人教版九年级英语全一册Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark 满分范文必背

Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark单元话题满分范文必背1．你校英语报正举办以“MyCountry,MyPride(骄傲)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.简要阐述在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等4个方面中国近几年的变化；2.谈谈你的感想。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等关键信息。MyCountry,MyPride________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyCountry,MyPrideObviously,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinChinatheseyears.Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.Clearriversandblueskyreturntoourlife.Atthesametime,Chineseculturespreadsquicklyaroundtheworld,whichmakesmoreforeignersinterestedinit.What’smore,Chinahasmadegreatprogressinitsspaceindustry.Manyspaceshipshavebeensuccessfullylaunched,makingChina’sspacedreamareality.Finally,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandard,peoplenotonlytraveltothecountry,butalsotraveltothewholeworld.I’mproudofourcountryandIhopeI’llbetheprideofourcountryinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。[写作步骤]第一步，总体介绍中国近几年的发展；第二步，具体阐述中国在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等方面的变化；第三步，表达自己的感想。[亮点词汇]①takeplace发生②interestedin对……感兴趣③notonly...butalso...不但……而且……[高分句型]①Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.（时间状语从句）②Atthesametime,Chineseculturespreadsquicklyaroundtheworld,whichmakesmoreforeignersinterestedinit.（定语从句）2．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes”。请根据以下思维导图，用英语写篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。要求：1.内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯；2.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。ChangesInthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Changes

Inthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundus.Personally,I’veseensomeimportantchangestoo.Before,Iusedtobeshyandnottalkmuch,butnowI’mmoreoutgoingandconfident.I’vealsostartedtolikestudyingmoreandworkhardertowardsmygoals.Aboutmyhometown,thechangesareverynoticeable.Before,wemainlyusedbuses,butnowwehavehigh-speedrailwaysthatquicklyandcomfortablyconnectustonearbycities.

Acrossthecountry,theimprovementsaredeep.Before,wehadproblemswithdirtywaterandemptyhills,butnowwehavebeautifulgreensceneryandcleanwater.Insteadofjust“MadeinChina”,ourcountrynowfocusesoncreatingnewthingsandbeingcreative,whichwillmakeourfuturebetter.Finally,wefeelthattheenvironmenthasbecomebetterandpeoplehavebecomehappier.Inaword,ourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.Welookforwardtoabetterfuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：时态有“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”。③提示：根据思维导图介绍各种变化，注意时态准确，保证内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯。[写作步骤]①第一步，承接短文开头，点明主旨，说明我们周围发生了巨大的变化；②第二步，从个人、家乡、国家、和感受方面介绍各种变化；③第三步，总结全文，生活越来越好，要对更好的未来保持期待。[亮点词汇]①noticeable明显的，显而易见的②insteadof而不是，代替③focuseson专注于，集中于[高分句型]①Insteadofjust“MadeinChina”,ourcountrynowfocusesoncreatingnewthingsandbeingcreative,whichwillmakeourfuturebetter.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)3．随着科技的飞速发展，我们的日常生活正在经历前所未有的巨大变化。为此，你校决定于近期举办一场主题为“科技给生活带来的改变”的英语演讲比赛。作为参赛者，你需要根据以下内容提示，描述科技对我们生活的具体改变。differentaspects(方面)oflifeinthepastatpresentthewaypeoplekeepintouchwithotherswroteletters…useWeChat(微信)…thewaypeoplebuythingsbycashonlinepay……注意：1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen!Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifebecauseofscienceandtechnology._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【答案】例文：Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen!Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifebecauseofscienceandtechnology.Inthepast,thewaywekeptintouchwithotherswasmainlythroughwritinglettersormeetinginperson.Now,wecankeepintouchbyusingWeChat,mobilephonesoremails.Weusedtopayforthingswithcash.ButnowweshoponlineusingAlipay,WeChatorDouyin.Weusedtogooutandcanonlyrelyonbicyclesorbuses.Wenowhavehigh-speedtrains,airplanes.Manyfamiliesalreadyhaveprivatecars.Ourlifeisgettingbetterandmoreconvenient.Ihopeweallhavelessworkinghoursinthefutureandmorefreetimetorelaxourselves.

Thankyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，首先表明科技使我们的生活发生了巨大的变化；第二步，具体介绍这些变化；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①keepintouchwith保持联系②usedtodosth.过去常常做某事③takeplace发生[高分句型]①Ihopeweallhavelessworkinghoursinthefutureandmorefreetimetorelaxourselves.(省略that的宾语从句)4．近几年，河南发生了翻天覆地的变化。请根据以下要点和要求，以“GreatChangesinHenan”为题写一篇英语短文。要点：1.人们的生活条件有了很大改善；2.生活环境得到了改善；3.交通更方便，每年都有许多游客来河南参观。要求：1.文中须包含要点中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数90左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文GreatChangesinHenanInrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown,Henan.People’slivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.Wecanseetallbuildingshereandthere.Childreninthecountrysidearealsoabletoreceiveagoodeducationnow.Thelivingenvironmenthasalsoimproved.Theskyisbluerandthewaterisclearer.Theroadsarewiderandthetreesaregreener.What’smore,thetrafficbecomesmoreconvenientbecausethereisanairport,ahigh-speedrailstation,superhighways,railwaystationsandsoon.Itattractsmanytouristsfromhomeandabroadeveryyear.Ibelievethatmyhometown,Henan,willbecomemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，首先介绍生活条件的改善；第二步，接着介绍生活环境的改善；第三步，最后介绍交通条件和对河南美好未来的期望。[亮点词汇]①Recentyears最近几年②beableto能够③What’smore更重要的是④inthefuture在未来[高分句型]①What’smore,thetrafficbecomesmoreconvenientbecausethereisanairport,ahigh-speedrailstation,superhighways,railwaystationsandsoon.(because引导的原因状语从句)②Ibelievethatmyhometown,Henan,willbecomemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture.(that引导的宾语从句)5．我们要勇于面对困难和挑战。假如你是李华，某英文网站正在开展以“DealingwithProblems”为主题的征文活动，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.两年前你性格内向、和同学相处有困难；2.英语老师的建议(多与同学沟通交流、参加俱乐部……)；3.你的感受。要求：1.所写内容必须包括以上要点；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；4.100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DealingwithProblemsPeoplealwayshavesomeproblemsintheirlives.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考例文:DealingwithProblemsPeoplealwayshavesomeproblemsintheirlives.TwoyearsagoIwasshy,andIcouldn’tgetonwellwithmyclassmates,soIfeltveryupset.ItalkedaboutmyproblemwithmyEnglishteacherandshegavemesomeadvice.Itookheradvice.FirstIjoinedaclubandtriedtomakesomenewfriends.Thenintheclass,Istartedtohavesomeshortconversationswithmyfriends.Itwasdifficultatfirst,butthemoreItried,theeasieritbecame.FinallyIsolvedmyproblemandIwasveryhappy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己两年前的性格及问题；第二步，介绍英语老师给出的建议；第三步，介绍自己的变化及感受。[亮点词汇]①getonwellwithsb.与某人相处融洽②upset沮丧的③advice建议④trytodosth.试着做某事⑤conversation谈话[高分句型]Itwasdifficultatfirst,butthemoreItried,theeasieritbecame.(the+比较级,the+比较级越……越……)6．在乡村振兴背景下，新时代农村发展日新月异，美丽乡村建设也步入了快车道。某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示，以“Thechangesinmyhometown”为题，谈谈你家乡的变化。Thechangesinmyhometown过去现在将来生活贫困，房屋破旧。污染严重，垃圾遍地。交通不便，游客很少。住房宽敞明亮，许多人有了自己的汽车。山更绿了，水更清了，天更蓝了。每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。请你展望家乡的未来。注意：（1）文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；（2）使用正确的时态让书写美观，条理清晰，层次分明；（3）文中请勿使用真实人名，校名和地名；（4）词数：80词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheChangesInMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall,andpeoplelivedapoorlife.Thehouseswereoldandsmall.Pollutionwasveryserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.Thetrafficwasnotconvenient,sofewvisitorscamehere.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbecomemorebeautiful.Themountainshaveturnedgreener,theriversareclearerandtheskyisbluer.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometoourcity.I’msureitwillgetricherandmorebeautifulinthefuture.Ilovemyhometown.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍了家乡过去的状况；第二步，描述家乡现在的的变化；第三步，展望家乡的未来，表达期待。[亮点词汇]①takeplace发生②allovertheworld全世界③inthefuture在未来[高分句型]①Themountainshaveturnedgreener,theriversareclearerandtheskyisbluer.