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73全国创新英语大赛优秀作文题目：；Directions:；Readthefollowingparagrap；Howdoyouunderstandvolunt；Comeandjoinusinvolunteer；OnVolunteer；黄昕彤辽宁省鞍山市鞍山一中108班；Thedefinitionofthewordvo；Undoubtfully,thosevolunt；Peoplearo题目：Directions:Readthefollowingparagraphandwriteacompositionasstatedatabout300wordsin60minutes.Yourcompositionwillbegradedaccordingtoclarity,accuracyandmeaningfulness.InaccordancewithCRInews,thespiritofChinesevolunteers,fromrespondingtotheMay12earthquaketothe2008BeijingOlympicGames,notonlytouchedtheChinesepeople,butalsogeneratedworldwideattention.Officialstatisticsshowthatchinahasaccumulatedabout8billionhoursofvolunteerworkfrom380millionvolunteerssince1993andisgoingtohavemoreandmorevolunteers,especiallytheyouth.Howdoyouunderstandvolunteerwork?Inwhatway(s)isitimportanttopromotethewell-beingofindividuals,families,communitiesandtheworldatlarge?Yourwritingoughttocontainthreeparts,yourviewpoint,thesupportingideas,andtheconclusion.Comeandjoinusinvolunteerworkrightnow!OnVolunteer黄昕彤辽宁省鞍山市鞍山一中108班ThedefinitionofthewordvolunteerinLougnan（Longman）Dictionaryissomeonewhohelpsotherssponstaneously（spontaneously）andwillingly.That'strue!Lifeisastyleofenjoyingyourself,notonlybyentertaingandenridingyourself,butalsobytheprocessofhelpingothers.Undoubtfully,thosevolunteersrevealtheirgreatloveandpassionfortheircountry.Loveistheeternalthemeoftheworld,Withouthove(love),it'slikebirdswithoutwings,failingtoshowitstalentsofflying,It'slikespringwithoutflowers,buryingischarmingfragrantsinthedeepsoil.TheirvoluntyworkunitesChina,shouingtheworldhowunitedChinesepeopleareshockingtheworldofitscooperation.Peoplearoundthecountryaremakingtheireffortstohelpingothers,whichleavestheworldanimpressionthatChinaisavealcountry,andallthepeopleherearelikebrothersandsisters,whocaresalotforothers.YoucanneverimaginehowtouchedIwaswhenIwatchedtheTVprogramcalled“MovingChina”.13peasantsfromtangshangvolunteeredtohelpthosevictimsofSichuangonhearingthetremendousearthquakehappenedthere,leavingalltheirfarmworkdoneinthefieldtheysacrifiledanythingandhelpedothersatanycost,fortheyknewtheglantpainstheearthquakebringstopeople.Theycanneverforgethowmuchpainstheyhavendertakenintheearthquakeandhowmuchhelptheyhavereceivedfromtheworld.Theycomparedtheirownfeelingstothevictimsandpassedthesplriton.Inthissense,peoplewillpassthespiritfromgenerationtoqueneration,fromChinatoallovertheworld.Then,howsweetwilltheWorldbe!Ihaveadreamthatoneday,Iwillbeamemberofthevolunteerteam.Ihaveadreamthatoneday,I'llmakecontributionstoChinahoweverslightestitmaybe.IhaveadreamthatonedayI'llbeafounderofaworldCharity,helpingpeopleallovertheworld.I'mfirmlyconvincedthatitwillnotonlybeadreanforme,butalsoadreanforpeoplealloverChina,allovertheworld,andforthegreatGlobalVillage.专家建议：整篇文章条理清晰，结构完整，总体感觉很好。但有个别语法错误，固定搭配有些用得不够准确，建议多用课本学过的固定搭配或是词组造句。专家点评：文章语言流畅，运用了修辞手法，展现出一定的语言功底。此外，论据生动有力，让人信服。