BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷17（共18题）

BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷17（共9套）（共18题）BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第1套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Youareamanagerofhumanresourcesdepartmentandyouwanttotrainthenewstaff,butthetimeislimited,youcanjustarrangeonetrainingcourse.Youwanttoconsultyourstaffaboutthecourse.Writeamemotoyoursecretary:tellingheroftrainingthenewstaffinlimitedtime.statingtheimportanceoftraining.requestingsuggestionsforthearrangements.Write40-50words.标准答案：MemorandumTo:MissWang,theSecretaryDate:1March2011From:KingClicks,themanagerofhumanresourcesdepartmentSubject:trainingnewstaffIamwritingtoinformyouthatwemusttrainthenewstafftoallowthemtoworkbetterforourcompany.Duetothelimitedtime,wecanonlyarrangeonecourseforthem.Pleaseletmeknowothercolleagues’opinionsaboutthetrainingcourse.知识点解析：本文是对商务便函的考查，是人事经理写给秘书的关于员工培训的便函，内容是告知秘书要在有限的时间内安排一门课程对员工进行培训，强调培训的重要性，要求安排的建议。文章是写给秘书，故言简意赅，讲清楚便函内容即可。二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Youareresponsibleforplanningthemagazineadvertisingofyourcompany’snewproduct,whichispolishforcars.Youhavejustreceivedtheletterbelowfromthemagazinethatyouaregoingtoadvertisewith.YouhavealsoreceivedamemofromyourMarketingManagerabouttheadvertisingcampaign.WritealettertoMrEllwoodatthemagazine,tellinghimaboutthechangestotheadvertisementbooking,andaskinghimoranyotherinformationthatyourequire.Write120~140words.Donotincludeaddresses.Writeontheseparateanswerpaperprovided.DearMsBeddington,Thankyouforyouradvertisementbooking,thedetailsofwhichIconfirmbelow.NameofCompany:AutocarProductsNameofProduct:SuperglossDetailsofAdvert:1/2—pageblackandwhiteAdvertwillAppearin:June,JulyandAugustissuesofthemagazineCostofAdvert:$350perissue(3issues=$1050)Discount:5%forearlybookingTotalCost:$997.50Wetrustthatthisissatisfactory.Yourssincerely,MemoTo:CathyBeddingtonFrom:JohnHumphreyRe:NewProductAdvertisingTheManagingDirectorhasapprovedanincreaseofbudgetonthiscampaign,sowecangofor;colouradvert,sixissues.Couldyoucontactthemagazineandgetthemtochangethis?Pleasecheckthepriceandthepossibilityofabiggerdiscount.Alsotellthemtogettheproductnameright—Supergloss.Thanks标准答案：DearMr.Ellwood,Thankyouforyourconfirmletter.Asfarasthedetailsofouradvertbookingareconcerned,therearesomepointswewouldliketorearrange.Tobeginwith,thenameofourproductis"Supagloss"not"Supergloss".Pleaseremembertocorrectit.Then,wewouldliketoincreaseourbudgettostrengthentheeffectofthiscampaign,sothecolouradvertwillbeusedinsteadoftheblackandwhiteone.Andwewouldliketoprolongthe3issuesadvertto6onesinthemagazine.Sinceourtotalcostwillincreaseandwearesurewecanbookassoonaswecan,isitpossibleforyoutogiveusabiggerdiscount?WeexpectthatyourrearrangealltheseandtellusanewpriceandthetotalcostASAP.Welookforwardtohavingfurthercooperationwithyou.Yourssincerely,知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第2套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•Youarethemanagerofasmalloffice.Inordertoreducecostsandimprovethecompany’senvironmentalpractices,youhavedecidedtocollectandrecycleallpaperusedintheoffice.•writeamemoof40-50words:•informingstaffofthenewpolicy•explaininghowthepaperwillbecollected•requestingstafftoco-operatewiththescheme.•WriteonyourAnswerSheet.Donotwriteincapitalletters.标准答案：To:AllstaffFrom:PaulBlakePleasenotethatallpaperusedintheofficewillnowberecycled.Itshouldbeplacedinthegreenbinnexttothephotocopierforcollection.Allstaffareaskedfortheirfullcooperationwiththisscheme.