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名人类例子1泰森+希特勒2安德鲁.卡内基3水门事件4综合罗斯福+伽利略Cansuccessbedisastrous?

Weoftenregardsuccessastheaccomplishmentofourgoals.It’shonorablethatpeoplehavesomethingsuccessful.However,successshouldnotstoppeoplefrommovingontopursuehighergoals,norshoulditgrantprivilegestosuccessorstointerferewithotherpeople’swell-being.Intheformersituation,weconsideritadisastertoindividual;thelatter,wesayitisthedisasterofthehumanbeing.（很不错的论点，回答了问题，同时回答了howcansuccessbedisastrous）Theexamplesthatsuccesspreventedpeoplefrommovingforwardaresufficientinhistory.TakeTyson,thesuccessfulboxer,asanexample.Tysonusedtobealittleboylivinginpoverty.Hefoughtwithhisfiststofinallywinbackfameandmoney.Wesaythatasaboxer,hewasverysuccessful.

However,successdidn’tstimulatehimtopursuehighergoals;Contrarily,hetookadvantageofhissuccessbydrinking,speeding,andfightingonthestreet.Forthesebehaviors,hepaidthebillofhisarrogance.Hewenttojailforseveraltimeswhichdirectlyledtothedownfallinhiscareer.Itwasclearthatsuccessalmostruinedhislife.Thoughusedtobeasuccessfulboxer,Tysonwasmorementionedasadisastrousperson.

细节补充泰森出身布鲁克林（黑人区），拳脚功夫了得，不到20岁时，参加WBC重量级拳王比赛WBCheavyweightchampion，不到6分钟击倒前拳王knockout，20岁出头就获得了三大拳击组织的重量级拳王金腰带。但是太早太容易的成功让他开始迷失自我。他酗酒，打架，强奸妇女（rape），一直进出监狱。职业生涯开始走下坡路，只能靠击败一些较弱的选手来维持生计。(keephisbodyandsoultogether)议论Clearly,tooeasyandtooquicksuccessofTysonsetastageforhisfuturesuccessivefailuresforthereasonthathewassoobsessedwithhisprevioustriumphthathecouldnotlookintothefuture.Therefore,successcanbedisastrousforindividualsthemselveswhentheyviewtheirsuccessasafinalstep.ThoughTyson’ssuccessbroughtdisastrouseffecttohislife,luckily,thedisasterhardlypreventedotherpeoplefromtheirownpursuitofhappiness.However,ifsuccessaccidentlylaytothosewhotendtouseitasamethodofsatisfyingpersonalambitionattheriskofotherpeople’swell-being——thepublic,unfortunately,hastofootthebilloftheirabuseofsuccess.

TakeHitlerasanexample.StillasoldierinWorldWar1,Hitlerbecame,throughhiseffort(wehavetoadmitthatheachievedsuccessbyhisownendeavordespitealltheuglymethodheused),theleaderofNazi.WiththesovereignpoweroftheGermanmilitaryforce,Hitlerbegantouseitasamethodtofulfillhisambition,whichdirectlyledtothemostdisastrouseventinhumanhistory—theWorldWar2.

Inthisdisasterofthemankind,millionsandmillionsofpeopledied,husbandsandwiveswereforcedtoseparateforever,childrenweredeprivedtherightstoevenhaveafamily.IattributethiscatastropheofhumilitytoHitler,thepersonwhoabusedhissuccesstobringadisastertothewholemankind.还是细节不够的问题，希特勒的成功---一战期间服役，然后建立了纳粹党Nazi，大萧条时期时纳粹乘机发展了起来，44岁成了德国总理，镇压反对派力量，但是由于他能言善辩eloquent，鼓动性l，并且使德国经济得到了发展，失业人数减少，民众真心拥护。但是这样的顶峰给了他的野心wildambition以出头的机会，他开始了导致二次世界大战的对外扩张之路externalexpansion，很快占领了欧洲的大部分地区，但是在当政期间建立了集中营concentrationcamp(warcriminals)，实行了史无前例的种族灭绝genocide，屠杀holocaust犹太人600万之多，并且使3500万人生灵涂炭。同时自己最后自杀身亡议论ItisobviousthatafterreachingthepersonalpeakinGermany,Hitler’sincreasingaggressioneventuallyresultedinthedisastrousholocaustofmillionsofinnocentpeopleaswellashisownsuicidal.Therefore,successcanbedevastatingtothewholesocietyifcapturedandmisusedbysomeover-greedypeopletorealizetheirevilgoal.结尾段Successisn’tnecessarilydisastrous;actually,itismeanttobringrejoicetopeople.Butifsuccessisabused,itcaneasilybedisastrous,eithertothepersonwhousesit,ortothemankindwhosuffersit.安德鲁卡内基

