应用文之求助信-2024年高考英语考前冲刺必背作文(模板、素材、分类押题范文)(新高考专用)

专题04应用文之求助信

写作要点

第一段:自我介绍(收信人非熟人)，交代求助的背景及写信的目的；

第二段:详细描述求助的具体内容，告知联系方式(必要时)；

第三段:表达希望得到对方的帮助并致谢。

写作结构

求助信开头部分表达写作目的“请求帮助”

①Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelp.

②Iamwritinginthehopeofyourassistancein...

(3)1wonderwhetherIcouldaskyouafavor.

@1wonderifyoucouldsparesometimetohelpme.

⑤Iamanxioustogethelpfromyou.

求助信中间部分陈述求助的主要内容

①Ihavesomedifficultiesin...

②WhatIamworriedaboutalotisthat...

(3)1ampoorinovercomingthedifficultiesin...

④Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforhelp.

(§)1hopeyoucouldletmeknowif...

©Wouldyouliketodomeafavorto...?

⑦Iwouldlikeyoutointroducesomegoodwaystolearngrammar.

@Inthemeanwhile/Atthesametime,Ibegyouto...sothat...Also,Iwouldlikeyouto...

求助信结尾部分表达希望得到对方的帮助

①Thankyouforyourtimeandpatience,andI'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

(2)1wouldliketothankyouforyourgeneroushelpinthiscase.

③Couldyoupleasehelpme...?

④I'dappreciateitifyou'dliketooffermeahelpinghand.

©Wouldyoupleasebekindenoughtooffermesomeadvice?

写作模板

Dear,

IamLiHua,astudentfromXXXschool.（正式一些的求助信需要进行自我介绍）/Howareyoudoing

thesedays?（求助熟悉的人需要寒暄问候一下）I'mwritingtoyouinthehopeofseekingforhelp.（说明写信

目的）/1wonderwhetherIcouldaskyoutodomeafavor.（正式一点的求助）

Facedwithsomanyproblems,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.First,Ihavetroublein_______遇到的困

难1,What'smore,_____遇到的困难2isalsoverydifficultformetodo.（中间段具体说明

困难）WouldyouliketointroducetomesomegoodwaystosothatIcan________more

easily?Idobelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.

Iwouldbegreatlygratefultoyouifyoucouldlendmeahelpinghand.Iamlookingforwardto

receivingyourearliestreply.（表达谢意,期待来信）

Yours,

LiHua

写作素材

Writingl:2020全国HI卷

假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。

邮件内容包括：

1.剧情简介；

2.指导内容；

3.商定时间地点。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.结束语已为你写好。

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMissEvans,

Howiseverythinggoingthesedays?IamLiHua.I,togetherwithmyclassmates,haveadaptedashortplay

fromthetextTheNecklace,butwemeetwithsometrouble.Now,Iamwritingtoaskyoutogiveussome

guidance.

Asweallknow,inthestoryMathildeLoiseldreamedofawealthylifestylebuthervainobsessionendedup

withherlifetimeofmiseryanddespair,ruiningherlife.However,wefinditextremelytoughtousepropertonesto

speakthelines,whichhasvexedusforquitealongtime.Hopefullyyouwouldbesokindastogiveussomehelp

withthisproblem.

Ifit*sconvenientforyou,let'smeetat8:30onSundaymorningintheschooltheatre.Wewouldappreciateitif

youcoulddousafavor.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

Writing!:2018年11月浙江卷

假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求

帮助。内容包括：

1.行程信息；

2.钱包特征；

3.联系方式。

注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet,On1stNovember,2018Iflewbusinessclassonyourflight753

fromChinatoLondon.

IclearlyrememberitwaswithmeimmediatelyIboardedtheplane.However,onarrivalinLondonHeathrow

Airport,Ifounditgone.Iguessitmusthaveslippedoutofmypocketduringtheflight.Itisablackleatherone

witharound200dollars,myIDcard,and2creditcardsinit.Alongwiththeitemsmentionedabove,thewallet

containsafamilyphoto,mypreciousmemory.Asyoucanimagine,thesematteralottome.

Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Pleaseemailmeatxxx@

Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.

Yourssincerely

LiHua

押题范文

1.（辽宁省丹东市五校协作体2023-2024学年高12月试题）

假设你是某中学高三学生李华。近期你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的讲座。请你用英文给他写

一封电子邮件。内容包括

1.表达感谢并简述你的收获；

2.说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。

参考词汇:读后续写continuationwriting

注意:1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

DearSteve,

Yours,

Lihua

【答案】

DearSteve,

I'mwritingtoexpressmythanksforthewonderfullectureyoudeliveredoncontinuationwriting.Pveleared

reallyalot.However,Iamstillpuzzledbysomedifficultiesinit.

Forinstance,Ifindithardtograspthethemeofthepassage.Besides,Ialsofeelithardtocontinuewhen

confrontedwithnewwords.WhatcanIdo?Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?

Iwouldbereallygratefulifyoucouldhelpmeout.Thankyouverymuchagain.Yourearliestreplywouldbe

appreciated.

［导语］本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于近期校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的讲座这一情况，

用英文给他写一封电子邮件，表达感谢并简述收获，说明自己在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。

［详解］1.词汇积累

困惑的:puzzled-*confused

止匕外:BesidesfWhat'smore建议：advice-suggestion感激的:gratefulfthankful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:I'velearnedreallyalot.However,Iamstillpuzzledbysomedifficultiesinit.拓展句:Thoughl'velearned

reallyalot,Iamstillpuzzledbysomedifficultiesinit.

［点睛］

【高分句型l］Besides,Ialsofeelithardtocontinuewhenconfrontedwithnewwords.（运用了连词when引导

的时间状语从句）

［高分句型2］Iwouldbereallygratefulifyoucouldhelpmeout.（运用了连词f引导的条件状语从句）

2.（四川省德阳市第五中学2023-2024学年高三12月试题）

假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写

一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括：

1.尝试方法；

2.请求指导：

3.表达感谢。

注意:写作词数应为100左右。

DearMarcus,

Howiseverythinggoing?

【答案】

DearMarcus,

Howiseverythinggoing?RecentlyweareencouragedtoreadmoreforeignmagazinestoimproveourEnglish,

butIhavemuchdifficultywithit,soIamwiringforyourgenerousassistance.

Itissobigaheadacheformesincedespitetryingvariousmethods,Ihaven*tyetachievedthedesiredresults.

Forinstance,Iattemptedtoresorttoadictionarytolookupunfamiliarwordswhilereading.However,Ifindit

quitetime-consuminganditinterruptstheflowofmyreading.Inaddition,Itriedreadingthearticlesaloudtohelp

understand,butthecomplexityofthecontentandstructurewasasubstantialchallenge.Giventhatyouhaverich

experienceinreadingandteachinginforeignmagazines,couldyoukindlyoffermesomeguidancetohelpmeout?

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.Thankyouinadvanceforyour

energy.

Yourssincerely.

LiHue

［导语］本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Marcus写一封邮件，就在外刊阅读中遇到的困难寻求帮

助。

［详解］1.词汇积累

鼓励:encouragefinspire尽管:despite_*inspiteof

止匕夕卜:naddition-*what'smore提前:madvance-^ahead

2.句式拓展

并列句变复合句

原句:RecentlyweareencouragedtoreadmoreforeignmagazinestoimproveourEnglish,butIhavemuch

difficultywithit,soIamwiringforyourgenerousassistance.

拓展句:RecentlyweareencouragedtoreadmoreforeignmagazinestoimproveourEnglish,butIhavesomuch

difficultywithitthatIamwiringforyourgenerousassistance.

