高考英语一轮复习+读后续写练习+当老人接到了诈骗电话+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习当老人接到了诈骗电话1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文GrandpaBillRodgershasnarrowlyescapedaphonescam(欺骗).Itallbeganwithatelephonecall.BillisanelderlymanfromCincinnati,Ohio,whowaslookingforwardtospendingtimewithhisfamilyovertheholidays.TheywereallcomingtovisithimathisElmwoodPlacehome,includinghisadultgrandsonDavid.Oneafternoon,whilenappinginbed,hewasawakenedbythesharpringingofhistelephone.4续写原文“Whowillringmeupatthistime?”Hewondered.Peeringtowardsthephone,hehesitantlypickeditup.Fromthereceivercameanurgentvoice.“Grandpa,thisisDavid.Iamintrouble.”BeforeBillcouldaskhimanyquestion,hecontinued,onandoff,halfcrying,“Ihitawoman’scarandshewassevenmonthspregnant.AndtheychargedmewithdrunkendrivingandI’minprison...”Hesobbedloudly.HisvoicewassobrokenthatBillcouldhardlymatchitwiththegentleandwarmvoiceofhisgrandson.PoorDavid!Hemustbesuffering!Billpanicked(惊慌)immediately.5续写原文Withoutmoredetailedcommunication,thephonepassedsuddenlytoanotherperson—David’slawyerwhohadadeepervoice.Seemingly,heunderstoodBill’sanxietyandattemptedtocomforthimwithasolution.“NowtheonlywaytohelpDavidistogotoWal-Martandtransfer$2,300toanotherstore.IwouldpickupthemoneyandthenuseittopostDavid’sbail(保释金).”“IamsureeverythingwouldbeOKaslongasthemoneyisinplace,”headded.Ultimately,heloweredhisvoice,“Don’ttellanybody.Youdon’twanttomakeyourgrandsonlookuglyinyourneighborhood.”ThelawyerhungupevenbeforeBillcouldgiveananswer.6段首句Para1：Billwastotallyataloss.Para2：TheluckypartofBill’sdaywaswhenhesteppedintocashierMary’slineinWal-Mart.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了老人Bill一天突然接到一个电话，电话里称孙子David遇到了麻烦，被指控酒后驾车，现在关在监狱里。律师告诉老人唯一能帮助David的方法就是去沃尔玛把2300美元转到另一家商店，然后用它来交David的保释金。并且嘱咐老人不要把这件事告诉别人。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:Billwastotallyataloss.由第一段首句内容“Bill完全不知所措。”可知，第一段应该描写老人想尽办法救孙子，取了钱去沃尔玛转钱。11续写思路分析Para2：TheluckypartofBill’sdaywaswhenhesteppedintocashierMary’slineinWal-Mart.由第二段首句内容“Bill一天中最幸运的时刻是，他走进了沃尔玛并且遇到了收银员Mary。”可知，第二段应该描写Mary怎样帮助老人识破骗局，使钱财没有损失。12续写素材续写素材取钱——匆忙去转钱——遇到Mary——询问——帮助老人——识破骗局13续写素材续写素材行为类①抓起：grab/catch/snatchup②拒绝：refuse/reject/decline/turndown③泄露：reveal/leakout/letout情绪类①心碎：heartbreaking/heartrending/heart-broken②怀疑：doubtful/skeptical/suspicious/incredulous14续写素材续写素材[高分句型1]NotingBill’sdesperateandanxiouslook,Maryinstantlyknewsomethingwaswrong.(运用了现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)[高分句型2]DavidwassafeandsoundandBillrealizedthathenearlyfellvictimtoaphonescam!(运用了that引导的宾语从句)15Part3范文呈现16范文呈现Billwastotallyataloss.HismindwentblankandDavid’sheartbreakingsobswereechoinginhisears.Withoutasecondthought,hequicklygrabbedhisbankcardanddecidedtosparenoefforttogotoDavid’srescue.Withthecardtightlyinhishand,herushedouttothebank.Afterwithdrawingthemoney,hewentstraighttothelocalWal-Mart.Hewasoverwhelmedbythethought“Sendthemoneyandmygrandsonwillbesaved”.17范文呈现TheluckypartofBill’sdaywaswhenhesteppedintocashierMary’slineinWal-Mart.NotingBill’sdesperateandanxiouslook,Maryinstantlyknewsomethingwaswrong.Yet,havingthelawyer’swordsinmind,Billstubbornlyrefusedtoleakoutanyinformationandinsistedontransferringthemoney.SuddenlyanideahitMary.“Iguessyouareworryingaboutsomebody.Ibetifyoucallhimrightnow,hewillanswerthecall.”shesuggested.Thoughdoubtful,Billpressedthetelephonekeys.Theendingcanbeexpected:DavidwassafeandsoundandBillrealizedthathenearlyfellvictimtoaphonescam!18范文译文比尔完全不知所措。他脑子一片空白，大卫令人心碎的抽泣声在他耳边回响。他毫不犹豫地迅速抓起银行卡，决定不遗余力地去救大卫。他紧紧地握着卡片，冲向银行。取完钱后，他直接去了当地的沃尔玛。他被“把钱寄出去，我孙子就会得救”的想法淹没了。比尔一天中最幸运的部分是，他走进沃尔玛收银员玛丽的队伍。玛丽注意到比尔绝望而焦虑的神情，立刻知道出了什么事。然而，考虑到律师的话，比尔固执地拒绝泄露任何信