylife”的英语短文。Enjoystudy,enjoylife校园1.参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等；2.多做运动，有益健康；3.……（补充一点）家庭1.畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼；2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能；3.……（补充一点）注意事项：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Enjoystudy,enjoylifeBecauseofthe“doublereduction”policy,wehavemoretimetodowhatweliketoenjoystudyandlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,ifwespendourfreetimeproperly,wewillgetalotinbothbodyandmind.【答案】Enjoystudy,enjoylifeBecauseofthe“doublereduction”policy,wehavemoretimetodowhatweliketoenjoystudyandlife.Inschool,weshouldactivelyparticipateinvariousactivities,suchaspainting,dancing,football,etc.Throughthesesports,wecanmakeourbodieshealthierandstronger.Ifstudentshavedifficulties,weshouldalsoactivelyhelpthem.Athome,weshouldliveinpeacewithourparents.Weshouldtalkaboutourdreamswiththemandtalkaboutourtroublesintime.Letparentsknoweverythingaboutus.Withtheirsupport,wewillgettwicetheresultwithhalftheeffort.Atthesametime,weshouldalsohelpourparentsdosomehouseworkandlearnsomelifeskills.Ifyouareinabadmood,youcanlistentosomemusicordosomethingyoulike.Inaword,ifwespendourfreetimeproperly,wewillgetalotinbothbodyandmind.【解析】本文以“Enjoystudy,enjoylife”为题介绍如何合理安排课余生活，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍在学校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。2022年连云港市中考英语书面表达真题七、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)76.“双减”之后,如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义?请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以“HappySummerVacation"为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。注意:(1)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计人总词数;(2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯;(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。HappySummerVacationThesummervacationising.Withmorefreetime,howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesummervacationising.Withmorefreetime,howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice.First,wecandosomesports.Wecangorunningeverymorning.Itcanhelpuskeephealthy.Besides,wecandosomehouseworkathome.Itisnecessaryforustolearnsomelifeskillsandlookafterourselves.What’smore,weneedtoreadsomebooks.Readinghelpsimproveourknowledgeandopensupawholenewweoldtous.Wecanalsojoinsomeclubs,suchastheSingingClubortheDancingClub.Itcanhelpusdevelophobbies.Ihopeyoucanhaveacolourfulvacation.【解析】本文以“HappySummerVacation”为题介绍如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义，文章可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍假期可以如何度过的方式以及各自的理由；第三段表达期待大家都能有一个愉快的假期。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。2022年无锡市中考英语书面表达真题八、书面表达（本大题共20分）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、朋友……),请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。Influence(...)ExperienceInfluence(...)Experience(example/story)Introduction(looks;personalities;...)注意事项：演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。ThePersonIWanttoThank________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThePersonIWanttoThankInmylife,manypeoplehavehelpedmealot,butMissWangisoneofthemostimportantpersonsinmylife.Iwanttothankhermost.

MissWangismyEnglishteacher.Sheisbeautifulwithlonghair.

She’sverykindandoutgoing.Shelikestohelpwithothers.ShehashelpedmealotinlearningEnglish.Sheissoenergeticthatherclassesareveryinterestingandfunny.Sometimesshe’stoostrictwithus.Icouldn’tdowellinEnglishbefore.WithherhelpIstartedtotakemuchinterestinlearningEnglish.I’mgoodatEnglishnow.NotonlydidshehelpedmewithmyEnglish,shealsotaughtmehowtofacethetrouble.