Cansomethingunsuccessfulturnintogoodthings?论点AndrewCarnegie,calledthekingofsteel,becameoneofthemostrenownedentrepreneursafterknockingpovertyout.IllustrationAttheageof13,heemigratedfromScotlandtoAmericawithhispoorfamily,carryingwiththemnothingbutanAmericandream.Unfortunately,hebeganto,fromthenon,leadapainstakinglifeinatinysmallapartmentsharedwithotheremigrants.DuringhisfirstfewyearsinAmerica,heworkedtemporarilyforonefactoryafteranotherinordertoearnaliving.Itappearedthatextremepovertydeprivedhimofalltherightsthathispeerspossessed,suchasgoingtoschool,buyingcomicbooksandwearingniceclothes.

Tosomeextent,wehadtoadmitthathereallyunderwentsomeunsuccessfultime,resultingmainlyfrompenury.

（承上启下）

Butratherthangivinghimselfuptohardtime,hegraduallygotmaturedfromvariousdifficulties,strengthenedhiswillandsharpenedhiswits.HepersistedinattendingnightschoolsandpayinggreatattentiontothebusinessworldwhentheCivilWarhappened,whichprovedtobehisturningpoint.Inthisperiod,hedetectedthegreatpotentialofsteelindustry,resolutelyboughtapatentofsteelandbuilthisowncompany---TheCarnegieSteelCompany,with20thousandemployeesworkinginit.Relyingonexperienceandenlightenmentgainedinhisarduouschildhood,hesteadilydevelopedthiscompanyintothelargestoneintheearly20thcenturywithaprofitof40millionperyear.Undoubtedly,heachievedhisownsuccessasabusinessman.

Buthissuccessbenefitednotonlyhimselfbutmoreimportantlythepublic.Afterretiring,withthefortunehemadefrombusiness,heturnedtophilanthropyandinterestsineducation,foundingtheCarnegieCorporationofNewYork,CarnegieEndowmentforInternationalPeace,andCarnegieMellonUniversityinPittsburgh.Explanation(例子+观点)TheexampleofAndrewCarnegieshowsusthatonecanturnsomethingunsuccessful,suchaspoverty,intogreatpersonalsuccessandcontributionstothesocietyaslongashecouldgrowupfromtheobstaclesandkeepacourageousheart.（水门事件）Candeception-pretendingthatsomethingistruewhenitisnot-sometimeshavegoodresults?欺骗：没做；调查结果：司法紊乱+被迫辞职开头段

Deception,thoughmayresultintemporarybenefits,willbringaboutnegativeeffectstootherpeopleinthelongrunwhenthetruthfinallycomeout.TheWatergateScandalandmyexperiencecanfullydemonstratemypoint.Inordertochasethefame,wealthandpower,somepeoplearelikelytousesomelies,whichwill,hence,causedamagetohimselfaswellasthepublic.TheWatergateScandalwasatypicaleventinstigatedbyRichardNixon,theformerpresidentoftheUnitedStates.(P)

In1972,hewasthecandidatewhorepresentedtheRepublicanPartyinthepresidentialelection.InordertogetthecampaigninformationoftheDemocraticParty,fivemembersoftheRepublicanPartysneakedintotheWatergateBuilding,theheadquarteroftheiropponent.Theytookphotosofthedocumentsandbuggedtheirofficeandwere,unfortunately,arrestedatonce.

