专题21 书面表达-【好题汇编】五年（2020-2024）高考英语真题分类汇编

【好题汇编】五年（2020-2024）高考英语真题分类汇编（全国通用）解析版专题21书面表达考点五年考情（2020-2024）命题趋势考点1书信体（5年2考）2021全国甲卷—咨询信；2023北京卷—建议信；2022北京卷—邀请信；2021北京卷—道歉信；2020全国Ⅲ卷—求助信。1.最近五年全国卷书面表达以非书信类为主，淡化格式要求。2.通过选取有关体育、美育和劳动教育的材料，引导学生坚持五育并举，实现身心健康成长和德智体美劳全面发展。3.书面表达开放性更强，创新性更明显，不仅要求考生能够灵活地运用语言知识来进行写作，而且要求考生具有良好的思维品质，才能表达自己的体验与感受。4.写作字数应为100个左右，实际需要150词左右。5.重视材料审题能力、核心素养主题把握能力以及综合运用高级词汇和复杂句式表达能力。考点2非书信体（5年8考）2024全国甲卷—发言稿；2023全国甲卷—短文投稿；2023全国乙卷—短文投稿；2022全国甲卷—短文投稿；2022全国乙卷—短文投稿；2021全国乙卷—发言稿；2020全国Ⅰ卷—短文投稿；2020全国Ⅱ卷—活动报道。考点一：书信体（道歉信、咨询信……）【2021全国甲卷—咨询信】假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：1.阐明写信事由；2.征求建议；3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris,WordcamethatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeetingwhosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.BecausethisactivitywillbepresentedontheEnglishwebsite,Isincerelywantyoutooffermesomeadvice.Asfarasweknow,thereisahugeculturaldifferencebetweenChinaandthewesterncountries.Inordertogetmoreclicks,you’dbettertellmewhichChinesecultureyouwesternersprefer.What’smore,ifIwanttodecoratemywebsitewithsomeChineseelements,whatshouldIdo?KnowingyouareinterestedinChina,Idobelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.Ifpossible,youcanreplytomeassoonaspossible.Iwilltakeyouradviceintoconsideration.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Yours,LiHua【2023北京卷—建议信】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【答案】DearJim,Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→tip提供：offer→provide开展：carryout→conduct主题：theme→topic2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmydhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.【点睛】[高分句型1]Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)【2022北京卷—邀请信】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；2．交流时间和其他相关事项。注意：1．词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,How’severything?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusanonlinetalkonEnglishwriting.Ourclassmatesseemtobeweakinorganization.Wouldyoupleasegiveussomesuggestionsonhowtoconnectsentenceslogically,howtodevelopaparagraph,andhowtostructureanessay?Thetalkwilllastaboutanhour,andyoucandecideonadateatyourconvenience.Pleaseletmeknowwhichplatformyou’lluse.Itwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流【详解】1.词汇积累最近好吗：How’severything→How’sitgoing提供、给予：give→offer/provide不擅长：beweakin→bebadat/bepoorin建议：suggestion→advice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusanonlinetalkonEnglishwriting.拓展句：I’mwritingtoaskifitisconvenientforyoutoofferusanonlinetalkonEnglishwriting.【点睛】【高分句型1】Wouldyoupleasegiveussomesuggestionsonhowtoconnectsentenceslogically,howtodevelopaparagraph,andhowtostructureanessay?(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)【高分句型2】Itwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)【2021北京卷—道歉信】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因；2.提出建议并给出理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。【详解】1.词汇积累通知：tell→inform麻烦：problem→trouble怎么样：whatabout→howabout适合：fit→suit2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.拓展句：IshouldbeavailableanytimenextweekendsothatIcangooutwithyouandhaveagoodtime.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthis

weekend.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型3]Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)【2020全国Ⅲ卷—求助信】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。注意:1.词数100左右;2.结束语已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教MissEvans对于theSteamboat改编短剧的支持。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。考点二：非书信体（发言稿、短文投稿……）【2024全国甲卷—发言稿】英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以DevelopmentofTransportinChina为题写一篇发言稿。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday'sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormousdevelopment.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday’sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasseenenormousdevelopment.Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.Secondly,theintroductionofhigh-speedtrainshasdramaticallyshortenedtraveltimes,makingintercitytravelfasterandmorecomfortable.Lastly,theproliferationofnewenergyvehiclesunderscoresChina’sdedicationtoenvironmentalsustainability,reducingrelianceonfossilfuels.ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.Inshort,China’stransportsystemisembracinginnovationandeco-friendliness.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以DevelopmentofTransportinChina为题写一篇发言稿。【详解】1.词汇激活提供：offer→provide极大地：dramatically→tremendously减少：reduce→decrease总之：inshort→inanutshell2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.拓展句：Firstly,sharedbicycles,whichofferanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttripshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility.【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)【高分句型2】ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)【2023全国甲卷—短文投稿】你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.Confucius’slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindusoftheimportanceofintegrity,compassion,andsocialresponsibility.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累著名的：well-known→famous人物：figure→person强调：emphasize→stress基础：foundation→basis2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.拓展句：HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,whichfosteredrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.【点睛】【高分句型1】Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语)【高分句型2】Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【2023全国乙卷—短文投稿】请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.ThatwasthefirsttimeIhadwatchedalivemusicalperformance.Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginners.Inthebeginning,itwasquitedifficulttoreadthenotesonthestave.However,itdidnotdemoralizeme.Ispentmostofmyleisurehourstopracticepiano.Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.EventhoughIwillnotpursueasmylifecareer,Iwillstillcontinuelearningandplayingpianoasmyhobby.Itissimplybecausemusicisthebestmedicationformysoul.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：opportunity→chance使沮丧：demoralize→discourage满意的：satisfied→content空闲的：leisure→spare2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.拓展句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply,soIaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.点睛【高分句型1】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)【2022全国甲卷—短文投稿】你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越：moreandmore→increasingly重视：placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto重要的：key→significant此外：what’smore→furthermore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.拓展句：WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.【点睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(运用了部分倒装结构)[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主语从句)【2022全国乙卷—短文投稿】学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述：2.简单评论;3.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。【答案】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累选择：choose→select提高：improve→strengthen各种各样的：various→diverse就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.拓展句：Nowadays,becausesmartphonesandcomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.【点睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】It'surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline(运用了it作形式主语，toimprovetheirself-discipline为真正的主语)【2021全国乙卷—发言稿】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。【答案】onepossibleversion:BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。1.词汇积累充分利用：makefulluseof→makethemostof扩宽,丰富：broaden→enrich各种各样：allkindsof→varietiesof不完美：imperfection→defect2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.拓展句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantages，findingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【点睛】[高分句型1]Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.（现在分词作状语）【2020全国Ⅰ卷—短文投稿】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThePersonIRespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parents,oroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithme.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsinmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人”为题，写一篇短文参加英语作文比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累许多：alotof→anumberof抽出：spar