2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能10 读后续写：作步创意 模板法

八步创意模板法高考英语读后续写教学课件八步创意模板法（1）情绪：消极情绪（2）细节：进一步解释描写（3）转折：个人的努力或借助外界（4）转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰（5）失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题（6）新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）（7）结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折（8）总结：点题，呼应前文第1步：消极情绪典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）1.aflushof(表情绪的名词)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一阵...2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情绪的名词)floodedoversb=sweptoversb

因...颤抖tremble//shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)第2步：细节进一步细节描写典型是：流泪；心里想……流泪：1.Tearsblurredone'seyes.

2.One'seyesgotmisty.

3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.泪眼模糊4....beclosetotears几乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下

心里想1.

Aninnervoicetoldsbthat

从句内心的声音告诉某人...

2....thought/saidtooneself第3步：转折（个人努力或借助外界）典型是：鼓起勇气或另外一方的鼓励；毫不犹豫pluckup/take/gather/one'scourage(todo...)

毫不犹豫：1.sbcouldhardlywaittodosth

2.withoutasecondthought3.withouteventhinking

4.withoutdelay

5.withouthesitation第4步：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰典型表达是：似乎：1.Itwaslikedoingsth好像...2.Itseemedasif/that...好像...希望：1.hopingthat

从句抱着一丝希望

2.see/feelaglimmerofhope看到一丝希望3.tryinghardtodosth

第4步：转机事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰典型表达是：欣慰：1....breathedasighofrelief松了一口气

2....sighedwithrelief松了一口气3.(Awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb

4.toone'srelief,..

使人欣慰的/放心的是第5步：失望但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么不幸的是：1.Butbadluckforsb,...但是某人真不走运3.,butinvain

4.,butwithoutsuccess

5.,butnouse

第5步：失望但问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题不知道做什么1.Sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.2.Sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.3.Sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.

4.Sbwasatalosswhattodo.5.Sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.感到难以决定...第6步：新法突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法典型：某人想到/明白...;

有了主意1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat

从句=Ithitsbthat

从句=Itstruckmethat

从句

=Itdawnedonsbthat

从句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace第7步：皆大欢喜过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折过了一段时间1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore

从句=Ittooksometimebefore从句不久,...

2.foraninstant/moment一瞬间

第7步：皆大欢喜过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折

有了结果1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat

从句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是转而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.

接下来发生的非常奇妙第8步：最后总结，点题典型是：直到...才意识到...1.

倒装句：Notuntil

时间状语

didsbrealize/noticethat

从句2.

强调句：Itwasonly时间状语

thatsbrealizedthat

从句

还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中1.One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone'sears.2.One'swords(voice/song)lingered/whisperedinone'smind/head.

3.One'sheadwasstillfullof...第8步：最后总结，点题经历与教训1.Whata/an...lessonsbtaughtme(sblearnedfromsb)!

(valuable/useful/great/painful)2.Whata/an...experiencesbhad!

(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)3.Downdeepinone'sheart,...在某人的内心深处高考真题实战演练浙江卷（2018年6月）故事梗概：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.读后续写八步创意写作1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情绪）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（细节详述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（转折：个人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（转机：成功，希望来了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gaspingforair.（衔接句：新问题来了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.(努力，失败)2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了办法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（开始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather’sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,U