(and并列句)②I’msureitwillgetricherandmorebeautifulinthefuture.(宾语从句)7．假设你叫李华，近期你的学校举行了一次名为“TheChanges”的征文活动，你打算参加并列出写作提纲如下。提示：生活中变化（1）以前工厂向河里倾倒垃圾，现在政府已经采取措施改善环境。（2）以前住在低矮破旧的房子，现在已经搬进高大现代的公寓。（3）以前家里只有自行车，现在很多家庭有轿车。自己的变化（1）去了许多名胜古迹，例如……（2）比以前更加喜爱阅读，阅读的益处：……（3）……，……（变化及感受）要求：1）内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2）词数80个左右；3）展开的内容需合理想象，用自己的话补充完整。TheChanges_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheChangesTherearemanychangesinmylife.Forexample,thefactoryusedtodumpwasteintotheriver,butnowthegovernmenthastakenactiontoimprovetheenvironment.Besides,Ilivedinalowandshabbyhousebefore,butnowIhavemovedintoatallandmodernapartmentinstead.Inoticethatmanyfamilieshavecarsnowbutweonlyhadbicyclessomeyearsago.Ontheotherhand,Ihavechangedalot,too.Iwenttomanyplacesofinterest,liketheGreatWall.Itendtolikereadingmorethanbefore.Readinghelpsmerelaxmyselfafterclass.Toconclude,manygoodchangeshavetakenplacebothinmylifeanduponmyself.Ibelievethecomingfuturewillbebrighterandbrighter!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”为主；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，介绍生活中的变化以及自己的变化；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①dump倾倒②takeaction采取行动③shabby破旧的④ontheotherhand另一方面⑤placesofinterest名胜古迹⑥takeplace发生[高分句型]Inoticethatmanyfamilieshavecarsnowbutweonlyhadbicyclessomeyearsago.(that引导宾语从句)8．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changesaroundus”。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。要求：1.内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯；2.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。Inthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Inthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundus.Nowpeoplecangotravellingabroadintheirsparetime.Iftheydon’thaveenoughtime,theycantravelonline.Ourstudiesarealsochanging.Forexample,morestudentsareinterestedinreadingandgroupwork.Theylikeworkingtogether.Moreandmorepeoplehavetheirowncars.Andhigh-speedtrainsmakepeopletravelfasterandeasier.Also,ourenvironmenthaschangedalot.Theairisfresherandthewateriscleaner.Weoftentakeawalkhappilyinthepark.Inaword,ourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.Welookforwardtoabetterfuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：本文以一般现在时为主。③提示：根据题干中的提示要点介绍我们周围的变化，可适当增加细节。[写作步骤]①第一步，点明主旨：我们周围的生活发生了巨大的变化；②第二步，结合题干中所给的要点，从旅行、学习、交通和环境、生活方面来介绍发生的改变；③第三步，总结全文，生活越来越好，要对更好的未来保持期待。[亮点词汇]①inone’ssparetime在某人业余时间②beinterestedin对……感兴趣③travelabroad出国旅游④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]Inaword,ourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.(“比较级+比较级”表示“越来越……”)9．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下要点提示，以“GreatChangesAroundMe”为题，写一篇短文。写作要点：1.Inthepast（narrowroads，…houses，air…，water…）；2.Atpresent（wideandcleanroads，differentkindsoftransportation，…houses，…sky)；3.Yourfeelings…要求：1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3.90词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。GreatChangesAroundMeInthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundme._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion：GreatChangesAroundMeInthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundme.Inmyhometown,theroadsusedtobenarrowandcrowded.Thehousesweresmallandold.Theairwasn’tfreshenough.Sometimes,therewasterriblesmell.Theriverwaspollutedbadly.Nowadays,theroadsarewideandclean.It’sreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.Wecanchoosedifferentkindsoftransportationtogoanywhere.Lotsoftallbuildingshavebeenbuilt.Mostofushavemovedtobigandbeautifulhouses.Theskyisveryblue.Myhometownlookslikeabiggardenwithgreentrees,grassandcolorfulflowers.Wearelivingahappylife.I’msureastimegoesby,ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。