Atthattime,manypeoplesuspectedNixonofcommittingthisincident,buthestoodout,liedtotheAmericanpublicthathehadnotgetinvolvedinitandpromisedthathewouldcompletelyinvestigatethisscandalifhebecamethepresident.

（具体谎言）

Hisconvincingwordsfinallywonthetrustandvotesofthepeopleandlaterbecamethepresident.However,deception,nomatterhowperfectitmightappear,wouldgetuncoveredoneday.

Afterthepresidentialelection,aserialofinvestigationsontheWatergateincident,carriedforwardbyaspecialprosecutor,soonexpandedacrossthecountryandgraduallydisclosedtheirrefutablerelationshipbetweenthescandalandNixon.Consequently,in1973,afraidoflosinghisposition,Nixonrefusedtohandintherecordingsregardingthedialogbetweenfivedefendantsandhimself.

Tomakeitworse,heevendismissedthespecialprosecutorandtheattorneygeneralinanattempttoconcealthefact.

Atthattime,thewholenationgotannoyedathisacts.Laterthatyear,theCongresscollectedenoughevidencetochargeNixon,whichledtohisresignation.（结果）议论

Lookingbacktoit,wemayseeclearlythathaditnotbeenforthatlie,theAmericanlawsystemwouldnothaveundergonesuchadisordertimeandthepublicwouldnothavegothurtbytheirownchoice.Therefore,wecanseethatwhiledeceptionsdobringtemporaryinterests,itwouldexertadverseeffectonusinthelongterm.综合名人例子Docloseddoorsmakeuscreative?罗斯福Roosevelt’screativityinhiseconomicpolicyintheGreatDepressionisanotherexample.

On29thOct1929,AmericaexperiencedaBlackTuesdaywhichmarkedthebeginningofthenearlyfive-year-longfinancialcrisis,theGreatDepression.Stockmarketscrashed,currenciesdepreciated,employeesgotfiredandthewholecountrywasatitslastgasp.Manyexpertsclaimed“Theendoftheworldhascome!”Almosteveryonelosthopeandbelievedthecrisiscouldhardlybemitigated.（背景）

Atthismoment,FranklinRooseveltcameintopower.HehadtheresponsibilitytohealthewholeAmericaandeventhewholeworld.Insteadoffeelinghopeless,hedevotedhimselftocomingupwithauthenticpoliciesandputoutsomevalideconomics,suchasdepreciatingthevalueofAmericancurrencytoattractexports,startinggreatpublicconstructionslikedamstoprovidepeoplewithjobsandsustenanceandburninglargeareasofcropstoimprovefarmers’income.（具体阐述创造力）为什么困境能让人有创造力

Rooseveltcouldnolongeractaccordingtorulesorpoliciesthathadbeenprovedinappropriateorevendetrimentaltothepublic;therefore,hehadnowaybuttochangeandtobringinnewideastosavethecountry.WhatdidRooseveltdoafterhebecamethepresidentin1932?Ingeneralbelievedthefederalgovernmenthadthechiefresponsibilityoffightingthedepression.Congressthenpassedaseriesofimportantlawstoprovidereliefforvictimsofthedepression.Inspecific

1createdFederalEmergencyReliefAdministrationtogivethestatesmoneyfortheunemployed2gaveourcashforfood,clothingandshelter3TheCivilianConservationCorpshiredthousandsofyoungmenforsuchconservationprojectssuchasplanting,controllingfloodsandimprovingnationalparks.