Thankherforgivingmesomuchhelp.Iwillstudyharderandharder.【解析】文章属于比较开放的话题作文写作；文章主题是“我想感谢的人”，写作时要紧扣主题；第一段指明我最想感谢的人是谁，并且要对他或她的容貌、性格进行介绍；第二段举出我和他或她之间发生的具体值得感恩的事例；第三段叙述他或她对我的影响。文章采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时；叙述情感要真切。（2022·江苏扬州市江都区中考英语一模试题）写作（计20分）76.家住扬州的大学生李华去年暑假成为了一名志愿者。近期疫情又在多地爆发，她所在外语学院正在举办一次以“抗击疫情”为主题的征文活动，李华想把自己的经历写成文章来投稿，假如你是李华，请根据以下内容要点，给校刊写一篇文章。WhoamI?1.李华2.十八周岁3.来自外语学院（SchoolofForeignlanguages）4.年轻有活力WhathaveIdonetohelp?1.在人们做核酸检测时（donucleicacidtests）引导人们排队。2.在人们居家隔离（quarantine）时，给人们送菜……3.……WhathaveIlearned?1.医生，护士的艰辛。2.通过为别人服务来提升锻炼了自己。3.……要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）必须包括表格中所有的要点内容，并适当发挥；（3）词数100词左右。（4）不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名。Workingasavolunteer________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WorkingasavolunteerMynameisLiHua.I’m18yearsold.IamastudentfromSchoolofForeignlanguages.Iamyoungandactive.Lastsummer,Ibecameavolunteerandgainedalotofthings.Myvoluntaryworkwasleadingpeopleinlinewhentheyweredoingnucleicacidtests.AndIgavesomedailysupplieslikesvegetablestopeoplewhowereinquarantine.Ialsobroadcastedtheimportanceofepidemicprevention.Attheendofvolunteering,Ilearntalotofthingsfromdoctorsandnurses.Theyworkedveryhard.Theyusuallyworkedformanyhourswithoutrest.Buttheyneverplainedandgaveup.AndIalsolearnedtoexercisemyselfbyservingothers.Ialsohopethisepidemicwillendsoon.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕自己曾经的志愿经历写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己去年暑假的志愿经历；最后一段介绍自己的收获。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。（2022年南京市金陵中学中考英语一模试题）七、书面表达（满分15分）76.疫情期间，同学们不得不在家上网课。针对网课，在学生调查中发现存在两种不同观点，请以IPrefertoStudyatSchool/atHome（选择你赞同的一方面）为题写一篇短文。一些学生认为不用去学校理由：1.既节省路上时间又省了交通费用；2.有更多空余时间，可以在薄弱学科多下功夫另一些学生认为有必要去学校理由：1.面对面交流学习效果更佳；2.和同学相处，乐趣很多我……理由：……（自拟至少2点）提示词：网课onlinecourse新冠疫情coronaviruspandemic注意：1.内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥，全文连贯通顺；2.词数90词左右；3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。IPrefertoStudy______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IPrefertoStudyatSchoolTobehonest,Iprefertostudyatschool.Iusedtothinkhowgreatitwouldbeifwecouldstudyathome.Wewouldn’thavetogetupsoearlyandwewouldhavemorefreetimetodoourownthings.However,thetruthisnotwhatIthought.Studyingathomeseemstobebusierthanatschool.Now,Ienjoystudyingatschool.First,Ithinkfacetofacemunicationisbetterforlearning.Second,it’sgoodforustostudywithclassmates.Wehavelotsofthingsinmonandwecansharethingswitheachotherandhelpeachother.Inaword,Ireallyhatestudyingonlineagain.Iguessmyclassmateswouldprefertostudyatschoollikeme.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目是一篇材料作文。根据“IPrefertoStudyatSchool/atHome”来选择一个自己赞同的一方并以此为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主。第一段选择赞同的观点；第二段描述过去的想法；第三段讲述自己为什么选择这种观点的理由；第四段进行总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（常州溧阳市南渡初级中学2022年中考英语一模试题）七、书面表达（共1题,满分15分）57.世界卫生组织和联合国儿童基金会将生活技能（lifeskills)作为全球青少年儿童发展的重要主题之一。请根据图中提示写一篇英语短文，描述作为青少年，应该提高哪些及如何提高自己的生活技能。除了提示中的内容，请你至少再补充一条。注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实处名和学校名称：2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范：3.词数不少于100。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。Lifeskillsarenecessaryforus.Whatlifeskillsshouldweteenagersdevelop?Andhow?Hereismyopinion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lifeskillsarenecessaryforus.Whatlifeskillsshouldweteenagersdevelop?Andhow?Hereismyopinion.First,weshouldtryourbesttokeephealthy.It’sagoodideatokeepabalanceddietandtakedailyexercise.Andbehappyeveryday.Second,workingwithothersisimportant.Sometimes,weneedtoworkasateam.Whenmunicatingwithothers,trytounderstandthem.Third,solveproblemsindifferentways.Weshouldbeabletofindoutthesolutionsaloneorwithothers.Besides,learntomanagetime.Wecanmakealistofthingsthatweneedtodoeverymorning.Getupearlyandneverbelateforschool.Finally,learnsomebasicskills,suchascooking.WecanaskourfamilyforhelporsearchtheInternet.Allinall,ifwetryourbesttoimprovetheselifeskills,wewillleadahappierandhealthierlife.【解析】1.题干解读：本题为一篇材料作文。题目要求根据提示内容写一篇青少年应该提高哪些生活技能及如何提高这些生活技能的短文，并适当拓展。

2.写作指导：本文时态应为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。写作时可采用经典的三段式写法：第一段引出主题；第二段论述青少年应提高哪些生活技能以及如何提高这些生活技能，并拓展至少一条；最后一段总结概括。写作时要保持主谓一致，