高考英语一轮复习+圣诞雨夜的奇迹：安娜、莫莉与胡安的温暖故事+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习圣诞雨夜的奇迹：安娜、莫莉与胡安的温暖故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文MaybethereisaFatherChristmas!AnnastoodanxiouslystaringatthepouringrainwhilelittleMollylookedupataprettydollinthewindowofthetoyshopontheedgeoftown."Mummy,"Mollysaid,"that'sthedollIwouldlikeFatherChristmastobringme."AtearrolleddownAnna'scheekandsheknewitwouldbeimpossiblethisyear.TheyweresupposedtostartanewlifeinSpainoneandahalfyearsagobeforeherhusbandTimwascruellytakenfromthembyacar.TheirsmallamountofsavingswerequicklyspentonTim’sfuneralcostsandnecessities,leavingherinheavydebt.Toherrelief,thelocalpeoplehadhelpedtosupportherthroughthesedifficulttimesandespeciallyJuan,ownerofthelocalgrocerystore,asingleman,whowouldoftenputsomethingspecialintohershoppingbag,eventhoughhehimselfhadbeengoingthroughadifficultperiod—hismotherdiedofcancerandhewasbusyhandlingthesaleofhismother’shouseontheedgeoftown.4续写原文Astherainstopped,AnnaandMollystartedwalkinghome.ShewasthinkingaboutbuyinganumbrellaafterpayingtherentwithherupcomingwagewhenMollyshoutedexcitedly,"Mummy,what’sthatontheroad?"Annalookeddownandsawabaglyinginthewater,whichwasobviouslylostbecauseofthesuddenrain.TheygothomeanddriedthemselvesbeforeAnnafocusedonthebag.Openingitandseeingbundlesofmoneyinside,shestoodbackinshockandcried,"Isthisapresentfromkindness?Icanpayoffmydebt,buyMolly’sfavoritedollandmynewumbrella...”Thenrealitysetin,Annawasaverymoralpersonandwouldneverstealeventheslightestlittlething,letalonebundlesofmoney.Shewenttobedwithallthoughtsinhermind.5段首句Para1：Earlynextmorning,Annaheadedwhereshedecidedtogo.Para2：Atsupper,Annahadanunexpectedvisitor—Juanwithgiftboxesinhishands.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公安娜和她小女儿莫莉生活得很艰苦，但是当地人尤其是当地杂货店的老板胡安经常帮助她们，在一个圣诞雨夜，安娜看到路上的一大笔钱犹豫过后还是将其交给警察，后来发现钱是胡安的，后来胡安作为报答给小莫莉一个洋娃娃的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1:Earlynextmorning,Annaheadedwhereshedecidedtogo.由第一段首句内容“第二天一早，安娜去了她想去的地方。”可知，第一段可描写安娜将钱交给警察。10续写思路分析Para2：Atsupper,Annahadanunexpectedvisitor—Juanwithgiftboxesinhishands.由第二段首句内容“晚餐时，安娜遇到了一位不速之客——胡安，手里拿着礼品盒。”可知，第二段可描写钱的主人报答安娜。11续写素材续写素材交给警察——舒心——感谢——送礼——感悟12续写素材续写素材行为类①.弄清楚：figure/findout/makesense②.记录下来：keptnoteof/writedown/goonrecord情绪类①.感谢：Thankfor/showone’sappreciation/showone’sgratitude/begrateful②.高度称赞：thinkhighlyof/givehighpraiseof13续写素材续写素材[高分句型1]Afterfiguringoutwhathadhappened,thepolicemenkeptnoteofherinformationandthoughthighlyofher.这句话运用了宾语从句。[高分句型2].Steppingoutofthestation,Annafeltafreshbreezeonherface,makingherrelievedandcomfortable.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。[高分句型3]Thatmorning,becauseofthesuddenrain,hewassohurriedtogetonthetaxithathelosthisbag.这句话运用了so…that引导的结果状语从句。14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Annawalkeddirectlytothepolicestation.Afterfiguringoutwhathadhappened,thepolicemenkeptnoteofherinformationandthoughthighlyofher.Shefeltalittleshyandsaid,“Thehugemoneywouldbeagreathelpformetogetthroughthedifficulties,buttheownerwouldgetintogreattrouble,instead.”Steppingoutofthestation,Annafeltafreshbreezeonherface,makingherrelievedandcomfortable.16范文呈现SeeingAnna'ssurprisedlook,Juantoldherthathewastheownerofthebagandhecametoshowhisthanks.Thatmorning,becauseofthesuddenrain,hewassohurriedtogetonthetaxithathelosthisbag."Thankyousomuchforyourhelp."JuansaidtoAnnaandthenturnedtoMolly,handinghertheboxes"Hereyouare,littlegirl."Afteropeningtheboxes,Mollycriedwithgreatjoy,"Mom,look!Hereitis!ThedollFatherChristmasbringsme!"Lookingatherhappydaughter,Annasmiled,murmuring"MaybethereisaFatherChristmas!"17范文译文安娜直接走到警察局。在弄清楚发生了什么事后，警察们记下了她的信息，并对她评价很高。她有点害羞，说：“这笔巨款对我度过难关有很大的帮助，但店主反而会惹上大麻烦。”走出车站，安娜感到一阵清新的微风拂过她的脸，让她松了一口气，也很舒服。看到安娜惊讶的表情，胡安告诉她，他是包的主人，他来表示感谢。那天早上，因为突然下雨，他匆匆忙忙地上了出