4TennesseeValleyAuthority,agiantpublicpowerprojectinthevalleyoftheTennesseeRiver,notonlycontrolledfloodsbutalsoprovidedcheaperelectricityforresidents.5increasedtradebyloweringtariffsoncertainimportedgoods6enactedNationalLaborRelations,whichguaranteedworkerstherighttoorganizeunion,andtheSocialSecurityAct,whichprovidedpensionsforretiredworkersandinsuranceforthejobless

Ingeneral,Roosevelt’snewpoliciescreatedanewageofgovernment’sinterferenceinnationaleconomy.Afterfiveyears’ofeffort,America’sfinancialconditioneventuallywarmedupwhichprovedRoosevelt’screativepoliciescorrect.（好的结果）议论

HadtherenotbeentheGreatDepression,PresidentRooseveltoranyotherpresidentwouldneverhavethoughtofinvolvinggovernment’spowerintoAmerica’sdevelopmentofeconomy.Isn’titanothervividexampleinwhich“closeddoors”leadstocreativity?挑战权威

AnotherstoryofGalileoisalsoaverytypicalonetoexplaintheimportanceofchallengingtheauthority.

ItisknowntousallthatAristotleisagreatphilosopherinancientGreeceandiswidelyregardedasthemosteruditemindsofar.Histheories,asaresult,arefirmlybelievedbyalmosteveryoneintheMiddleAge.(塑造权威)

However,Galileo,anobscurephysicistatthattime,foundoneofAristotle’stheoriesthatthevelocitiesoftwofallingweightsareproportionaltotheirweightsincorrectthroughhisthousandsofexperiments.（为什么挑战）

HefinallydecidedtoshowhisresearchresultsbydoinganexperimentontheLeaningTowerofPisainfrontofthepublic,whichlaterturnedouttobeablockbusterinthefieldofphysics.

Galileodroppedtwosteelballsofdifferentweightstothegroundandeverybodypresentwitnessedthehistoricmomentthatthetwoballsreachedthegroundatexactlythesametime.（怎么挑战）

Galileo’sexperimentsanddiscoveriesviolentlychallengedthatofAristotleandstartedarevolutionarydebateamongscientists.Moreimportantly,hecorrectedthousandsofpeople’swrongbeliefsandcontributedalottothemodernphysics.（挑战的结果）议论HadGalileoneverchallengedtheauthority,wewouldn’thavebeenabletoseethetruthoratleastwewouldhavebeenfooledforanotherhundredsofyearsbeforeanotherGalileowasborn.Fromtheexamplesshownabove,wecanconfidentlydrawtheconclusionthatthereisnecessityforustochallengetheauthoritywhenwefindtheresultswegetafterinnumerableexperimentsareagainsttheauthority’slongheldtheories.挑战权威2办杂志---受到教务主任挑战---继续坚持—成功---受欢迎开头段Icannotagreewiththesayingmore,foramajorityofpeople,includingtheauthorities,arelikelytomakeinappropriatedecisions.Thusconfrontedwithunreasonableremarkagainstus,wearesupposedtoholdontoourownwayofdoingthings.NextIwilltaketheexampleofmyselftoprovemypoint.

Itwasour(the)secondsemesterofourfreshmanyearatSZHS,justaftertheawfulmid-termexamination,thatourseniorsreached(calledon)ustocommitatoughtask,launchamagazineofourschoolonourown.Icanstillremembereverything

happenedin

thatrainyafternoonexactly.Insideaduskyclassroomwerethreeadmirableseniors,Rena,EvanandTracy,(whodidagreatjobbothatstudyandonourschool'ssocietyaffairs).Cutafigurebothintheirstudyandvariousacitivies

1Theyexplainedtheirintentiontolaunchamagazineofstudents'own.Theyconsideredthatwe,SZHSstudents,shouldnotonlyfocusonstudybutalsoconcernwhathappensatschoolandwhatsocietyactivitiestheycanenjoy.Fromthisperspective,theymeanttohaveamagazineasamediatoshowourschoolmatesourmarvellousactivitiesandenrichtheirafter-classlife.Notonlyforbeinghappywiththecontributionwecandoforourschool,butalsofortheexcitingchallengesandbrandnewworkwewillface,wetookonthechallengingmission修改版1Wetalkedhappilyforalmosttwohours,duringwhichourpredecessorsexpressedtheirgeneralideaaboutagenuineschoolmagazine,namely,ofthestudents,bythestudents,forthestudents.Thencomesourbigproblem:howtocarryoutthisbelief?