［点睛］

【高分句型1］Itissobigaheadacheformesincedespitetryingvariousmethods,Ihaven*tyetachievedthe

desiredresults.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）

［高分句型2］Giventhatyouhaverichexperienceinreadingandteachinginforeignmagazines,couldyoukindly

offermesomeguidancetohelpmeout?（运用了giventhat引导的条件状语从句）

3.（海南省海口市琼山区海南中学2023-2024学年高三试题）

假如你是李华。本学期你校开设了英语口语课，由于你不太适应外教Mike的授课，你决定给他写一封

求助信。内容包括：

1.谈谈你面临的具体问题；

2.希望得到帮助。

注意：

1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

DearMike,

IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinOralEnglishclass.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMike,

IamLiHuaoneofyourstudentsinOralEnglishclass.Iamwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.

Youknow,Icomefromajuniorhighschoolinthecountryside,whereteachersdon*tspeakmuchEnglishin

class.NowIfinditreallyhardtofollowyouinclass.Ihopeyoucanrecommendsomelisteningmaterialstomeso

thatIcanimprovemylisteningafterclass.Besides,couldIpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekends

atyourconvenienttime?

Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldlendmeahelpinghand.

Yours,

LiHua

［导语］本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华。本学期你校开设了英语口语课，由于你不太适应外教Mike

的授课，你决定给他写一封求助信。

［详解］1词汇积累

寻求帮助:seekhelpfrom->turntosb.forhelp感谢:grateful-*thankful止匕夕卜:besidesffinaddition

din：spokenEnglish-+oralEnglish

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:Besides,couldIpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekendsatyourconvenienttime?

拓展句:Besides,Ihopelcanpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekendsatyourconvenienttime,

whichIthinkcanhelpimprovemyspokenEnglish.

［点睛］

［高分句型1］IhopeyoucanrecommendsomelisteningmaterialstomesothatIcanimprovemylisteningafter

class.（运用了目的状语从句）

［高分句型2］Youknow,Icomefromajuniorhighschoolinthecountryside,whereteachersdon'tspeakmuch

Englishinclass.（运用了where引导非限制性定语从句）

4.（2024届浙江省温州市高三11月第一次适应性考试试题）

假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写

一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括：

1.尝试方法：

2.请求指导。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。

DearMarcus,

【答案】

DearMarcus,

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.IamwritingtoseekyourguidanceonaproblemIhavebeenfacingwhile

readingforeignmagazines.Despitetryingvariousmethods,Iamunabletocomprehendthearticlesaseffectivelyas

Iwouldliketo.

Ihavetriedusingonlinetranslationtoolsandlookingupunfamiliarwordsinthedictionary,butthesemethods

havenotyieldedthedesiredresults.Ibelievethatwithyourexpertiseandguidance,Icanimprovemyreading

skillsandbetterunderstandthecontentofthesemagazines.

Woulditbepossibleforustoscheduleameetingoracalltodiscussthisfurther?Iwouldgreatlyappreciate

anyadviceortipsyoumayhave.

Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

［导语］本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期

效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括:1.尝试方法:2.请求指导。

［详解］

1.词汇积累方法:methodfmeans提高:improvefenhance感谢:appreciate-*thank建议:tipfsuggestion

2.句式拓展同义句转换

原句:Despitetryingvariousmethods.IamunabletocomprehendthearticlesaseffectivelyasIwouldliketo.拓展

句:AlthoughIhavetriedvariousmethods,IamunabletocomprehendthearticlesaseffectivelyasIwould

liketo.

［点睛］

［高分句型1］Iwouldgreatlyappreciateanyadviceortipsyoumayhave.（运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从

句）

［高分句型2］Ibelievethatwithyourexpertiseandguidance,Icanimprovemyreadingskillsandbetterunderstand

thecontentofthesemagazines.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

5.（重庆市2023-2024学年高三上学期10月质检试题）

假定你是李华，将担任杭州亚运会(AsianGames)的国际志愿者。在接待外国友人方面，你有一些困惑,

于是你写信给曾经担任过伦敦奥运会志愿者的外教James求助。

要点如下：1具体的困惑2希望得到帮助。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJames,

Howiseverythinggoing?Iamreachingouttoseekyourvaluableassistanceasanoviceinternational

volunteerfortheupcomingAsianGamesinHangzhou.Ihaveencounteredsomedifficultiesrecentlyandwould

greatlyappreciateyourhelp.

I'm