如果句子之间的多用些关联词就更好了。陈茜江苏省哈尔滨市第三中学高三18班Deargrandfather:Howareyou?Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus,inthenextyear,tobeavoluntearinthegreatevent,whichistoholdinShanghai.We,agenerationborninthe90sinourcity,havemadeateamtodothevolunteerwork.AndyouarewelcomedbyallourteammembersawingtoyourgreatamountofknowledgeaboutChinesetraditionsandculture.Pleasedon'ttellmeyouaretoooldtodothisjob.Ibelieveyouaresuretoacceptmyinvitationafterreadingmyfollowingexplannationoftheimportanceofthevolunteerwork.Nowadays,volunteerwork,whichhasraisedpublicinterestandconcern,isbecommingmoreandmorepopularthroughouttheworld.Asisknowntoall,volunteerworkisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsonecessary.Onemypersonalwete,what'smore,it'sinterestingandpleasant!Ithelpusdevelopoursel.Firstly,forindividuals,especiallythoseyoung,todovolunteerworkisanawailuabewanytogoinsocialexperience.Bydoingvolunteerwork,theycanmeetvorriouspeopleandtheymayrunacrossallkindsoftroubles.Theyhowever,canbecomematureanddeterminedbysolvingtheseproblems.Youknow,nopains,nogains.Also,individualswillrealizethattheydomakeadifferenceinsomeoneelse'slife,eventhewholeevent,theworld!Theirconfidencecanberovisedandconfidenceiswhatittakestodoanyjobwell.Forfamilies,ifyou'rethesidethatreceivedthehelpofthevolunteers,ofcouseyourissuewillbemoreeasilydealtwith.Ifyou'rethesidewhogiveothersyourhand,youwillrealizethereexistsnobetterwaytoeducateyourchildrenthat“avirtwredeseruesamother”becauseyou'llgetthebestpresent-smiledeeplyfromone'sheart,inthewholeworld.Itisagreatchanceforallmembersgettingclosertoeachotherincommunitiesbytakingpartinvolunteerwork.Theirteamspirits,theirco-operationwillbegreatimproued.So,whynot?Themostimportantly,forthewholeworld,fortheentirehumanrace,volunteerworkwillmakeearthabetterplacetolivein,itisthroughvolunteerworkthatweknowtherearesomanypeoplearewillingtohelpothersalthoughtheycan'tgetmoneyfromit.Itisthroughvolunteerworkthatweknowweareallbrothersandsisters,thatweareallfamilies.Mydeargrandfather,canreon!JoinusandhelpintroduceowrgreatChineseculturetotheworld.21centuringisonopencewtury.Youcantrustyourselfandpleasetrustus,too!We'llhelpyouandweneedyouhelp!Let'smaketheworldabetterplacebybeingavolunteer!It'sasmallstepforusbutitisaleurgeoneforthewholeworld!Loveyou.Yourgranddaught.专家建议：句子之间的衔接做的还不是很到位，建议多练练关联词的用法。词汇不够丰富，句型变化不多，建议多看些范文，多练一些经典句型。专家点评：文章立意很好，整体结构清晰，语言大体流畅，还能够引经据典，显示出有一定的英语(论坛)文化底蕴。Tobeavolunteer，Bringarayofsunshine陈天悦山东省济南市山东省齐钢高级中学高三4班DearTom:Itisagreatpleasureformetohavethewondefulchancetoputpentopaperandsendmygreetingstoyou.Yousaidthatyouwantedtobeavolunteeranddidn'tknowwhetheryoushouldornot.Iwanttohelpyouanalyseit.Inmyopinion.Ithinkitisnotnolyagoodchancetohelpothersbutalsoagoodopportunitytomakeselp-improvement.You'dbetterparticipateinthevolunteerwork.Ifwecompaneyouthtoflouers,asisoftenthecase,thentheyoungvolunteersarethemostbeautifulflowers.Byjoininginthevounteerwork,youwillleamhowtohelpothersandhowtoloveothers.What'smoreyoucanalsofinditoutthattherearemanypeoplesufferingfromdisasterandthenyouwillvalueyourcomfortablelife.Althoughyoumayfeelverytiredasavolunteeranditmaycostyoumuchtimetohelpothers,Istillinsistthatyoushouldbeavolunteerbecausetheadvantagesbrightaboutbyvolunteerworkoverweighthedisadvantages.Itallthepeoplerefusedtobevolunteers,thepeoplesufferedfromthemay12earthquakecouldloseheartandmostofthemwouldn'thavethechancetosurvivefromthatdisaster.Ifnoneofthepeoplewantedtobeavolunteer,theBeijingolympicGameswouldbeafailure.Ifeverypeopledidn'tfeellikebeingavolunteer,therewouldbenopeoplecleaningtheenvironmentandprotectingthebeautifulsceneryautomatically.Itwasterrible!Fromallmentionedabove,volunteersplayaveryimportantpartinourdailylife.TobeavolunteerwillgaingloryforChina.Asisbrowtoall,Chinesechildrenarealwayslaughedatforlackofpractice.Sotobeavolunteerisagoodchancetocanpensateforit.Frommypointofview,it'shightimethatyoubecameavolunteerandlearnedtohelpothers.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontohelpingothers,theworldwillbemuchmorebeautiful!Atlast,wishyouallthebest!Yourssincerely.Lily.专家建议：一篇文章的结构是评判该文章优劣的重要参考标准，但结构显然不够简洁清晰，所以建议作者能在平时多阅读英文报纸上的文章，有意识地观察规范的英语文章是怎样设计结构的。专家点评：文章二三段的结构很混乱，建议这样的文章段落都应写成总、分、总的形式更能突出文章的逻辑性，并在“分”的部分也一条一条分开写，而不是都堆在一段内，让人分不清哪句是观点哪句是论证，很混乱。另外注意同义词的替换已是文章表达更丰富，比如文章中多次出现的帮助他人就都是使用：helpothers就显得过于单一了~Volunteers李彦妮辽宁省鞍山市鞍山一中10.14班Thereisavividsayingthateverygloriouseventisjustifiablyconnectedwithvolunteerswhoisagroupofpeople,holdingthefundementaltohelpotherswithoutpay-backbenefits.In1993,whenthenewwordburtoutamongsocialsociety,mostofusgaveaslurtoitinconsideringofeconomy.Thespecialgroup,however,isjustlikeariver-smallatfirst,containedwithinitsbanks,floodpassionallythenmergedintothesea,forthesenseofmoralconsiderations.Andnow,Iquitesupporttobeavolunteer.Wecanneverforgetthesemovingscenes:AgroupofadolecentsfromBeijingdashedtotheCityofWenchuanwhogaveuptheircomfortablelivingsituationsandpickeduptheheavyburdentosavepeopleburiedintotheground,whileamiddleagedwhitecollarwhothrewawayhiscomputerandsalarycameheretofetchwictims'livesfromthedeath.Itisvolunteerswhorushedtothisplacewhichhassufferedfromthecatastrophethatgaveagreathelptothosevictimsinneed.Avolunteercansupportapieceofsky,andthisonereasonIameagertojointhem.Secondly,onlyavolunteerwhoisinactivepartinBeijingOlympicGameswillhegiveagreathelptothoselosers.ItisvolunteerswhogaveusawarmwelcometoBeijingthatputtheglorioussportsmeetingfrominchaostoinorder.Aperson,asweknow,whohasn’tjoinintothegroupofvolunteerisoneoftheunfortunatevictimsofthissocietywhichisoccupiedwithlove.Allofusareinhighpressureinthisadversecircumstance.Ourmindcatchesholdofsomethingandwillnotletitgo,ifwechoosethewaytoarguewiththemind,thestrongerthewill,themorefuitilethetask,sowe,shouldchooseawaytohelpothers,toseethesmilefromothers.Thenthepressuregetoutsuiftly.Ialwaysgointoraptureatamerementionofbeingavolunteerandregarditasapersonwhoiseagertohelpothersoragroupnotinthesameclasswiththesuburbansocial-climbers.Itseemsaclichébutasayingwhichisaninfallibilitythatasplendidcasecannotleaveavolunteerjustasafishcannotlivewithoutwater.