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Youareresponsibleforplanningthemagazineadvertisingofyourcompany’snewproduct,whichisapolishforcars.Youhavejustreceivedtheletterbelowfromthemagazinethatyouaregoingtoadvertisewith.YouhavealsoreceivedamemofromyourMarketingManagerabouttheadvertisingcampaign.WritealettertoMr.JohnsonattheMagazine,tellinghimaboutthechangestotheadvertisementbooking,andaskinghimforanyotherinformationthatyourequire.Write120-140words.DearMs.Beddington,Thankyouforyouradvertisementbooking,thedetailsofwhichIconfirmbelow.NameofCompany:AutocareProductsNameofProduct:SuperglossDetailsofadvert:1/2black&whiteAdvertwillappearin:June,JulyandAugustissuesofthemagazineCostofadvert;$350foroneissue(3issues=$1050)Discount;5%forearlybookingTotalCost:$997.50Wetrustthatissatisfactory.Yourssincerely,JackEllwoodAdvertisingSalesManagerMEMOTo:CathyBeddingtonFrom:JohnHumphreyRe:NewproductadvertisingTheManagingDirectorhasapprovedanincreaseofbudgetonthiscampaign,sowecangofor:colouradvert,sixissues.Couldyoucontactthemagazineandgetthemtochangethis?Pleasecheckthepriceandthepossibilityofabiggerdiscount.Alsotellthemtogettheproductnameright—Supagloss.Thanks!John标准答案：DearJackEllwood,Yourlastemailwaswellreceived.Thanksforyoursteadyeffortsinouradvertisement.However,Jstillnoticesomeminormisunderstandingbetweenus:Firstofall,whatwepreferhereisacoloradvert,ratherthanablack-white.Imaymentiontheblack-whiteversion,butthreedaysagomycompanyhaschangedtoacoloradvert,andinformedyoubyemail.Youmaycheckit.Secondly,wewouldliketobookthreemoreissues,forthehotseasonsforpolishingcarsstartinApril.Thus,wewanttoincludeMarch,April,May,June,JulyandAugust,sixissuesintotal.Inthiscase,Iguesswemayhavequiteadifferenttotalcost.Couldyoupleasere-calculateforus?Sincewebookthreemore,couldyougiveusalargerdiscount?Furthermore,ourproductnameisSupagloss,ratherthanSupergloss.Makesureyouputtherightoneintheadvertisement.Thanks!知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第3套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Youareorganisingameetingtodiscusspossiblecutstoyourdepartment’sbudget.Writeanemailtoallstaffinyourdepartment:givingthemthedateofthemeetingexplainingwhysomecutshavetobemadesayingwhyitisimportantforallstafftoattend.Write40-50words.标准答案：SampleAAllstaffBudgetcuts-meetingInoticethatwearehavingthemeetingnextTuesday.Unfortunatly,ourbuinesshasbeenslowsothatwhywehavemadeit.However,pleaseattendallstaff,Iwouldliketodiscussallstaffandtellyouaboutimportantthings.managerBand2Apartfromthefactthatoneofthecontentpointshasnotbeenaddressed,theanswercontainsfrequenterrorswhicharedistracting,andwhichhaveanegativeimpactonthereader.SampleBDearcolleaguesWearegoingtohaveameetingaboutthepossiblecutsinourdepartment’sbudgeton20thDecember.Thiscutisneededbecauseofthelosswemadein2006.Pleaseattendthemeetingbecausewedecidewhocantakeexternalcourses.KindregardsBand4Theanswercontainsallthenecessaryinformation,yetisconcise,andthelanguageusedisgenerallyaccurate.Overall,theimpressiononthereaderispositive.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Youarearegionalmanagerforaretailcompany.Yourlinemanageratheadofficewouldlikeareportaboutthreeofthestoresinyourregion,includingarecommendationtocloseoneofthem.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.