高三英语基础写作：读后续写低分+课件

审题：Para.1：写作背景+目的读后续写16分偏低，我非常困惑，向老师寻求帮助解惑Para.2:说明问题和理由读后续写给的分数偏低，我不认可，阐释理由说明作文应该不止16分的原因(作文做得好的方面)Para.3:寻求老师的建议+结束语老师指出为何是16分且给出修改建议Para.1对......很困惑beconfused/bewilderedaboutbeatalossastateofbewildermentthrowmeintototalconfusion/bewilderment出乎意料against/

contrarytomyexpectationsbelowmyexpectations

如何表示礼貌withallduerespectterriblysorrytobotheryouPara.2说明问题并给出理由1)我投入了很多时间和精力，我读后续写分数很稳定

invest/pouralotoftimeandeffortintomycontinuationwriting

dedicateasignificantamountoftimeandefforttosth.

maintainthescoreat202)主题与原文/范文主题一致

beconsistentwith

beinlinewith

bealignedwiththethemeconveyedinmodelessays/samples3)书写neatandtidy

beautifymyhandwring

incorrespondencewiththecriteria4)语法错误和拼写错误

grammaticalandspellingmistakes5)高级词汇和丰富多样的句式

advancedwordsandvarioussentencepatternsapply/adopt/polishmakeitmorereadable6)文本/情节的连贯性/合理性/逻辑性

arrangethecontent/plotproperlyandlogicallytomakeitcoherentdetailedandlogicdescriptionoftheplottomakeitalignedwith...7)文本理解透彻到位

haveathoroughunderstandingoftheoriginaltextgetabetter/deepinsightintotheassignedtextDearMr.Davis,

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.Iamwritingtoexpressmyconcern

regarding/concerning/withregardtothescoreIreceivedforthecontinuationwritingexercisewehadlastweek.Myscorewas16outof25,whichIbelieveislowerthanwhatIexpected.

Inpreparingfortheexercise,Idedicatedasignificantamountoftimeandefforttoensureathoroughunderstandingof

theassignedreading/theoriginaltext.Whenwritingthepassage,notonlydidIuseappropriatevocabularyandgrammar,butalsoImaintainedcohesivestorytelling.However,myscorewasunexpectedlylow.WhatconfusesmeevenmoreisthatIusuallyreceivehigherscoresinwritingtasks,whichmakesmewonderwhatissuesmightbepresentinmywriting.

Iwouldbegreatlyappreciativeofyourguidanceandfeed