Unit5TheValueofMoney读后续写作业设计（教师版）

Book3Unit5读后续写作业设计（教师版）江西师大附中姚晨欣I课文素材库微技能语料出处动作描写1.Tworichbrothers,RoderickandOliverhavemadeabet.2.Youngman,wouldyoustepinsideamoment,please?3.Iwassailing,andtowardnightIfoundmyselfcarriedouttoseabystrongwind.4.Hegivestheclerkthebanknote.TheclerkdropsHenry’scoat.Thenhefoldsthebillandslowlyunfoldsitagain,asiflookingatsomethinghecan’tbelieveisthere.1.Page52Para1Line22.Page52Para2Line13.Page52Para15Line244.Page56Para17Line24场景描写1.It’slittletoobright,isn’tit?2.Nevermind.(withabroadsmile)1.Page56Para9Line12.Page56Para23Line1心理描写1.(happily)Whatluck!Brother,whatluck!2.(takingitcarefully)Forme?3.(inarudemanner)Seehimthere.(pointingtoanotherclerk)4.(lookingathimwithafrown)It’sallwehaveinyoursize.5.(tryingnottoshowheisangry)Isupposeagentlemanlikeyouonlycarriesverylargebills.1.Page52Para25Line12.Page52Para35Line13.Page56Para3Line14.Page56Para10Line15.Page56Para14Line1II语言训练场汉译英你愿意为大选的结果下个赌注吗？(madeabet)Areyouwillingtomakeabetontheouteoftheelection?他犹豫着向她走了一步。(step)Hetookahesitantsteptowardsher.委员会履行了赋予它的职责。(carryout)Themitteecarriedoutthedutiesentrustedtoit.他把杯子打落，摔成碎片。(drop)Hechippedthecupwhenhedroppedit..5.经济前景一片光明。(bright)Theoutlookfortheeconomyisbright.6.他的人生观十分豁达。(broad)Hehasabroadoutlookonlife.7.我不允许你用那种粗鲁的语气和你妈妈讲话。(inarudemanner)Ican’thaveyouspeakingtoyourmotherinarudemanner.8.他沮丧极了，皱着眉头看着这一片狼藉。(lookingathimwithafrown)Hewasverydepressed,lookingatthemesswithafrown.9.他小心翼翼的把它放入了盒子里，然后上了锁。(takeitcarefully)Takingitcarefully,heputitintotheboxandlockedit..10.突然间，他十分生气地摔碎了那个杯子（angry）Angrily,hebrokethatglasssuddenly.III美文体验馆Onelongagomorning,thehotsummersunclimbedtothetopofthesky.Bynoon,flowersdrooped(低垂).Birdsstoppedsinging.Lan,whowalkedtovisithergrandmotheronSundays,grewhotterandhotter.Asshepassedanenormoushouse,shespottedabeautifultree.Itsbranchesspreadwide,andtheirleavescreatedashadyspacenexttotheroad.Lansatdowninthatshadetorest."Howniceandcool!"shethought."Istillhavealongwalkaheadofme,butIcansithereforawhile."Lanwaswrong.Lessthanaminutelater,thedooroftheenormoushouseopenedwithabang.Aboyrushedoutandshouted,"Youcan'tsitthere!That'smytree!Chen'stree!"Heworesilktrousersandcarriedagoldentoypony."Maybeit'syourtree,butyoudon'towntheshadebeneathit,"repliedLan."Yes,Ido,"declaredChen."Iowneverythingaboutthattree,eventhebirds!You'llhavetopaytositthere.""Payyou?"criedLan."Shadebelongstoeveryone.""Notmyshade,"saidChen."IfIbuyyourshade,mayIstophereonSundaysthissummer?"askedLan."Isupposeso,"saidChen.Lanreachedintohertwicemendedpocketandhandedoverheronlycoin."That'sallthemoneyIhave,"shesaid."Fine!"saidChen."Butremember,youboughttheshade.Nothingelse!"EverysummerSunday,LanstoppedtositinChen'sshadeonthewaytohergrandmother's.Sheoftencalledthebirdsinthetree.Thebirdswouldflydownandgatheraroundher.Aloneinhistoyfilledbedroom,ChenwatchedLantalkandlaughwiththebirds."She'stellingstories,"hethought."Itlooksfun.ShouldIchargehermoremoneywhenshestayslonger?"Thenherememberedshe'dhadonlyonecoininherpocket.However,whenautumnarrived,Lannolongerwalkedtohergrandmother's.Chenmissedseeinghertalkingtothebirds._______________________________________OnaSunday,Lanappearedasexpected._________________________________________主题语境人与自我文章出处2022—2023年第一学期南京六校高三联合调研试题词数正文英文词数326，续写第一段首句8个单词，续写第二段首句7个单词。