标准答案：SampleCIconsideredalltheeffectsinourCompany,andfoundnotclosingvillagestoreisawellchoiceatthismoment.Sinceitisfarfromthecity,thepeopleinthevillagehavepoorabilitytobuyourproduct,andcustomersbecomemoreandmoreless.Ifwecouldreducetheprice,wemaygetagoodbenefitandforaanotherimportantreason,villagestorehavenotreachedahighlevelandfullequipment.Duetothetownhavedevelopedforthenearestfouryears,moreandmorepeoplewantedtotryenjoyourservice,andtheprofitsarebetterthanbefore.Ithinkwecouldspendmoretimeandmoneytoexpendittogetmoreprofits.Ou-of-townmarkethaveagreatchangesduringtheseyears.Manypeopleliketovisittheseplacewhenthefreetime,meantime,nessearyequipmentisimportanttothem,peoplelikeourserviceandwantmore.Regardingthethreekindsofstore,weshouldclosedthevillagestore,anddeveloptheothertwostores.Wecouldopenmoremarktingonthese2kindsofstoretogetmoreprofit.Hopethisisclearandthankyouverymuch.BrgdsKimJungBand2Thecandidatehasattemptedtoaddressallthecontentpointsusinganappropriateregisterandformat.However,duetopoorlanguagecontrolandnumerouserrors,themessageisnotclearlyconveyed.Theoveralleffectonthereaderisnegative.SampleDWehavethefollowingfactstoconsider:-villagestorewith￡20,000verylowprofitDecision:therearetomanyshopswithinthisarea,whichprovidethesamechoiceofproducts.-town-centrestorequiteprofitablewith￡130,000,wedidn’texpectsuchgoodfigures.Thisshopiswellplacedinabusyshoppingzonewithalsoalotoftourists.-out-of-townsuperstoreverysuccessfulwithanexcellentprofitof￡250,000.Thisshopprofitsfromenoughparkingplacesinfrontofthestoreanddifferentshopsandoutletsarround.Ifwehavetocloseastoreinourregion,Iwouldproposetogiveupthevillagestore.RegardingnewserviceintheothershopsIwouldimaginethataninternetaccesswouldbeinterestingforourcustomers.Thisservicedoesn’texistaroundandcouldshortenwaitingtimesforescatingpeople.Band4Thecandidatehasaddressedallthecontentpoints,usingagoodrangeofappropriatevocabularyandstructures.Thereportiswellorganisedandgenerallyaccurate.Theoveralleffectonthereaderispositive.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第4套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•YouworkforPurchaseDepartmentofRobustMachineryCompany.Yourdepartmentordered5000BG68gearsfromIWIndustriesCompany.Whenthegoodsarrived,youfoundthatthegearswerePJ86,andtherewereonly500.•WriteanE-mailtoMrSantini,theSalesManagerofIWIndustriesCompany:•pointingoutthemistakes•requestingaction•givingawarning.•Write40-50words.•Writeontheseparateanswerpaperprovided.标准答案：12December,2005DearMrSatini,BG68gearsIamsorrytotellyouthatthereisamix-upabouttheaboveorder.WeorderedBG68gears,notPJ86,andthequantitywas5,000,not500.Pleasesendustherightproductsassoonaspossible.Otherwise,wewouldhavetocancelthecontractwithyou.Yourssincerely,J.Brown知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•YouworkforSuperSonicIndustriesGroupCorp.YouhavebeenaskedtowriteareporttotheBoardofDirectors.•Studythegraphsbelow,onwhichyouhavemadesomehandwrittennotes.•Then,usingallthesehandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.•Write120-140words.•Writeontheseparateanswerpaperprovided.标准答案：Date:March1,2006From:SusanLee,MarketDevelopmentDepartmentTo:BoardofDirectorsSubject:AnalyticalReportonProfit&Expenditureof2005Asrequested,Ihavesubmittedthisreportabouttheprofitandexpenditureofourcorporationin2005.Graph1revealsthatourtotalprofitof2005isUS$200,000,whichisUS$50,000higherthanthatof2004.Toexpandbusiness,ourinvestmentinestablishingnewenterpriseswasraisedfromUS$80,000in2004toUS$140,000in2005.AndthenewcirculatingfundalsoincreasedfromUS$70,000in2004toUS$150,000in2005.Graph2indicatesa20%increaseintheprofitbyabsorbingforeigninvestmentbecauseofgreatereffortsinthisareaanda5%decreaseintheprofitofdomestictradeenterprisesduetothenationwidedepression.Therearemarkedchangesintheexpenditureof2005.Theprofitretainedwas10%lowerthanthatofthepreviousyearbecausemoremoneywenttoestablishingnewenterprisesandnewcirculatingfundsectors.