专家点评：作者尽量用到了一些高级词语和句型，表明作者有一定的英语功底，但是小的错误频发，如单词拼写，语法问题，句子逻辑，这在某一方面也表明作者的基本功有待提高，继续努力。专家建议：用词准确是写作的基础。对于学习英语的中国学生来说，背单词扩大词汇量是有必要的，但遗憾的是，学生们背的大都是单词的“外壳”，记的大都是单词的表意或字典提供的大致意思，而基本上忽视了词在语境中的作用和词的“精神”。这种只记单词表意的学习方法对提高语言的运用能力，特别是写作能力是极其不利的。Letusshine徐叶子江苏省张家港市张家港外国语学校高二4班Volunteersarejustlikediamondsinthesun,andthediamondsareforever,especiallytheyouth.Volunteerworkisjustlikeamiracle.FromtheMay12thearthquaketothe2008BeijingOlympicGames,volunteerworkmadeunbelievablecontributions.60yearsagoourcountrywassetup,todaywewillcelebrateits60thbirthday.Inthisprocess,volunteerworkdidalotofhelpandnowourcountryisstandingintheworldjustlikeagiant.Inthepastyears,volunteershavehelpedalargenumberofpeople,theold,theyoung,thepoorandthehomeless.Allthevolunteersknowthattheroadaheadwillbelongandcragged,butnomatterwhatobstaclesstandintheirwaytheywillneverstop.Becausetheyhaveacreedandtheybelieveeverythingispossible.Ohthecreedofvolunteerwork,youmakevolunteerskeepongoingwithouthesitation.Ohthecreedofvolunteerwork,youmakevolunteershandinhandandbewithtogetherforever.Ohthecreedofvolunteerwork,youmakevolunteersgototheedgeoftheworldandletthemknowthetruemeaningoflife.Doyouknowwhatthecreedis?Yes,itislove.Withlove,volunteerworkmakespeopleopentheirmindandletthemfindtheskyistheirs.Withlove,volunteerworkmakespeoplelookintotheirheartsandletthesunshinein.Withlove,volunteerworkmakespeoplebelievethatsmilerswillneverloseandfrownerswillneverwin.Iknowsomethinghaschangedbecauseofvolunteerwork.Iknowitforrealbecauseitfeelssorightandtheworldlookssomuchbrighter.Loveisimportanttovolunteerworkandvolunteerworkisimportanttothewholeworld.Theinfiniteskyismotionlessandtheblueoceanisboisterous.Thismomentisperfect.Letusbecomevolunteersandtryourbestinvolunteerwork.Itcanbethestartofsomethingnewandit'sourturntolearnsomeorwinsome.So,let'smakeawishandgetreadytoshinelikediamonds.专家建议：建议该考生在语言流畅的基础之上，注意两方面问题。第一，用词更具体些，避免使用语义较为空泛的表达，如learnsomeorwinsome。第二，文章华美有余，但逻辑层次不足。需加强句子与句子之间以及段落与段落间的逻辑性。专家点评：该作文使用了很多修辞方式，从这一点上看，作者在学习英语的过程中一定是位有心人，注重边阅读边积累背诵。同时能看出，作者一定是一位喜爱英文歌曲的人，文中很多表达都来自于音乐歌词。但在遣词造句时，需要区分口头表达和较书面表达，在这点上，文章还有提高的空间。三亿文库3包含各类专业文献、应用写作文书、外语学习资料、行业资料、幼儿教育、小学教育、中学教育、生活休闲娱乐、73全国创新英语大赛优秀作文等内容。下载地址：73全国创新英语大赛优秀作文.Doc【Top】最新搜索全国创新英语大赛优秀作文循环水池操作鄂办发电201426号181惠普师范学院培训计划节日祝福模板USA50州气候及学校推荐论文金属探测器我国HDPE管材的现状和发展前景简述竞聘上岗的程序。(简答)关于自制力的议论文个人工作业务总结本人于2009年7月进入新疆中正鑫磊地矿技术服务有限公司(前身为“西安中正矿业信息咨询有限公司”)，主要从事测量技术工作，至今已有三年。在这宝贵的三年时间里，我边工作、边学习测绘相专业书籍，遇到不懂得问题积极的请教工程师们，在他们耐心的教授和指导下，我的专业知识水平得到了很到的提高，并在实地测量工作中加以运用、总结，不断的提高自己的专业技术水平。同时积极的参与技术培训学习，加速自身知识的不断更新和自身素质的提高。努力使自己成为一名合格的测绘技术人员。在这三年中，在公司各领导及同事的帮助带领下，按照岗位职责要求和行为规范，努力做好本职工作，认真完成了领导所交给的各项工作，在思想觉悟及工作