高考英语复习读后续写练习+春日的危机：David的英雄时刻+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习春日的危机：David的英雄时刻1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Itwasawarmspringmorning.Five-year-oldMarywasridingonaswing

(秋千)outsidetheyard.Whenswinging,Marywasangrilythinkingabouthereleven-year-oldbrother,David.“Howcouldhebesomean?”sheaskedherself,rememberinghowDavidhadmadeafaceandcalledhera“bigbaby”atthebreakfasttable.

Theswingcarriedherupsohighthatshecouldseeformiles.Mary’sredsweaterflashedbrightlyinthemorningsunlight.

Shethenstoppedthinkingaboutherbrotherandstartedtosingaswingingsong.4续写原文Onadistanthillbehindtheswing,ahugebull

(公牛)withlong,sharphorns

(角)watchedtheredsweaterswingingbackandforthinthesunlight.Thebullhadbrokenoutofhisranch

(牧场).Itbecameangryandreadytoattackanythingthatwasmoving.

Itmadedeepsounds.Thenitlowereditsbigheadandbeganrunningacrossthefieldtowardtheredsweater.Meanwhile,Davidwasintheyard,feedingthechickens.Helookedoutandsawhislittlesisterontheswing.Thensuddenlyhesawthebullrunningacrossthefield,headingstraightforhissister.KnowingMarywasindanger,Davidshouted,“Lookoutbehindyou,Mary!Getofftheswing!Run!”Marydidn’thearhim;shejustkeptsingingandswinging.ThebullwashalfwayacrossthefieldandapproachingMaryquickly.David’sheartbeatquickly.Hemustdosomethingnoworhehadnochance.5段首句Para1：Davidranacrossthechickenyard,rushingtowardhissister.

Para2：Seeingthis,DavidimmediatelypulledMary’sredsweateroff.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8一个春日的早晨，Mary在院子外面荡秋千，她想起哥哥在饭桌上对她做鬼脸，叫她“大宝贝”，很不开心，于是，她决定不理哥哥。Mary当时穿着红毛衣在快乐地荡秋千，突然，Mary的身后出现了一只狂奔的公牛，想要袭击她，她的哥哥David大叫，让Mary快点跑，可是Mary没有听到哥哥的话，眼看公牛离Mary越来越近，哥哥David决定设法救Mary。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Davidranacrossthechickenyard,rushingtowardhissister.

由续文第一段首句“David跑过鸡场，向妹妹奔去。”可知，在这一段中，应重点描写David救Mary的情景。可以运用一系列的动作描写，将David奋不顾身救妹妹的场景形象地刻画出来，并且根据续文第二段首句可知，当时他们并未真正脱险，可以适当描写他们当时面对公牛的心情和以及公牛的状态，自然过渡到续文第二段。10续写思路分析Para2：Seeingthis,DavidimmediatelypulledMary’sredsweateroff.由续文第二段首句“看到这里，大卫立即脱下玛丽的红毛衣。”可知，David意识到吸引公牛的是妹妹的红毛衣，于是立刻脱下妹妹的红毛衣，将它扔掉，那么扔掉以后公牛还继续追击他们吗？公牛是怎么对待红毛衣的呢？他们成功脱险后，妹妹对哥哥的态度是否发生变化了呢？本段可就以上问题展开详细叙述。续文结尾可描写妹妹获救后，对“大宝贝”这个称呼的看法。11续写思路分析续写线索David在紧急情况下的英勇行为，以及故事的春日背景和关键时刻。12续写素材续写素材1.letout

发出（叫声等）2.sibling

n.

兄弟姐妹3.launch

vt.

发动；发起4.tearsth.intopieces

把某物撕成碎片13续写素材续写素材1.

Catchingoneoftheropes,

Davidmadetheswingstop,

pullinghissistersidewaystotheground

onlyasecondbeforetheangrybullattackedtheplace

whereMaryhadbeen.（动词-ing形式短语作时间状语；where引导定语从句）David抓住其中一根绳子，让秋千停了下来，就在愤怒的公牛攻击Mary所在位置的前一秒，他从侧面把妹妹拉到了地上。2.Fromthatdayon,MaryjustlaughedeverytimeDavidcalledhera“bigbaby”.（everytime引导时间状语从句）从那天起，每次David叫Mary“大宝贝”时，她都会笑起来。14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Davidranacrossthechickenyard,rushingtowardhissister.

Heranfasterthanhehadeverrunbefore.Catchingoneoftheropes,Davidmadetheswingstop,pullinghissistersidewaystothegroundonlyasecondbeforetheangrybullattackedtheplacewhereMaryhadbeen.

Realizingthedanger,Mary

letout

ayell

ofterror.Thebullstopped,stillmakingdeepsounds.Thenitfacedthe

siblings

andlowereditsheadto

launch

anotherattack.16范文呈现Seeingthis,DavidimmediatelypulledMary’sredsweateroff.

Thenhethrewthesweaterasfarawayashecould.Thebullfollowedit,insteadofcontinuingrunningtowardsthem.Soon,thebull

toretheredsweaterintopieces.Meanwhile,Davidhalfpulledandhalfcarriedhisfrightenedsistertosafety.AfterMarycalmeddown,shethankedherbigbrotherforrescuingher.Fromthatdayon,MaryjustlaughedeverytimeDavidcalledhera“bigbaby”.17范文译文大卫跑过养鸡场，冲向妹妹。他跑得比以前任何时候都快。大卫抓住一根绳子，把秋千停了下来，就在愤怒的公牛袭击玛丽之前的一秒钟，他把妹妹从侧面拉到了地上。玛丽意识到危险，吓得大叫了一声。公牛停了下来，仍然发出低沉的声音。然后，它面对着兄弟姐妹，低头发动了另一次攻击。看到这一幕，大卫立刻把玛丽的红色毛衣脱了下来。然后他把毛衣扔得尽可能远