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第5套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•YouaretheMarketingManagerofacomputersoftwarecompany.Youneedsomeofficefurnitureforanewemployeeinyourdepartment•WriteamemotoEricFordinthePurchasingDepartment:•tellinghimwhatfurnitureyouneedandwhyyouneedit•askinghimtotellyouwhenthefurniturewillarrive•Write40-50words.标准答案：From：MarketingManagerTo：EricFordSubject:NewFurnitureForNewEmployeeAnewemployeewillarriveinafewdays.Pleasebuysomebasicofficefurnitureforhim.Itshouldincludeonesetofcomputerdesk,somenotebooks,clickers.Pleaseinformmeofthetimewhenthefurnitureareready.Thanks.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•Youareresponsibleforplanningthemagazineadvertisingofyourcompany’snewproduct,whichisapolishforcars,Youhavejustreceivedtheletterbelowfromthemagazinethatyouaregoingtoadvertisewith.YouhavealsoreceivedamemofromyourMarketingManagerabouttheadvertisingcampaign.•WritealettertoMr,JohnsonattheMagazine,tellinghimaboutthechangestotheadvertisementbooking,andaskinghimforanyotherinformationthatyourequire.•Write120-140words.DearMs.Beddington,Thankyouforyouradvertisementbooking,thedetailsofwhichIconfirmbelow.NameofCompany.AutocareProductsNameofProduct:SuperglossDetailsofadvert:1/2black&-whiteAdvertwillappearin:June,JulyandAugustissuesofthemagazineCostofadvert:$350foroneissue(3issues=$1050)Discount:5%forearlybookingTotalCost:$997.50Wetrustthatissatisfactory.Yourssincerely,JackEllwoodAdvertisingSalesManagerMEMOTo.CathyBeddingtonFrom:JohnHumphreyRe:NewproductadvertisingTheManagingDirectorhasapprovedanincreaseofbudgetonthiscampaign,sowecangofor:colouradvert,sixissues.Couldyoucontactthemagazineandgetthemtochangethis?Pleasecheckthepriceandthepossibilityofabiggerdiscount.Alsotellthemtogettheproductnameright—Supagloss.Thanks!John标准答案：DearJackEllwood，Your1astemailwaswellreceived.Thanksforyoursteadyeffortsinouradvertisement.However,Istillnoticesomeminormisunderstandingbetweenus：Firstofall，whatwepreferhereisacoloradvert,ratherthanablack-white.Imaymentiontheblack-whiteversion，butthreedaysagomycompanyhaschangedtoacoloradvert，andinformedyoubyemail.Youmaycheckit.Secondly，wewouldliketobookthreemoreissues,forthehotseasonsforpolishingcarsstartinApril.Thus,wewanttoincludeMarch，April，May,June,JulyandAugust,sixissuesintotal.Inthiscase,Iguesswemayhavequiteadifferenttotalcost,Couldyoupleaserecalculateforus?Sincewebookthreemore,couldyougiveusalargerdiscount?Furthermore,ourproductnameisSupagloss,ratherthanSupergloss.Makesureyouputtherightoneintheadvertisement.Thanks!知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第6套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•YouaretheHeadofResearchforaninternationalcarmanufacturer.YouhavetomakeanurgenttriptomorrowtovisitRobertBurton,acolleaguewhoworksforsubsidiary.Writeamemotoyoursecretary:tellingherwhoyouaregoingtoseeandwhen;askinghertobookflightticketsandaccommodation;tellingherwhatworkyouwouldlikeyoursecretarytodoinyourabsence.•Write40-50wordsonyourAnswerSheet.标准答案：TO:JennyLeeSUJECT:MakeArrangementsforaVisitIamgoingtovisitRobertBurton.ourcolleagueintheParissubsidiaryonJuly3rd.Wouldyoupleasebookamorningflightandahotelthereforme?PleaseremembertoanswerphonesanddealwithcorrespondencewhileIamabsent.Thanks.TomRice知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•Youarethemanagerofanofficesuppliescompany.Acolleaguehasreceivedalettercomplainingaboutanorderforofficefurniture.Shehaslefttheletterforyoutoanswerandhaswrittensomenotesonit.•Writea120-140wordreplyusingtheletterbelowandthehandwrittennotes.•Donotincludeaddresses.