外研版高中英语选择性必修第一册Unit2 Part4 Writing练习含答案

Unit2OnwardsandupwardsPart4Writing写一次经历写作题目假定你是李华,曾经在一所聋哑学校做过助教,请根据以下要点用英文写一篇关于你的助教经历的文章。1.一位对生活失去信心的失聪女孩Jean在你的帮助下重拾生活信心;2.当时你遇到的最大困难是沟通障碍;3.你是如何克服困难的?你从中学到了什么?注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

思路点拨遣词造句Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空1.adj.难堪的,尴尬的

2.adj.令人愉快的,讨人喜欢的

3.n.友谊;友好交往

4.adj.心烦意乱的,烦恼的

5.adv.然而,不过

6.v.锲而不舍,坚持不懈

答案1.panionship4.upset5.nevertheless6.persevereⅡ.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子第一部分:概述助教经历(1)Onthewhole,helpingJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlifeis(一次愉快的经历).

第二部分:遇到的困难及解决办法(2)Thebiggestdifficulty(我面对的)wasthecommunicationbarriers.

(3)First,Iadvisedherto(鼓起勇气)toconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadof(逃避它们).

(4)Furthermore,Imadeeveryeffortto(建立友谊及互相的信任)withher.

(5)Eventually,whatmatteredmostwasto(坚持我正在做的事情).

第三部分:你的收获(6)WhatIgetfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreally(有助于我们的成功).

答案(1)adelightfulexperience(2)thatIfaced(3)gathercourage;escapingfromthem(4)establishcompanionshipandmutualtrust(5)persevereinwhatIwasdoing(6)contributetooursuccess2.句式升级(7)用it作形式主语改写句(1)

(8)将句(2)改为强调句

答案(7)Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.(8)ItwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultythatIfaced.连句成篇Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.Frommymemory,whenwefirstmet,shewasalwaysupset,whichmademeembarrassed.Meanwhile,itwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultythatIfaced.Nevertheless,Imadeit.First,Iadvisedhertogathercouragetoconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadofescapingfromthem.Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttoestablishcompanionshipandmutualtrustwithher.Eventually,whatmatteredmostwastopersevereinwhatIwasdoing.WhatIgetfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreallycontributetooursuccessandthateveryoneshouldbeconfidentaboutlife.写作积累开头:简要叙述发生的事情1.Asscheduled,the...tookplaceat...in...,lasting2hours.按计划,……于……(时间)在……(地点)举行,历时两个小时。2.OnceIwasinvitedto...butwhathappenedlatermademefeel...有一次我被邀请去……但后来发生的事让我觉得……主体:事件过程1.AtfirstIthought...butitturnedouttobe...whichmademefeel...起初我以为……但结果是……这让我觉得……2.OnlywhenIwastoldthat...didIbegintorealizewhatasillymistakeIhadmade.只有当我被告知……时我才开始意识到我犯了一个多么愚蠢的错误。结尾:事件结果1.Throughthismeaningful...activity,welearnedsomethingthatcantbelearnedinclass.通过这次有意义的……活动,我们学到了在课堂上学不到的东西。2.Theactivitymadeushaveabetterunderstandingofthemeaningof...这次活动让我们更好地了解……的意义。实战演练答案见P122

假设你是Tom,请根据以下提示讲述你和父亲一起爬山的经历。1.去年暑假我和父亲早晨出发去爬山;2.在半路上,下起雨来,我们全身被淋湿了,又冷又累;3.我开始抱怨,想要放弃;4.父亲给予我鼓励和温暖;5.最终我们成功到达山顶,欣赏了美景。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

答案与分层梯度式解析Unit2OnwardsandupwardsPart4Writing实战演练Onepossibleversion:IstillrememberthedaywhenIwentclimbingwithmyfatherinthelastsummervacation.Wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Unluckily,itbegantorainonthehalfway.Igotwetallthrough,feelingcoldandtired.SoIcouldnthelpcomplainingandwantedtogiveup.Justatthattime,myfatherencouragedmenottogiveupandputhiscoatonmesoftly.Hetoldme,“Wewontseethebeautifulsceneryunlesswereachthetop.”Hiswordsreallycheeredmeup.WegottothetopatlastandenjoyedthebeautyofnaturethatIhadneverseen.1.重点词汇①setoff出发②onthehalfway在半路上③canthelpdoingsth.禁不住做某事④complainv.抱怨⑤giveup放弃⑥cheersb.up激励某人,使某人振作起来2.亮点句型①IstillrememberthedaywhenIwentclimbingwithmyfatherinthelastsummervacation.(when引导定语从句,修饰先行词theday)我还记得去年暑假我和父亲去爬山的那一天。