2Foryears,thepublicationsofseniorhighschoolshavebeenfocusingmoreonthepoliticalandacademiclifeofstudents,reportingasessionafteraseminarforonething,andnumerouslearningexperiencegivenbystudentsonthehonorrollforanother.

Butthiskindofnewspapertotallyneglectedtherealinterestofthestudents,whoweregraduallydivertingmoreoftheirattentionfromsimplygradetomoremeaningfulthings---variousassociationsandvoluntarilyjobstoimprovetheiroverallcompetitiveness.3Thusduringthepreparationofthismagazine,wereachedataconclusionthatwewouldconcentratemoreonthesocietiesintheschool,socialactivitiesandtraininginformation.Thefirststepistocontacttheheadsofseveralsuitablesocieties,beginningwithaveryfamoussinginggroup:__singlebed___.Aftercommunicatingwiththedirectorinacasualandpleasantwayfor1hour,webegantotakephotographsofthemembers,playingavarietyofmusicalinstrument.

ThesecondstepwastofollowthemembersoftheModelUnitedNationstofurtherknowtheprocessofthiscontest,soastoexhibitthecharmofthiscompetitionaswellastheplayersinanall-roundway.Thefinalstepwastogetaccesstosomenotabletrainingschoolsfamiliarwiththedetailofgoingabroad.Undoubtedly,wegaveprioritytoNewOrientalSchool.Onemonthpassedandthenthefinalworkturnedup,withvividpicturesofthesinginggroup,comprehensivereportsaboutthecontestaswellaswiseguidanceonTOEFLandSAT.Thuswhenweenteredtheofficeof____,wewereexpectingpraiseandflowersfromtheschoolauthority.However,toourastonishment,theDeanofofficescoldedusindifferently.

"Youcallthisamagazine?Whatthehellitis?It'ssocolorfulthatalmostmademedizzy!Wewon'twasteourschool'sfundonsucha"picturealbum"",hecensured.Weweresurprisedathiscriticism.Wetriedtocontrolouremotionandexplainedthatwemeanttoshowthesprightlylifeofstudents,andwedeemthatitwillfavorthestudents.Itisapparentthatourexplanationwasuselesssincehejustsmokeandignoreourexistence.Feelingshocked,noneofusutteredaworddirectlyafterleavinghisoffice.Butsoon,Irealizedwhathappened,“Heisoutofreason.Hisideaofrigidlystickingtothetraditionisbehindthetimes.”Thenanotheroneadded,“Kevinisright.Weareright.Let’shaveatry.Wearesupposedtoholdontotheneweditionforthisistheonethatwillreallyinterestthestudents.”Eventually,despitegreatresistance,abrandnewmagazine,showingtherealneedsofthestudents,enterednearlyeverydorm.Likewhatwehaveexpectedbefore,thismagazinedistinguisheditselffromotherschoolpublications,whichwerethrownintothegarbagebinbeforereading,byitsuniqueperspectiveandinvitingcontent.Morethanthat,wereceivedanumberofencouraginglettersapplaudingusforputtingourselvesintotheirshoes.结论

Therefore,challengingtheschoolauthority,whotakeforgrantedsomeout-datedthoughts,countsforthedevelopmentoforiginalandvaluableideas.总结1中间段一个例子（字数300-400字）2观点尽量选一个，结构总分总。3中间段主要是人物类:个人+名人关键：1）对准题目描述细节2）细节最好是真的细节3）细节间的顺序把握好。4）一段细节可以给出承上启下句。5）议论主要两句话。满分范文（学术类，两面性）Ismemoryahelporahindranceinhelpingyoulearnfromthepastandsucceedinthefuture?1）有好的---2）有不好---一个例子之学术篇Memoriesactasbothahelpandahindrancetothesuccessofsomeone.Manypeopleadviseyoutolearnfromthepastandapplythosememoriessothatyoucaneffectivelysucceedbyavoidingrepeatingyourpastmistakes.Ontheotherhand,peoplewhogettoocaughtupwiththepastareunabletomoveontothefuture.