标准答案：DearMr.ChandlerRe:OrderNoB134620Thankyouforyourletterof25June.Firstofall,Iwouldliketoapologisefortheunsatisfactoryhandlingofyourorder.Deliverieshaveunfortunatelybeendelayedbyseveralweeksduetothetruckdrivers’strike.However,thisdisputehasnowbeensettledand1ampleasedtoinformyouthatwecanreplaceyourtwodamageddesksnextweek.Asfortheinvoice,asanestablishedcustomeryoushouldindeedhavereceiveda10%discount.Ienclosetheamendedinvoiceandtrustthatyouwillacceptafurther2%discountfortheinconveniencecaused.Iwouldliketoassureyouthatfutureorderswillbedealtwithreliablyandefficiently.Yourssincerely知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第7套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、YouaretheCustomerServiceManagerinalargecompany.Youhavebeeninformedthatamemberofyourstaffoftentreatedcustomersimpolitely.Writehimamemoabouttheproblem:sayinghowhebehavedinthepastdescribingthenegativeeffectonthecompanyaskingforatalkabouttheproblem.Write40-50words.MEMOTo:JackieWilsonFrom:CustomerServiceManagerSubject:BadBehaviour标准答案：To:JackieWilsonFrom:CustomerServiceManagerSubject:BadBehaviourMr.Wilson,Ihavebeeninformedthatyoutreatedcustomersimpolitely,andmoreandmorecustomershavemadecomplaints.Youshouldnoticesuchbadbehaviourwouldbringaboutnegativeeffectsonthecompany.Becauseofyourbadbehaviour,customerswillbelostandwewillsuffergreatlosses.Comeandseemetomorrowat2p.m.inmyoffice.Thankyou.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、YouworkintheCustomerServicesDepartmentofaninductioncookercompany.Youhavebeenaskedtoprepareareportforyourdepartmentmanageraboutcustomers’complaints.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.标准答案：ReportonCustomerComplaintsINTRODUCTIONThisreportaimstopresentthereasonsforcustomercomplaintsaboutinductioncookersofourcompanyfromApriltoJunein2012.FINDINGSThenumberofcustomercomplaintswereceivedinAprilwas260.Thenitincreasedto370inMaybecauseoftheplugleakageofsomeproducts.InJune,thisnumberreducedbecauseoftherecallofthosedefectiveproducts.ThereasonsforcomplaintsfromApriltoJunewereanalysedasfollows:Firstly,thecompanyreceivedcomplaintsfordefectiveproducts.ThissituationbecamebetterinJune.Secondly,somestaffhaspoormaintenancetechniques:consideringit,ourcompanyhasplannedtotrainemployeesnextmonth.Finally,customerscomplainforbadmannersofCustomerHotlinestaff.Inordertosolvethisproblem,regularperformanceevaluationshouldbecarriedoutassoonaspossible.CONCLUSIONSAfteranalysingthereasonsfordifferentcustomercomplaints,manymeasureshavebeentakentoimprovecustomers’unsatisfaction.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第8套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、YouareaProjectTeamLeader.Youhavehadtopostponeyournextprojectmeetingbecausesomeofthemembersofyourteamwillbeabroadonbusiness.Writeamemoof40-50wordstoyourprojectteam:informingthemofthepostponingandgivingthereasonstatinganewdateandtimeforthemeetingrequestingsuggestionsfortheagenda.标准答案：MemorandumTo:themembersoftheprojectteamDate:1March2011From:KingClicks,theleaderoftheprojectleaderSubject:postponethenextprojectmeetingIamwritingtoinformyouthatthenextprojectmeetingwillbepostponed.Becauseseveralteammemberswillbeabroadforanotherproject,wewillholdournextmeetingon1August,startingfrom9am.Pleaseletmeknowifyouhaveanysuggestionsastotheagendaofthemeeting.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、—YouworkforJango,akitchenfurnituremanufacturer.JangowantstostartsellinginScotland,andislookingforanagencytohandleitsadvertisingthere.InabusinessdirectoryyouhaveseenanentryfortheadvertisingagencyWestgate&Steyne.—ReadWestgate&Steyne’sentrybelow,onwhichyouhavemadesomenotes.—Then,usingallyournotes,writealettertoMarionWestgateatWestgate&Steyne.—Write120-140words.标准答案：DearMs.Westgate,IamwritingtoaskifyoumightbeinterestedinhandlingouradvertisinginScotland.Weareamanufacturerofluxurykitchenunits,which