读后续写+网络幻影：少女的虚拟友情与现实觉醒 讲义 高一5月阶段联考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasatwelve-year-oldgirl

IwassoaddictedtochattingonlinethatsomepeopleevencalledmeCyberSara.Mymom,alawyer,alwayscomplainedthatIspenttoomuchtimechattingwithmyInternetfriends.OnedayIgotaninstantmessagefromakidIdidn’tknow.HisnamewasBradley,whosaidhewastwelveandlivedinNewYork.Heaskedifhecouldbemysecretfriend,andIthoughtthatseemedprettycool.Withinafewdays’chatting,Ifoundthatwebothlovedtoplaysoccer,eventhoughIdidn’tplayasmuchasIusedto.Tomygreatjoy,webothlovedplayingcomputergamesverymuch.Everyday,BradleyandIchattedandemailedeachother.Webecamebestfriends.Hewasinterestingandseemedkindofsmart—actually,muchsmarterthanthetypical(典型的，平常的)twelve-year-oldboysIknew.Ireallylikedchattingwithhim.Hetoldmehereallylikedme.BradleykepttellingmeNewYork

wasacoolplacetoliveandemailedmeamazingpicturesofextremelytallskyscrapers(摩天大楼).HeaskedmewhereIlived.ItoldhimIlivedinTampa.Oneday,BradleysharedgoodnewswithmethathewascomingtoTampawithhisparents.Heinvitedmetohaveasecretmeetingandgoforicecreamwithhimintheice-creamshopnearmyschool.EagertofindwhatmysecretInternetfriendwaslike,Ipromisedtokeepitasecret,nottellingmyparentsaboutourplan.IwasexcitedthatIwasfinallygoingtomeetBradleyaftermonthsofchatting.However,herefusedtosendmeapictureofhimself,sayinghedidn’twanttoruinthesurprise.Itmademequiteconfused.Wastheresomethingwrongwithhim?Washeaweird(奇怪的)guywhowasnotconfidentenoughtoshowapictureofhimself?Buthesaideveryoneinhisschoolthoughthewasthecutestboyinhisclass,soIthoughthehadtobenormal.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。Para.1Thenextday,IaccidentallytoldMomthatIwouldmeetmyInternetfriendalone.Para.2Themomentweenteredtheice-creamshop

therewasnoonebutaweirdgrown-up.___________________________________________故事梗概：故事讲述了一个12岁的女孩CyberSara沉迷于网络聊天，与一个自称来自纽约的同龄男孩Bradley成为网友。Bradley邀请她秘密见面，女孩兴奋地答应了。但在见面前，她无意中告诉了妈妈，妈妈担心安全，决定暗中跟随。见面时，女孩发现所谓的网友其实是一个奇怪的成年人，意识到危险后，她迅速逃离并决定不再轻信网友。伏笔：Bradley的神秘性：他拒绝发送自己的照片，声称不想破坏惊喜，这增加了他的神秘感，为故事埋下了伏笔。母亲的担忧：母亲对女儿与陌生人见面的担忧，以及她作为律师对网络危险的了解，为后续可能发生的不测事件埋下了伏笔。女孩的矛盾心理：女孩在兴奋与担忧之间摇摆，她对Bradley的好奇与母亲的警告之间的矛盾，为故事的高潮埋下了伏笔。见面地点的选择：选择在女孩学校附近的冰激凌店见面，这个地点的熟悉性与即将发生的事情形成了鲜明对比，增加了故事的紧张感。成年人的出现：在冰激凌店出现的成年人与女孩的预期不符，这个转折是故事高潮的直接导火索，也是伏笔的揭晓。续写思路分析可以分为两个部分：第一段思路分析：主题：女孩无意中向母亲透露了与网友见面的计划。女孩在兴奋和期待中不小心向母亲透露了与Bradley见面的计划，这为母亲介入和保护提供了机会。女孩对于即将与网友见面的兴奋与母亲对于安全的担忧形成对比。母亲作为律师的背景，她对网络安全的了解可能会影响她的反应和后续行动。母亲的反应和决定（是否同意见面，是否陪同等）将推动故事情节向前发展。第二段思路分析：主题：女孩在冰激凌店与Bradley的见面经历。描述冰激凌店内的环境和氛围，为接下来的情节发展做铺垫。女孩对Bradley的期待与现实中出现的成年人形成鲜明对比，增加故事的戏剧性。女孩从期待到失望、恐惧的情感转变，是故事情节的高潮。女孩如何面对这个意外的情况，她的反应和决定将直接影响故事的走向和结局。通过这次经历，女孩可能会对网络交友有新的认识，这可以作为故事的深层主题进行探讨。参考范文：Thenextday,IaccidentallytoldMomthatIwouldmeetmyInternetfriendalone.Uponhearingthat,shebeganannoyingmewithatonofquestions,withherfacefullofanxiety.IeventuallytoldherthatBradleywasgoingtotakemeforicecreamnearmyschool.“No.Neverwillyoumeetastrangerallalone.Youarejusta12-year-oldgirl!”,momwasbesideherselfwithragewhenIshowedmydeterminationtogo.ThiswasthefirsttimeinmylifethatIhadwitnessedmyelegantlawyermomlosetemper.SofuriouswasshethatIhadnochoicebuttobringhertogether.Wepreparedanddrovetotheice-creamshop.Themomentweenteredtheice-creamshop,therewasnoonebutaweirdgrown-up.Noticinghisstrangeappearance,Iwasenvelopedbyasenseoffearandclenchedmom’shandstightly.“Whoareyou?AreyouBradley?”askedmymom.Shockedandspeechless,themansprangfromthechair,attemptingtofleeaway.Butitwastoolate.Momgraspedhishandwithallhermightandaskedmetocallthepolice.Finally,myplanwiththesecretInternetfriendendedupwithanarrowescapefrombeingcheated.WheneverIrecalledtheunusualexperience,fearstilllingeredinmymindmixedwithasenseofrelief.NeithershouldwemeetInternetfriendwithoutinformingparents,norshouldweshareprivateinformationontheInternet.下水文：Para.1Thenextday,IaccidentallytoldMomthatIwouldmeetmyInternetfriendalone.Hereyeswidenedwithconcern,andsheimmediatelyasked,"What?You'regoingtomeetastrangerwithouttellingus?"Icouldseetheworryinhereyes,butIwastooexcitedtocareabouttherisks.Itriedtoreassureher,tellingheraboutBradley'scharmandintelligence,andhowwehadbeenchattingformonths.Still,sheinsistedonaccompanyingme,sayingthatasalawyersheknewtoowellthedangersofmeetingstrangersfromtheInternet.IwastornbetweenmydesiretomeetBradleyandmymom'sprotectiveinstincts.Afteraheateddiscussion,weagreedthatshewouldbenearbybutnotimmediatelyvisible,justincase.Para.2Themomentweenteredtheice-creamshoptherewasnoonebutaweirdgrown-up.Hewassittinginthecorner,lookingaroundnervously.Iscannedtheroom,expectingtoseeaboyaroundmyage,buttherewasnoonewhoseemedlikeBradley.MyheartsankasIrealizedthatthemanmightbehim.Iapproachedhesitantly,andasIgotcloser,hestoodup,smilingawkwardly.HewasnotatallwhatIhadimagined.Hewasolder,andhissmile