ElieWiesel‘smemoirNightperfectlyexemplifiesthedoublenatureofmemories.

Wiesel,aJewishman,sufferedheavilythroughouttheHolocaustandNightisrifewithhorrificdescriptionsofhisexperience.Thesememorieshelptospreadtheviewofwhatlifewaslike.（记忆）Throughrecountingthesememories,Wieselisabletoeducateworldreadersabouttheatrocitiescommittedinhopesthatthesameblatantviolationsofhumanrightsareneverrepeatedagain.（好处一）ThroughrelivingtheHolocaustthroughhiswriting,Wieselwasinspiredtobecomeproactiveinthebattleforcivilrights.(好处二)Somewouldpointtohispeacefulactionsandthesalesofhisbookandlabelhimasuccess.（好处三）Despitetheimportanceofrecountingsuchmemories,Wieselacknowledgesthedamagethatmemoriescanalsocause.（承上启下）FollowinghisliberationfromtheAuschwitzconcentrationcamp,Wieselwasabitter,jadedman.HecouldnotevenwriteNightuntilseveralyearslater.TheendofthenoveldescribesWiesel‘sgradualbutabsolutelossoffaiththroughouttheexperience.Hispastexperienceshauntedhimforseveralyears,renderinghimpassive.

（不好的结果）Itwasnotuntilhesetasidehispastthathecouldevenfocusonthefuture.Hadheremainedsoconsumedwiththepainanddamagecausedinthepast,hemayneverhaveachievedthesuccessthathehasattained.（深化）结尾段Overall,Wiesel'sexperiencesexemplifytheimportanceofthepastasaguide.Wiesel'spastexperienceshelpedtoguidehiminlaterlife,butitwasnotuntilhepushedthemasidethathecouldmoveon.Tomethismeansthatyoushouldrelyonyourpastwithoutlettingitcontrolyou.Allowyourpasttoactasaguide,whilemakingsurethatyouarealsolivinginthepresentandlookingtothefuture.模仿之—伽利略Knowledgeisabenefitoraburden---learningfromthepast,succeedinginthefuture知识---看的书籍益处：伽利略---成功坏处：其他当代科学家---盲目Whetherknowledgeisaburdenorbenefitdependsonhowyouutilizeit.Ifyouselectthegoodfromitanddoswaywiththebad,youwillstepforward.Nevertheless,youwill,iftooconfinedtoit,gobackward.TheexampleofGalileo,anItalianscientist,canwellillustratethatknowledgeisadouble-edgedsword.Bornin1564,GalileoinitiallywasastudentmajoringinmedicineintheUniversityofPisa.Butthebooksonmathematicsandphysicsgraduallygrabbedhisattentionandbroughtouthisgreatcuriosityandtalenttowardsthesciencefield.However,duetofinancialproblems,hehadnowaybuttoquitschoolbeforegraduationNevertheless,thisdidnotstophimfromattainingknowledgeaboutMathematicsandPhysicsatall.Instead,hepersistedindoingscientificresearchesbyreadingagreatmanybooksaboutthesetwosubjects,mainlyfocusingonEuclid’s‘GeometryBorn’andAristotle’swritings.Galileo,ratherthantotallycopyingthethoughtsofthem,learntfromtheessenceofthecontentsandatthesametimepolishedhisownunderstandingsaboutvariousphenomenonthroughnumerousexperiments.

Thankstothosecreativeandenlighteningexperiments,hediscoveredthatbodiesdonotfallwithvelocitiesproportionaltotheirweights,(成就一)afindingsocontradictorytotheacceptedteachingsofAristotlethatstrongantagonismwasaroused.

Besides,relyingonthereportsofasimplemagnifyinginstrumentputtogetherbyalens-grinderinHollandandmorei