What故事脉络(Useonesentencetosummarizethemainideaofeachparagraph)Opening(Para.110)Lan,whowalkedtovisithergrandmotheronSundays,satdowninatree’sshadetorest.ButaboycalledCheninsistedthatthetreewashissothatLanneededtopaytosithere.Buildup(Para.1011、续写第一段)AfterpayChenLan’sonlycoin,everysummerSunday,LanstoppedtositinChen’sshadeonthewaytohergrandmother’s.ButChenbegantothinkaboutwhetherheshouldchargehermoreforsittingunderthetreelonger.owever,whenautumnarrived,Lannolongerwalkedtohergrandmother's.Chenmissedseeinghertalkingtothebirds…Climax&Resolution&Ending(续写第二段)OnaSunday,Lanappearedasexpected…Why故事主题快乐与分享，金钱与友谊How写作手法第一人称、记叙、描写人物分析LanChen"Howniceandcool!"shethought."Istillhavealongwalkaheadofme,butIcansithereforawhile."体现Lan对这棵树的喜爱以及找到乘凉之所的快乐。Aboyrushedoutandshouted,"Youcan'tsitthere!That'smytree!Chen'stree!"体现出Chen的占有欲较强，固执且自私地认为这棵树是属于自己的。体现了Chen较低的分享欲以及最初的自私心理和对钱的重视程度。"Maybeit'syourtree,butyoudon'towntheshadebeneathit,"repliedLan.Lan认为大树是每个人的，而不是一个人独有的Lanreachedintohertwicemendedpocketandhandedoverheronlycoin."That'sallthemoneyIhave,"shesaid.Lan虽贫穷很善良，即使Chen的要求她并不认同，但她还是妥协了。"She'stellingstories,"hethought."Itlooksfun.ShouldIchargehermoremoneywhenshestayslonger?"场景Chen房子旁边的大树语言风格平实质朴伏笔/照应Para12：Aloneinhistoyfilledbedroom,ChenwatchedLantalkandlaughwiththebirds."She'stellingstories,"hethought."Itlooksfun.ShouldIchargehermoremoneywhenshestayslonger?"Thenherememberedshe'dhadonlyonecoininherpocket.However,whenautumnarrived,Lannolongerwalkedtohergrandmother's.按时Chen还是可能会考虑到Lan,甚至在心理上有一丝关心她，所以Chen有可能改变他的固执且自私的想法。谋篇布局续写第一段Q1:HowdidChenmissLanafterherdisappearance?Q2:WhetherwouldChenchangehisopinionaboutchargingLanmore?问题素材功能Q1Weekafterweek,Chenplayedaloneinhistoyfilledroom.合成形容词产生强烈对比突出主人公的孤独情绪ThepictureofLan'schattingwithbirdscametohismindagain.动词表达体现出Chen对Lan的怀念之情。LookingatLan'scoin，Chenwonderedwhattodoifshecamebacktositinhisshade.现在分词短语，用具体动作表达出Chen睹物思人之情感。Q2Shouldhechargeheragain,orshouldhegivethecoinback?并列疑问句表达出Chen内心的思想斗争Manymonthslater,thesummersunreturned,hotasever.ChenstoodbyhiswindoweachSunday,lookingforwardtoLan'singagain.现在分词短语对主语的补充说明表达出Chen十分想再次见到Lan的心理活动。谋篇布局续写第二段Q3:WhatwouldChendo？Wouldhechangealot?Q4:WhatwouldLan’sattitudebe?问题素材功能Q3Atthesightofher,Chenracedoutside.Withouthesitation,hereachedintohispocket,pulledoutLan'scoin,andhandeditback.几个连续性动词的使用表达出Chen见到Lan激动的内心以及态度的转变。Q4Lanwastoosurprisedtobelieveit,sosheaskedindoubt,"Thissummer,yourshadebelongstoeveryone?""Yes,"repliedChen."Now,please,callthebirdsdownforus.Let’stellthestories.”用直接引语和表示情绪的形容词体现出Lan对于Chen态度转变的诧异Theybegantoplaywithbirdstogether,laughingcheerfully.现在分词短语作伴随状语表达出最终二人和解，故事圆满结束

【素材积累】Para91.twicemended2.Lanreachedintohertwicemendedpocketandhandedoverheronlycoin.合成形容词表达出Lan生活的不易Para10Aloneinhistoyfilledbedroom,ChenwatchedLantalkandlaughwiththebirds.形容词作状语补充说明主语的状态【参考范文】Chenmissedseeinghertalkingtothebirds.Weekafterweek,Chenplayedaloneinhistoyfilledroom.ThepictureofLan'schattingwithbirdscametohismindagain.LookingatLan'scoin，Chenwonderedwhattodoifshecamebacktositinhisshade.Shouldhechargeheragain,orshouldhegivethecoinback?Manymonthslater,thesummersunreturned,hotasever.ChenstoodbyhiswindoweachSunday,lookingforwardtoLan'singagain.OnaSundayLanappearedasexpected.Atthesightofher,Chenracedoutside.Withouthesitation,hereachedintohispocket,pulledoutLan'scoin,andhandeditback."I'msorry,"hesaid."Youdidn'tneedtopayme."Lanwastoosurprisedtobelieveit,sosheaskedindoubt,"Thissummer,yourshade